Closer (Poetry) - 8/11/2002 10:46:00 PM
A wonderful jolt! Full of wonderful fluid images.
Psalms (Poetry) - 7/17/2002 11:44:19 PM
I like this one...felt like i was there=P I am there..true stuff
Enough (Poetry) - 2/3/2002 7:56:59 AM
A very visual and powerful descriptive write. Lovely flow and nice use of language.Simply remarkable.
Parasol (Poetry) - 2/1/2002 7:09:27 AM
I appreciate this poem.a fine tone of the poem has captured my mind some what passionatly.my inner dipped in depth, has become fine tunned again thanks to this poem.
Sandcastles (Poetry) - 1/17/2002 8:57:29 PM
Very good write. Graphic as it needs to be!
I have written much on this subject. I lost 9 friends in that quiet day. Gregg. Read my Vaporized if you like you will see what I mean. Thanks.
Psalms (Poetry) - 1/15/2002 6:15:22 AM
Damn, this screams! Thanks for the view.I love it!!!! Janet
Psalms (Poetry) - 1/14/2002 11:14:52 PM
This one takes you on a rather wicked ride that I can't get enough of... I loved some of the imagery, it just jumps out at the reader and screams "I'm not quite ok but dammit... ok!" ::chuckles:: Great job... great job.
Jackhammers (Poetry) - 1/14/2002 1:15:27 PM
What can I say about this other than it was very touching...painfully familiar...and unnerving. I never like thinking about things that upset me but if it must happen then I suppose at least I have had the opportunity to do it reading such a wonderful poem.