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Recent Reviews for Edwin Hurdle
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The Write House (Book) - 3/27/2013 3:17:44 AM
After "Write House" now what? We have not heard from you Edwin.
Peace, Love and Easter Blessings,
John Michael
The Write House (Book) - 6/11/2009 4:27:16 PM
Edwin, wishing you all the best now and in the future with "The Write House."
Blessings and take care,
Gwendolyn
The Write House (Book) - 4/3/2009 2:48:10 PM
I absolutely love the title and agree that everyday should be a Holiday--Sheri
The Write House (Book) - 2/21/2009 4:17:08 PM
Congrats Edwin!
I wish you much success with your first book of many. I enjoyed reading "Everyday Should Be A Holiday" We must enjoy each day that we live and breathe because tomorrow is never promised.
I thank you for stopping by and my best to you always.
"Continue to Greatness!"
~Dena
The Write House (Book) - 2/17/2009 2:37:42 PM
Dear Edwin:
I have not had the opportunity to read your book. I checked your site to thank you for the nice reviews you gave me. It is appreciated. After reading the except from your poetry book, all I can say is AMEN! I not only like the writing, but the richly textured meaning behind it.
You have found another fan.
Reviewed by Terry D. Robertson
author of FILL MY EYES
forthcoming BACKSIDE OF YESTERDAY
and poetry volume BROKEN WINDOWS, EMPTY CORNERS.
The Write House (Book) - 2/13/2009 6:01:17 PM
You are so right Edwin. Every day should be lived to the fullest and to the best. I sincerely hope your book of Poetry - with an excellent title might I add - fairs very well.
The Write House (Book) - 1/12/2009 3:46:28 PM
Come to 1600 Poetry Avenue and experience The Write House for yourself. That would be a Great Name for a Book & Gift Store ** Poetry Avenue ** Wonderful Title!!
The Write House (Book) - 12/13/2008 6:58:14 AM
Edwin
CONGRADULATIONS on Your Poetry Publication of "The Write House"
Your heart is a bounty of love & your poetry embraces the romantic heart of us all
May Your Book Open Many More Avenues To You Dear Den Brother!
Much Love To You Always
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
The Write House (Book) - 12/11/2008 1:31:11 PM
From the fine samples presented here at AuthorsDen, THE WRITE HOUSE is a book that is simplistic in style and yet deep, wise, and very relevant in its poetic substance. A pleasure to read and learn more about Edwin Hurdle's work.
Aberjhani
The Write House (Book) - 11/19/2008 7:16:54 PM
I pray your book is well received! You are right , we should savor each day, one never knows what tomorrow will bring. Holidays are the best!.....M
The Write House (Book) - 11/18/2008 2:31:18 PM
I haven't read your book yet Edwin. But if it is as full of positive poetry as this example, I know why it is so well received. Good work.
The Write House (Book) - 11/3/2008 7:01:45 PM
I've got to get a copy. Sounds like your debut book is a winner with a chef's feast for the hungry. I love the grand title.
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 9/15/2009 5:51:37 PM
I AGREE WITH YOU...IT IS A WONDERFUL FEELINGS TO SEE YOUR FIRST MANUSCRIPT IN PRINT. BECOMING A PUBLISHED AUTHOR, USING THE GIFT GOD HAS GIVEN POSITIVELY, IS A TRUE BLESSINGS. THANKS FOR SHARING A BIT OF YOUR STORY AND GOD BLESSING YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 7/29/2009 6:03:13 AM
Edwin I just came across this wonderful
accomplishment of yours, congratulations
and God has many more blessings beyond
measure for you!! Be encouraged!!
Love And Prayers
Always!!
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 7/24/2009 4:23:59 PM
Nice feeling to be noticed (published), isn't it, Edwin?? Congrats!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 4/28/2009 8:35:18 AM
This is a beautiful experience. I can see your emotions in every line.
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 3/15/2009 6:25:49 PM
I'm so glad you get to experience the excitement of having your own book published. Thank you for sharing your experience with us!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 2/16/2009 4:39:02 AM
You are correct Edwin - seeing your own book in your hand for the first time is amazing. Living in New York must be interesting - I visited your city many years ago for a weekend and found it fascinating but so large it was a tad overwhelming for a small town guy like me. All the best. Malcolm Watts
The Write House (Short Story) - 2/10/2009 11:53:13 AM
A noble book, indeed!
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 2/10/2009 11:51:23 AM
An acheivement of Excellence!
The Write House (Short Story) - 2/5/2009 3:30:19 AM
Your book sounds like it is written with a pure heart and best intentions. I'm sure that it will light the way for all that read. Best wishes for continued success. Your friend, Kathy
Introduction to The Write House (Short Story) - 1/5/2009 7:26:04 PM
Realities. Ah, ha, so there is more than one! I thought so. Thank you for shining this light on a subjective a topic that there ever was. A sublimely written synopsis of an esoteric subject well written!
Rockie Coppolella
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 12/23/2008 6:28:13 AM
Congratulations! It is a wonderful feeling to see your "baby" in print. You capture the feeling well. Merry Christmas:)
Sheila
Introduction to The Write House (Short Story) - 12/20/2008 4:09:53 PM
interesting concept. Very well written. I enjoyed the read.
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 12/13/2008 10:46:19 AM
Congratulations. I have poems published , but never a book of them It must be a wonderous feeling!......M
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 11/30/2008 10:02:50 AM
Ah, I can only imagine! Congratulations! I can picture you holding the first printed copy in your hand like a newborn babe! We all dream this dream and you did it! Best, Elizabeth
Introduction to The Write House (Short Story) - 11/13/2008 10:29:13 AM
I've never thought of it that way before "a wall for beautiful words", but I like that very much indeed! We write from our hearts and souls to share with the world. Beautiful! Very very nice! Hope all is well. Best always, Elizabeth
The Write House (Short Story) - 11/11/2008 2:37:38 PM
Edwin,
Thanks for sharing . . . !!
Best to you,
Lance
Introduction to The Write House (Short Story) - 11/11/2008 2:36:11 PM
Edwin,
Written with depth of conviction . . . splendid!!
Best regards,
Lance
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 11/10/2008 12:43:19 PM
Edwin,
A delightful read . . . well-penned my friend!!
Best regards,
Lance
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 9/25/2008 11:47:31 PM
You made me smile with this, because as you and Gwen have said, it's exactly how a writer feels when he finally sees that book published and holds it in his hands!
Introduction to The Write House (Short Story) - 7/3/2008 11:32:40 AM
Beautiful, thank you for sharing your deep feelings concerning the precious words that we all share and give.
Enlightenments to you,
~Gwendolyn
Publishing The Write House (Short Story) - 7/3/2008 11:31:28 AM
AH YES~HAVING BIRTH exactly how one feels once you birth that book. SMILE~great personification. Congrats again, hope you found ways to have fun and enjoy the process.
Take care,
~Gwendolyn
The Write House (Article) - 9/22/2009 3:49:01 AM
Excellent Edwin, truly profound and very true, you my friend have the gift of love! Thanks for blessing us with your gift, you are and it is so much appreciated! Keep on writing Edwin!
Love And Prayers
Always!!
The Write House (Article) - 7/24/2009 3:51:25 AM
EDWIN - WELL DONE!
PASSWORD = L O V E ... GREAT CONCEPT ... TOM.
The Write House (Article) - 4/20/2009 6:43:32 AM
In your poetic visions,you have captured the true meaning of life.
The Write House (Article) - 4/18/2009 9:37:16 AM
You are absolutely right. Those four little words mean everything.
The Write House (Article) - 2/18/2009 6:00:53 PM
Password To A Good Relationship
Hmmmm. What a thought?
L O V E.....Simple yet complex
I love this one probably most of all.
Keep up the good work & Congrats on the book!!
Zahra
The Write House (Article) - 2/18/2009 9:24:38 AM
Congratulations, Edwin. Continued success to you. Love and peace,
Regis
The Write House (Article) - 11/21/2008 10:10:33 AM
Edwin,
Yes, many congrats on your book - Bravo!!
Best regards,
Lance
The Write House (Article) - 11/3/2008 7:16:14 PM
TWH is simply a grand title and concept. I enjoyed reading your poetry. Can't wait until your next book. Kudos!
Pier
The Write House (Article) - 11/3/2008 3:48:00 AM
An inspiring write! Congratulations on the publications of your book!...M
The Write House (Article) - 7/27/2008 6:21:56 AM
congrats on your book much success to you
The Write House (Article) - 7/3/2008 11:29:48 AM
Edwin, congrats again on your book "The Write House" wishing you most success.
Blessings and take care,
~Gwendolyn
The Write House (Article) - 6/30/2008 1:53:02 AM
Sounds very interesting. Good luck.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/25/2012 5:33:01 AM
You have written a very creative poem.
Thanks Edwin
Being Arrested (Poetry) - 10/29/2011 12:26:24 AM
beautiful, I hope she gives you life without parole,
Regards, Steve.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 10/29/2011 12:21:50 AM
excellent advice, and well written, thanks for sharing.
Regards, Steve
Dictionary (Poetry) - 10/21/2011 11:31:27 AM
I adore my Dictionary as well, she's the love of my life!
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 9:46:26 PM
very nice
Dictionary (Poetry) - 6/9/2011 5:45:54 PM
Very clever poem, Edwin! Great style~!
Hugs to you,
CJ
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 5/25/2011 10:29:51 AM
This was fantastic! I had to read it twice, just excellent writing my friend. Man, plaster this one on a billboard!!! Perfection of life right here. I loved it!
Kim
(V)
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/2/2011 7:52:17 AM
Hello Edwin, I'm a hopeless romantic. I love it!
Eulogy (Poetry) - 12/16/2010 9:13:48 AM
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 12/1/2010 4:24:18 PM
Edwin,
Written to the point, every writer should take note of this one...
Love IT!!!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 7:12:31 AM
Excellent work, Edwin
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 7:23:24 AM
Wonderful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 10:21:18 AM
Very thoughtful and insightful. Stay intune.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 6/24/2010 6:19:51 AM
How can one resist sharing after reading this?! lol- it's wonderful for someone to be so interested in hearing the deepest thoughts of another. I enjoyed this. Best to you Edwin :)
Eulogy (Poetry) - 6/24/2010 6:16:48 AM
"I tried Lord I tried to find a flower to put in my garden of love."
Very nice Edwin :)
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 6/21/2010 3:23:43 PM
This write is inspirational and has a good message but it doesn't read like a poem to me or have smooth flow. Sorry.
Lena
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 6/20/2010 7:35:09 PM
Your deisire to help others comes through so clearly in your other writings as your pain is so intensely felt in this one. It seems we humans pass on the pain as if it were a precious family heirloom. Be well Edwin as you heal the world one heart at a time.
Deodorant (Poetry) - 6/16/2010 8:13:02 PM
Another good expression of what's haappening now.......peace and blessings to you
Anna
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 6/16/2010 8:07:38 PM
Wow......that is well written Edwin
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 6/13/2010 11:28:43 AM
Powerful work, Edwin. A thought provoking read...enjoyed immensly. Writing is such a beautiful tool, God given, so that we may heal our soul and rise above the evil of the day.
"...for we all know that poetry is bliss."
Dictionary (Poetry) - 5/28/2010 6:57:56 PM
How creative and romantic!!
You can bet you are her sunshine. Shining star!!
Write...and Love...ON,
xOx 'Pea' xOx
Dictionary (Poetry) - 4/14/2010 1:48:14 AM
Hello Edwin!
You've captured the meaning of genuine love. The imagery is excellent, and the emotions written from the heart. May you capture your every dream.
Wishes for a lifetime of love and happiness,
Sherri
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 4/5/2010 9:54:57 AM
I CALL THE '3RD EAR'...GOD. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS TO YOU. HOPE YOU HAD A LOVELY EASTER. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
DOT COM (Poetry) - 4/2/2010 1:13:45 PM
Very creatively interesting!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 3/28/2010 5:34:58 PM
Playful execution and moving imagery. I like it, Edwin! Nice touch.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 3/10/2010 10:50:11 PM
We all need each other
great write!
Pierre
Dictionary (Poetry) - 3/10/2010 10:44:40 PM
For another to define you is the epitome of life.
excellent write,
Pierre
Dictionary (Poetry) - 3/3/2010 12:20:24 PM
A grammarian's delight! Great fun, Edwin.
Braille (Poetry) - 3/3/2010 7:44:17 AM
IN A SITUATION LIKE THIS...THE ONLY THING TO DO IS...BACK UP UNTIL THE OTHER PARTY REGAINS THEIR 'SIGHT'. OTHERWISE, YOU'LL FIND YOURSELF 'BLIND'...LIKE HER. FANTASTIC WORK WITH A DYNAMIC MESSAGE. THANKS, EDWIN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 3/3/2010 7:13:16 AM
Edwin. Very powerful message. Most people have stopped listening to the third ear. We need to practice listening to the third ear in our daily affairs (small tasks) so that we can start trusting the voice again. Blessings,
Shervin
Deodorant (Poetry) - 3/2/2010 6:23:04 AM
Damn straight!
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 2/25/2010 7:10:16 AM
A heartfelt write with much power.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 2/25/2010 7:08:51 AM
Wise write, Edwin!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/25/2010 7:07:55 AM
Such passion!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/20/2010 7:27:50 AM
Edwin this write is awesome
I could not live without the dictionary
I can find everything From A-Z
Brilliant write!!
Wishing you Peace Love and Light....Yolie
Charity (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 8:31:55 PM
God Loves A Cheerful Giver and so do I. God Bless You Edwin, thanks for sharing your talent.
Your poetic friend in Christ
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/13/2010 10:10:35 AM
A-Z fantastic! You are a lovely man, Edwin...
Blessings, Lin
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/12/2010 2:12:04 PM
Wriiten with much thought and orginality.Dictionaries are great sources of info.......M
Dictionary (Poetry) - 2/7/2010 2:59:28 AM
Thank you, for your kind words on Aldorons Doom.
I liked the ideas in your poem Dictionary
Joe
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 2/2/2010 11:46:08 AM
Finding the simple pleasures in life....perfect. Thank you for sharing.
Incomers (Poetry) - 1/29/2010 7:44:55 PM
Beautifully written Edwin. I really enjoyed
reading this poem like I do all of the others.
What a powerful gift you have, thank you for
sharing and caring! May the Lord always bless
and sustain you in all that you maybe going
through!
Much Love,
Margaret
Deodorant (Poetry) - 1/28/2010 8:00:45 PM
Pungent, poignant poem!
Would love to hear you
in person project this one
there on some streets in NYC.
Next best thing, videocast?
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 1/27/2010 12:30:36 PM
YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN, EDWIN...A FANTASTIC, UNIQUE WORK THAT GIVES A WONDERFUL MESSAGE OF FAITH. ENJOYED INDEED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATION
Natural Disaster (Poetry) - 1/22/2010 10:56:42 PM
Magnificant poetry! Amen to that!
Pizzman
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/21/2010 5:21:12 AM
An original and fresh love poem, Edwin. Highly creative. Thanks for sharing.
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 1/19/2010 10:11:05 AM
I enjoy brwosing through your work. This positive where it could be defeated ....she sure lucked out letting you go ....lol and you sure lucked out that you got away so easy.
good luck my friend in writing. Helen
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 1/17/2010 11:55:46 PM
Enjoyed!
Victor
Charity (Poetry) - 1/13/2010 10:34:40 AM
Edwin. Very nice poem. "You" in the poem also applies to the person that reading the poem. Many people give but they forget to include themselves in the giving process.
Blessings,
Shervin
Deodorant (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 4:23:22 PM
Band-Aid (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 3:52:16 PM
Vow! "Band-Aid" is a winner poem! Written with creativity from a heart of compassion, filled with God's best Gift, the Gift of Love! Edwin I was truly blessed by this write! Thank you for sharing and caring!
Much Love,
Margaret
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 3:35:22 PM
Dictionaries are great equalizers. Unfortunately, I rarely used one in younger years. To love one may be unnatural. ;-)
Ron
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 1/11/2010 6:07:55 AM
A hearfelt poem. We all need to open our envelopes from time to time. Wonderful thoughts!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 1:52:58 AM
Awesome, and I love finding new words in the dictionary to describe feelings and different things..always makes for different reading. XX Ch'erie
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/9/2010 1:03:03 PM
I just recently discovered that members read each others stuff and comment. And this effort sure got a lot of great comments to which I must add two big C's and one F. Cool, clever and lots of fun which is what love should always have. Congratulations.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 11:14:17 PM
Unique! Just like the author! You are one special man of God!
Mutiple Blessings, JMD
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 1/6/2010 3:33:32 AM
I love this Edwin, and sure can appreciate these
words this morning! Blessings Edwin and may God
meet your every need!
Much Love,
Margaret
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 1/5/2010 1:02:01 PM
love it..... have been browsing through your stuff.I wrote songs for children's theatre in Australia...it was so much fun...especially working with muso's best wishes and thanks for the encouragement you leave at my Den
Natural Disaster (Poetry) - 1/4/2010 2:36:50 PM
Impactful write, Edwin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis
Dictionary (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 3:57:38 PM
Dear Edwin, your kind words are warming my heart. Thank you, my friend. Happy New Year. Love Emile
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 8:03:32 AM
Thank you, Edwin. Love and peace,
Regis
Resume For Love (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 7:07:12 AM
So touching, so real. You'll find it.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 7:05:19 AM
Wonderfully expressed. I like how you used short succinct phrases for simplicity, but upon deeper inspection, the phrases blend together for more complex thought and feeling. I can relate to so much of this. In fact, I am currently in the process of opening my envelope. Thank you!
Tiles Of My Love (Poetry) - 12/31/2009 7:20:26 AM
Very well written Edwin. Yes, you're poems can be put into songs! Keep up your great writing!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 12:59:28 PM
quite a muse, may she serve you well. I like the exactness in your words together with their sudden flare. Saludos
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/20/2009 12:04:18 PM
Hi Edwin,
What a sweet poem to write about a person that you truly love. I hope this loved one had a chance to read it.
I know I enjoyed reading it very much. If my husband would write a poem like this one, I would truly appreciate it, but for some reason he just doesn't write stories or poems. I guess it is because he thinks he can't.
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year,
Patty
Braille (Poetry) - 12/19/2009 5:45:53 PM
Strong writing, with a dynamic punch at the close! Loved the ending so much, but getting there was half the fun! Thanks by the way, for the kind review of In Group We Trust. Nice of you to drop by for a visit.
-Roger
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 12/18/2009 12:13:39 AM
very powerful and deep. A touching write.
Tel-Love-Phone (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 4:19:10 PM
Very interesting and profound Edwin!
You have a very beautiful gift and
What a timely write! Thanks for sharing
be encouraged Edwin and keep on writing!
Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 9:08:02 AM
I like this. And yes, without a dictionary I am lost / Same goes for the thesaurus. You used yours well in this poem. Without love, there would be no poems of love and that would be a crime.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 7:58:28 AM
I too use my "Dictionary" all the time.
Words of true emotion
Enjoyed - thanks for sharing.
Doug
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 12/15/2009 8:03:51 AM
Positive thoughts, well expressed.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 12/14/2009 11:12:37 PM
Well penned.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/14/2009 11:10:50 PM
Very nice. An excellent write.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/12/2009 7:43:30 AM
I nearly missed this gem. Thanks dear Edwin and keep up the good love
Deodorant (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 2:46:36 PM
A very deep and important write. And an accurate reflection of a sick society.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 8:30:54 AM
A great write Edwin!
A clever insight into
the heart of a poet
Blessings ...
r
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 6:54:49 AM
Listen to your heart, indeed, always. Good job
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 6:50:28 AM
an excellent creative write Edwin
Most enjoyable reading
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you
William
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 5:03:23 AM
Edwin I find this poem very profound and interesting!
A powerful message and well received. May the Lord
continually bless the work of your hands Edwin!
Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 5:00:03 AM
very inspiring verse to ponder, cheers
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 4:57:58 AM
excellent rendition of the dictionary Edwin, I use the electronic ones also, cheers
Light Bulb (Poetry) - 12/10/2009 7:37:36 PM
I like this, very cute.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/8/2009 7:57:06 AM
We would all flourish if we had mates that see us like this.
Deodorant (Poetry) - 12/8/2009 7:49:21 AM
You made me smile Edwin, yet this is a very sobering poem
written from a heart filled with compassion and love! A very
power packed message "Deodorant" We all need it, thanks for
bringing it home!! So to speak! Thanks for sharing and caring
Edwin.
Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/8/2009 5:41:59 AM
Good, positive vibes coming from this piece, Edwin. --Charlie
Braille (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 2:34:53 PM
Love is blind and reason has no meaning to the heart.
If you wrote this to a particular lady, I hope she seriously considered your plea as an alternative :).
Write on!
Sandy
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 11:08:19 AM
THIS IS A POWERFUL METAPHORIC WORK. ONE WILL FIND THAT A 'SEEMINGLY' EASY TASK OF OPENING THEIR 'ENVELOPE'...IS NOT EASY AT ALL. THANKS FOR SHARING EDWIN, AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 6:55:06 AM
I bet my Dictionary is better than yours! LOL!
Well, maybe? I love your take on the one and only thing that we all hold dear as poets...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 12/1/2009 11:28:02 PM
Never considered the perspective but I think you are on to something here. You are correct, nicely done. Patrick
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/1/2009 11:24:33 PM
You are one lucky guy to have such a mate. Patrick
Dictionary (Poetry) - 12/1/2009 10:44:57 AM
I really like this poem and think it is very creative and original. I love the descriptions/comparisons you use throughout the poem and how they all, for the most part, relate to each other. The poem flows really well and I do sense a bit of emotion and love in this piece. It is quite an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing it and keep on writing!
All the best,
lena
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 11/29/2009 6:29:53 PM
This poem is very heartfelt and powerfully written Edwin, you have
"The Best Gift all" LOVE! May the Lord continually bestow upon you His wisdom and strength, and infuse you with His Love always so that you will continue to share and care for others!
Much Love,
Always!!!
Margaret
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/29/2009 6:23:54 PM
Very nice, Edwin.
Charity (Poetry) - 11/29/2009 6:47:27 AM
The world needs more beautiful hearts like yours! Love and peace to you Edwin! Chessly
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 2:49:09 PM
Your instincts are very important. Thanks for reminding us.
Alan
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 5:12:45 PM
Edwin, you have beautifully defined the object of your love. -gene.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 11/24/2009 11:23:44 AM
It is true that many of us keep everything hidden "inside the envelope," Edwin. Nicely done. Love and peace,
Regis
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 6:56:08 PM
fortunate is the women that is the object of your affection Edwin -- you have given love new definitions, most eloquent definitions -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 9:24:52 AM
personalities are mostly sealed envelopes -- even those we classify as extroverts -- absolute openness is very difficult to achieve -- the vulnerability that results leaves most mortals feeling very insecure -- a thought provoking message written with great expertise Edwin -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Deodorant (Poetry) - 11/21/2009 3:28:37 PM
I have often asked myself, Edwin, when I think the seminal moment of twentieth century man's moral demise was -- and certainly our federal government's intervention into the day to day moral issues of the family unit most assuredly fit the bill -- sadly we have evolved from that moment into the inhumane uncaring, "plastic personalities" we are today as a society -- your poem draws our attention to the fact that we reek with the B.O. of the earth's dispassionate residents -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/19/2009 4:26:04 AM
loved defined is love refined...beautiful....best wishes....neerja
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/19/2009 3:29:15 AM
i love itttttttttttttttttttt!!!!
excelent done!!
i especially love this part "You define sugar because you are a sweetheart"
keep up the great work!!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 9:23:10 PM
The 'object of your affection' is lucky that you can share such a wonderful tribute to your love with us. [wishing it was me --- lol]
God bless you. Kathy
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 6:28:10 PM
What a lovely ode to a loved one, Edwin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Deodorant (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 1:05:05 PM
I liked the way you stretched your metaphor of applying deodorant to the "pits of your soul". I enjoyed this piece, the "Do Ri Me Generation" is clever.
Thanks for the read,
Rayanda
www.RayandaArts.com
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 10:08:12 AM
A definition of love,,,well done!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 8:48:54 AM
Original and creative. Bet the one you wrote this for will always cherish it.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:18:13 PM
Awwww how absolutely sweet this is, very cretive...
Be always safe,
Karen
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 6:10:14 PM
Nice building flow from beginning to end.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 5:15:27 PM
Edwin,
How eloquently and romantically said, this is wonderful. And for me the final two lines are just perfect. Yes!
John
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 4:09:32 PM
Nice one Edwin. Beautifully done.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 2:55:57 PM
I need my dictionary and my 'star'... Beautiful!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 2:05:30 PM
from Alpha to Omega and on to Zenith... think you/she has all the bases covered, Edwin! :)) Lovely concept beautifully penned. xx
Deodorant (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:38:56 PM
Another wisdom filled write, my friend. Well done indeed.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:37:32 PM
Wise words, Edwin. Well done.
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:36:15 PM
I am an open envelope now for sure!
Signed & Delivered :)
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:36:02 PM
Fantastic write, Edwin. Truly an excellent piece right from the heart.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:33:36 PM
I Love "Dictionary" too...very much actually :)
I really enjoyed this expression Edwin...
Read on My Friend!!
Write On Too...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 12:02:08 PM
This is written with goooood passionate attention.
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 8:46:40 AM
Great tribute to someone you so obviosuly love soo much.
fee
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 8:30:34 AM
Vow! Powerfully written, I found this poem very interesting!
Be encouraged Edwin, and may the Lord always bless and keep you!
Much Love!
Always!!
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:40:32 AM
A dictionary woman will whisper you words you didn't knew existed!
Georg
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:39:45 AM
A defining moment in the romantic embrace of the lexicon of love, Edwin...this is a unique perspective on love's analogy...be well.
Love,
Sage
Open Your Envelope (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:38:51 AM
Many a man can be considered a sealed envelope, perhaps they should follow your advice and open the lid and show what they are.
Georg
Deodorant (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:36:53 AM
Once a pretty girls asked me which deodorant I used, I told her which brand and she asked me if it was sold out when I wanted one; I wasn't smelling good that day?
Georg
Dictionary (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 7:24:47 AM
WHOOO...THIS IS A MASTERPIECE! IT OOZES WITH THE EMOTION, AFFECTION AND TANGIBLE LOVE OF SWEET, PURE ROMANCE. I LOVE THIS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 5:15:40 AM
I like it when someone writes their poems from their life experiences as you do.
This poem is great. I felt I was there with you.
Keep writing!!!
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/13/2009 1:04:22 PM
As I read this, I recalled the bible verse, Ephesians 6:4, "Provoke not your children to wrath." We hear so often to "Honor our parents" but parents have mandates as well, to not treat their children in ways that will let anger build in them. It's good you're addressing your feelings about your father. I think it's one of the journeys many men must take.
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 12:38:20 PM
Edwin,
This poem is so heartfelt! Powerfully written, these words
though painfully true speak for so many! what a release!
Edwin you are FREE!!! May you always feel Abba Father's
warm embrace! Thanks for sharing!!!
Much Love,
Always!!
Margaret
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 7:42:54 AM
I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU FEEL SO MUCH BETTER...THERE IS A LOT OF ANGER IN THIS STRONG, BOLD WORK. GOD BLESS YOU AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/10/2009 5:53:27 AM
Great piece of poetry Edwin continue to bless us! Peace!!!
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 1:42:06 PM
I am glad you have found a forum to release your pent up anger and pain, so many don't and live a life of being miserable because of it. I was fortunate in having two loving parents for althought my Dad was strict he was always fair.
fee
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 7:44:49 AM
Ice cold parents, indifferent ones, bad example ones, aren't the best for a child to lean when growing up, because that child will grow like a n emotional pretzel without beginning and without end.
What you need is a real friend, one that can reach your life keyboard and that will press that DELETE key that will obliterate everything bad in the past and leave only good memories for you to become a happy camper.
Georg
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 5:42:27 AM
There is no need for anyone to follow in another's foot steps. My grandfather was in prison twice in two separate states. His son, my father was a Chief of Police in our town when I grew up. My father and grandfather spoke to one another, but father like son, never.
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 4:37:42 AM
Edwin,
Thank you for sharing this painful work. Yes, it helpful to release pain through "song or verse." Now, your well-deserved healing can begin. Be encouraged with a new heart.
Peace and Renewal.
Brynn
Lethal Weapon (Poetry) - 11/6/2009 2:32:26 AM
Edwin, for a moment I thought we had the same father. I know what you are talking about as we were so afraid growing up in our house, only for Mom, who by the way was an Angel I don't think any of us could have survived. I am glad you shared with us. Take care and none of us grew up to take on any of our father's ways.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Braille (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 2:01:06 PM
Talk about a Knight in Shining Armor! Far too many women have had their bodies and spirits pummeled to bits. It takes a love like you describe to bring one back to life. The empathy with which you write and the love that shines through every word are wonderful to see. Do mean s e e. I N S P I R I N G !!!! With gratitute, respect, and affection, 'Pea'
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 6:29:05 AM
Amen Edwin. Great message my friend.
Peace,
Bill :-)
Braille (Poetry) - 10/31/2009 7:32:04 AM
This is great! Love takes many roads, wrong turn and it is abusive. Nice imagery, Edwin.
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/30/2009 6:08:17 AM
Great work Edwin some of your best trust God and keep inspiring us! Thank you for this teaching. Peace!!!
Charity (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 6:17:27 PM
Embracing You & Your Beautiful heart Edwin
Thank You for "Charity"
Peace & Blessings Always
Vickie
Braille (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 6:16:27 PM
offer her the vision of truths Edwin...
Some simply cannot see...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Braille (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 11:11:13 AM
Very outspoken of you Edwin. Sometimes we need to hear the truth and sometimes when you are in a situation, you are incapable of seeing it!
Zahra V
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 6:27:11 AM
EXCELLENT WRITE....ENLIGHTENMENT IS A WONDERFUL GIFT...THE STRENGTH AND WISDOM TO MOVE ON...IS EVEN BETTER. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/27/2009 1:53:36 PM
Dear Edwin, This poem says the truth. Follow your heart and life will always smile to you. Great, we are on the same wave length. Love Emile
Charity (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 5:14:04 AM
a soul as loving as yours must be loved in kind.
Hugs, Kathy
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:11:42 PM
This is positive, encouraging, and very uplifting, Edwin. I love your outlook on "things" around you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Charity (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:10:31 PM
Love is all, Edwin! Powerful expression. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Braille (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 1:09:24 PM
This is moving and meaningful, Edwin. I pray that only good will come of your aspirations. Love and peace to you,
Regis
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/25/2009 6:41:02 AM
Listen to your 3rd ear.
Its your heart
Listen to your 3rd ear...
Amen
Braille (Poetry) - 10/23/2009 5:13:31 AM
awwwwwwwww
loved the ending.........this is priceless.....what a heart you have...:)
I hope you win :)
Braille (Poetry) - 10/23/2009 3:49:03 AM
"Braille" words of depth very profound and also
true! Well Edwin you have done it again powerful
excellent write! Be encouraged and keep on sharing
your gift with the world, what a blessing you are!
Much Love
Always!!
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/23/2009 3:09:30 AM
A very good poem. Thank you.
Braille (Poetry) - 10/22/2009 8:30:56 AM
only the blind couldn't see the feeling behind these words. very good work. Hugs, Kathy
Braille (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 5:00:53 PM
beautiful appeal yes i agree with ET Waldron
Braille (Poetry) - 10/21/2009 3:35:04 PM
This is surely a powerful appeal, Edwin!
I hope she responds favorably!Excellent poem!
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 6:12:13 PM
Heartfelt touching write....I pray all works out
Christine
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 5:38:19 PM
"Right on Target" Edin!
JMD
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 4:12:20 PM
Sounds like this lady needs a real man to take care of her and you could fill the order Edwin.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:28:10 PM
Edwin,
Strong and fine writing.
John
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 6:49:50 AM
It's a mystery sure enough why people give and accept abuse. Using blindness to explain it makes sense. Take care,
Ben K
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 6:46:24 AM
Edwin, this is a great little love story, well told.
Cheers,
Dan
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 4:51:12 AM
Hi Edwin sounds like a man in love that needs to tell that woman so. A good love story. Peace!!!
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 4:07:49 AM
Very moving and would be a hard offer for most women to turn down in that situation...sadly all too many don't see the abuse they accept.
fee
Braille (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 3:54:27 AM
Many are in need of a white cane for their emotional lives, going around blindingly hurting the real blind that can see.
A kind heart will no see lifeless eyes, it will go beyond it, immersing himself in the deeps of Adrian's heart...
Georg
Charity (Poetry) - 10/20/2009 12:41:28 AM
Fantastic!! Great Poem
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 4:45:38 PM
Compassionate and caring write. :~)
Cryssa
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 4:44:59 PM
Well Edwin you have done it again! Excellent
write and beautifully expressed!
Much Love
Always!!
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 11:47:07 AM
Beautiful.
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 7:30:14 AM
What is that saying? Treat others as you want them to treat you. Well, "Charity" shows how to do that.
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 6:43:14 AM
Do you want a home? :-)
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 4:10:26 AM
This is such a profession of love...be careful, you must keep a piece of yourself for YOU!!!
Much love, light, and peace dear Edwin,
Amber "V"
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 4:09:04 AM
She was hurtful, but you saw the light before it was too late. You are a fighter and you know how to take care of yourself. You not only did her a favor but yourself also!!! Good poem, Edwin.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Charity (Poetry) - 10/19/2009 2:09:48 AM
A sorrowful, yet, a hopeful one, not begging but giving and yet wishing to receive a little...
Georg
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 9:07:17 PM
Awww, so endearing and akin to a breath of fresh air...
Be always safe,
Karen
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 7:04:58 PM
Edwin, this is so beautiful. Wow! If you are writing this for a certain woman- she would be so excited and honored to get something as wonderful as this poem. She would certainly feel blessed to have someone like you.
With Love,
Cindy
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:50:22 PM
Sweet write, Edwin; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:17:52 PM
The ultimate gift of life is love Edwin which your portrayed very well in this poem. Thank you for sharing you with us! Peace!!!
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:00:23 PM
This is a lesson in dedication, which seems to be a lost art these days. It's a strong statement. Take care
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 4:19:36 PM
Edwin,
Such force and commitment in this wonderfully inspiring writing.
Thank you!
John
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 3:35:28 PM
Now this is what making a commitment is all about. Excellent write.
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 3:17:28 PM
I know God smiles as you "spotlight" His Grace in this amazing poem! JBS
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 3:12:02 PM
Beautifully written! Blessings, JBS
Charity (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 3:08:41 PM
Edwin, I read this as a sequel to your Resume for Love.
Honest, direct, and wonderfully written. -gene.
Resume For Love (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 3:06:17 PM
Moved by the deft writing of your resume, Edwin, and hope
that it leads to a happy and deserving resolution. -gene.
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 2:22:44 PM
I like this a lot and if we all had a BLF a day what a great world his planet would be.
hugs
fee
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 11:50:15 AM
You're so right Edwin
the heart always present
always listening
even when we fail to...
Love & Blessings
Vickie
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 10:05:38 AM
I'm so sorry you were hurt. I'm sending you a cyber hug my friend. You deserve someone with a warm heart who can give you LOTS of love. You are very special Edwin, and from the other comments you've received I know you feel that too. Keep your chin up. God is working on the right one now-----she will appear when you least expect it!
Let me know when you find her-----
Blessings to you my brother
Katt
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 9:28:48 AM
Edwin,
I am also blessed, lucky and fortunate. I've strived all my life not to take anything for granted. I thank God every morning that I am 'allowed' to wake up, get up and walk and talk. So many didn't have that privilege. I am forever thankful for all my blessings. When I feel down and out I look around me and there's always someone worse than I am. I am blessed to be able to go to Jesus, to have Him as my Saviour. Bless you my friend, for writing this.
Blessings,
~Linda
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:57:39 AM
and...like Lobsan Rampa said, watch everything with your 3rd eye!
Georg
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:56:03 AM
Now, my boy, the only thing you need is to play chess with Him, but watch out, He can read your thoughts and then He cheats!
Georg
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:45:26 AM
Haven't given it much thought, but the way you laid it out there, the voice of spiritual guidance does not come from your natural ear.
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:38:46 AM
We all should be covenant people. God gave His all that we may have all these things and share with our brothers and sisters in Christ.
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:33:51 AM
Attituude of gratitude. I like it. Well done.
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:09:01 AM
Love this one--the title lured me in. This is TRUE, and that's about the best thing to say about a poem!
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:07:19 AM
A sad story, all too common. Her game playing is her loss, not yours, my friend!
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 6:05:16 AM
Edwin--loved this one. Count your blessings and smile at those strangers-- :)
BLF(Bless,Lucky,Fortunate) (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 5:40:51 AM
I hope we can BLF "Bless the Less Fortunate" in this life by giving more to others in need. Amen
The Best Gift Of All (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 4:45:20 AM
Dear Edwin,
You became a better person from this experience. You became a better man. Life is full of false hopes. God is on your side my friend..
Amen
3rd Ear (Poetry) - 10/18/2009 4:32:21 AM
Wise words and wise advice, Ed. Well done.
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