Bag of Tricks (Short Story) - 7/4/2010 11:21:13 AM
I like the voice of the main character and how the core message is revealed one little side-comment at a time. The ending was not quite what I expected but it fit well and definitely gave me a chuckle.
One part that I found a bit confusing - Initially she says that this is the last night of her husband's sales trip, then she's devastated for two days, but her husband is still at the hotel?
Bag of Tricks (Short Story) - 7/19/2007 9:35:52 AM
Good story! You said a lot in a few paragraphs. Definitely had my attention from beginning to end.