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Recent Reviews for Victoria Valentine
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It Could Have Been Love (Short Story) - 8/19/2004 11:41:25 AM
Aww, what a sweet story! I really like it. :)
It Could Have Been Love (Short Story) - 7/13/2003 11:43:27 AM
very nice story.. i love the twisted ending
It Could Have Been Love (Short Story) - 3/21/2002 9:57:11 PM
Vic, my dear friend and editor, I may knock your poetry and misunderstanding of the word "prose," but you show a lot of promise with stories. I very much enjoyed this read, good flow, good ending. You told me that you couldn't finish a book, how about a collection of stories? You have the talent for it...reach for the sky! All my best, Robert
It Could Have Been Love (Short Story) - 1/28/2002 10:37:17 PM
A neat story with a nice twist at the end.
It Could Have Been Love (Short Story) - 1/28/2002 5:37:41 PM
very good, i love a good love story, and intrigue to boot. i love it.
A Mind At War (Poetry) - 2/26/2006 12:59:47 PM
Great choice of words.
A Mind At War (Poetry) - 9/4/2004 2:23:31 AM
Intriguing! Very well done!
Best Wishes,
Chuckie
A Mind At War (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 1:57:14 AM
Welcome! Some dream you had!
You penned it very well.
Keep writing!
Bonnie
The Look Of Love (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 7:26:06 PM
Mine was a 1970 Pontiac LeMans...
never had a wilder ride, and my heart will forever belong to her.
:)
-James
A Mind At War (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 7:25:26 PM
Welcome to the Den,
This is excellent poetry.
Look forward to many more
reads.
Lady Peg
The Look Of Love (Poetry) - 8/3/2003 7:17:56 PM
Could have been written by a teenager. It lacks maturity; amateurish. Title does not mesh with the prose.
The Look Of Love (Poetry) - 3/21/2002 9:51:16 PM
You have a flair for passionate writing, however, you possess a gift for fragmenting lines and losing the feel of flow. Your theme is a constant strength that holds the weakest links together. It's not "formula or rules," it's language. Good poem.
The Look Of Love (Poetry) - 1/28/2002 7:11:03 AM
you are good,victoria, and this is my favorite type of poetry...welcome to authorsden
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