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last night at home (Short Story) - 12/31/2005 2:46:26 AM
I liked this write Steve. As Dorothy said in the "Wizard Of oz" > "There's no place like home!"

in the dark (Short Story) - 9/16/2005 1:41:45 PM
This is such a haunting read...Oh Boy...hope this is fiction!! Love Tinka

last night at home (Short Story) - 7/8/2005 7:49:12 AM
Steve, this is so beautiful! Nostalgic at its best! Home is truly where the heart is! Well penned, Steve! God bless, Sandie.

last night at home (Short Story) - 7/1/2005 10:43:10 AM
a very sad write, steve, but so very well done! bravo!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow texas friend, karen lynn in burleson. :(

last night at home (Short Story) - 7/1/2005 6:46:15 AM
This is very sad to read. But it's so true. "Home is where the heart is." You'll always be "home", and with your parents, as long as you have memories. I'm sorry for your loss, April

the call from hell (Short Story) - 6/19/2005 5:02:52 PM
This was disturbing and frightening to read, Steve. I am glad you gave it a happy ending. Take care, Sherry

the call from hell (Short Story) - 6/19/2005 5:54:55 AM
Bravo, Steve! What a profound story of love and sacrifice! Powerful! Clap, clap, clap!

the call from hell (Short Story) - 6/18/2005 7:53:27 PM
Well, if you are in heaven, then NJ you won't be seein', as they say NJ is hell and the angels they don't visit here...Ed

XXVI - A Drunks Story (Short Story) - 3/19/2005 9:30:33 AM
Wonderful, heart felt story... which an alcoholic can appreciate... I use to cherish all my "chips" 30 day, 60 day, 90 day, 6 month, on and on. I had them all up to five years. I made a "trophy case" for them. Then I realized, that they weren't my sobriety. Yes, I earned them... but I needed to give it away, to keep it... So I started giving these chips away to people celebrating the same milestone... I'd tell them, that maybe the strength the coin gave me, would be given to them. I no longer "worship" or cherish those coins... but I still have one on my key chain... it is a 24 hour chip... everyday is a celebration... my 10 years of sobriety wouldn't have taken place without 24 hours... one day at a time... and if I ever did slip, those ten years would be lost because of 24 hours... I cherish the amount of time I have acquired... but I honor those 24 hours... best wishes, with your recovery...

XXVI - A Drunks Story (Short Story) - 3/17/2005 8:25:34 AM
hI, THOUGHT PERHAPS YOU WOULD LIKE A NICE WORD FROM UK WHERE I AM FROM, BUT AM IN SWEDEN AT THE MOMENT.SO THE WORD WILL BE SWINGLISH. I ENJOYED your story. . you should keep going...it was "fun" i have not got the time to read all the stories on this site,which is new to me, but i chose yours and i dont regret that, Your comments here and there made me laugh too, that is your confidence that needs boosting a bit,,get the comments written in a note book instead and carry on with pure stories. you have got a style that is well worth improving , keep up the good work. Best wishes from Rita ..I have just started out too.

XXVI - A Drunks Story (Short Story) - 3/16/2005 8:19:13 PM
This was great, Steve. I would have never known it was your first attempt. Your dialogue is smooth and realistic. Your characters are strong and easily visualized. I say, keep writing those stories... you've found your niche! Hugs, Mari

XXVI - A Drunks Story (Short Story) - 3/11/2005 9:13:56 AM
WOW, Steve...I am impressed! Excellent first attempt at a short story; I would like to see you do more! BRAVO; very well done!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D P.S.: I have been doing stories for a long while; just posted my 1,590th one today! :) I LOVE writing stories! :)

Darkness (Article) - 9/9/2005 11:41:29 AM
This is one very well written solo...I could see this cowboy sitting there playing his ghitar...as dshodows covers his face...I can just see his teeth shining in the passing moon!! See you took me on a trip with this one!! Love Tinka

lost (Article) - 9/8/2005 9:26:25 PM
Lost and found!! Hey come back....I only get lost in my poetry okay...do the same and we/you will be seen...lol!! Love Tinka

go with the flow (Article) - 9/8/2005 9:23:25 PM
And the this was well written said the blind Bat!! Goooda Morgen!! Love Tinka

ain't life funny? (Article) - 9/8/2005 1:53:17 PM
Thank you for sharing this insightful story/poem/article Ghalo!! Hey thats a nice title "Insightful story/poem/article Ghalo M'Lord" tee-hee...now tel me how young are you?? I am forever 21...old enought to Zap even my boss!! Love Tinka :)

a sad melody (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:26:30 PM
Fantastic message, but sad one, Sometimes sadness in our lives brings out the best in us though, - I truly find this out.

Love ... what a road i've traveled (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:25:24 PM
I traveled around lots, been in love lots - some to no avail of course, so I've known some of this too.

lonely nights (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:23:17 PM
I do understand, having lonely nights forever now, not all all fun either.

October Years (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:21:53 PM
October - my birth month, so I'm always thrilled when it comes around - but not so much this year 2014 as i'll turn the 70....feel so old and am old, too old, way too old.

love (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:20:11 PM
Love is natural thing for those who love. Good write...Sorry I didn't get to read it sooner though.

when Love is "We" (Poetry) - 9/16/2014 6:18:48 PM
Simplicity stated, love awaited and to be.

a friend to me (Poetry) - 5/5/2012 12:35:53 AM
Yes. You expressed so well how that gap in the heart longs for a friend. fee

Hey! Co-Worker! (Poetry) - 3/7/2011 12:47:08 PM
This was definitely catchy. I could picture someone rapping this. It is entertaining. Lena

yes i do (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:21:25 AM
Very good,take care EDWIN

love (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:16:48 AM
Great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care EDWIN

yellow rose (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:15:26 AM
This is a good poem,take care EDWIN

aw hell (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 4:28:16 PM
love the poem...this is so what you called drama..hheeeellllooooo....

a refrain (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 8:35:08 AM
How did I miss this one...hope you are well, know that you are insane...Ed & Rufuz

love (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 6:41:33 AM
How did I miss this one, must have been because I was then working 7 days a week and did not feel much like doing anything besides sleeping...hope you are well...Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

love (Poetry) - 11/24/2007 8:51:09 PM
i dance to a tune in my head not sung always with love the man in my bed just seems to shove away the rhythm and i get tired of givin when the day expires missed you

hello (Poetry) - 11/24/2007 8:49:09 PM
I finished reading all three of the 'books' you had sent to me over the years... came to find you again here know the feelin'

hello (Poetry) - 8/15/2007 8:49:54 AM
Thanks for the smile...

love (Poetry) - 8/14/2007 1:22:56 PM
So true music lose it's beauty when love is not within your heart!! Love Tinka

hello (Poetry) - 8/14/2007 3:57:43 AM
Hello Lone Ranger!! Good to see you are still among the living!! Love Tinka

love (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 10:09:05 PM
Been a long time Steve, good to read you again;-) Welcome back! Eileen

hello (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 7:47:40 PM
Thought you might have died, Made me daily sigh, Happy to see you alive, Hope you still do thrive...ed & Rufuz

AnyWhere In the World (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 2:06:10 AM
i hate this it is tereble

a sad melody (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 4:23:59 PM
Great lyric! I'd love to hear the melody.

a friend to me (Poetry) - 5/17/2007 6:12:54 AM
I really hope that I can have a friend who would really talk like this to me. Anyway its good to have a friend no matter how sometimes they mess our lives up. Its a nice one Steve. Good writting.

a decision to make (Poetry) - 4/12/2007 6:24:50 AM
Steve, I feel for you so deeply. I lost my own father to congestive heart failure. May God bless you, my friend. Many blessings and hugggggs, ~Linda

a sad melody (Poetry) - 3/27/2007 5:41:53 PM
Steve, It's hard not to live in the past. I hope the very best for you Steve. You have been a good friend to me. Many blessings, ~Linda

a refrain (Poetry) - 3/21/2007 2:37:23 AM
enjoyed the read

a C-grade movie (Poetry) - 3/13/2007 3:09:07 PM
This was an interesting trip down a very short path, which leads to a surprise ending. It works......

a coat from the cold (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:50:49 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.

a change in the weather (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:48:14 AM
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a broken heart (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:44:02 AM
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a blank page or 2 (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:41:58 AM
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a 3 word poem (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:40:24 AM
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a friend to me (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:39:48 AM
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.

a Butterfly's Lullaby (Poetry) - 3/3/2007 12:53:30 PM
What else would a butterfly cry. Brought a smile to me. Lady J

a sad melody (Poetry) - 2/21/2007 3:12:45 PM
sad but the flow can pick up and you never know who may join in wonderful reading you again

a sad melody (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 10:11:55 AM
This is well penned..well done!! Love Tinka

i was thinkin' (Poetry) - 2/4/2007 10:33:42 AM
This is lovely....thanks for sharing mate!! love Tinka

here i am (Poetry) - 2/4/2007 10:27:14 AM
Aha look who's back...welcome home cowboy!! Not that alone no more..you back home!! Love Tinka

i was thinkin' (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 9:01:33 PM
Tis' quite sweet, but I want to know is where the hell have you been of late...? Rufuz missed you...Ed & Rufuz

i was thinkin' (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 7:59:20 PM
Sweet

i was thinkin' (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 6:57:44 PM
This has a sweetness about it and I enjoyed reading your thoughts.

i never thought (Poetry) - 1/23/2007 3:49:18 AM
love it

i never thought (Poetry) - 12/1/2006 5:51:43 AM
Respected Poet- Savant, The delighted words of you is very intutive and imaginative, The useful and wonderful verses are clear in it's path to make the readers more gay of ray... God Bless you, Thanking you, If time prevails and permits,please sign my guest Book of my website: http://www.nkosho.com Yours truly, N.K.Osho

when Love is "We" (Poetry) - 11/30/2006 3:31:03 PM
I can relate, "when Love is We" That is a beautiful way of putting it. Just plain beautiful!!!

a 3 word poem (Poetry) - 11/30/2006 3:14:47 PM
Beautiful Steve! What a lovely moment to share with us! Love to you too! Love, Suzie :-D

i never thought (Poetry) - 10/20/2006 10:32:46 AM
Awwwwwww this is beautiful!! Love Tinka

i don't know why (Poetry) - 10/20/2006 10:29:41 AM
Sweet offering Cowboy!! Love Tinka

i never thought (Poetry) - 10/19/2006 8:30:46 AM
Ah, Steve, short, succinct and beautiful!!! Peace. Joyce

i never thought (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 9:39:26 PM
lovely poem Steve...

GOD (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:57:59 PM
Writer's block is moment in time...you've continued and done great! Peace&Grace, Sharon

a few thoughts about my daughter (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:54:28 PM
A tribute to a cherished daughter; rambling hippie's still carry a tune! Next thing you know, Steph will take you to the moon. Ha! :) This is really nice! Peace&Grace Sharon

a Butterfly's Lullaby (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:50:37 PM
This one is neat...a real tribute to the butterfly. Thanks, Sharon

4 seasons (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:49:16 PM
Somewhat sad..love good & bad..lyrics do sound like a song so many people have sung and remember well; but won't forget! Peace&Grace, Sharon

October Years (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:45:55 PM
Mixed blessing indeed all year round...Good piece!...Sharon

3 for 1 (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:44:02 PM
Deep! Questions need answers to relieve the spaces. Sharon

when Love is "We" (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:41:58 PM
Keep it up...She'll enjoy it! Peace&Grace, Sharon

i don't know why (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 2:40:19 PM
Good write to your sweetheart! Peace&Grace, Sharon

i don't know why (Poetry) - 10/17/2006 11:04:36 AM
Well its ok and its really good but I think from other veiwers they would like to hear more of the love you have for this girl um.but its cute too^^

colors on White (Poetry) - 10/14/2006 9:12:23 PM
Very nice, Steve. Take care, Sherry

colors on White (Poetry) - 10/12/2006 4:32:29 PM
I like this! Susan

colors on White (Poetry) - 10/12/2006 10:15:59 AM
A love with vibrant hues...Well said! Eileen

colors on White (Poetry) - 10/12/2006 10:11:13 AM
Well done...must be those lusty thoughs huh?? Love Tinka

colors on White (Poetry) - 10/12/2006 8:26:13 AM
Flashbacks, Steve...? e

3 for 1 (Poetry) - 10/10/2006 2:00:03 PM
Thanks for sharing 3 insightful pieces!! Love Tinka

when Love is "We" (Poetry) - 10/10/2006 1:53:33 PM
Excellent offering!! Love Tinka

when Love is "We" (Poetry) - 10/10/2006 8:25:34 AM
Good to have a she when you are needing to be a we...E

October Years (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 6:36:44 PM
October certainly brings mixed blessings, as your poem reminds. Best regards, Leland

October Years (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 11:16:42 AM
Why no more new years days? A very bitterseet poem, Steve.Wishing you a bushel of smiles;-)...Love, Eileen

October Years (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 11:04:14 AM
October will forever be one of the worse months of each year!! Lost too much within the month October!! Love Tinka

Noah & The Ark (Poetry) - 9/30/2006 11:38:12 AM
Excellent writing, Steve. I love this one! Take care, Sherry

Noah & The Ark (Poetry) - 9/30/2006 11:32:30 AM
Oh thanks you for this very fine offering....you made me smile!! A keeper Love Tinka

lyin' (Poetry) - 9/30/2006 11:20:34 AM
Oh my I can relate....so many lying going on in this life....sometimes even the truth is a lie!! But you said it well and that ain't no lie Cowboy!! love Tinka

thanks anyway (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 4:48:20 PM
Steve, this is fantastic! You captured it all in one powerful verse. You should send this to AA it's excellent!...Eileen

thanks anyway (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 2:12:05 PM
I like. Short and packed with important thought.

thanks anyway (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 1:34:45 PM
One step at a time and easy does it.

thanks anyway (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 12:34:40 PM
I think I will have a cuppa coffe about right now.....you want one too?? Love Tinka

Mexico (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 7:11:50 PM
Such a whiner, can't even deal with a bit of snow and colder weather...E & R

Mexico (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 11:00:07 AM
Lovely write...quite lyrical!! Love Tinka

when she's gone (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 10:58:19 AM
Sad offering!! Love Tinka

UNtitled (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:32:33 AM
I know the feeling..sometimes the good stuff gets written when sad and the sad when happy....just the way the muse works sometimes!! Love Tinka

California Dreamin' (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:27:48 AM
Great offering Steve!! Love Tinka

but what then? (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:18:49 AM
Clean the house and start again....lol!! Love Tinka

California Dreamin' (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 10:10:13 AM
Splendid! Applauding your poem and your joy!

UNtitled (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 9:42:10 AM
Ah Steve, how very true, excellently expressed, felt this one, right where it hurts. Reindeer

chasin' rainbows (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 12:18:56 PM
Lol at Sue....you must be quite skinny....I don't chase the rainbow but I do believe there is a pot of gold....even cold soup is golden to me.....something to fill the stomach!! I LOVE SOUP!! Love Tinka

sad songs (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 12:09:30 PM
Sad song all the way....but the poetry not THAT bad either!! Love Tinka

chasin' rainbows (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 11:50:15 AM
but look at all the exercise you get steve

sittin' in my easy chair (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 10:05:28 AM
A caring write even though it might not look like it!! love Tinka

for poetry's sake (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 10:02:33 AM
Insightful offering!! Love Tinka

sittin' in my easy chair (Poetry) - 9/25/2006 7:24:12 PM
You will always care, my friend. Just smile, hold your head up high and get out of that easy chair. There's a world out there just waiting for you. Enjoy it, my friend. ~Linda

after lovin' (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 9:05:01 PM
Who doesn't have these fears and questions when entering into a new relationship, especially if we REALLY like the other person enough to know that if it doesn't work out, it will be a very hard punch in the gut. Take care, Sherry

every now & then (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 5:49:53 PM
Ahhhhh, this is very sad, Touches me deeply Steve, the way it is written is Excellent! These memories of yours happen, to have this poem written~ WArm HuGs! *She*

after lovin' (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 5:47:32 PM
Lot's of questions, hope there answered for you by now. Great and Inspiring write Steve! STay Warm and Happy! Warm HuGs!*She*

after lovin' (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 12:29:05 PM
A true lovey dovin write!! Love Tinka

every now & then (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 12:26:55 PM
Oh this is a tear jerker....so sad yet so beautiful!! Well done Cowboy!! Love Tinka

will you stay? (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 12:22:42 PM
Steve you poetry is so different..and very touching!! Well done my friend!! Love Tinka

you ask me (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 12:20:34 PM
This is a beautiful song write!! Love Tinka

after lovin' (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 11:52:23 AM
All questions of the Philosophical variety, but who can answer them but yourself...me & he

after lovin' (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 11:03:00 AM
Valid questions, but you left me on tenderhooks not kowing the outcome of it. Victor

September Rain (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 8:05:43 AM
Steve, This is so beautiful! Joselyn

September Rain (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 4:31:49 PM
This is lovely Steve, a beautiful mood you set;-) With Affection Eileen

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:52:59 PM
POWERFUL ! So much is said with very few words.....M

i watched you smile (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:51:11 PM
Well done . A moving tribute to a lost love......M

September Rain (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:49:10 PM
Theres nothing like love and September rain. You're a romantic at heart! ........M

a poem for you (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:47:07 PM
Lost love is soul shattering. There's stii tomorrow.....m

2 for One (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:44:50 PM
The music of love stirs the heart. Nicely done........M

September Rain (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:35:26 PM
Very lyrical write!! Love Tinka

2 for One (Poetry) - 9/21/2006 1:34:33 PM
A beauty Steve!! Love Tinka

a poem for you (Poetry) - 9/20/2006 9:18:41 PM
Another bittersweet offering...but well penned....reminded me somewhat of my song "A million miles away!!!! Love Tinka

please (Poetry) - 9/20/2006 1:21:52 PM
Such a beautiful yearning write!! Love Tinka

a Butterfly's Lullaby (Poetry) - 9/19/2006 3:07:56 PM
Many of your phrasings have such a calming effect. -- Jeff

i watched you smile (Poetry) - 9/7/2006 6:13:29 AM
Oh Steve, this is beautiful, but so very poignant, just got to me today, Reindeer

i watched you smile (Poetry) - 9/6/2006 10:59:55 PM
so sad, but a beautiful write.

New Love / old love (Poetry) - 9/6/2006 7:10:28 PM
trouble is new love gets old too;-)

when i get to where i'm going (Poetry) - 9/6/2006 7:13:30 AM
Sow some wonderful seeds this day, my friend. Today's "now" moments of sowing, count just as much as yesterday's sowing moments did -- perhaps even more! Thanks! Your great poem, reminds me to get busy!

when i get to where i'm going (Poetry) - 9/5/2006 11:33:12 AM
We all reap what we sow Steve,that's what helps us sow better seeds;-)Excellent poem!

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 9:41:53 PM
You got it...go for it!! Love Tinka

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 7:57:08 PM
Seems you know it better than most...e & R

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 6:16:48 PM
I hear ya! retake all you want;-)

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 5:34:44 PM
yes, i believe you do steve, certainly you know life and i've read about it often in your poetry. it is good to see you so well

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 4:49:50 PM
LOL!!! Alright already! Take care, Sherry

gimme' a break (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 3:18:13 PM
A great take on the misunderstood poet. Ron

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 1:19:47 PM
Looking forward can only heal us form the bad memories of yesteryear!! Love Tinka

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 11:58:19 AM
very inspirational work!!! loved this...short and powerful...

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 10:22:04 AM
Then look forward and upward!;-) Excellent poem!

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 6:12:07 AM
wise words in these two stanzas, Steve. I like the continuous rhyme in each. Susan

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 5:25:57 AM
Life Preserver? Me thinks you need to get yourself a neck brace so you will be forced to look only forward and instead of falling back into the same old sad story, perhaps you can write yourself a new one and eventually live within it. By holding on to the past we destine ourselves to fall back into those same patterns and to live the same heartaches over and over again. Take care, Sherry

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 5:08:27 AM
I agree with Ed - get yourself a life-jacket!!! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 1:59:26 AM
The effect of the nature brings a warmth to this poem. Expressed well Steven.

livin' in lookin' back (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 1:12:12 AM
Everyday just by awakening we learn something...maybe you should get yourself a life preserver...;) Ed

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 6:18:06 PM
I like this. Nature's touch does bring many memories with it. Susan

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 5:22:33 PM
Lovely, Steve. Take care, Sherry

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 4:04:17 PM
Breezes from the sea around here only bring in smells of dead fish...it a Joisey thing...;) ed

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 3:18:14 PM
This is very lovely Steve! It stirs emotions...

a sultry September sunday (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 2:45:32 PM
oh my this is by far one of your best!! Touching piece Cowboy!! Love Tinka

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 9:51:13 AM
Cigarettes and Coffee light words with heavy weight meaning and still it's over Enjoyed this. Mark

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 7:54:50 AM
usually with the IRS they do not know you have any eye to see with LOL this is very good. :)

untitled (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 7:53:33 AM
Ouch this one is short but very powerful....

question & answer (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 7:52:59 AM
I have found no answer to this poem or question.

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 7:52:15 AM
I can so relate to this poem/.

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 5:10:22 AM
I am still on the coffee wagon but fell of the cigarette one almost 16 years ago!! Love tinka

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 10:37:46 PM
We can all relate...good one...Eileen

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 8:29:14 PM
I like this poem Steve so true I need to quit smoking and drinking coffee but hard to do. Write on! Jennifer

searcihng for the night (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 7:10:08 PM
I am sure that many can relate to these sentiments, Steve. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace, Regis

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 7:09:00 PM
If it's any consolation, Steve, Revenue Canada's no different. Love and peace, Regis

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 7:07:55 PM
I can relate, Steve; I try "not to go there" but it's not always possible. Love and peace to you, Regis

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 4:55:56 PM
Been there for sure, but you gotta find something better to fill you time, sad memories waste away our lives. Take care, Sherry

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 2:51:01 PM
Don't tell me you let her go...& here I thought you to be an intelligent guy...Ed

cigarettes and coffee (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 2:49:12 PM
short and sweet but you packed a lot in those few words, steve

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 9/1/2006 1:18:14 PM
Oh boy, how I can relate to this. A painful subject. Victor

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 9/1/2006 12:14:56 PM
Never you mind I am not in their good books either...lol!! Love Tinka

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 8/31/2006 4:42:13 PM
If you don't pay that "I" could be in a prison cell, then you can write about all the "cute" men visiting you and such...;) Ed

the IRS & I (Poetry) - 8/31/2006 3:40:57 PM
Aaaaawwwww!!!!! Too bad...but you just have to let them have it, even though you don't see eye to eye... Sandie Angel :o)

searcihng for the night (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 10:44:56 AM
And another dark offering!! Cheer-up Cowboy!! Love Tinka

untitled (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 10:32:46 AM
Sad poem!! Love Tinka

searcihng for the night (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 10:07:26 AM
I am always careful of light first assuming it is light.

searcihng for the night (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 4:07:32 AM
At times it is difficult to determine if it is the light or the darkness that we crave, for each offers us it's hope and it's disillusionment. Take care, Sherry

untitled (Poetry) - 8/24/2006 8:35:03 PM
I hope she did not say goodbye...e

untitled (Poetry) - 8/24/2006 8:21:11 PM
Hi Steven: This one says a lot! Good write! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

untitled (Poetry) - 8/24/2006 10:43:25 AM
hehehehehe...okay this made me laugh...they say when the balls drop the brain is dead....just going on and on could kill you DEAD!! Love Tinka

my last breath (Poetry) - 8/24/2006 10:37:17 AM
You need CPR or TLC...!! Love Tinka :)

if i had a heart (Poetry) - 8/24/2006 10:35:51 AM
Straight from the heart poetry!! Love tinka

question & answer (Poetry) - 8/23/2006 11:26:57 AM


old shoes & the walkin' blue (Poetry) - 8/23/2006 7:05:06 AM
Short & to the point...wishin' you wood lern to speel...;) ed

old shoes & the walkin' blue (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 11:30:36 AM
Love is a hard act to follow!! Love Tinka

cigeretts and alcohol (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 11:25:30 AM
Oh "cigeretts and alcohol" both bad habits!! Love Tinka

cigeretts and alcohol (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:23:51 PM
we make our choices and live eith them...good write

cigeretts and alcohol (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 7:58:44 PM
Thought, after dad passed, you quit at least one of them...? e & r

snake eyes (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 12:43:31 PM
my eyes wish yours well;-)...

snake eyes (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 2:58:23 AM
I found the rolloff of the snake eyes clever in this poem love is a gamble with goodbyes at times way to many well done.

true (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 7:20:33 AM
So true....all the way!! Love Tinka

the sound of silence (Poetry) - 8/16/2006 11:43:42 AM
Silence can be beautiful (get a life;-)

the sound of silence (Poetry) - 8/16/2006 8:16:08 AM
I am there now.. I don't care much for the sound of silence either and I have found there are many ways to be alone. Great piece of writing! Myrna

untitled (Poetry) - 8/16/2006 5:44:45 AM
Beautiful thought!! Love Tinka

knowing you (Poetry) - 8/16/2006 5:40:16 AM
Beautiful write Cowboy!! Thank you for your friendship too!! Love Tinka

the sound of silence (Poetry) - 8/16/2006 5:35:47 AM
Very creative...and yes the sound of silence can be good!! Love Tinka

untitled (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 10:27:46 AM
Another beautiful one to add to the collection of smallest poems but the depth is volume.

knowing you (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 10:15:29 AM
Wow, these few words bring up so many strong memories, thanks for sharing this emotional poem.

after the party's over (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 6:22:10 AM
A bittersweet question ....keep the faith in her and in yourself...and all will work out!! Love Tinka

thank you (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 3:06:53 AM
Wonderful!! Love Tinka

thank you (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 2:16:00 AM
Nothing is ever better than a we. Wonderful poem.

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 1:24:20 PM
Wonderful short one of the smallest I have ever read except for hearing some one read to me two liners or three words before. :)

untitled (Poetry) - 8/14/2006 10:51:46 AM
Take the bait or lose the steak!! Love Tinka

loving you (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 1:16:39 PM
Spend a dollar or more and marry her!! Love Tinka

loving you (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 8:27:31 AM
The same thing you have been doing all along...love as long as you can, its free...E & R

untitled (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 9:21:27 AM
You can have them both like King Solomon!! Love Tinka

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 8:53:42 AM
Lovely way to show perfection!! Love Tinka

untitled (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 7:03:16 AM
uh-oh

Peter Pan (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 1:15:14 AM
Just watch out for Michael Jackson...;) ed

E=MC2 (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 1:13:49 AM
Now this is a romantic way to express yourself...Ed

untitled (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 1:12:43 AM
That is the beauty of love, it can be shared and re-used...Ed

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 10:02:13 PM
Very nice Steve, it shows class!

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 7:19:53 PM
Humbling poetic expression. Susan

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 6:55:09 PM
I appreciate the thoughts thanks, LOL, Ed

Peter Pan (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 6:39:10 PM
And when one feels the way you express in these verses, Never Never Land is where one would like to remain. Thank you for sharing these sentiments, Steve. Love and peace to you, Regis

thinking of you (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 6:37:34 PM
This is simple but the sentiments are real and a tribute to the person you are thinking of and thus, it is a lovely gift. Thank you for sharing it, Steve. Love and peace to you, Regis

Peter Pan (Poetry) - 8/11/2006 12:19:37 PM
Wonderful...she must be back I guess!! Stay happy dear friend...happy fits you well!! Love Tinka

Peter Pan (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 10:15:38 PM
How sweet Steve!;-) Nice to see you happy! Eileen

Peter Pan (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 6:30:11 PM
romance with a touch of innocence! I like this. Susan

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