Recent Reviews for Amy Bertoncini
Better For Me Than You (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 10:58:01 PM|
Amy, I believe there is a good chance you can get this into music.
It has a good, blues rhythm and theme, but would also fit other musical mediums.
Better For Me Than You (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 3:05:22 PM
this song should be formatted in a style that more easily lends itself to
repetitive chording...more ilke short lined poetry
but the thought is there....well done
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 3:00:08 PM
...For you put yourself aside to raise me right....
that line alone speaks volumes, Amy
keep writing and I keep reading
How Short the Time (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 10:47:32 AM
beautiful work! Your choice of prose format instead of stanza format worked very well here, giving his piece the feel of a journal entry. Its flow and rhythm is excellent.
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 3:23:42 PM
Wonderful tribute to a fine mother.
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 8:16:28 PM
Your love and genuine admiration for your mom is heartfelt......
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 6:00:25 PM
I used to be able to tell my Mother that I loved her to her face ... unfortunately she passed away in 1998, and the hole that was left has never been filled. Evocative write Amy!
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 9:55:07 AM
You've written a very heartfelt write, one that you mom will surely be proud of. Every line flows with love. Beautifully done.
Mother (I love you) (Poetry) - 6/11/2007 9:45:49 AM
When I saw your poem I just stopped by because my love for mom is so immense. And in reading your poem I was completely overwhelmed by the powerful words of love and wisdom as well as the fine articulation and the gentle flow of the verses. Thanks dear Amy Bertoncini, your mom is very proud of having you as a daughter. Blessings to you and to your beloved mother.