Marriage (Short Story) - 11/30/2007 4:21:57 PM
wow that was good. it wasnt what i thought it would be but good none the less. i can not imagine how it would feel to be in that sort of situtation being that i live in the u.s.a and all but i would also like to know what you meant by i saw my fear reflected in another person's eyes. and if you would also tell me do you live in an area where marriges are like that? i wont ask exactly where you live i think that be rude. but good good story
Marriage (Short Story) - 6/20/2007 4:36:24 PM
Lovely story but may I ask one question-your last line..." I saw my fear reflected in another person's eyes" Can you tell me more what you mean by this line?
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 11:53:33 AM
this is an intriguing write...a delightful blend of mystery, magic and sensuality....with a hint of something dark...not necessarily bad...
Splendid write!
Contemplate (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 4:28:27 PM
such wise words from such a gifted poetess-truly you are an angel to many, I am sure of it!-well done
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 4:26:49 PM
Lovely words from an enchanting Vampire...Hmm do you bite??? ;-)
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 5:39:35 AM
Lovely writing,Hugssss
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 5:40:34 PM
A well done intriguing write full of suspense to the end.....
Be safe,
Karen
The land of poetry (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 10:03:33 AM
Beautifully penned. Lovely work. Welcome to AD.
Contemplate (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 6:05:31 AM
Nice and apreciable work. the poem has nothing special but its near to our everyday routine and thats why its so nice.
Contemplate (Poetry) - 5/24/2007 2:12:18 PM
wise advice...great theme for this well written piece. Great flow and rhythm, wonderful imagery used throughout. Splendid work!
