Recent Reviews for * Traviesa *
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 10/5/2007 2:43:59 PM|
hi sis happy late birthday I liked your story. I miss you hope you come to washington soon jazzy sends her love. Did I ever tell you how much she reminds me of you well bye girl mmmmmuwwwwwwwwah.
I Woke Up With A Smile On My Face (Short Story) - 9/18/2007 10:04:00 AM
Hi Traviesa, your thoughts and words are very powerful and will surely help another soul on its journey. I wish you much success in doing Gods great work. With him you are bound to succeed. Keep writing. It is indeed a blessing to be young, beautiful and of a caring spirit. Again many blessings to you.
I Woke Up With A Smile On My Face (Short Story) - 8/15/2007 3:48:44 PM
Unfortunately individuals sit idly by and watch abuse happening to others without a word as if it is A OK~so sad. I believe this is an issue that truly needs attention and an issue that is running ramport in the schools nowadays...quite possibly where unruly youngsters are.
Yes congrats to you for trying to make a difference...continue with your efforts.
I Woke Up With A Smile On My Face (Short Story) - 7/15/2007 1:08:53 PM
Refreshing....thank you. You are an inspiration.
"YES I CAN"
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 7/15/2007 1:07:14 PM
Thank you for sharing such an intimate story...your a delightful youth who has found her way; most importantly you have sought to know the GREAT I AM. I am honor to read a touching story and through your honesty you will heal others. God bless you always...and always remember HE is only a heartbeat away. "When all else fails know within in "YES I CAN".
"YES I CAN"
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 7/8/2007 6:51:51 PM
Im glad you did kick it, glad you are still here. Do what your heart tells you and share with all the world.
I saw the drug scene too, but from a different perspective, totaly heartbreaking amid the torture and abuse landed on me whilst I did my job.
Read my TMNT stories, I am finally making a start on a very very painful part of my own life....
God be with you
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 7/7/2007 11:08:49 AM
good read, well done!!
I Woke Up With A Smile On My Face (Short Story) - 7/5/2007 12:16:09 PM
With happiness, understanding and love life exists in the living; without happiness, understanding and love death in life resides. David decided it was not worth being dead in life.
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 7/5/2007 12:08:09 PM
That is a powerful story. This has the potential to make it into book form. Think about it; this is your outline, the skeleton of your whole story and life! All you have to do now is put the rest into the skeleton making it into a living body of blood sweat and tears, and success.
My Biggest Mistake: Drugs and Alcohol (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 5:43:40 PM
This message should be shared with as many people as possible particularly school kids. Thank you, Traviesa. Love, peace, and strength to you,
I Woke Up With A Smile On My Face (Short Story) - 7/2/2007 10:25:19 AM
This is tragic and unfortunately, bullying is a reality in most schools. There is a major effort being made here to educate parents, students, and educators about this issue. Thank you, Traviesa. Love and peace,
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 6:14:57 PM
So true... Oh, so true!
J. Earl Evans
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 3:40:14 PM
Truthful and insightful write indeed "Inside My Head"
This poem flowed!
Blessings and take care,
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/28/2007 9:01:44 PM
Sometimes the view through the eyes can be sad and even revealing...the reality is continuos within the youth of today, glad you have found yourself....
enjoyed your work.....
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 11:02:24 PM
Thank God there is something beyond anything this world can throw at us or any bad choice we may make. Romans 8:28
Thanks for sharing your pain and your poetic talent.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
The Christian Cop
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 12:58:08 PM
Welcome to the den,please enjoy and be enlightened!
Poignant I do think this write could be beneficial to the young one's that may have experienced the same. Looking beyond the pain and hurt of a precious heart one can see the rainbow and the glows of light just waiting for the next needy soul to come and step into the light of the Father. God favors us all and we are all precious within His eyes. Continue to shine and glitter.
Blessing of all God's beauty to you Traviesa,
From the Heart of an Artist we are all United Through love
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/11/2007 8:47:35 PM
Outstanding! Sharp, raw, vivid and completely contemporary...all that and done is a flowing list of realities and could be's...well done!
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 8:27:38 AM
Nothin' like the 'truth' to set us free.
Don't hold back now, okay? Tell us whatever hits you.
Addiction can be a person, a drug, a habit - it has the same connotation either way - it falls into rather a rather seemingly transparent neurotic obsession - not always evident to the naked eye; thus, "inside [someone's] head" is definitely where we need to get, in order to truly intervene and/or help the person who has the addiction. -- Jeff (welcome to AD!)
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 4:43:50 AM
Giving in to addiction is giving ones life for selfish reasons. Admitting that our mind has no power or will of its own. The addict exist for the addiction and nothing or no one else. Giving in this manner is the saddest gift one can give. Powerful writing, May the gentle peace of healing be always at the door of those in need.
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 6:46:36 PM
to be addicted it to have already quited ...
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 12:28:37 AM
Honest, sincere, brave, you have it all here and much more to share.
Write on, share these experiences, for what you tell others today, will save lives tomorrow, let the lord lead on..
Blessings to you
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 12:23:54 AM
Half the battle won in admitting it...
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 10:21:43 AM
Raw and honest and a wise counsel to those who read, Traviesa. I have posted a poem at AD titled, "Devil's Bride." It's about crystal meth. Thank you for sharing these experiences. Sure makes the reader think. Love and peace,
Me! (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 10:19:07 AM
Your faith comes through strongly, Traviesa. Love and peace to you,
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 10:17:45 AM
You know what you are "talking" about, Traviesa. Well-expressed. Welcome to AD. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Inside My Head (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 8:52:15 AM
Well stated. Addiction is taking the life of millions of people around the world and it is hard to quit once the habit develops.
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 10:11:02 PM
Very well done, Traviesa. There would be a lot of young ones that would be helped if they heed the warning in this write. For that you must continue in your quest.
Me! (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 7:05:42 PM
So very wonderfully stated. Yes, look to God's help and the light will always be bright.....
Through My Eyes (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 5:47:48 PM
A painful central paradigm. It over, gone, history, nuff said, let it go, live for the now, never beat yourself up. Just read your Bio, I have no need to suggest that God can change everything 180, and fing loving friends, as that seems to be where you are, now that you are out of your private hell. You can now, help others, because you have walked the walk..
Very well written candid poem...
Me! (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 4:18:20 PM
Me! (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 12:53:32 PM
This was great work! Keep poetry alive!
Me! (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 12:15:41 PM
I especially love the reference to raw truth and God's grace my friend......Well done!