Recent Reviews for William P Haynes
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The Apocalypse of Silence (Book) - 9/26/2005 2:20:44 PM
wonderful talents you share
last night (Short Story) - 4/11/2008 10:28:19 AM
....yes...it expresses your grief and about a million other feelings very well..HOWEVER..live in the grace we call NOW.
That , at this point in time ,is the ONLY reality you have ..live it!
Well written..
V
God (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 5:01:01 PM
Pretty intense, very frighteningly true....
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
God (Short Story) - 3/15/2008 10:25:07 AM
moving write!!
Love Tinka
the lost kid (Short Story) - 9/22/2007 7:46:50 AM
I want pictures! I want pictures! This story was Kewl!
I would love to see this in animation Willy!
Your mind makes me smile!
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
the lost kid (Short Story) - 5/17/2007 9:54:54 AM
Most interesting story!!
Lov eTinka
the lost kid (Short Story) - 5/16/2007 8:39:35 AM
Interesting perspective from the viewpoint of a fly. Good story; enjoyed~
last night (Short Story) - 4/29/2007 7:00:07 AM
This is so very sad....melancholy striked me... the yearning inside to be like a sore toe...keep nagging at the heart's deepest cores!!
Love Tinka
last night (Short Story) - 4/28/2007 7:45:58 AM
I think that I remember reading this awhile back. If so, I'm glad that you reposted it! It draws you into itself, watching and wanting to help. Did that make sense? Anyway, I enjoy this story!
cookies and milk (Short Story) - 4/27/2007 11:48:14 AM
Oh my goodness...this got my attention....hope Helen will be okay!!
Looking forward to read more!!
Love Tinka
the crowd vanished (Short Story) - 3/29/2007 10:26:06 AM
Most interesting...now you see me now you don't!!
Love Tinka
a tangled web (Short Story) - 12/17/2006 8:25:31 PM
and...?
Perfection (Short Story) - 1/17/2006 5:58:23 PM
Hi, William. This is a provocative "thought piece," and so a success. :-) I enjoy your clean writing style. Thank you for your visits and reviews. I appreciate them. ~~Nordette
dark shadows (Short Story) - 12/19/2005 10:13:34 AM
The memories unfurled in my brain reading this piece. I used to race home after school in New Orleans to see Dark Shadows. It came on 3:30 pm CST. My cousins and I, we were all fans. Thank you for this. ~~Nordette
Testimony (Short Story) - 11/10/2005 12:42:45 PM
I am surprised you haven't sent this story out anywhere, you're pretty damn good at doing the Mythos kind of horror. Thanx for the review on O.W.I.F. You got a voice with this one, just need to flesh the story out even more.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 10/14/2005 5:12:31 PM
ahhhh... a blast from the past! wonderfully caustic!
Testimony (Short Story) - 6/9/2005 6:13:54 AM
enjoyed the read
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 7:46:24 PM
Such a wonderful tribute to this show. I love the last line here. Walking up to the home he no longer knows.
You really have a magnificent pen in hand and I love your www. Many interesting and things on there.
Thank You elliot
have a Super Duper Day Every day and don't wrok too hard.
groans were only a sigh barely heard. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! now that is heard.(C:)
Traceyxo
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/18/2005 10:42:26 AM
Good write, William. I especially liked your last paragraph! I will visit your web site soon.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/16/2005 4:42:12 AM
Nice tribute. I'll have to catch the show sometime.
M.Rose
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/14/2005 2:38:46 PM
enjoyed the read, enjoyed te show back in the 60s
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/13/2005 5:26:10 PM
My mother used to watch this when I was a kid... Dark Shadows was a different kind of soap... still is.
Interesting write. :)
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 2:54:39 PM
Use to race home after school just to watch it, mom couldn't believe I was watching a soap opera... oh thanks for the memories...
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 12:50:16 PM
I used to watch this show on Sci-Fi Channel -- the inspiration for Among Shadows was Dark Shadows. This is a good way to tribute the gothic soap opera.
dark shadows (Short Story) - 3/12/2005 9:35:48 AM
i remember this show; it was a favorite of my oldest sister's for a long time. good nostalgic write; well done! :)
The last Testimony of Charles Weston Smith (Short Story) - 3/2/2005 12:30:30 PM
This is a tight tribute to HPL. You should make this story a bit longer, you got the delivery -- take the ball and run with it. Speaking as an author of the Mythos, you defiantely know what you are doing with this. When you make this one longer you should send it to April Derleth.
Review of Mesphisto's Seed by Susie Hawes (Article) - 12/18/2004 2:14:33 AM
interesting review
Review of Mesphisto's Seed by Susie Hawes (Article) - 12/15/2004 2:44:14 PM
Sounds really interesting and thrilling no putting it down. Thank You for this. I really appreciate your time for doing this.
have a really wonderful day every day
Tracey
The colour of your eyes (Poetry) - 4/24/2009 5:16:27 AM
WOW! What a sad state of mind Bill, but a reflection of what is TRUE to your heart and the memories that bring YOU FORWARD,
OUT OF THE EMOTIONAL DARK!
as you sit peacefully (knowing) drinking your coffee
and smoking your cigarette.
What a vision of solitude, for a heart that really KNEW!
This healing and cleansing should strengthen!
LOVE this clever Poem of sadness and sweet memories, that will sustain thee, FOREVER!
WRITE ON! My friend and may "I" also say, Thank you for blessing my pages/corner in your special loving, honest, caring ways!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, Peace, Hugs and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
a sea chanty for m (Poetry) - 4/7/2009 11:11:48 PM
Bringing out the lure of the Gods of the past and intertwining them with the present, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 4:03:54 PM
So solemn, yet breathes life onto itself through words that pearce the heart, beautiful...
Be always safe,
Karen
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 10:10:41 AM
Transcendent beautiful words that instantly bring to mind a lost love and heart-wrenching regret. Well done!
What sayeth love? (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 8:35:30 AM
William,
Your beautiful words tell a beautiful love story.
Mary
Once there were trains (Poetry) - 4/2/2009 10:07:52 AM
William,
What a sorrowful tale of the homeless and forgotten. You've written of that pain so well.
Mary
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 3/15/2009 2:56:30 AM
This is a very thoughtout and well written poem,take care
EDWIN
poem for a rainy day (Poetry) - 3/14/2009 8:11:23 PM
Wonderful, whimsical, irredescent. This poem is like unwrapping a beautiful gift.
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:19:19 AM
Oh My, this hit my mind like a brick well aimed. Brilliantly penned.
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 2:33:37 PM
And life does go on, doesn't it and along the way we carry our baggage sad as it may be...
Be always safe,
Karen
Funny how things end (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 7:02:53 AM
Hi William,
"Funny how things end
Pieces of life, friendships
become shadows"
You write like you are in my space, how real! Thank you for sharing this short, but deep write.
In Spirit,
Bear
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 10:55:21 AM
I like this, Bill, its ethereal quality and its truth. Sometimes we don't realize how much we miss an old love until we catch a glimpse of them again whether in real life, dreams, or shifting memory.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 11/2/2008 1:26:08 AM
A powerful and loving tribute to your loved one.
I have lost a wife and it took 20 yrs. to write a story about her.
It is on my website titled - "A Slice of A Short Life"
Blessings,
JMD
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 8/25/2008 2:11:44 PM
Powerful poem just awesome
such a silly girl (Poetry) - 8/5/2008 8:17:42 AM
Beautiful image of a struggle to hold onto memories of someone loved. I like the idea of using music to hold onto that image. I sense loss here and hope that it is because of the same loss I see coming. We have a sixteen year old daughter and I still remember when she was a silly girl. But she's growing out of those earlier years and those days are becoming memories. I hope music will one day help me remember those silly days.
endgames (Poetry) - 8/5/2008 8:14:21 AM
Placing memoires into glass jars where they can dream on their own is a great line that anchors this poem.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/24/2008 2:01:46 PM
A touch of rain on flesh, warm and soothing
You whisper her name
..poignant lines..
Vesna
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/18/2008 9:59:59 AM
Such a longinggggg peaceful poem, I believe she helps you to write! She is your inspiration and motivation and will never leave your spirit!
This poems reminds me of Death Wrapped In Sweetness
Write On!
Warm hugs and Peaceful Blessings, Warrior Purple Lady Ladyoxoooo
STay Positive!
cycles of ten (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 4:51:12 PM
30's, 40',50's ok. but when you reach 60's, oh I don't like it and not looking forward to 70's. They say old age is the glorious life orsomething like that, but tell me about it. Not having the time of my life in my 60's Ill tell you. This poem makes you think, liked the mentioning of a rose, and warmth of the sun in last verse though. Conforting.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 5/8/2008 12:42:52 PM
Her sprit is always with you, and I have lost my hubby in Aug and still grieve but know he is up with the angels and looking over me. I have proof he is with me in soul and spirit as good things happen to me that did not when he was alive always. Angels surround us always too, and God's work is great and this is a great universe.
Apart (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 8:19:32 AM
um..er..been there done that..have come to no valid conclusion..however miracles DO happen even at a distance.. :)
Blessings,
Vesna :)
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 7:12:28 PM
so Zen...wrapped in reflections, awareness...I felt this way waiting for my man at the train stations...longing, in the waiting moments, until he was back in my arms once again
So enjoyed!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 6:30:22 PM
Ethereal and beautiful, this piece matches well the name you chose for it.
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 11:19:05 AM
Been there done that..just in a different person!!
Deep longing in this write!!
Love Tinka
faces like dancing angels in the winds (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 11:13:03 AM
A wonderfully embrace and blending of the inner thoughts and the world outside the perimeters....
Be always safe,
Karen
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