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Recent Reviews for Lucille van Onselen-Zunckel


The Phoenix (Poetry) - 1/24/2009 7:47:33 PM
She tore my soul to shreds snuffed out my little flame But then I re-emerged from my coccoon

Her Mask (Poetry) - 1/24/2009 7:35:43 PM
Wear your mask no more my love and do not crawl away Don't want those eyes so cold and I need to see and touch your face

Stay With Me... A Little Longer (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 7:19:33 PM
There is fear here. The fear of being left alone to face his or he life. This work is beautiful.

Her Mask (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 4:31:59 PM
"Her Mask" flows and glows greatly. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Pleasure (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 4:27:01 PM
Magnificent composition... "Pleasure" has paid its poetic dues. I salute You, Poet. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Stay With Me... A Little Longer (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 4:21:17 PM
"Stay With Me... A Little Longer" is a wonderful, inspiring and intriguing compostion in poetic excellence. I salute You, Poet. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Her Mask (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 1:17:23 PM
Powerfully painful and sad.

Pleasure (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:53:56 PM
Impressive! Passionately and expressively presented.

Warning Bells (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:52:46 PM
You express the tragedy of alcoholism very well.

A Rare Red Ruby (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:51:27 PM
Beautiful metaphor.

Stay With Me... A Little Longer (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:50:38 PM
Poignant message and well expressed. I enjoyed it.

Stay With Me... A Little Longer (Poetry) - 11/6/2007 8:52:02 PM
A great sense of loss is manifested in this poem, but also shsres hope. Thank you, DL Mullan

Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 12:38:41 PM
You used the theme and words in a most powerful way, Lucille. The message strikes: lies hurt and the wounds often do not heal... Hope you won that contest. Gina

Stay With Me... A Little Longer (Poetry) - 8/17/2007 9:35:06 AM
I truly enjoyed the feelings that you have expressed! This will most definitly keep poetry alive!

Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 5:30:46 PM
So downtrodden and disillusioned. Perhaps bittersweet memories of what could have been and with another will be, have faith..... Be safe, Karen

Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 6:44:08 AM
Resonant, original metaphors here and a passion for words. Well done!

Don't You Wish (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 12:43:26 PM
Ummm very thoughtfully written. It reminds me of the girl I met on the Meridian line at Tema in Ghana West Africa in 1974. I had these thoughts then. But now after two daughters and a marriage of 32 years to her, Jocelyn, I must thank you for bringing back the feelings in your poem. Miller

Her Mask (Poetry) - 7/14/2007 9:58:10 PM
Lucille, this is a stark statement...only the pyramid form detracts. You express the isolation and loneliness that accompanies such hurt very well. Gina

Road To Hell (Poetry) - 7/12/2007 1:32:17 PM
Good advice, thanks for sharing your talent, if you have time check out my poem "Go For The Gold" God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

The Web You Weaved (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 10:57:49 AM
Outstanding composition on family's affairs. "The Web You Weaved" is a poetic grand. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Where Do We Go Wrong? (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 10:51:55 AM
Wise message with sublime thoughts flows through the lines of this beauty ~ named, "Where Go We Go Wrong?" In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Storm (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 10:45:38 AM
If one is lookig for a Poet, ~ after reading few of Your poems ~ the first word that will strike in one's mouth would be: "EUREKA!" I liked the rhythmic singing and the lexicon of "Storm". A beautiful composition in poetic excellence. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Celebration (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:55:39 AM
i like this. and it certainly is a no where path to take

Elegance (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:50:59 AM
"Elegance" flows beautifully. I have enjoyed it. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Mother of Mine (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:48:39 AM
The time to decide is now. Blessed are those that decide to follow the road of gratitude. I have enjoyed the reading of "Mother of Mine". In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Trap (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:43:39 AM
Stimulating story depicted with live colors from the rainbow of creativity... "The Trap" is an excellent poetic picture poetized to stand wit-wise by the doors of imagination. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Time Has Come (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:31:31 AM
Sublime message through the lines of "The Time Has Come". In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Don't You Wish (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:28:47 AM
unique composition in poetic grand... "Don't You Wish" glows. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Road To Hell (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:25:26 AM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Road To Hell". Please check the TYPO on third word of third line of last strophe. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Phoenix (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:19:22 AM
The author of "The Phoenix" holds an enchanting logical and magical rhythmic quills. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

GEM (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:14:19 AM
"GEM"... Wit-wonderful poetic task magnificently accomplished In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Celebration (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 9:09:54 AM
Outstanding composition... "Celebration" does celebrate and honor the poetic art and the language. I salute You, Poet. In admiration, Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Celebration (Poetry) - 7/9/2007 4:48:32 AM
Wow, how different is this?? I have written only one of these using my own name but I have never seen an actually story written as one. Great content!!! This was very interesting.

GEM (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 1:07:02 PM
Ah ... Africa in my home once more. West Africa it was for me 1973-78. Once confronted a Black Cobra. Did not have time to compose a poem on that occasion however. Glad you did. Best wishes Miller

GEM (Poetry) - 7/4/2007 7:44:36 AM
If it's just for fun...fine poem.

Road To Hell (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 6:31:37 PM
unfortunately, not so easy to do without support from others ...

Road To Hell (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 5:22:35 PM
Road To Hell Is Paved With Good Intentions,i.e It Is Smoke Screen... TRASK

The LoneWolf (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 3:45:54 AM
Yes, the Wolf isnt all bad :) Great imagery here, ty Ch'erie

The Artful Dodger (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 3:43:55 AM
A very poignant message here, well written. Ty, many need to do the same in this world. Ch'erie

The Artful Dodger (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 9:38:33 AM
I enjoyed your poem asking what is truly important in life.

Coming Home To Africa (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 9:02:44 AM
Beautiful! :)

Where Do We Go Wrong? (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 8:34:20 AM
So, so true...to appreciate someone is the key to realizing that with it, all your needs magically are satisfied... Excellent write with a great message! Enjoyed! Love and Peace~ Kimmy~

Warning Bells (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 5:44:50 AM
Interesting write,Hugs

Warning Bells (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 5:55:08 PM
Living a life as an alchoholic does not do anyone any good. Not the person and not the people surrounding....... Be safe, Karen

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