Discovering the Joy Within Chapter 2 (Short Story) - 10/15/2007 11:19:19 PM
A very sad story. Maybe God did hear Jordyn's prayer and cared. Maybe he took babies because He wanted to protect them from any more harm from Carlos in case he got out of prison and tried to harm them even more. God always has his own plans. I'm glad that Jordyn finally got enough courage to have Carlos arrested. That is just what he deserved after what he put Jordyn and the babies through. A very good write.
Loving You (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 11:00:27 PM
Welcome to Authorsden. I enjoyed reading your poem. Very nicely done. You're right, all stories don't end happily. It is a blessing to always believe in love.