Wisdom and Knowledge (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:45:43 PM
I don't know Bob Marley, but I found this a fascinating writing.
It would help if you used more punctuation, periods at the end of sentences, especially.
As for the content, it is a stark indictment of the world of today in general.
Enter-net (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:40:34 PM
Not wrapped too tight. Great sense of humor and word play
Wisdom and Knowledge (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 4:33:35 PM
nice - i think Bob Marley would have liked this. -- Jeff