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We Gather Our Roses (Short Story) - 5/20/2009 2:48:12 AM
A very romantic and passionate story. Even we old babes need romance. Thank you for sharing this delightful story. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie

The Panda (Short Story) - 5/20/2009 2:16:52 AM
I agree with Leann and Karen. This is indeed very heartbreaking and shivers the soul. But even in the real world, I feel what we had intended was seen by the person we had in mind even after they pass away. This was written very well and full of emotion and visual images. Thank you for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 6 (Short Story) - 10/26/2008 8:52:35 AM
A wonderful plot ... with tantalizingly-developed characters. I can not wait to purchase a copy of this facinating book and discover the rest of the story.

Imagined (Short Story) - 10/20/2008 3:46:40 AM
Our minds wander..to things of unimportance during these times. Unique capture of a service CarolHawks

The Panda (Short Story) - 9/24/2008 12:46:28 PM
Such sadness. This is a beautiful writing with much meaning in the way your words appear to be as children would speak. CarolHawks

We Gather Our Roses (Short Story) - 9/24/2008 12:43:48 PM
When anyone finds a soulmate..no matter what age, it is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed this story..I was worried William might be a no-show. Sunshine to you, CarolHawks

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 1 (Short Story) - 5/23/2008 9:46:36 AM
enjoyed the read

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 6 (Short Story) - 5/23/2008 9:46:18 AM
enjoyed the read

The Panda (Short Story) - 3/23/2008 2:38:03 PM
The best of intentions are, indeed, often too late. Thank you for sharing this, Mary. Leann

Imagined (Short Story) - 1/10/2008 2:40:26 PM


The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 6 (Short Story) - 1/8/2008 1:29:02 PM
Interesting to see more character development of Jamie and the relationship between the two, Mary. In reference to your fish cooking, I've always been taught by editors to refer to the animal in such a situation as an "it" rather than the personal pronoun unless the story actually is about the animal in which it becomes OK to call it he or she along with its peers. I don't see this as a great problem, but thought you'd like to know. Enjoyable as always, and I am glad to see you back..Jerry

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 6 (Short Story) - 1/8/2008 9:05:53 AM
SO good to see you back! I was afraid that Dirty Rachel spirited you off for good on some nefarious adventure deep in the heart of Istanbul. A pleasure to read you and Rachel again, as always. I particularly liked getting a little more insight into Jamie, who always seems wie beyond his years and uniquely patient with Rachel. Looking forward to more!

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 6 (Short Story) - 1/7/2008 6:41:09 PM
Mary! So nice to see you back here; you've been missed! Welcome back! You haven't lost your style; you still write very well, and I love how you write! Very well penned story; brava! More, more, more!! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

The Music Box (Short Story) - 12/20/2007 7:13:26 PM
Touching. Very interesting read. enjoyed.

We Gather Our Roses (Short Story) - 12/1/2007 11:14:10 PM
A fantastic and very interesting story. Enjoyed the read.

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 4 (Short Story) - 9/16/2007 8:31:17 AM
This is good...you are good. Your talent is top notch in spinning tales..."Soft as velveteen" I have not heard that in a long time.. Well done Allen

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 3 (Short Story) - 9/10/2007 7:59:32 PM
This really does have the making of a GOOD southern novel...I hope to be able to get in the next chapter or two soon...take care and great story. Allen

Imagined (Short Story) - 9/10/2007 9:14:33 AM
A very sad and painful part of life. Excellent write.

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 5 (Short Story) - 8/30/2007 3:57:24 PM
Whew! That was close! I got caught up in the action, Mary. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 5 (Short Story) - 8/30/2007 1:08:57 PM
Oh, no! Evicted from Paradise by the vengeful Miss Bobbins. Back to the woods... I'm nervous again. And very curious about Gabriela's spite... looking foward to more.

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 4 (Short Story) - 8/30/2007 1:03:36 PM
I don't know how I missed this earlier... maybe my tracker isn;t working.. pout. This could be a Mr. Bubble ad for a number of different demographics. I am feeling the urge to go take a bath now myself. I am now curious, what other memories does Rachel have from the orphanage? And are they looking for her? What kind of scene could an irate nun cause in Rachel's new home? Much to play with here. Dirty Rachel continues to enchant!

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 5 (Short Story) - 8/30/2007 12:24:11 PM
Delightful story, Mary; very well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 4 (Short Story) - 8/29/2007 11:51:32 AM
Good picture of a dirt, ignored little girl finally getting cared for. Enjoyed it...Jerry

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 4 (Short Story) - 8/28/2007 4:28:03 PM
A very good write. Very nice. Enjoyed the story.

The Adventures of Dirty Rachel Ch 3 (Short Story) - 8/28/2007 4:25:18 PM
You really captures a reader,s attention. Enjoyed as much as I enjoyed chapter 1 & 2. Good write.

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