PARKER MEETS GILLESPIE (Poetry) - 3/7/2008 6:40:15 PM
Ah, you are a cool one, you are . . . Dizzy with cool, actually . . .
A SONG FOR GINA (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 9:16:17 PM
Interesting piece to ponder over, perhaps you should keep the photo for yourself....
A SONG FOR GINA (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 1:37:19 PM
Haha!! If you must ask there are problems . . .
A SONG FOR GINA (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 12:46:38 PM
oh my! Perhaps you had better look for another photographer altogether. I enjoyed this surprising 'song' dealing with a harsh reality.
Glad not to be 'that Gina.'
MOMENT ON THE METRO (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 11:39:31 AM
Interesting! I can feel the ride external as well as the internal ride through thought within the narrator. The wishing and wanting to go elsewhere eventhough you're moving on the train has phenomenal tension. Lastly it was finely topped off with the great sense of loss at the end and the feeling of what if? A Well Written Masterpiece Indeed.
MOMENT ON THE METRO (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 6:16:12 AM
Great imagery, I was there . . . Watching . . . Evesdropping . . . Smelling the train and the people . . . Like your style . . .
MOMENT ON THE METRO (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 9:15:49 PM
The smile of a stranger can light up our day. Makes us wish we could put that smile in our pocket to take out another day [when we're feeling down].