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Recent Reviews for Aditi Surendra
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The Ghost Of The Girl Who Always Waited (Short Story) - 1/11/2003 6:03:56 AM
hi sweety
The Ghost Of The Girl Who Always Waited (Short Story) - 10/5/2002 12:56:41 AM
ads.
Very imaginative,a little long though, used the names too many times, very touchy, should keep writing..All the best.Raj
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 7/9/2003 7:57:38 AM
Now I know what they mean when they tell me I made a mistake.
A Misunderstanding (Article) - 5/13/2003 7:55:38 PM
You are being to harsh on yourself. Life is unfair but it is up to you how you want to live it! If you prefer to just sit down a cry your heart out just because of a stupid fool, go ahead and waste all the precious moments of life. But, life is more than just finding the right guy. How can you say that you're ugly when God made everyone beautiful. The bottom line is- you are what you think you are. Hold your head up high and walk through the journey of life with confidence! And I'll be there cheering for you. You go Gal!!
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 1/19/2003 9:45:41 AM
The Writing has to definitely improve........
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 11/2/2002 2:44:23 AM
Adi,
I mean what can I say? I have no words to say what everything written here means to the band. Its overwhelming. You make us feel very special. Thank you. I didn't know I could make someone get over the fear of heights having the same phobia myself. I miss your room and Phino and your skateboard and the sound of the lift and butta man (and my breast-friend!! Well, kinda...) and Donne Biryani and you. God, give us back the yesterdays! About the rating, can't give you more than 10 and you don't deserve any lesser. Cheers!!!
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 10/5/2002 7:33:26 AM
hi aditi!! u really write mannn!!. Vinapra will make it big soon and you know what? your neighbours will come running to you for the passes for the show. keep it up - your neighbours.
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 10/4/2002 1:49:22 AM
damn neat. Vinapra WILL make it BIG. and then your neighbour can take a flying F.#*! Vinapra has a lot of supporters who wish them well and all the best.
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 10/3/2002 7:16:17 AM
Adds
sorry abt the rating, so doing it again..keep going
The Eternal Flame (Article) - 10/3/2002 2:13:43 AM
Adds..It' amazing..means a lot to us..don't worry abt the band moving out..we shall always, i mean always remain in your heart forever..nattssss.
A Misunderstanding (Article) - 8/31/2002 7:15:50 AM
Honey dreams can come true. You are so mistaken in your view of yourself. Many of us judge ourselves so harshly. You are truly a beautiful girl both on the in and outside. These boys who turn you down are fools. Keep your chin up sweetheart and you will find your prince.
Drkman
Untitled (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 8:09:50 AM
some pretty strong ripples...
Untitled (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 6:13:30 AM
Very good write...BHUWAN
Truth Hurts (Poetry) - 2/3/2003 9:43:47 AM
a wonderful write, aditi! great job! love, your friend in america, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Truth Hurts (Poetry) - 2/3/2003 6:24:06 AM
A very powerful, well written piece.
Chrissie
Truth Hurts (Poetry) - 2/3/2003 3:22:34 AM
Sounds like an ugly sight the after effects of drugs booze always is unfortuneately and it's aweful for the eyes of children to feast on such sights.
Truth is ugly sometimes and that's the way it looked here was one of those times.
A very good poem!
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