The Alien Covenant Unveiled (Short Story) - 8/21/2009 10:44:51 AM
Seems like an interesting world you've built, and a good, human relationship to counter the world of surveillance and trickery. It definitely left me wanting to know more about this strange race and the strange new future you've built.
Ode To War (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 4:26:22 AM
Sadly, it is still relevant. Well written, Brenda
Ode To War (Poetry) - 10/27/2009 6:16:06 AM
Brenda, you are so right about this fitting today, or perhaps especially today! Powerful writing! Blessings...Frances
A Rainbow (Poetry) - 9/22/2009 3:46:16 AM
A great feel of innocence in the words. Thank you for sharing this.
Sheila
Ode To War (Poetry) - 9/22/2009 3:44:57 AM
You make the reality vivid. This is a powerful write.
Sheila
Sunset of Life (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 3:31:06 AM
Beautiful. Nature is so incredibly difficult to capture in poetic verse without sounding cliche. You brought this scene alive for me.
Sunset of Life (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 8:55:41 AM
Awesome! "As the mountains are trying to push the sun down"...loved the whole poem but this line is brilliant.
Anna
Blessed Event (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 8:54:29 AM
And they are yours forever!! I loved this one! My children are my greatest accomplishment in life.
Anna
Ode To War (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 8:53:19 AM
Powerful write Brenda! Throughout history we still haven't learned a thing! WE still fight wars that no one can win....
Anna
Sunset of Life (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 12:14:43 PM
It is nothing but a black canvas. You are trying to paint it in white. But the black portion never seems to end. Yet, you are not ready to give it up. This life is all about drawing a beautiful picture. Most of them are destined to die in search of the colors they wish to use.
Ode To War (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 12:11:01 PM
The war is just the beginning of the end. And at the end your own shadow starts fighting with you.
If you are gonna take the little pleasures from their lives, how dare you say that it is for peace?
A Rainbow (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 12:07:26 PM
When does a rainbow becomes 'small'?
Is it when you grow big or is it
When you feel that there are better colors?
Sunset of Life (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 5:41:10 PM
Must fade into night. That is God's circle of life. The moon rises and the sun sets. Dawn comes and evening comes later. Expressing your thoughts very well in this one.
A Rainbow (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 5:39:31 PM
Pass it on, nothing wrong with that. Sharing is great thing to do and makes you have more self respect of yourself too. Good thinking.
Blessed Event (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 5:38:28 PM
Raising a family is a joyful experience and those children don't leave you ever. They support you faithfully. I found out how on Mother's Day. Love is always there til the end.
Ode To War (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 5:37:12 PM
So appropriate still today. So many young good men getting killed and wounded beyound compare. Never will we forget this war. Hopeless it seems, but when will it end?
Blessed Event (Poetry) - 4/26/2008 10:27:54 PM
Hi Brenda! I read your poem,"Blessed Event" It totally reminded me of when my wife had our first child. Lovely poem! Best of luck with your writing. Please feel free to check out my stuff at www.freewebs.com/kendoo or here in the "den"
