Tear Up The Map (Poetry) - 8/13/2007 7:54:12 AM
some kind of modern siren? this is just gloriously and colourfully filled with nuances. .. . tearing up the map? i read this as lost....complete abandon.. in every sense[ual] of the word--- and your words have a tendril'd effect, reaching farther than anticipated, leaving only the slightest of breathy traces... .
succinct and soft and splendid~
ness
Tear Up The Map (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 11:06:27 PM
Wonderfully immediate, visual and inviting!
Leaves me with a wish for more... sequel poems ...
Great punchy write Brad, and welcome to the Den too!!
Love of Freedom, Suzie :-D
Tear Up The Map (Poetry) - 8/12/2007 10:06:55 PM
when i read this i think Jim Morrison and his trip in the desert [though i cannot remember what song that inspired right now]
i like the idea of tearing up the map. i really do.
lets not ask for directions or look to other couples for the way it should be done... lets try make it on our own... find our own way or being together...
it also kinda makes me think of the chorus/refrain from tracy chapmans song 'fast car'
yes.
nice work.
