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Recent Reviews for Saberi Roy

The Date (Short Story) - 5/19/2009 7:18:57 AM
Communicated with emails and text messages—sooooooo romantic!

Curse of the Heiroglyph (Short Story) - 3/25/2008 1:34:07 PM
I love the study of Egypt andould love to go there sometime. Your story brought back memories of "The Tales of One thousand and one nights."

A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/14/2008 9:16:21 AM
Very well scripted. Good balance and flow. Short and potent. Bravo, Bravo.

The Date (Short Story) - 2/13/2008 10:11:53 AM
...a promise kept...between the onlines...nothing is pictured...but words...a second time...and a wedding ring. well done light suspense Saberi... John

A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/13/2008 10:01:10 AM
...well written story...of meeting...a week of Sundays...ending in perchance... nicely done Saberi... John

The Date (Short Story) - 2/11/2008 2:01:40 PM
Enjoyed the twist at the end...I just love your mind and your creations, Saberi. Amor

A Cafe Romance in Paris (Short Story) - 2/11/2008 1:50:27 PM
Intriguing as the writer herself as she weaves this romance in a classic and tenderly dreamy introduction of this cafe romance in Paris. Amor

The Date (Short Story) - 2/10/2008 9:08:42 PM
Hey I liked this little story, it was a nice work of imaginative play and it kept me involved all the way to the surprise ending...great work, Saberi... Art Sun...

The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 12/2/2007 5:27:42 PM
You know Saberi, I find your work fascinating and should be writing Hollywood scripts. The twists and surprises of this piece wretched rapidly at the closing scenes and engrossed the reader. I Love your work. Amor

The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 10/20/2007 12:41:43 PM
Certainly a well written, bizarre twisted story. I like how you move it along economically. Very good and sparse description and dialogue. You're in control. Reminds me of another era though. Nice use of the French too(which I can barely remember) Fascinating ending. So when's the novel coming?

The Portrait of Henry James (Short Story) - 10/18/2007 11:30:46 AM
Saberi, this so good! Perfect madness for Halloween too! Magnifique. Tu as fait un boulot formidable.

Noumenal, I (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 9:26:30 AM
This poetic expressive piece is worthy of reading after reading after reading, Saberi. There's is so much to "digest." Thank you for sharing of your "self." Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 6:00:45 PM
This reads like a sponge drawing water; I am water, Saberi. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes, Regis

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 4:59:11 AM
Your thoughts express more than they reveal ...sensual escapade of expressions captured within the exotic mind and yet the pleasure is revealed as time stands still...a very exquisite piece... nice... Art Sun...

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 8:16:13 AM
...what beautiful shadows...your words color images...veiled in passion and music of a fine poetic artist. excellent Saberi... John

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/28/2008 8:46:18 PM
Very exotic and passionate!!

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/23/2008 11:36:03 AM
Undone by the passion, the beauty within these lines - wow, Saberi, my new favorite of yours! Excellent. ((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. Love the line, "then the wind in schisms..."

Lunar Mantra (Poetry) - 7/23/2008 11:22:37 AM
A beautiful and passionate poem.take care of yourself Edwin

On Dying (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 12:19:25 AM
This is something many of us mortals have pondered since the beginning of it not? I shall prefer to slip away into the silence and do the opposite of Dylan Thomas's "Do not go gentle into that good night" Well done, Saberi. Love Amor

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 4:03:02 PM
For being simple, you pack much in here - excellent - (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 10:04:16 AM
In scripture it speaks of a group of people in Christ Jesus, at some point in the historical timeline, that will not experience physical death. They will be translated into the presence of the Most High God and will rule and reign with Him for all eternity. No matter what, most humans will lose their spirit at some point. Your ponderings poetess, however melancholy, still throb with an adventurous spirit. I like that! Blessings ...

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/23/2008 4:52:10 AM
Saberi, One thing 's for sure you'll be remembered long after with poems such as this. Being older and probably closer to it I really don't care how I go as long as the suffering is short and the pain minimal. Peace, Love and Blessings My Friend Always, Paul.

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 10:32:48 PM giving many reason to have penned in many thing for certain...and that is what living can bring to mind...adventure. excellent Saberi... John

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 5:02:00 PM
Saberi, I have often wondered how I would die, when and where. Sometimes its best not too know. I do know where I'm going and its a beautiful place called Heaven! Thought reflectiing poetry, Saberi. Excellent! Blessings to you, ~Linda

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 4:42:30 PM
You provide substance for reflection, Saberi; and your theme is certainly not simple. Well done. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 3:28:55 PM
completely simply indeed. a right open write. ... of awareness and undesrtanding. .. .. ness

On Dying (Poetry) - 3/22/2008 2:14:51 PM
Doesn't hurt to ponder ones final demise and how it may happen. I fact it may help keep you on the right track while alive. Heart attacks and cancer are the two most likely to kill someone.

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 2/27/2008 8:21:28 PM
Sensational!-- in every sense of the word. I love the "measured cups" and the washing machine "hurricanes" -- so vivid, tactile, and ... sensational --Charlie

White dreams (Poetry) - 2/18/2008 9:52:23 PM
This poem is a little cube of passion. I think I'll but it in my lemonade-- turn it to passion fruit-- what do you say? --Charlie

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/24/2008 9:09:02 AM
i really enjoyed this Saberi - the flow, stream, and the images you use are ones that resonate with me - terracotta is a delicious word!

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/23/2008 7:48:30 PM
this really is lovely - has such an honest languid rhythm I almost forgot to read the words and get the meaning - you make musical notes out of words! You & anessa - I will have to buy your book when you publish!

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 1/23/2008 7:44:42 PM
This is sort of "your" "out of EDEN" - quite different than mine, but a hymn to "children of Eve" if there ever was one! And what classical control of loaded words (Leonine, serpentine..) Your a virtuoso Image-weaver! PS: sorry it took so long to get back - thanks for your comments on "River out of Eden" "stay on the axis" michael guy

Surreal (Poetry) - 1/20/2008 8:35:44 PM
Fantastic images congregated in the back of my mind as I read your words. Amor

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 1/20/2008 8:32:41 PM
A maze of mental fragments cohesed by the art of your words. Excellent write, Saberi Amor

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/20/2008 4:54:09 PM
Oh my, stuff me in your coffee mug and call me liquid.. Wow, how amazing is this....

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/17/2008 7:05:47 AM
You are very talented, your words had me hynotized and anxious to read on. God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 4:01:40 PM
I really enjoyed this picture of such deep passion.

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 9:37:45 PM
you have a natural ability to embellish your poetry with the lush imagery of passion, desire and need ... very nice indeed!

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 11:19:06 AM
Saberi...every word...within every me color of ones remembrance...of passion...which perhaps I might have seen...peeking through sheer curtains. expressive and beautifully written...your pen is. John

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 9:44:46 PM
This leaves a tinge of mystique within the lines of fond remebrance or perhaps the letting go of such a dream? The lines echo these sentiments with such romance that it leaves pause for yearning with these images echoing beyond the whispers of the heart. Beautiful writing, Saberi Amor

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 1:11:24 PM
If not for the finality of reality we would then be in a fantasy with your thoughts gliding upon the moon... truly nice work...

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 6:05:45 AM
:-) Lovely! R~

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 5:02:36 PM
You have written another gem Saberi! I feel it a privilege to read your poetry! ET

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 1:45:03 PM
Saberi, One needs a cold shower after this write. Snacks are only preliminary to the full course meal. (lol) Excuse the pun but your poem is very tastefully done. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 10:42:27 AM
A melange of luscious and delectable words are at play here . . . The unorthodox is commonplace and the feel of passion is real . . . Pleasant memories . . . Sensing lust in the gypsy smoke . . .

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 10:18:35 AM
A staccato of thoughts bounced off this pensive poem.

Terracotta Love (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 9:47:29 AM
Absolutely gorgeous, Saberi, indeed. Well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 10:37:25 AM you see it...and see it...and see these passion lit words... magic Saberi... John

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/8/2008 4:17:27 PM
"heavenly is the magic to be in a moment’s time." Yes - and don't let it go~ Lovely wite. Becca~

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 10:53:02 PM
The passions that hold in your dreams are just speldid, nicely done... Be safe, Karen

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 10:42:38 PM
Those dreams are the ones we all want to be a part of...especially if they are heavenly magic... those are the best... nice work, Saberi... enjoyed, Art Sun...

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 9:41:11 PM
I love the passion this poem stirs with its unique imagery...Very creative Saberi... ET

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 7:38:57 PM
A lot of energy in this poem! It seems to me that every detail leads the reader to the moment of sensuous revelation in the end. Axilea

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 1:08:00 PM
Saberi, Very sensual and passionate piece. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 1:00:40 PM
A metaphoric ride of love.

White dreams (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 11:08:20 AM
Dreamy poetry flows into the corners of the universe with these memorable lines...pure excellence, Saberi. Amor

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 12/26/2007 1:12:57 AM
I am very impressed with your work and you do not disappoint.

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 12/22/2007 12:27:05 PM
Dreamy.... and steamy

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 2:39:25 PM
Never at a loss for imagery through your bleeding words of is a taste of what the heart longs for and so well expressed. Amor

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 12:05:42 PM
excellent descriptive writing - clear thoughts, powerful emotion mix comes through these thought images which makes this a good read - going to read some more by you! enjoyed your words, Nicky xx

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 10:32:43 AM
...brilliant pen...words before and after...of thoughts...and private ink. wonderful... John

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 4:00:13 AM
Very well done indeed, these lines melt the senses and fortify the soul. Fee

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 2:53:56 PM
egads a beautiful wordsmith you are; so eloquent and surreal; a bird in space type of dream, etched with precision. . such imagery and oh, but you do move, through us all in words. .. great ness

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 10:00:23 AM
Was left open-mouthed and amazed by the genius of this one.

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 8:56:56 AM
What an extraordinary phantasmagoric vision you've seen and captured here Saberi. "I have sought the lines of your breath in my heart’s whispers and placed the bits of you on my palm and rubbed and pressed like a fallen eyelash and made a wish." These lines of poetic/prose melted my brain over halved geodes. You are gifted with eyes that see beyond the parameters and machinations of the artistic intelligentsia. Good to read you again. Never rest you quill! Light and Wisdom ... Richard

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 4:59:40 AM
THIS, my dear is exquisite and damndable at the same time . . . I love the surrealism throughout the piece and except for making very much sense I could even compare it to the Beatnik generations collage of mis-matched poetry, but like I said, THIS make perfectly good sense . . . Stand . . . Take that well-deserved bow . . .

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 4:52:20 AM
Saberi, These are memorable lines that will linger long after having been read...I adored this write. Such imagery! Excellent. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Rudiments of Synchrony (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 4:32:21 AM
Saberi, Very beautiful and so full of passion. Your words spew gems of imagery. I especially love these lines: I have sought the lines of your breath in my heart’s whispers and placed the bits of you in my palm and rubbed and pressed like a fallen eyelash and made a wish. Pure and simply fantastic poetry. Peace, Love and Blessings to You Always, Paul.

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 12/11/2007 1:22:19 AM
Superbly written.

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 12/11/2007 1:19:11 AM
Saberi, you are able to write with the beauty of words entangled in the intimacy of pain and joy simultaneous. The fabric of romance unfolds in the artistry of your heart.

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 12/11/2007 1:13:50 AM
Just a beautiful picture you have painted with your words, Saberi...the images are superb and you have a firm grasp of the beauty of metaphor and the sensual depths of the soul's whispers.

Cerebral Music (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 7:35:09 PM
The artistry of your words is phenomenol.

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 1:08:40 PM
a deep and sensual work with many subtle hints leaving the reader to wonder. great last two lines. always, randy

Cerebral Music (Poetry) - 11/14/2007 5:52:37 AM
There is a view of thought within the words expressing life inside the rolled socks freeing once again the footsteps of life, thoughts and dreams contained within a night of variety and emotional disorder escapes into the dimensions of freedom, and yet life still flows back and once again we stroll within the morn and the repetitive force of time... nice work... Art Sun...

Cerebral Music (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 7:15:35 AM
"The swollen haiku met my desperate cleavage" Gotta love imagery like this. The simile in this glows. Blessings ... Richard

Cerebral Music (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 4:42:03 AM
So beautifully expressed it warms the mind to read. Enjoyed this one very much. Fee

Cerebral Music (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 8:28:51 PM
I enjoy reading your profound writes thank you Saberi for sharing this great piece Love & Peace be with you William

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 11/4/2007 5:30:02 AM
Emotionally charged views of an intensity of relation that has its highs and lows yet the reality of passion stays embedded deep within the soul of one who lives for the intensity of life... enjoyed... Art Sun...

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 10:58:29 AM
Radiant sensuality. Adheres to the senses like morning dew. You are an intrepid and passionate young writer. Blessings Ms. Roy ... Richard

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 10:12:48 AM
The depth of your poetry that touches on love and lust that only a lover of life can bring to fore in words left unspoken. Loved the ending.

Winding Kisses (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 9:49:09 AM
And like that poet painting those pictures in the unpredictable wind, this poem goes from ectasy in the making to pulling back and wonder . . . Your poetry challenges the reader and mmore than one reading is necessary at times . . . Classic Saberi Roy on display here . . .

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 8:02:38 AM
Conjures a host of interpretive possibilities ... like a splash of hydro-carbons - in ethereal colors - on the surface of water mesmerizes. Hypnotic and rapturous as it wafts through the ether of human expression and understanding. In this write (in my opinion) you have melded the corporeal and spiritual cynically and passionately, and have effectively formed your thoughts as Savador Dali used to paint. Your best to date young Ms. Roy. Blessings ... Richard

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 7:13:17 AM
"guilty gods render us heavenly" what an imagetic and iconoclastic rendering of need; of desire in somehow surrealistic time and space. . ..dreamlike etherealness, with those gods voyeuristically looking on. .. . knowing, understanding. . .. loverly~ ness

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 6:16:54 AM
I'm not at a loss for words. This is a poem which can almost be called surrealistic dream of longing. On the other hand it is soft pornography given to us with the deftness and artistic mindset of "Naked Lunch," i.e., William Burroughs. You weave a slender thread of lust and desire, combined with the subtleness of a literary masterpiece, which, after all is said and done, the reader is sated. Completely. So I shall read it again. This one goes in my library, of which there are few . . .

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 6:14:59 AM
Very creative love~in the making~love & illumination~Ted

Axis of Infinity (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 5:50:22 AM
I am sitting here at a loss for words for a change. That doesn't happen too often believe me. This poem is dazzling, sensual, caring, daring and so many other adjectives that all just add up to say stunning write my dear young friend. hugs Fee

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 6:08:28 AM
A beautiful work!

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 10:35:33 PM
What a beautiful ode to loves design.

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/16/2007 2:42:31 AM
very well thought out write. a touch of wit and sarcasm blended with such deep passion and desire. brought together "on the shaken bridge unfolding time " i love the last line. to unfold time would be a powerful thing. always, randy

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 9:17:35 PM
this poem explores both side of love and passion, flesh and spirit ... it is a self-explanatory query into the temporary balance and shaky foundation they force onto our willing beings ... i like the uniqueness of imagery and the amalgamation of sarcasm and desire ...

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 11:41:44 AM
Some real memorable lines in this one Saberi ... "the crumpled sheets of our unpoised fecundities" "we etch our souls on stones of silenced emotions" Very soul-searching, mildly cynical; the afterglow you have created in this is intoxicating. Well done! Blessings ... Richard

Latent Desires (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 3:24:47 AM
Quite a mind-stiring poem with questions asked without really needing an answer . . . Angst-influenced is the biting scarcasm and reality is the base from which it came . . . Exceptionally well done . . .

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 7:29:00 PM
luv the "paths of mentalist maneuvers" this poem puts me through ... excellent work ...

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/7/2007 1:14:14 PM
My life is found mostly in "your" second stanza; particulary from the 3rd to 8th lines! I couldn't put it like this until I go to play (nonverbally) at my piano, but we have you (and I am less a poet than a composer). You most reach a long way back with your writing-- bold with a style your own! Keep your subjects far flung... and the best michael guy

Irony (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 2:13:54 AM
I have always wondered why we are so slow to understand, to see the value of what we have lost. Maybe there's something wrong with the human race... we need group therapy, where the group is the whole world. Well expressed, Saberi. Axilea

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 11:47:35 PM
...words of well written thought...a ballet of intricate emotion...dreams of a world I seem to spin in. of the best Saberi... John

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 11:10:25 PM
Saberi, Ooooh, I love the way you write. Such imagery! Such lines! Awesome work. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 6:53:11 PM
A wonderful story like no other. To see past and through the physical world and delve into the supernatural is a gift and you handle your gift with delicate hands..... Be safe, Karen

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 5:58:17 PM
You are a master. Beyond that I am speechless.

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 4:36:55 PM
Well written poem, blessings, Holly

Clipped (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 4:35:18 PM
Excellent work again as usual...quite an original style. Very nice. Blessings, Holly

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 4:33:38 PM
Brillian work!

Past, Present, Future (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 4:32:06 PM
Interesting poem..soul serching.

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 4:30:48 PM
Excellent work! Holly

Dancing Dreams (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 2:29:09 PM
When you can sit down and write such a metaphysical and brilliant piece of work, you have things working right for you. Okay, yeah, some will say you are to herky-jerky with the lines, but not I, Saberi. To me each line and expression is a completion of a whole and that whole needs shaking up now and then. There is not a wasted word in this treatise-like prose/poem . . . Stand. Bow. Hear the clapping from your fans?

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 6:10:33 AM
Some surreal imagery indeed, like a painting that speaks to the senses, though, rather than directly to the intellect. The two lines that end your poem make me think of the reflections on time (and space) and the recent evolution of these concepts. I have enjoyed your poetry. Axilea

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/3/2007 1:24:36 AM if to be sung...with jazz like tones in these words...each phrased with individuality...coming together. on the edge... John

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 10:48:02 PM
You test the limits so well Saberi keeping your reader engaged with bated breath to see where you're taking us next! Kudo's! Love, Eileen

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 8:04:54 PM
something in this reminds me of a Edvard Munch painting; all sinew and rawness. . .. a slight bit off in its ethe/r.eality. .. i love it. .. especially the dangling spaces in between. .. ness

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 7:28:20 PM
This is one of those poems that leaves the reader grasping for your thoughts, wishing to complete the depth with an analysis of each line...and then it is all defined.....Surreal... nice work.... Art Sun...

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 6:44:31 PM
I really enjoy the images that you often project. Here is what I felt when I read your beautiful lines. The innocence of humanity has been worn away, Lightened by side streets that detour man in a mindless stupor; As working has become their reward for unshackled chaos. While peoples characters have become reversible as rain coated serpents, With clouds of darkened future leaving a window sash parted slightly to vent the gain; Cleansing of streets with muddy ichors drainings. As the crickets and tree frogs sing of natures nightime refrain, Gathering the subterfuge of a lost humanities identity; Whose pain has been numbed by lost bloodlines haste. With breathless exhaustion slowly peeling back the raw drippings, Charted by a Nanoreel imploded by infinite space.

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 12:03:13 PM
A really Kool profound piecec Sabrie Loved the cadence Love & Peace William

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 11:14:39 AM
Heart rendering beauty in that special hour, in this case pregnant with twilight expectation! A sadness that still touches that eternal beauty that hums around us in even in our sadest hours. I'm thinking while reading, that you have to be in a state of total openness, senses and mind wide open to write like this; poetical observation of another. You have a "beautiful, balanced mind"

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 11:06:54 AM
After reading this: I want to buy you poetry book, now! I feel such an affinity with this one that thoughts come to mind of my poem "The Uninhabited" After all, my own music compositions (& song poems) are often the product of the fact that I'm one of these "Twi-Light" guys. My favorite kind of light and I too have gotten up pre-Dawn just to bathe in it and think I prefer it to Evening Twilight unitil on my twilight walks I forget the difference. "Is it a Sunrise or a Sunset? All depends on where you're standing. Another classic poem in a prose style I too have bravely tackled (so hard to keep the reader, but you kept me for sure!) Please also see my poem and one called "Gone" I'd even be grateful for your critical comments, if any! Thanks. lol, michael guy

Quest (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 10:54:16 AM
You're a Category Five Poet with this "classic" Science addressed in a nutshell; although I doubt you should lump art & music in with the same crowd of penetrating thoughts; they surely are! Welcome to the Den, (I too just signed on Aug2007) This one I will have to print out to read again and again! What Realizations: "you can have it all but not all at once!" So True: and speaking of "... the child... (learning) to speak the language of the gods(!)Whoa! great line. You wouldn't perchance be familiar with the "Rg Vedas" would you? A little Hindu blood in you perhaps? (sorry to stray) Great Stuff.

Surreal (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 10:06:30 AM
Shades of the beat poets of the 1950s, this one shrieked out at you in black and white and stark realism . . . That realism is what makes this better than most of the beats . . . Very good . . .

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 1:14:26 PM
Saberi you have an enlightened soul and share it with us so well in this fine poem! You are wise and your knowledge shows! Love, Eileen

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 8:20:44 AM
This is a metaphysical masterpiece! Time and space have no hold upon you, poet. "behind my translucency is my naked truth bare yet unbroken." Keats said: “Beauty is truth, truth beauty, —that is all Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know." You have proven him right in this outstanding piece. ~Butch Howard

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 5:40:27 AM
Saberi, first i want to extend my sincere thanks for your comment on my poetry. In compliment I am so pleased to discover yours. At the risk of being too woman in this thread of male comments, I have to say Autoerotic is to me a vivid manifestation of mental perfection artisticly defined and embodied and greatly enjoyed by this reader. If only I could have written this one! Truly awesome work! ~Taylor

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 2:12:17 PM
You take the reader on quite a ride in this poem, Saberi. Mind blowing stuff. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Regis

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 5:44:39 AM
Truth od mind is always found when one can see within their own depth... a nice work of this view..... Art Sun...

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 5:41:06 AM
Away from the physical..... It is a wonderful feeling to free that soul that hides in life's fabric. Wonderful poem. Thank you and my very best Chris

Irony (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 5:15:16 AM
No disclaimer needed, timeless wisdom found herein.

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 3:26:09 AM
Taking a look at our own souls can be a terrifying experience, because of the attacks from our "other" entities, sometimes it must stay hidden from view or rish being crushed beyond repair . . . this was a good poem which took the reader on an inner search for self . . . Which the last to lines lead me to believe that it has been found.

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 2:25:47 AM
Raw sincerity _ Beautiful energy forwards -love & grace * Ted

Enlightenment (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 12:31:02 AM
They travel through time washing the thyme with golden words, Body ,soul, and spirits muse vie for control; Definitions of ideas become timeless antiques of passing. As two become one with the conscious of order, Being circumcised from the galaxy with Quantum infinites; Like autumn leafs I possess seven spectral stairs of progenys definitives. Born to the same moment by sensual transmutation, As a innocent virgin birth is unbroken.

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 8:43:14 PM
Saberi, you went full throttle into this one and soared among the stars! I like your delving into the minds quest for the best! We are all still becoming,and that's the beauty of it!You are a superb writer! Thank you for sharing! Love, Eileen

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 8:39:39 PM
Many wonders through His own passage of struggles and death...yet He Lives within us and He cries of our own loss... nice work..... Art Sun...

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 4:43:25 PM
...beautiful write...of soft music...thoughts traveling through essence of time. well done... John

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 4:26:11 PM seek destiny in your fate...or ones own hand...painted in colors of time. well done... John

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 5:48:02 AM
Your thoughts are a projection of views in which ultimately we find the results of time passed through billions upon billions of years, whether past or future there is still a multitude of learning before we actually find wisdom.... very nice work..... Art Sun...

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 5:39:56 AM
Wonderful writing,enjoyed...Hugss

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:41:06 AM
Indepth version of the never-ending sppeal to do things better . . . To paint that oil-on-canvas more realistic . . . To shakeup the sexual revolution (is it still going on?) . . . Causing that old apple to somehow fall up the tree . . . Equating the downside of mathematical equasions to the betterment of the poor and despondent and paint the ceiling of the world a deep and comforting shade of earth colors . . . Nothing splashy, it might clash with the transvestite's colorful language . . . (Okay, so I got a bit carried away . . . . It's MY comment after all . . . LOL)

Quest (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 2:31:13 AM
Extreme delving into much girth-Mirth & mire * Another level of understanding quest has been brought forward *{wonder-filled beauty}love & goodness * Ted

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 7:39:02 PM
a uniquely intimate portrayal; lost and both simultaneously found in grace and passion. . .. elegant

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 10:50:13 AM
Excellent poetical work . . .

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 9:46:50 AM
A compelling offering, Saberi. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you, Regis

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 9:14:52 AM
wonderful. Lovely. Good work.

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 6:52:01 AM
You have captured eternity with this vision of my Lord and Saviour, simply profound.

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 5:34:07 AM
I'll continue to have faith in my senses <>Ted

Messiah (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 5:32:45 AM
From thrones to thorns, salvation is not peace but struggle, at once bold and elegant, so good.

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 10:03:27 AM
Soul-grasping poetry, Saberi. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes, Regis

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 4:26:25 PM
Well written and sensuous Sabri enjoyed much William

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 10:45:04 AM
Within the emotion prone self vibrates some excellent verse.

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 8:40:22 AM
Good poetry always hypnotizes me. I love language and it's a privelege to read the poets around here, another beauty Saberi.

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 7:32:33 AM
There is verve in your enigmatic writing, a pioneers vitality mixed together with much inquisitiveness and angst. Richard

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 5:15:59 AM
Even thoughts tend to escape the realistic flow of expression...yours show this a new word becomes the autoerotic escape displayed and you say... manifested at night... nice work..... Art Sun...

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 4:54:52 PM
Very creative sensuallity Saberi! Enjoyed the read! Love, Eileen

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 3:55:22 PM
Making up words is a real art form, perfect . . .

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 3:27:51 PM
The emotional planning or foresight can be deceitful in our own hearts knowledge. Agitations can be inflamed by so many venues of loves beholder, until one is stricken by the force of ones desire.

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 2:03:03 PM
mmmm, your work exudes wonder and polish; this, although the title would suggest otherwise, seemed almost on 'auto pilot', as if the subject is withdrawn from the activity, disinterested, cyber-kinetic. . .. as if someone was writing poetry without feeling the ink under their fingers, a painter who could care less about the brush or canvas. . .. meaningless.. .. love without reality, or at least a realness.. .. just my voodoo doll interpretation of course. .. a wonder.full write ness

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 1:53:06 PM
Love to make up original stuff through emotions * essence is pure & real -love * Ted

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 1:31:53 PM
Pretty intense. Like your made up word - sounds like it is emotion prone, your word fits the flow much better, though Kathy

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 12:48:46 PM
WOW What incredible images, what incredible lines: well done, Saberi! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Almost like a bellydance. :)

Autoerotic (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 12:25:03 PM
Sensually meaningful verses, Saberi. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Noumenal, I (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 10:41:22 AM
This poem gripped me in razor talons. I had to read it several times, and each time it gripped me harder. This is very deep soul-searching for a young woman. You capture well the bouts with lunacy we have when we are given the gift of thinking and seeing beyond the surface and mundane superficialities that inundate this planet like blobs of peanut butter. You are an impressive womn Saberi, whom God has gifted beyond the ordinary. I hope you get through the depression quickly. Lord knows I've been there and done that! Blessings poetess ... Richard

Noumenal, I (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 11:05:43 AM
This has fantastic lines where body, soul and spirit intertwine to form that person we sometimes aren't aware exists. That is what life is about, swimming through different realities, and perhaps one day seeing that hero's of both genders are born out of time. A secret moment that is kept silent until that age blossoms.

Noumenal, I (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 9:27:58 AM
Intertwined wisdom through out * Sorting themselves naturally & uniquely *love Ted

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 9/4/2007 6:24:45 AM
Interesting piece...everything fades within this reality and you express those views within your poem...nice work on the details of each thought.... enjoyed..... Art Sun....

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 8/31/2007 8:51:19 AM
A StormSpinner kind of write: rich with imagery, the scene unfolds before the reader's eyes. Well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Irony (Poetry) - 8/31/2007 2:14:06 AM
Oh my -Look what we have found - Passion in the raw for all time -{wonder-filled beauty} *All love good * Ted

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/30/2007 5:56:32 AM
Saberi the imagery is exceptional in your poem. Enjoyed.

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/30/2007 5:43:49 AM
Thank you for this work. Brialliant verses. I can still hear the laughter of the clown........ Thank you, Chris

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/30/2007 4:53:35 AM
Re: No Bukowski doesn't write like this at all. It's true I don't follow one specific style and every single poem I write is of a different style because that's my poetic experimentation, but I don't imitate anyone's style either.

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/30/2007 3:30:47 AM
Realism to the nth in this Bukowski-ish poem . . .

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/29/2007 10:25:06 PM
Life seen as it can be, no romance but harsh and real. In poetry one tends to fantasize, you draw a different picture. Excellent poem. Victor

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/29/2007 9:41:05 PM
Raw, real life images brought to life in color and excellent poetry. ET

Fading Colours (Poetry) - 8/29/2007 8:49:07 PM
I enjoyed the sense of time and change in your poetry. It was as though I was watching a caterpillar change into a butterfly one stage at a time.

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 8/29/2007 6:02:34 AM
Very descriptive and the reader needs all the senses to fully experience your words. Nice work.

Living (Poetry) - 8/28/2007 8:58:34 PM
What would we do without poets? Good write God Bless you and Your Loved Ones The Christian Cop

Living (Poetry) - 8/28/2007 3:46:43 AM
I absolutely love this poem Saberi, the images are so exceptional and the mood of each verse is tangible. Lovely work, a true pleasusre to read.

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 8/28/2007 3:18:56 AM
"And there are thristy skies" Stunning imagery and extremely well written. This is a pleasure to read. You have started my day by putting a smile on my face. Thank you best regards, Chris

Living (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 1:11:44 PM
Took two readings for the smiplistic energy to sink in, but when it did . . . MaN . . . Pure . . . Unsullied . . . Poetry . . .

Living (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 12:50:30 PM
Imagery that tumbles over the heart and mind like water over moss covered rocks. Beautifully delivered poetess ... Blessings ... Richard

Living (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 11:55:44 AM
Such a lovely perspective on the "whole" day, Saberi. Very nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you, Regis

Living (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 11:40:09 AM
You have painted a beautiful picture with moods and feelings of the four hours of the day. enjoyed

Clipped (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 8:47:24 AM
If your bio picture is any indication of your real age at present, and taking into consideration that this poem is 9 years old, I'd have to say, Saberi, that your Mother gave birth to a gifted child with a quill nestled in her hand at a very young age. I enjoyed some of the orphic imagery in this ... and also some of the words you chose to paint your thoughts. coruscate flaccidity I see this line as ... Brown diamonds (or those artists that have not reached their potential as yet) still reflecting brightly, or exhibiting a kind of virtuosity while remaining soft or malleable to influences. Very unique! "music of the mystic moon taking the clouds for a ride" this is a delightful image, very evocative of experiences in my own life. Welcome to AD! Blessings ... Richard

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 8:45:53 PM
yes, this is beauty and dreamed verse..the soft stillness of your words echoes the light itself. . .has a grace to it. . . .elegantly penned~ nessa

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 12:31:58 PM
Exceptional....your work reflects many emotions, imagery that captures more thn a thought, and yes music that seems like a mirage.... extremely nice work..... Art Sun...

Past, Present, Future (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 12:27:08 PM
Time is encased like words and thoughts, such is life as it travels the veil of journey's....we ride this same path... nice poetic display of expression... enjoyed.... Art Sun...

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 11:41:13 AM
A compelling write that evokes emotions which echo in my soul as I read and read again, Saberi. Thank you. Love and blessings to you, Regis

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 11:35:49 AM
Delightful and romantic but tinged with sadness. Love the image of "the kohl melts" and how this could be from the heat of the day or from lovelorn tears. Darkening the edges of the eyelids is quite symbolic. Blessings ... Richard

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 6:24:06 AM
An engaging, exquisite write, Saberi. Wonderful imagery and flow. Peace, Carolyn

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 5:45:04 AM
Very nice...your poem is so well written, it reads like a song...taking the reader along from begining to end with a soft flow of thoughts... nice work..... Art Sun...

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 4:45:15 AM
Imagery spent passion abound within the confines of this poem of tragedy!!! A love smothered by the fires of neglect . . . Very good . . .

When Twilight Returns (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 2:44:06 AM
Bravo! Beautifully written. Thank you, Chris

Irony (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 5:55:07 AM
The irony of life has many emotions and they are exposed within your thoughts of poem...nice... enjoyed..... Art Sun...

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 3:55:04 AM
This is true poetry, and delivered with a graceful aplomb . . . Old style, with enough mondernism attatchd to it to make it classical . . .

Trembling Sky (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 3:50:43 AM
As I read this, I could see the beginning of a movie based on the destruction of man's soul and the earth he stole. I could hear someone like Anthony Hopkins reciting this as the picture roams the ruins of cities and forests. Very powerful, very well done!!

Clipped (Poetry) - 8/24/2007 11:29:16 AM
A kaleidoscope of images that stir the senses and the emotions, Saberi. Thank you. Best wishes to you, Regis

Past, Present, Future (Poetry) - 8/24/2007 11:28:00 AM
Your verses give me much substance for reflection, Saberi. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Regis

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 8/24/2007 11:26:38 AM
You have composed a superb musical ode to the dawn, Saberi. Thank you for sharing your gift. Welcome to AD. Best wishes to you. Love and peace, Regis

The Mirage of Music (Poetry) - 8/24/2007 9:18:43 AM
Exquisitely phrased, brilliant images, transcendent vision. A good poet finds ways to say what the rest of us only feel, you do that and more. D.Perry.

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