Recent Reviews for Billy W. Mitchell
Freedom Rings (Short Story) - 10/22/2002 2:24:07 PM|
Powerful stuff. Short, but packs a punch. Glad I took the time out to read it.
Are You Real? (Short Story) - 8/19/2002 7:00:11 PM
i liked it a lot. i like the way it was written, except the part when the mother was thinking and it went from third to first person and back again. but overall, it was very interesting.
The Vampire Quartet (Poetry) - 5/16/2004 4:35:02 AM
this is very good
Vampire's Night (Poetry) - 5/16/2004 4:29:30 AM
Interesting. Now go read my stuff you slacker **smiles**
Night Staker Alone (Regrets of a Vampire) (Poetry) - 7/15/2003 10:32:40 PM
Great write with this! I'm a big fan of the vamps and you did them justice! Well done.
Vampire's Night (Poetry) - 7/13/2003 6:57:15 PM
I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Death Comes (Poetry) - 7/1/2003 5:38:33 PM
Blessed with intellect, cursed with the derivative knowledge of our impending death. What a two-edged sword!
The Ballad of Black Angel (Poetry) - 7/1/2003 8:50:47 AM
Love it. More...more. Has a great rhythm.
The Ballad of Black Angel (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 8:27:15 PM
Loved this tale of
the Black Angel:)
The Ballad of Black Angel (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 6:17:46 PM
This is really good and creepy! Ha, I know a male Black Angel, and he fits this bill perfectly! Seriously (well I wasn't really kidding about the other stuff) this is great!
Ages' End (Poetry) - 6/12/2003 1:18:57 PM
Your words have been well chosen and very deep in thought and questions. Great write.
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 8:02:02 PM
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 7:34:23 PM
Whew this is one EXCELLANT DEEP DARK MOVING PIECE!
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 1:35:11 PM
Blue, blue, blue, but well done.
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 6:04:51 AM
powerful, powerful poem
good use of alliteration,
a good write
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 5:09:15 AM
I liked this dark and lovely poem,
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 4:14:55 AM
Really done well.
Black Anthem (Poetry) - 5/7/2003 3:47:39 AM
Billy, really like your poem. Very dark and final.
Ages' End (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 12:02:12 PM
God gives man free will and does not interfere with it. Man can go anyway he chooses. So it is not God who has to deal with the problems of man. That would interfer with mans will. God does not or is not required to step in and do anything.
He does not stop this and does not stop natural disasters. And he does not let babies die of hunger. Many is to blame
and they are many people dying in Iraq.
I am surely for a war to destroy those who
hurt their own people. This may not apply to our Iraq war, but it may paint a picture
of something not completely truth. Remember the song? "They The Blame On Mame Boys." Well lay the blame where it belongs
and on Sick nations Like France who don't want to lose their massive oil contract and who rather let a dictator harm his own people and gas and destroy them then join with America and its allies to take out the dictator. The more I see demostrations the more I hate them. They will not stop this fight. Our servicemen will: maybe at a great price. Bill
Ages' End (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 4:16:18 AM
Sometimes that's all I can see, too...
But then, I remember that it's not the end
of eternity. Excellent write, indeed...
The Vampire Quartet (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 3:37:20 AM
Wow! This is true horror. I
have a fasination with Vampires
and even have a few poems about
them. My horror could never match
yours...you have a true gift.
Revenant Soul (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 3:34:10 AM
You have a gift for horror..
Had my heart pumping and
the hairs on my neck at
attention. What a talent
Ages' End (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 3:28:38 AM
Very intense write, Billy.
I could feel the power
in your words. I will be
reading more of you.
Ages' End (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 2:33:36 AM
So very true and very well done in verses.
Ages' End (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 11:56:12 PM
So true. Well done...and thoughtful.
Revenant Soul (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 6:30:00 PM
Horror is write, like this.
Night Staker Alone (Regrets of a Vampire) (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 5:28:44 PM
Nice. I am a horror fan. Nice reference too to the NightStalker. Miss that show.
Revenant Soul (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 3:44:28 PM
Excellent horror good write.
Revenant Soul (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 2:32:35 PM
Yes yes.. I agree with Elizabeth.. Love a great tale of horror.. Keep them coming!
Revenant Soul (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 2:29:44 PM
Wild, gory, shivery, horrific and I love it !
The Vampire Quartet (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 11:22:48 PM
I looove it. Loooooooove it.
I write Vampye too, but this is soooooo good.
The Vampire Quartet (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 10:55:13 PM
Wow, quite the epic tale...very well written and metered, keep up the good work.
The Road Into Heaven (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 1:10:23 AM
very good ! your version of 23 pslams
I Am War (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 1:03:48 AM
Sherman was right "WAR IS ALL HELL", and yet as long as power corrupts, war is an answer. I like the end but mankind will never wake, but individuals can. keep writing!
The Letter (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 10:46:51 AM
makes me think of music!!! LOL
I Am War (Poetry) - 10/22/2002 2:11:15 PM
Powerful and thought provoking. Being constructive, I think it shouldn't just be all one big block of text: some spacing would give it a great flow and would be easier to digest. Apart from that, brilliant!
I Am War (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 12:08:46 AM
I agree with Peggy...this is very real and a very different climate from my fantasy world.
Great writing! ;) Silver
I Am War (Poetry) - 8/22/2002 2:48:29 PM
Hi Billy, I am also a new member at Darkstormy.com. This is very insightful and thought provoking. I am in the process of getting some of my stuff together to put out here. I have a page here at Authorsden, but I don't have anything here yet!
Where Have All The People Gone? (Poetry) - 8/17/2002 10:29:20 PM
Where Have All The People Gone? (Poetry) - 8/17/2002 1:05:50 PM
WOW. great read...thought provoking. enjoyed very much. (((HUGS))) and God bless...love, karla. :)
Where Have All The People Gone? (Poetry) - 8/17/2002 11:17:41 AM
Very nice thought-provoking piece. Also makes a great mystery story of poem, it can be developed into that way if you decide to make it a story.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Blood Calls For Blood (Poetry) - 8/8/2002 11:12:15 AM
The Reality of What Is (Poetry) - 7/30/2002 10:50:50 PM
reality for most is a hard thing to accept or to even
comprehend.. excellent verses.
My Sadness (Poetry) - 7/8/2002 4:42:26 AM
The Warrior (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 3:13:41 PM
Vampire???? The Warrior is slightly amused. Slightly..... I liked it a lot.
Free (Poetry) - 6/28/2002 9:09:54 PM
Free (Poetry) - 6/28/2002 8:57:20 PM
wow! I'm uplifted, energized...thank you...!
Free (Poetry) - 6/28/2002 6:26:01 PM
Nothing to lose is a great place to be. Nice write.
Free (Poetry) - 6/28/2002 5:56:46 PM
Spiritual....Good write...loved the ' a rising spirit breaking its chains.'
Lost Soul (Poetry) - 6/27/2002 4:46:04 PM
Very moving and tender piece.
Let the memory of love, fill again your heart.
And if you speak the words now, you will be heard..
Love and light,
Lost Soul (Poetry) - 6/27/2002 2:02:07 PM
Beauty in sadness. Excellent.
Lost Soul (Poetry) - 6/27/2002 5:41:49 AM
loss is never easy to accept... the broken heart can lead to despair... true love must keep the memory alive...
Lost Soul (Poetry) - 6/27/2002 3:56:34 AM
Awww this is so very sad, but equally beautiful!!!
In Death (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 6:12:12 PM
"Confess your transgressions
Before God and His Son
Accept the Holy Spirit
For you Heaven He has won" a message for everyone! Thanks for sharing the Gospel.
One More Cigarette (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 7:35:41 AM
My mother had started smoking when she was only 13 (back during WWII)--she had desperately tried quitting over and over again. Never could...until the last month of her life at age 58 when she was in the hospital on a ventilator. During her later years, she had contracted emphysema, chronic bronchitis, congestive heart failure, and colon cancer. This strong write describes her addiction...and her destruction.
Time (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 7:28:01 AM
Another well written work! Great expression...
Madness And Sickness Am I (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 7:26:21 AM
Now this is definitely intense! And, I think pretty well does describe madness and sickness...
Easter (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 7:24:50 AM
You already showed your gift then...
And, I agree with what Eileen said!!
In Death (Poetry) - 5/17/2002 7:22:49 AM
Have felt that way here and now--and I
think most do, at times. However, as
for considering eternity, most do not
heed the last three stanzas. I'm grateful that Heaven HAS been won! Powerful writing...
In Death (Poetry) - 5/16/2002 11:43:43 PM
You just stole words from my mind. And boy, how do I agree with these words!
Madness seeps in
The darkness surrounds
Fell things call out
And evil abounds
But this even sounds like a poem of hollowness and insanity one faces coz I identifying so much with it. Or is it just that....I am dying?
In Death (Poetry) - 5/16/2002 10:31:57 PM
death is just another beginning...
The Warrior (Poetry) - 4/21/2002 1:14:09 AM
Billy, great job in your writing, whats the really going on with the vampires? LoL! You have a neck fediesh? Or FEAST?? LOL just kidding. Write me ok.
Easter (Poetry) - 4/1/2002 9:00:03 PM
I'ts still good and stands the test of time as does Jesus...;-)
Easter (Poetry) - 4/1/2002 3:03:10 PM
Nicely done for a 17 year old.
Sandie Angel :o)
Through The Ages (The Life Of A Vampire) (Poetry) - 3/3/2002 6:57:32 AM
fabulous piece. i was captivated from the beginnning. and intrigued through out.
loved the ending...would make for a great saga.
One More Cigarette (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 12:35:03 AM
I know the feeling..lol. I have tried to lay mine down too,they call to me.Marlboro reds...ahhh.
I really enjoyed this.
Night Stalker (Vampire Dreams) (Poetry) - 2/13/2002 8:11:49 PM
Spookie!! Great writing made me feel like I was watching a spookie movie. Very Good Job!
The Cry Of The Banshee (Poetry) - 2/13/2002 7:19:33 PM
Cool Billy I like it a lot, I look forward to your work. I'm glad you decided to put your poems on line to share. Your turn Sean.
Blood Moon (Beware The Wolf) (Poetry) - 2/8/2002 1:49:21 PM
A wonderfully written piece. I loved it.
Blood Moon (Beware The Wolf) (Poetry) - 2/7/2002 6:46:42 PM
This was excellent...
I enjoyed reading it very much so...