The Date (Short Story) - 5/19/2009 7:18:57 AM
Communicated with emails and text messages—sooooooo romantic!
Curse of the Heiroglyph (Short Story) - 3/25/2008 1:34:07 PM
I love the study of Egypt andould love to go there sometime. Your story brought back memories of "The Tales of One thousand and one nights."
The Last Nobody (Short Story) - 3/23/2008 9:32:21 AM
...excellent well written story of one searching...and when found...wishes he had not been ...found.
great story Saberi...
John
Curse of the Heiroglyph (Short Story) - 3/22/2008 2:16:38 PM
One will never know. A gripping story.
A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/14/2008 9:16:21 AM
Very well scripted. Good balance and flow. Short and potent. Bravo, Bravo.
The Date (Short Story) - 2/13/2008 10:11:53 AM
...a promise kept...between the onlines...nothing is pictured...but words...a second time...and a wedding ring.
well done light suspense Saberi...
John
A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/13/2008 10:01:10 AM
...well written story...of meeting...a week of Sundays...ending in perchance...
nicely done Saberi...
John
The Date (Short Story) - 2/11/2008 2:01:40 PM
Enjoyed the twist at the end...I just love your mind and your creations, Saberi.
Amor
A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/11/2008 1:50:27 PM
Intriguing as the writer herself as she weaves this romance in a classic and tenderly dreamy introduction of this cafe romance in Paris.
Amor
The Date (Short Story) - 2/10/2008 9:08:42 PM
Hey I liked this little story, it was a nice work of imaginative play and it kept me involved all the way to the surprise ending...great work, Saberi...
Art Sun...
The Elixir of Life (Short Story) - 1/20/2008 8:28:37 PM
I would have loved the whole story on this...Saberi, you have a way of keeping the reader totally engrossed in your stories...incredible as they may appear to be or not. I was fascinated the whole way through and loved the message in this. You must be an old soul inside.
Amor
In God's Company (Short Story) - 1/8/2008 10:39:06 PM
What can I tell you Saberi...that you do not already know. You have made this presentation through the magnificent gift God has endowed you with and you have excelled in giving reflection to those who read. Brilliantly done.
May Love and Peace be with you always,
Amor
The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 12/2/2007 5:27:42 PM
You know Saberi, I find your work fascinating and brilliant...you should be writing Hollywood scripts. The twists and surprises of this piece wretched rapidly at the closing scenes and engrossed the reader. I Love your work.
Amor
The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 10/20/2007 12:41:43 PM
Certainly a well written, bizarre twisted story. I like how you move it along economically. Very good and sparse description and dialogue. You're in control. Reminds me of another era though. Nice use of the French too(which I can barely remember) Fascinating ending. So when's the novel coming?
The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 10/18/2007 11:30:46 AM
Saberi, this so good! Perfect madness for Halloween too! Magnifique. Tu as fait un boulot formidable.
In God's Company (Short Story) - 10/3/2007 6:14:45 PM
...many windows...to look through in this story...many voices to be heard.
well written story...
John
In God's Company (Short Story) - 10/1/2007 10:11:50 PM
Another great and creative work Saberi. God, who's very essence is Truth, is the same yesterday, today, and tomorrow. Therefore if God is Truth and God never changes, it follows that the truth never changes either. Therefore the truth is immutable, not validly subject to everyone's individual interpretations; interpretations that cover the whole human spectrum, from silliness to genocide. Still, it is up to each person to seek The Truth, I found it in Jesus, The Christ. Thanks for a stimulating and fun article.
In God's Company (Short Story) - 10/1/2007 8:06:03 PM
A scientific world is one that is lost...funny how the world and all it's intellect cannot see beyond their own minds...fortunately humanity has only been able to use 10% of it's capacity...otherwise we would be in a heck of a mess...
Hopefully the common sense of spirituality and love will prevail...and get us out of this mess...
Nice work, Saberi...
Love and Peace...
Art Sun...
The Elixir of Life (Short Story) - 9/16/2007 9:00:30 AM
Kept me reading and smiling. Was struck by the many parallels. Be safe in your travels, you're a brilliant gem of a writer.
The Psychology of Addiction (Article) - 3/23/2008 9:24:40 AM
...thoughts to ponder...with perhaps a solution...find a sense of hope in this well written topic...
John
The Psychology of Anger (Article) - 3/23/2008 9:19:59 AM
...well written Saberi...and you have raised thoughts within...and this is good.
John
The Psychology of Addiction (Article) - 3/22/2008 12:34:41 PM
Very Good - especially the last two paragraphs. Again, big topic and you covered a lot clearly - good to read essays again :) thanks for the read!
The Psychology of Attraction (Article) - 3/22/2008 12:22:32 PM
Hi Saberi -i am interested in the topics you write about -this is an interesting one. A huge topic and you have outlined much to consider, so sweeping statements can be problematic...depends on the audience also -are these accademic essays? Would they have a bibliography etc? This line could use a whole essay in itself,
'A homosexual usually looks for similarity in the other partner because homosexuality is largely based on narcissism.'
and as i have thought about this quite a bit as an idea in my time - as i read i thought it sounded a little sweeping and as a statement of fact, in the one line you have there. When i am not sure it has been proven that this is the case? Interesting, and i'm off to read another, Nicky xx
Religion, Science and Social Progress (Article) - 2/2/2008 6:43:11 AM
I guess the purpose has been to show that science and religion can coexist and that although science maybe a religion, traditional religions are not redundant, they are still necessary. I think/hope this view is more constructive and inclusive and not detrimental.S
Religion, Science and Social Progress (Article) - 1/23/2008 10:33:28 PM
I read this with great interest. Well done! I think science has became a religion for some and closed the circle - to the great detriment of all. Best wishes. Willie
The Psychology of Ageing (Article) - 1/11/2008 10:08:21 AM
...well written thoughts Saberi...found positive within the spirit...an old soul...I am listening.
John
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 2/1/2009 7:27:05 AM
This is nice Saberi...
you have breathed more than the air...
now that is where one wishes to be, a very enjoyable work of thought through poem...
Art Sun...
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/19/2009 12:37:00 AM
Beautiful...sensuous..."I am aware of the ballet beneath the sheets of the mind,"...gorgeous.
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 7:32:13 PM
Passionate and lost...
The second line is a favorite,
I like the imagery and the way it sounds.
And I also agree with Gene's comment.
Axilea
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 2:38:48 PM
I applaud the images, Saberi, notably:
"I am aware of the
ballet beneath the sheets of the mind."
-gene.
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 2:07:31 PM
Sensuous, yet in a delicate manner, which speaks from the heart of a lover.
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 12:38:58 PM
The powerful imagery serves to emphasize the impact of what you express within your verses, Saberi. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 12:11:58 PM
A tasty amalgam of simile, analogy, and imagery. it's amazing what happens when the reds of intelligence and the blues of emotion blend together to make the purples of passionate desire. Hope all is well with you. Kool bio-pic.
Blessings ...
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 12:06:03 PM
Beautifully crafted bringing warmth to one's heart...
Be always safe,
Karen
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 9:54:33 AM
Devastatingly beautiful, romantic writing at its very best
Fee
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 8:36:47 AM
Saberi,
Lush imagery makes the passion come alive in beautiful (lip) lines - well done! Nice to read you again. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I will trace your lips (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 8:30:47 AM
I like this. Lots of great imagery. You might find it amusing that one of the automatic ads at the top of the page I saw was for Lip Balm. Seems like EVERYONE wants a piece of this peom, Saberi. Nice job. JD
Noumenal, I (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 9:26:30 AM
This poetic expressive piece is worthy of reading after reading after reading, Saberi. There's is so much to "digest." Thank you for sharing of your "self." Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 6:00:45 PM
This reads like a sponge drawing water; I am water, Saberi. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 4:59:11 AM
Your thoughts express more than they reveal ...sensual escapade of expressions captured within the exotic mind and yet the pleasure is revealed as time stands still...a very exquisite piece...
nice...
Art Sun...
Sacred (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 8:22:39 AM
...you paint in richest forms...words to carry us through dreams of...Sacred. ...perhaps because it is...to whisper of your finest work...is my pleasure.
what beautiful secret images you share with us Saberi...
John
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 8:16:13 AM
...what beautiful shadows...your words color images...veiled in passion and music of a fine poetic artist.
excellent Saberi...
John
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/28/2008 8:46:18 PM
Very exotic and passionate!!
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/23/2008 11:36:03 AM
Undone by the passion, the beauty within these lines - wow, Saberi, my new favorite of yours! Excellent.
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Love the line, "then the wind in schisms..."
Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/23/2008 11:22:37 AM
A beautiful and passionate poem.take care of yourself
Edwin
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 2:37:27 PM
Gloriously, you have left your mark, Saberi. You have a very deep connection and commitment to this character. Confident in its genius, rudimentary in its emotion which leaves no gap of knowledge in your intentions. Sacred is a doable concept. Be well, you...
Love,
Sage
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 9:38:52 AM
Truly a beautiful word picture; thank you for sharing your creative genius, Saberi. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/21/2008 1:54:25 AM
Saberi,
Very beautiful and done with so much passion. Love is so addictive my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 8:48:21 PM
So beautiful are your words and images of beauty, wonderful write...
Be always safe,
Karen
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 6:24:43 PM
This is a very passionate vision...
Axilea
Sacred (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 3:50:28 PM
Saberi, Utterly beautiful and wondrous to experience the images you word paint...ET
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