Recent Reviews for Esther G Spurrill
Bound For Hell (Short Story) - 6/21/2002 6:53:23 PM|
This one is written well but can be placed in a better genre -- horror. It reads like a gothic short story; sort of a cross between C.S. Lewis meets Clive Barker.
Bound For Hell (Short Story) - 3/13/2002 1:42:23 PM
Yikes! The realtiy of Hell can be frightening sometimes.
Does God Love Satan? (Article) - 12/18/2007 6:45:17 PM
Esther... I once asked this very same question and received an immediate reply. Yes, God does love satan; however, what makes satan satan is that he rejects God's love. This then is what makes him God's enemy. Therefore, anyone who rejects God's love is God's enemy.
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 7/13/2002 7:01:42 PM
You want harsh -- I am not going to even give you a seven for this one. In fact I am giving you a one. What do you have against the darker form of literature. Just because I have the balls to say "fuck you God" in my writing or have some castrated subject matter. You call yourself a child of god but I have to say this one is equal to one thing and it is the middle finger. You are the only fucker who gave me low ratings but I am giving you a lower rating here because overall the subject matter sucks, even though you have some good potental in writing a strong story. You lack a thought provoking depth. The only people who are giving you high ratings are the ones who are related to you and the ones who know you very well in person -- but for someone who had been writing longer than you have been in school. Just because I write some things that are bound to step on the toes of devote Christians doesn't mean I suck. I am used to the hate mail over the years when they say I suck -- I just do something that knocks them to their ass on the next run. I am giving you a two because I am being nice; just because someone writes dark or blasphemous doesn't mean they suck.
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 3/12/2002 4:58:26 AM
Giving low ratings as revenge has to be the most infantile practice I've seen on one of these websites. I myself, seeing the atrocious immaturity of the unnamed author, read and honestly reviewed some of his work. Surprisingly, I have yet to be given a low rating on any of my work. Might have something to do with my little comment about attempting to avenge my honesty(read "cruelty").
Low ratings, if honest, do not bother me. Unlike some people, I do not throw a fit if I get a rating lower than 8/10. I would gladly accept a 5/10 if the rater had good reason to think my work sucked. And "You were mean ot me" is not a good reason.
Some people here have serious maturity issues.
Truth, Better Than Fiction (Article) - 3/12/2002 4:49:02 AM
Not the first "evtirely true" story that's full of lies. Wasn't Roots suppoed to be a true story from beginning to end without any poetic or artictic liscence taken?
When It Happens To You (Article) - 3/12/2002 4:41:12 AM
Love it. Cliches and quotable quotes are useless in the real wordl.
BTW, Marvel Knott is and unclututred, dense slob.
Red Tights (Article) - 3/12/2002 4:38:29 AM
Superman wears blue tights.
Red Tights (Article) - 3/10/2002 2:28:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this very much indeed. Reminded me of myself in many ways :)
Red Tights (Article) - 3/7/2002 7:42:45 PM
real cool stuff! liked it. vls
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 3/1/2002 11:44:46 PM
unfortunately the raters are only human as are the writers. And we all bring into it human experience, who knows what may of been in that persons past that might of made him see something that perhaps you really didn't mean. And case in point, your sisters article here. She bought her experiences here in her writing.. The domino chain and all. the best one can do is let it slide. Life is too short to sweat the small stuff.
Love and Light
When It Happens To You (Article) - 3/1/2002 10:23:56 PM
girly talk...lol...you so wasted
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 3/1/2002 10:22:13 PM
You claim to be children of God....he does not teach you to be cruel.
And you have proven yourself to be very cruel.
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 3/1/2002 5:58:05 PM
I was really angry when I wrote this. Sorry if it's a little harsh. By the way, did you notice I didn't rate it 10/10 myself?
Reviews and Revenge (Article) - 3/1/2002 5:43:24 PM
ROTFL Oh sure, tell the whole world we're sisters, why don't you? hmmm... are articles a form of revenge? Pretty cruel piece here. At least you don't name any names.
Truth, Better Than Fiction (Article) - 2/26/2002 4:30:24 PM
This one wasn't at WBM very long, was it? Great essay here. I agree; truth is best and no one has the right to claim fiction is "true" or "factual".
When It Happens To You (Article) - 2/26/2002 4:28:22 PM
I think i read this at WBM as well, but i'm not sure. Great piece here. Very true. Is it a sonnet, by the way?
Does God Love Satan? (Article) - 2/26/2002 4:25:40 PM
I don't know either. i wonder if Satan even knows? or cares? Anyway, in ref to D. Caban's comment, as far as i know angels as well as humans have free will, they just aren't born with the Sin Nature like we are.
When It Happens To You (Article) - 2/26/2002 1:24:27 PM
I loved this when I read it on WBM, and I still love it. God bless you, sister.
Does God Love Satan? (Article) - 2/24/2002 12:18:11 AM
This question bugged me a lot as a kid! I never understood how an angel COULD rebel... if humans are the only ones with free will, how could an angel disobey God?
The Star (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 10:41:43 AM
The Star (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 2:13:39 PM
Perfect? I don't think so myself.
The Star (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 2:09:36 PM
The Star (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 12:30:14 PM
wow! what an amazing song you did! beautiful write; thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 3:14:58 AM
This is beautiful. Hopeful.
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 9/28/2002 8:36:18 PM
Awsome Poem!! Really gets to ur heart!
To The Girlfriend of My Ex (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 9:43:36 AM
Um... Eddie, this poem is not listed under September 11. I did break up with the guy in question in September 2001, but otherwise, this poem has ABSOLUTELY NOTHING to do with 9/11.
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 2:37:28 PM
oh, this is so sad!! it really touched me when i read this!! >tears < love, your friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS)) *god bless america*
To The Girlfriend of My Ex (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 4:34:39 PM
What happened to the g/f of your Ex???????? Died on the plane, in the World Trade Center. Give Details, I dont understand this Poem
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 4:19:55 PM
This Poem really touched me. I am a Bapists of the first Bapists Church of Dayton, Ky. I rated this Poem up to 10.
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 7/22/2002 12:46:10 PM
This is one of the very few peices I will give you a ten on -- it is very good but should try to drag it out into something longer though.
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 7/3/2002 2:11:01 AM
I've read more than a few poems inspired by Sept. 11th, but only a few convey as much emotion as this one.
Sure, some are more epic and verbally stunning, but this poem strikes hoem with its simplicity.
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 7/3/2002 2:06:54 AM
I wrote an acrostic, too, but this .#$% website won't allow me to upload it because my lines are too long to fit into the site's restrictive format!
Well, anyway, I like this poem, no matter what any 40+-year old Dr. Seuss wannabe's masqueradeing as simple readers say.
Worth a 9 at least!
To The Girlfriend of My Ex (Poetry) - 7/3/2002 2:02:52 AM
This guy you're referring to in the poem still calls our house sometimes--to talk to me of all people!
I can't say I dislike him, really, but I can't say I like him all that much either.
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 7/3/2002 1:59:32 AM
I really can't see why anybody wouldn't like this piece.
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 6/19/2002 11:34:35 PM
Good Acrostic Sis.
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 6/19/2002 11:29:22 PM
Hey sis nice poem.
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 5/19/2002 12:27:38 PM
This is good one too -- the one that you would like is a dark epic titled "Seasons of Black September." This is one that I am working on as a voice recording and the opening poem Clay and Dust is a voice recording now.
Let Me Be (Poetry) - 5/14/2002 9:53:47 PM
Your love of God shows through in your words. They are a beautiful way of thinking about our relationship with God.
Let Me Be (Poetry) - 5/14/2002 5:39:16 PM
Sandie Angel :o)
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 5/7/2002 10:45:32 PM
Wonderful poem, such truth spoken!
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 10:28:07 AM
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 3/8/2002 12:04:34 PM
My mom always taught me u dont have anything nice to say then say nothing at all. Loved your work ... j ;-)
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 3/7/2002 10:30:10 PM
In the wind the shadows,
reach slightly overhigh
the crests and currents
The billowy boughs
where birds nest
by this nasty rant
of so called
Death of Ice (Poetry) - 3/7/2002 7:47:51 PM
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/5/2002 2:02:23 PM
Stark truth...very good
Sep 11, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/5/2002 1:00:23 PM
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/3/2002 1:18:37 PM
oh yes how true
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/3/2002 12:56:26 PM
Hurtful words can hurt so much.
I agree this is short and directly to the point.As it should be.
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 11:28:50 PM
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 9:51:30 PM
true words that will always be with us,nicely put,Charlie
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 8:43:02 PM
not "bad work". ever wonder if some of thses ppl ever actually READ bfr they rate?
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 8:41:25 PM
very true. very succinct. only prob is the last lines are kinda cliched, but maybe that's the best way to say it.
September 2001 (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 8:38:48 PM
not your best piece. kinda awkward and difficult to understand. but interesting and worth reading nonetheless.
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 3:59:13 PM
Sometimes all it takes are a few of the right words! Nicely stated.
Sharp Words (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 1:34:45 PM
Is that all you have got, rather small!.
(Famous words)guaranteed to work every time.
The Critic (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 1:23:59 PM
I was only going to, give that one.
But then I thought, I would be competing against myself.
I love the ones, I know I have won then,I never take them down,I leave them there as an embarrassment.
To the people who put them there,most of the time you know who they are any way.
That made me think,thats worth ten.
My Commitment (Poetry) - 3/2/2002 2:45:48 AM
enjoyed reading this...
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 10:12:21 PM
indifference.....looks like you created it
The Defense (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 10:10:17 PM
You claim to be christians???
you treat people like you are some kind a god yourself
My Commitment (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 10:03:10 PM
you dare to critisize others and you poems are repeating themself all of the time you are not a good poet
go learn some manners
My Commitment (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 6:21:11 PM
As Long As You Don't Succumb To Greed___
And, Give to Others In Need...
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 6:06:11 PM
I really like this. The one improvement, jsut for emphasis, might be to offset the last line somehow.
The Defense (Poetry) - 3/1/2002 5:25:48 PM
i've wondered about the kind of love that not only dies for another, but also suffers being spit on, lied about, beaten, and NAILED to a cross. It floors me that someone could have that kind of love. You've heard Petra's "If I Had to Die For Someone" (on thier God Fixation album)? Reminds me of that. Sure, we can say "He's God, God is love, and love does things like that," but Jesus was HUMAN too. He felt the pain. And He CHOSE to take our place. No ammount of Sunday School answers can take away the wonder we SHOULD have at God's love.
The Defense (Poetry) - 2/28/2002 6:46:55 PM
Do not fret. What Jesus did for us was unconditional love and meant to be. Great write. Gregg
Boredom (Poetry) - 2/27/2002 7:03:27 PM
Yes, I can delete reviews, and I did.
Boredom (Poetry) - 2/26/2002 11:56:47 PM
sorry but this poem is boring... i know that's what you intended...
Boredom (Poetry) - 2/26/2002 8:38:41 PM
Find somethging to Pre-occupy Your Mind; Then
You'll have something to do with your hands__
Maybe Write Something No So Bored(ing)...
Boredom (Poetry) - 2/26/2002 6:55:51 PM
I found this to be very good. I can relate to it so much.
Thank you for sharing.
To The Girlfriend of My Ex (Poetry) - 2/26/2002 4:43:45 PM
Great poem. Breakups are usually such messy, hurtful things. I don't have any exes, but my fiance has one. He doesn't say much positive stuff about her. I don't think ppl are supposed to speak well of thier exes.
Boredom (Poetry) - 2/26/2002 4:37:47 PM
I feel that way sometimes too, Eshter. btw, can u delete rude comments? Just a thought, b/c the other comment is not only badly written but offensive.
INDIFFERENCE - An Acrostic (Poetry) - 2/25/2002 6:31:07 PM
The Opposite of Love and Hate is Indifference.
Please see my "The Indifferent Pond"
September 2001 (Poetry) - 2/25/2002 6:31:03 PM
Sick is definately the word.And I wonder why too!Good write. Gregg
September 2001 (Poetry) - 2/25/2002 6:29:18 PM
Very Nice, I wonder why?
David's Lament (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 11:46:06 PM
David's Lament (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 4:18:05 PM
I always like a good sonnet
David's Lament (Poetry) - 2/23/2002 3:43:38 PM
The feelings radiate from this sonnet.
Love and Light