Recent Reviews for Duane M Weide
Great News (Article) - 4/8/2008 6:38:06 PM|
Congratulations! Stay safe. Sometimes the streets of America can be even more dangerous...lol. Love and Hugs~
My Ten Pimp Slaps (Article) - 3/11/2008 10:46:44 PM
You had me laughing and nodding. Love number six. These types need to brush up on respect. From a woman's perspective...no, my breasts don't utter a freakin' word - no matter how much you stare at them. Fun to read article!
My Ten Pimp Slaps (Article) - 10/24/2007 12:56:38 PM
too funny! LOL
My Ten Pimp Slaps (Article) - 10/7/2007 5:41:22 AM
good list, I have one to add
people who walk away from whatever has their current attention backwards, for at least 5 - 10 steps before turning around. Then act shocked when they knock into you, or knock something over, for example, your drink, your grandma, your CHILD.......I have had my little ones smashed by a few of these inconsiderate types that can pop up suddenly in a crowd. Now you might say, hey you should be able spot a dyslexic walker, but....sadly not always....especially in a crowd situation.
now that felt good to get that off my chest!
great list...........and so true
now....off to the toilet to flush and blow lol
Young Master (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 6:01:29 PM
Deep thoughts so well expressed....
Be always safe,
Young Master (Poetry) - 11/6/2008 3:37:16 PM
Interesting indeed sweet man...always a pleasure to read your words.....be well and always safe...Hugsssssssss
Pubic Hairs (Poetry) - 10/11/2008 2:17:34 AM
Your sense of humor is amazing. This is another topic I would not think to write about. Way to keep us on our toes:)...(tiptoeing `round the pubes)
Tami (Poetry) - 10/11/2008 2:16:06 AM
Beautifully written, Duane. A strong sense of longing in this one.
Tang Teeth (Poetry) - 10/11/2008 2:14:02 AM
Yikes:) Time to show your pal this poem! Hugs~
Tang Teeth (Poetry) - 10/10/2008 1:02:51 PM
All I can say is EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
Madness (Poetry) - 10/8/2008 4:15:10 AM
Always a pleasure reading your words sweet man..enjoyed as always...be well and always safe ...Hugs
Beans (Poetry) - 10/8/2008 12:20:50 AM
Reminds me of my Ramen Noodles days. They were cheap & easy to cook. Hugs,
Learn To Knock (Poetry) - 10/8/2008 12:18:41 AM
You bravely write about things we all experience but are too shy to write about. A funny one!
Madness (Poetry) - 10/8/2008 12:00:08 AM
One of your best, Duane. The dark voice here is passionate. Superb writing!
Madness (Poetry) - 10/7/2008 3:26:45 PM
Wow-pretty dark-an opposing view to the light and sometimes good to reflect on.
Well written by the way.
Learn To Knock (Poetry) - 10/7/2008 3:21:18 PM
This is really fun - takes you down a path then switches gears of equal frustration.
Thank you, ~D.
Kill Factory (Poetry) - 10/1/2008 2:38:22 AM
Sounds brutal, yet it's been going on for as long as man has lived. Only the process has changed. Great write, Duane!
Aunt Rosies Juice (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 3:50:08 PM
Whew! That sure is a whole lot of work for a simple drink, but a tale well told....
Be always safe,
Aunt Rosies Juice (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 1:28:13 PM
Sounds like some sort of witches' brew! Delightful poem.
Aunt Rosies Juice (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 11:44:43 AM
Oh my,ok I will have some (Giggles) very cute indeed dear man...have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss
Aunt Rosies Juice (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 11:18:32 AM
different I like It
Kill Factory (Poetry) - 9/25/2008 11:08:02 AM
I like it :)
Mr Squirrel (Poetry) - 9/23/2008 6:27:30 AM
Oh my,this was great..nice to see you posting again sweet man...be well and always safe...Hugsss
Mr Driver (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 8:54:27 PM
A fantastic follow-up to your previous post. You give us a different perspective, which is easier for most people to relate to. I picture a firm grip on the wheel and a determined expression, accompanied by a deep laugh. Way to write.
Mr Squirrel (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 8:48:49 PM
LOL, Duane. There's a poem in my poetry book about this from the same perspective. Great minds.... Mine is quite different, though - mine survived but was shaken. I like your graphic version. I can picture this vividly. Every time I see a dead critter in the road, I cross myself. A habit I formed when I first started driving. I feel bad for their families. Great poem.
Mary Rising (Poetry) - 9/17/2008 8:31:14 PM
Your admiration comes through clearly and beautifully. I like how you recognize her strength of character. Great~
Critical Jive (Poetry) - 4/13/2008 6:11:23 AM
It's too bad there are people like this. Nicely done. I feel "spit on" by this snob just by reading this - the imagery pops! You must be home by now. Enjoy!! Hugs~
The Count (Poetry) - 4/8/2008 6:45:12 PM
I especially like the line "Just hollowed garments dancing". That line is extremely original and I love the imagery it creates. Actually, I love the imagery throughout. A quote at the end is a powerful touch. You've captured the loneliness that an immortal must 'live' with over the centuries. Well done! Hugs:)
Splashback (Poetry) - 4/5/2008 12:57:16 PM
This one reminds me of when I worked in a nursing home. They had a sign on one of the bathroom walls that outlined the many different styles of 'package' delivery. Your poem is just as funny. Realistic, though I can't relate to line 8...lol. Take care of you~
Sweet Kisses (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:37:52 AM
This poem breathes new life into some of these words. I especially like "Her belly now plump, At my hip," - creative imagery! I'm off to check my Japanese naginata sword for plumpness. Fantastic work on this piece:)
What Are You Staring At (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:29:37 AM
Prejudice is worldwide and it has many faces. I sometimes wonder if prejudice would finally disappear if we were all blind. I've had some people comment, that given my non-repulsive looks...I can't possibly write well. One of my teachers in high school said something that always stuck with me. "If you discriminate because of skin color, beliefs, religion, differences...you may miss out on a best friend, a lover, or a soul mate." This poem proves that we have a long way to go as a society. Thought provoking and realistic!
PS. If I saw you on the street, I would have to look twice. Not because of skin color but because I think you look a bit like Corey Feldman. No one has chased you screaming, I loved "The Goonies" and "The Lost Boys", yet? lol.... Love and Hugs~
I Take Nothing (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 3:07:51 AM
Congratulations! This gives us a brief glimpse of what you and many others endure to keep the rest of us safe and free. Thank you for your sacrifice:) As powerful as this poem is, I cannot help but disagree with the last line...just a little. You may be resolved to leave it all behind but unfortunately the memories will follow like a lost child. That 'child' will find a home in you. However, your strength in character will allow you to give 'him' acceptance. Keep safe! Love and Hugs~
I Take Nothing (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 8:08:53 PM
POwerful!! That last line, grabs the heart.
I Take Nothing (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 6:01:43 PM
Glad your going home,please stay safe and well...HUgsssssssss
I Take Nothing (Poetry) - 3/16/2008 12:28:31 PM
Strong write! I suppose you are going home?
Breasts (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 10:49:51 PM
Had to read this one. LOL:) Strong show of humor! Love and Hugs~
So Mote Be (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 9:39:40 PM
I appreciate the sacrifice you, your fellow warriors, and your families/loved-ones are making. I believe your writer's soul will deepen "abroad". Thank you for sharing this:) Hugs~
Hecate (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 9:28:28 PM
Thanks to negative portrayals, society at large has a negative connotation for Wicca. This poem shows the beauty and the naturalism, which is not showcased enough. A fantastic write that reveals yet another side of you~
Fruitcake (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 12:54:19 PM
Yuk! I'm not fond of fruitcake (I don't know how anyone could be.) but you've made me even less likely to eat it again, Duane. I guess that means your words were effective and got your intended result. Love and peace,
This Old House (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 8:38:37 PM
That is one house I'd like to stay away from, Duane. Chilling! Coincidentally, I have a poem posted here at AD entitled "Old House." Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
The Devil's Entertainment (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 8:37:11 PM
That's some place, Duane. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Hatchet Man (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 1:12:14 AM
I'm writing a novel series on a female assassin so this one I love. Is it wrong to laugh? It's just words...right? Love the many ways in which the Hatchet Man sneaks up on his prey. Skulk is a great word! Hugs:)
The Green Dragon (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 1:06:23 AM
Yes, "spark it again". This one is very different from others I've read from you, though your imagination still comes through loud and clear. It's nice to see another side to your writing. Love and Hugs~
I'll Stick Some Pins In It (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 1:00:01 AM
The title drew me in. I was curious. I'll have to remember to stay on your good side.... I worked at a store once. I wished a heart attack on my manager. It happened days later. I'll always wonder about that.
Crimstone Manor (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 12:54:00 AM
I will be avoiding this house. Hopefully it's marked? A fun read!
Through Fire And Brimstone (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 12:51:03 AM
I like the contrast in this poem. You start with lovely imagery, stringing us along. Then bang. Plus, you tie the verses together. Nicely done! Love and Hugs~
Beyond The Flesh (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 12:47:17 AM
Wow! Love this one. It's powerful. Very creative/original lines here. I especially like "Anxious for blood our minds race winds". Glad I'm with the other chicks hiding out~ Hugs:)
My Creations (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 12:41:44 AM
This poem comes full circle - I like that. While reading this, I flashed to the scene at the end of "Jeepers Creepers" where the creature is taking the kid's eyes. Love the body parts in the cart imagery. I had a dream like that...alien invasion...parts in carts, blood pooling, humans jetting out to space with backpack-like travel suits. No dogs allowed in space so I stayed behind with my minis, trying to avoid the axes. Great imagination, Duane!
Instruments Of Victory (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 11:31:22 PM
You have a talent for writing dark pieces. I love the flow of this one. The first two lines of each verse are powerful. Nicely done!
The Devil's Entertainment (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 11:13:40 PM
Great use of imagination in this piece. Dark imagery makes the title pop. Hugs~
This Old House (Poetry) - 2/26/2008 11:04:16 PM
Excellent descriptions in this poem. Hopefully it has the neighborhood to itself. Love and Hugs~
Splashback (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 4:02:29 PM
Very cute,got my attention big time LOL...stay safe and well...Hugssssssssssssss
Crimstone Manor (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 6:20:03 AM
Tim Burton would love this.........I know I do!!!
Did You Fart? (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 6:16:03 AM
CSM (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 1:39:57 PM
again,your style is great!!
My Eva (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 1:37:43 PM
too good!!! i dig your style and felt it.
My Eva (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 9:47:41 AM
Lost love is very painful. You never know though. Sad but lovely write. Staci
Epiphany From Hell (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 8:17:48 PM
Ode to the joys of the simplistic and the many little things once taken for granted, enjoyed this piece...
Epiphany From Hell (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 3:20:00 PM
Great writing sweet man..Hugsssssssss..take care
Critical Jive (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 1:04:34 PM
Great stuff here.
This Old House (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 12:54:14 PM
Great write for the spooky season. A vision of a very creepy house.
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 12:53:05 PM
Very creative, with a twist of dark.
The Count (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 12:51:29 PM
A little dark --great write.
Epiphany From Hell (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 12:49:57 PM
Wonderful insight and great poem. Where are you now--I have to read your bio.
Epiphany From Hell (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 10:35:18 AM
Sounds like the service...just kidding. This is really a very good display of thought and hope that lives in us all...well done
Epiphany From Hell (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 8:40:52 AM
What a special look at things we so often do not appreciate and yet have done the most to make us who we are.
The Green Dragon (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 10:07:17 AM
After a day from hell, it was great to lose myself in the beautiful imagery portrayed here. Thank you.
Vengeance With A Booger (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 10:05:30 AM
Gross, but a fun read;-) Have you been talking to my son? Lol.
Vengeance With A Booger (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 4:28:29 AM
YUKIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..LOL Very cute indeed..stay safe and well sweet man...Hugsss
Her Hair Reeks Of Doritos (Poetry) - 10/11/2007 8:00:11 AM
P.U. This really stinks! lol
The Green Dragon (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 10:27:38 AM
a fantastic ride in the world of dreams where fairies visit thoughts and whisper as we ride on the dragon's wings . . . indeed.
thanks for the smile - jackie
Her Hair Reeks Of Doritos (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 9:01:33 AM
So much for those sheets.
Her Hair Reeks Of Doritos (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 6:33:05 AM
Laughing too hard to review--
Her Hair Reeks Of Doritos (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 4:45:46 AM
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyy,interesting pen,stay safe and well dear man...Hugsss
The Green Dragon (Poetry) - 10/9/2007 12:44:42 AM
I love the imagery you've painted here. Very nice work.
Mary Rising (Poetry) - 10/4/2007 11:24:40 AM
Good Stuff here Duane. Well written and well formed. Enjoyed this very much
Drunken Journey (Poetry) - 10/3/2007 10:46:17 AM
like the old bawdy bar songs, this one is destined to be a classic. great imagery and an honest "feel" to your words. definitely will remember to look inside my shoes from now on . . . .
Mary Rising (Poetry) - 10/3/2007 6:33:04 AM
Wonderful poem; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Mary Rising (Poetry) - 10/3/2007 5:26:41 AM
Beautifully penned, Duane. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Mary Rising (Poetry) - 10/3/2007 5:18:21 AM
Wonderful writing sweet man,stay safe and well ok...Hugsss
Cheap Revenge (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 9:41:29 AM
This reminds me of the antics that happened when I was in the service. Quite Hilarious!
Cheap Revenge (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 6:53:15 AM
A sense of humor....even if revenge is the goal!
Must have been pretty well outta the picture shall we say. In fact, now,he must have a nose with one nostril bigger than the other!
Oh! the thought of lingering pleasure.
Have agreat day
Drunken Journey (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 5:43:30 AM
Poor you!!!!!!!!!! In trouble again, eh? Know you've had too much if you can't remember: been there, done that. Been sober 24 years now. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Cheap Revenge (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 5:42:06 AM
Laughing too hard to review--imagine: going through life with a hot dog stuffed up the nose!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheap Revenge (Poetry) - 10/2/2007 3:50:07 AM
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy,I hope you never get mad at me LOL..stay safe and well funny,sweet man...Hugs
PILLAGERS (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 11:55:52 AM
To pillage and burn...
To steal and kill...
To take, just for the sake of taking....
Good write. Enjoyed it very much
My Best Chris
Drunken Journey (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 4:15:49 AM
love your style!!!
so did you clean it up???
PILLAGERS (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 4:14:42 AM
graphically goulish, good write
PILLAGERS (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 3:11:50 AM
Oh no,Chanti Lace runs like hell..cya..great poem tho...Hugsss
Breasts (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 6:46:59 AM
Well done Duane. Enjoyable to read, with humor and also with that touch of reality.
My very best Chris
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:30:07 AM
This burns like a mondern Dante's inferno.........
smart and stylish
Hey stay safe other there............
my son is military too.......
Breasts (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:28:37 AM
Oh my this is so sweet,great pen sweet man...Hugsssss
My Creations (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:24:58 AM
a goth "Nip Tuck"
your very creative :)
OOOOOPS! (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:23:19 AM
and eah we do fight with ourselves, been there!
but there is no getting away from yourself! lol
Where's my MILKDUD? (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:21:24 AM
thanks for the chuckle!
Breasts (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 3:18:42 AM
love the melody and humor here
Where's my MILKDUD? (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 3:32:33 AM
LOL! Now that's poetry!! Had me smiling from the beginning!
Where's my MILKDUD? (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 4:43:34 AM
Well, it was like this I couldn't resist sorryyyyyyy...LOL cute real cute...Hugsss...
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 9:08:31 AM
vivid potrayal of dante in retail. swift and sharp, like the prongs on the proverbial pichfork. can feel the temptation of this marketing campaign, and the ultimate price!
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 5:43:01 AM
Well guess what I'M NOT GOIN LOL ...great writing enjoyed very much,please stay safe and well sweet man..Hugsssssssss
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 2:57:21 AM
Good Grief! I hope they have a Wal-Mart.(lol)
Hell Has A Mall? (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 2:43:32 AM
YIKES. Who'd ever thunk it?? Don't think I'll be shoppin' at THAT mall....well done!
Angry Mob (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 12:32:49 AM
Mob vilence or sheep following without question. Often the rebel is the man or woman that sees through that facade. Enjoyed this. Brilliant!
The Dead (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 12:06:27 AM
Wow, I don't know but I believe I see some of them around here everyday. Enjoyed
Through Fire And Brimstone (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 11:01:31 AM
This stimulates all of the senses; exquisite!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Angry Mob (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 11:54:16 PM
The way of the mob is usually mindless and without real justice. You have captured this well with this work.
Through Fire And Brimstone (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 11:27:55 PM
"For what wil it profit a man if he gain the whole world" beauty is something free to be taken willingly. Enjoyed.
Angry Mob (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 8:13:33 AM
Angry Mob (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 5:47:27 AM
Oh my,runs like hell,interesting pen dear man...Hugs
Hatchet Man (Poetry) - 9/6/2007 5:31:04 AM
Tiny Steps In The Attic (Poetry) - 9/6/2007 12:07:22 AM
This was a wonderful offering of expression
This Old Tree (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 10:00:29 PM
It languishes in a eternal daydream. Enjoyed
This Old House (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:59:40 PM
A inverted picture of a nightmares dream home. enjoyed
Specter (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:58:08 PM
A labyrinth of foggy chance.
So Mote Be (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:56:23 PM
Still a heroe fighting the fight of ages. Well said
OOOOOPS! (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:54:53 PM
Locked in a cell constructed of false contritions. Enjoyed
My Creations (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:53:30 PM
A virtual masterpiece befitting Frankenstein.
My Aggrevations (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:51:47 PM
You really have a sharp sense of humor. Enjoyed
Fickle Philters (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:50:47 PM
A real cauldron of malice. Enjoyed
Critical Jive (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:49:26 PM
Your really captured the pride and arrogance of some. Great work
Beyond The Flesh (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:48:04 PM
Enjoyed this sacrifice of warring blood.
Tiny Steps In The Attic (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:45:31 PM
Oh the delights of tiny mice?enjoyed