Slap of Beauty (Poetry) - 8/21/2007 4:25:16 AM
i enjoyed the idea of rejuvenation occuring through words and presence. that is quite a wonderful idea and i think there is great truth in it though i never recognized it til right.
and i think it is love that has that power... the power to bring such rejuvenation.
i found myself getting lost with the slap at the start of the piece but then i just noticed the title and it all works brilliantly.
i hope it all works out well =)
Slap of Beauty (Poetry) - 8/21/2007 2:40:56 AM
I think your in love. A pure and beautiful write. I love to hear someone compliment a women. It's about time everyone realizes that they are so much more than sex objects. Bless You Always, Paul.