Recent Reviews for Beth LaRance
abandoment (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 11:41:45 AM|
The truth is, and will, set you free. Time to fly like an eagle.
abandoment (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 10:12:56 AM
Hard life girl, but I know some of it well...keep on pluggin', what else can you do...? e
abandoment (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 6:33:53 PM
Get it out, girl...it's about time you reveal the pain for where it originates. I'm proud of you. I hold you, it's okay to cry...be well, Beth. Blessed Be.
6-19-10 (Poetry) - 8/6/2013 9:46:23 AM
Beth, you must be related to Duke LaRance...I really enjoy what he writes and now I got you too read too...hope he is okay, I have not heard from him in quite sometime...I will email him...and as to this piece of poetry, I find we all need an outlet for feelings sometimes, it is human Nature...In Pride, Ed
6-19-10 (Poetry) - 8/5/2013 7:10:14 PM
Uniquely expressed poetry. Well done!
God Bless you,
While Floating Above My Body (Poetry) - 7/31/2013 9:34:09 AM
If this is a cry for help, seek it now. Monsters and demons have their place, but not in our heads.
While Floating Above My Body (Poetry) - 7/31/2013 3:44:16 AM
i hope that she finds the will to win
What To Say 2007 (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 5:36:46 PM
Awesome work, here. You are a Master.
Love and blessings,
While Floating Above My Body (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 5:34:54 PM
Have faith, get better. If you haven't seen a Doctor please do, IF this poetry is real. If its not real you have captured the essence of a troubled girl. Outstanding!
Love and blessings,
While Floating Above My Body (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 8:19:46 AM
Dark poetry indeed. I have the feeling of someone deeply troubled. I only hope that the poetry can help. Reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's writing of the deep torment he felt.
While Floating Above My Body (Poetry) - 7/29/2013 8:41:52 PM
Good to see you posting again, Beth...I've missed your dark poetry. It's good therapy when you look back in reflection of the dates it was posted. Be well. Blessed Be.
10-7-03 (Poetry) - 12/29/2012 11:32:50 AM
This poem reminds me of my own grandmother, may she rest in peace. Their life and love defines us, and even in their absence, they are never truly gone.
What To Say 2007 (Poetry) - 9/17/2012 12:17:58 PM
This poem cries out for help. It looks like you got it because you're still here writing.
10-7-03 (Poetry) - 9/16/2012 12:32:01 AM
of course there's pain, Beth,
and the sense of loss will stay with you
for a long time, i believe it never really
your heart is in these words
Planta Muerta (Poetry) - 9/3/2012 9:30:26 AM
You're head is in a lot better place now. There is a whole lot of depth in this one too.
Just Like My Mind (Poetry) - 9/3/2012 9:26:58 AM
There is a lot of depth in this piece. Very well written.
What I'm Worth 2007 (Poetry) - 8/29/2012 4:52:04 PM
You are in a much better place in your life now.
What I'm Worth 2007 (Poetry) - 8/29/2012 6:57:52 AM
Your poem carries a positive note. And the fact that your posting it now tells me that things are much better.
A Life Lived E ntirely (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 1:55:11 PM
I find you have a unique combination of vocabulary, and that produces new flavors in reading these words. "Walk away/And take with you knowing/Change is what has happened" . . . I truly value those words! And "Live the life you're given/Love the time you have" is a remarkably wise message. "Experience is too much" is loaded with connotations. Thank you, Beth. ~~ Diana
Psalm 55 (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 1:50:16 PM
Beth, you have been so expressive in this poetry, and it strikes me not as pitiful or self-sympathy, but more stunningly descriptive: I deeply appreciate these lines: "his speech is smooth, his heart is war/His words are oil and they are drawn swords". So powerful. The whole piece is huge. ~~ Diana
Fence Posts (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 1:46:19 PM
Lovely, haunting and brave. ~~ Diana
Just Shy of Importance (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 1:44:07 PM
This has a kind of beauty to me. That beauty is in the lines: "I can't do this alone/but I guess I have to try," and "I don't know what I want/or even what I need/I guess it doesn't matter now" . . . those lines have a wounded strength in them. Your title is immense. ~~ Diana
What I'm Worth 2007 (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 1:39:14 PM
This holds great honesty, Beth. Very touching two lines: "To those who care/If I live and breathe," and self-recognition contained in the last two lines. "I know not what I'm worth' contains some question, as in possibility that you may be of worth, as you absolutely are. ~~ Diana
7-11-12 (Poetry) - 8/27/2012 11:38:16 AM
I sense a small baby, helpless in a bed. But then I have the feeling that it is me sometimes. I hope that it is not you. Ron
7-11-12 (Poetry) - 8/26/2012 6:24:52 PM
Strength to you, Beth,
and more strength;
well delivered from the heart
7-11-12 (Poetry) - 8/25/2012 12:44:07 PM
Hope you're not feeling like this today.
February 2010 (Poetry) - 9/20/2010 8:17:21 PM
You have perfectly described 'those moments' when the world disappears and is nothing for a short while...and then we return, and I wonder at times if it was worth coming back to.
February 2010 (Poetry) - 9/20/2010 2:27:28 PM
A soul lost between two worlds, leaving one to ponder...
Be always safe,
Psalm 55 (Poetry) - 9/15/2010 4:23:59 PM
There's no doubt in my mind that you are the Latter-Day Psalmnist. The Good Book is a good source of inspiration for your work. I like to pen what I call "Hard Gospel" now and then.
duke larance -- the drugstore cowboy poet
Sitting in Silence (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 11:58:50 AM
Wow! Dark doesn't begin to describe this. It's good to see you posting again.
A Life Lived E ntirely (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 1:22:23 AM
Very, very good
A Life Lived E ntirely (Poetry) - 5/9/2010 2:08:15 PM
Love and life is to be lived entirely as is our love for God.
A Life Lived E ntirely (Poetry) - 5/9/2010 10:19:19 AM