Marriage (Short Story) - 11/30/2007 4:21:57 PM
wow that was good. it wasnt what i thought it would be but good none the less. i can not imagine how it would feel to be in that sort of situtation being that i live in the u.s.a and all but i would also like to know what you meant by i saw my fear reflected in another person's eyes. and if you would also tell me do you live in an area where marriges are like that? i wont ask exactly where you live i think that be rude. but good good story
Marriage (Short Story) - 6/20/2007 4:36:24 PM
Lovely story but may I ask one question-your last line..." I saw my fear reflected in another person's eyes" Can you tell me more what you mean by this line?
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 11:53:33 AM
this is an intriguing write...a delightful blend of mystery, magic and sensuality....with a hint of something dark...not necessarily bad...