full circle (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 10:03:07 PM
Reading your profile, I agree. I write as a release usually.
full circle (Poetry) - 9/29/2002 8:58:30 PM
interesting
full circle (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 10:00:25 PM
You are smart and sensitive, which is a deadly depressing combination most of the time (not to the reader but to the writer--the person). You seem keen on the generalities and deliver them well. I wonder how incredibly rich and interesting the details are though; I wonder if you fear the therapy your words may hold for you (and others).
I can't wait to read what you write next.
just me (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 9:54:00 PM
This is a Beck song in the making. I like the simplicity of the complicated questions you raise.
alone (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 9:51:56 PM
A bit too pretentious for my liking but as pretentious poetry goes, fairly good. Makes me want to read more.
no purpose nonsense (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 9:47:19 PM
Sounds like you've been to an MTV party.
full circle (Poetry) - 2/6/2002 6:28:29 PM
I really like this one. Don't remember reading it before. I just don't know if the rhyme at the end does anything for me. You might play with that a bit.
April (aka. booty rabbit)
open letter (Poetry) - 1/25/2002 7:26:58 PM
I constantly move from Monster to Child and back again, I am sure most of us do. It is how we manage them that makes the difference. This is a great piece of work, thank you. Carol.
alone (Poetry) - 1/22/2002 9:29:49 AM
::fights back the jealousy because she wasn't first and tucks the doctor back away like a good lil girl.:: You know seeing your poetry in a public forum like this sheds a whole new light on it. Hell even your stuff looks good here. Just kidding. You know you write wonderfully you just need to take time out of your busy, logical schedule and do it more often because now I wanna see more good shtuff like these three. Luz you.
April
open letter (Poetry) - 1/22/2002 9:26:00 AM
It's mah baboo!!! I'm so proud of you hehe. You lazy ass you finally got this up. It's ok some of us are eternally "behind," no? Btw... this is my favorite poem of yours. Keep writing... write until your fingers fall off... until you're buried in paper... until you're breathing pencil shavings... and then when it's all done take the one poem out of all the crap thats worth something and give it to the world to rip apart. That's what this life is about BR. (you'll figure the initials out yourself) I luz you!
April
alone (Poetry) - 1/22/2002 4:06:00 AM
keep the illusions in sight ~ I can relate
just me (Poetry) - 1/22/2002 4:02:11 AM
me too ~ a thought-provoking write
open letter (Poetry) - 1/22/2002 3:58:12 AM
You have insight (clearly) ~ enjoyed this ~ much.
