Recent Reviews for Lilly H
Alerion's Deceit (Short Story) - 7/2/2008 8:07:12 PM|
Wow, you like dialogue. Happy writing.
Luna and the Gypsies (Short Story) - 8/11/2007 10:54:07 PM
I think it's really amazing that you have the discipline to write at such an early age. You have three of the most important qualities for a writer -
- Enthusiasm for what you write.
You need to now apply yourself to the hardest part of writing and clear up the many spelling, grammatical and punctuation errors in your work. If you do this, you will improve your chances of success enormously.
Please, do NOT be discouraged by this. Many writers, much older than you fail to recognise the need for properly edited work. Now, another note of warning here, DO NOT GO AND BUY AN EDITING SERVICE. Such services will take your money and leave you much worse off than you were when you started.
You need to carefully read your work yourself, and if possible, get other writers to carefully take you through problem areas.
You have all the time in the world, so keep writing and get as much feedback as you can.
I self-published my first novel. However, I first submitted it for editorial review. Once the review came back, I spent weeks on an editorial clean-up, but then won an Editor's Choice award for excellence - I did it myself and the exercise taught me a hell of a lot.
Write on, young lady, write on!!!
The broken stone, The girl in black (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 6:47:36 PM
Interesting and surreal.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
Silently Still (Poetry) - 8/27/2008 3:50:50 PM
Karen said it best.
May The Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
Silently Still (Poetry) - 4/22/2008 5:38:29 PM
Interesting and very intriguing....
Be always safe,
Nothing Is Wrong (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 1:51:26 AM
You are so right Lilly. Nothing is wrong, at least not now, or even then. :P. How many times have each of us said these words in our lifetimes? "I'm just Tired of Love leaving me behind, assuring me that All Dreams of living have Died in it's wake. But Nothing is Wrong, as I hang my head and shuffle away in the dark." This is how I would use what you have written here in a sentence, Lilly.
You have written this from your heart and soul, and said a lot in just a few lines of absolute truth.
Thank you for sharing this with us, Lilly.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister in the written word, Barbie.