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Late Night Lessons with Fire Ants (Short Story) - 1/18/2004 8:21:22 AM
I laughed and sympathised with you on this one. What a great idea and presented well. Carol (Who found a floating raft of fire ants yesterday in the flooding rain here on the Texas coast and is scratching in empathy)

Late Night Lessons with Fire Ants (Short Story) - 1/5/2004 11:49:00 AM
(((sean))) OUCH. *cringe* hope this is fictional...you must live in the south...here in texas, we're overrun by these nasty little critters people have died from allergic reactions to fire ants be careful, dear friend...might i suggest a plastic container with a lid to put your snacks in, that way you can eat and not have to share with the fire ants?? hope your lips and tongue are better--bless your heart i felt this one, even as i was laughing at the way you humorously described this (PAINFUL) lesson--good job (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Late Night Lessons with Fire Ants (Short Story) - 1/5/2004 11:42:34 AM
lol this is disGUSTing, but this is also very funny! i'll try to remember not to eat anything in bed; fireants may come, and i may eat one of THEM instead!! LOL (hmmm..talk about extra protein...NASTY!) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 6/2/2003 2:00:52 PM
HA! sean, you crack me up! please write more stories; they are all a hoot! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (oh, my sides..*gasp, gasp, gasp*)

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 6/2/2003 1:59:24 PM
this is a funny write; enjoyed~ love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Cooks and Suction Cups (Short Story) - 6/2/2003 1:57:52 PM
LOL sounds like you've been watching me in the kitchen *that's why i don't cook* stupid suction cups LOL hysterically funny write, sean...almost as good as the dustbunnies *i miss the dustbunnies* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Cooks and Suction Cups (Short Story) - 6/2/2003 8:51:12 AM
sean, this is absolutely hySTERical! a howlingly funny write; enjoyed emmensely! thanks so much for the >grins < of the day! (((HUGS))) and love, your (laughing) texas friend, karen lynn. :) p.s.: this sounds like something karla or i would do if WE were bored! (((:D~~big grins)))

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 3/23/2003 11:26:54 PM
I liked this one too

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 3/23/2003 11:23:47 PM
had to read this and glad I did

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 3/15/2003 4:11:21 PM
Sounds like you speak from experience. There ought to be a law about you fixing anything that has electricity , remember the suburban.

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 1/3/2003 6:09:47 PM
loved this one too!! Lisa

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 1/3/2003 6:03:23 PM
I loved this it was great. Lisa :)

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 12/28/2002 10:58:51 AM
I thought I had hit a site that would help me, it gave me a great laugh. I just want to look inside of the dryer and see if there is a screw loose. :Thanks for the laugh.

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 12/17/2002 5:21:53 AM
Was a nice laugh despite the fact that my dryer has quit working. Didnt help much on drying the clothes, but did give me a much better attitude!!!!! Thanks, Beth :)

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 7/17/2002 11:29:05 AM
HILARIOUS!!!!! Sounds like our daddy!! He was good at fixing things, but sometimes he wasn't. He would be a total yutz! (sorry, daddy, but you know i love you!!!) karen in texas.

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 7/14/2002 12:14:32 PM
I know where you learned the tricks of the trade from....our DAD!

Fixing the Dryer (Short Story) - 7/10/2002 4:58:11 PM
LOL...very funny, Sean! Sounds like my Dad (who knew everything but couldn't fix anything...kinda like Tim the Toolman Taylor :) ). Thanks for my laugh for the day...and be careful of those bees and wasps! :) (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 7/5/2002 3:10:55 PM
realllllllllll cute! But does it really work?

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 7/5/2002 3:09:03 PM
You forgot to feed the dust bunnies under your bed and your monster. LOL

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 7/2/2002 9:46:55 PM
wow... sounds like our house. great write. -rosi

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 5/6/2002 3:04:01 PM
this is so funny...i want to thank you for clearing that up for me (a note to self: never live with a guy) -smile-

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 5/6/2002 2:59:14 PM
lol...this is so funny and probably true good write and good luck hope not to see you on the news.....lol

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 5/1/2002 12:46:38 AM
Hope Clay doesn't get wind of this, he just might plagiarize some of them, not that I would be guilty of any of the above offenses!

House cleaning ,Guy style (Short Story) - 4/25/2002 2:08:37 PM
LOL.... I enjoyed this also... Would like to see some more soon. Jenni

Rules of living in my house (Short Story) - 4/25/2002 1:58:59 PM
Lmao...I loved this..I have a few unusual house rules myself.... lol I enjoyed this immensely... Jenni

Ten Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 1/16/2009 6:30:32 AM
This is great!

The Goblin In My Room  (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 2:20:15 AM
This is so magical! Evokes a lot o imagery! Simply love the poem

The Key (the Chastity Belt Poem) (Poetry) - 2/25/2008 1:08:07 PM
Great work all VFW personel can relate to this.

Dust Bunnies at Play (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 10:26:10 PM
This is one of my all time favorites. I saw it in that notebook a few years back.

Dust Bunnies at Play (Poetry) - 4/23/2005 1:46:32 PM
This is cute. I think I found some of your dust bunnies over here though. M.Rose

Dust Bunnies at Play (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 11:04:57 AM
i know where a few of these live at my house, but we co-exist comfortably

Dust Bunnies at Play (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 8:50:51 AM
delightful write, sean! yayyyy, the marvelous dust bunnies are at it again! well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Dust Bunnies at Play (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 4:07:27 AM
Sean: This is soooo lyrical and fun to read. I'm so happy to see this one. It has great meter and rhymes. I only wish I could have written this. Wonderful job indeed! Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) P.S. I would also like to invite you to read my short stories, "Bunnies - A Children's Story for Easter". It is in my stories section of the den: http://www.authorsden.com/visit/viewShortStory.asp?AuthorID=2137&id=16353 Thank you! Sandie Angel :o)

Beware of the Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 3/29/2005 9:16:28 AM
I love those mischevious dust bunnies! So nice to hear from them again! As always, a charming write; thanks for sharing, Sean! BRAVO! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Beware of the Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 3/29/2005 3:58:44 AM
A fun read! Made me smile! Dust bunnies are fun to read and write! Read about how the dust bunnies gone wild in my short stories. Just click on my "Short Stories" section in my bio and you'll see that story. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Do You Dream? (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:28:57 PM
wonderfully sweet piece open one to fairytale places and smiling hearts enjoyed

Do You Dream? (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 5:46:53 PM
A dream is a wish your heart makes....I like this one. Thanks for sharing it! Jennifer

Do You Dream? (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 4:18:15 AM
awesome how the imagery crescendoes and concludes!

Do You Dream? (Poetry) - 3/19/2005 3:57:15 AM
Wonderful dreams and beautifully-written. Yes, for some reasons I DO dream of all this things. It is soooo interesting to have all these dreams. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Do You Dream? (Poetry) - 3/19/2005 2:26:30 AM
This is a very thoughtful poem. I like the form you have chosen. The questions you ask make what you're asking a bit more real and the ending sets it off. Very nicely done. M.Rose

I Fear to Speak Her Name (Poetry) - 3/13/2005 6:25:45 PM
Very moving write. Beautiful and vulnerable.

I Fear to Speak Her Name (Poetry) - 3/9/2005 8:24:40 PM
Oh so deep and poignant, excellently insightful, I loved this very much, outstanding. Reindeer

Dust Bunny Hide and Seek part 2 (Poetry) - 1/15/2005 8:15:25 AM
cute write, sean! glad to see the dust bunnies are still up to their clever and humorous tricks! well done; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Dust Bunny Hide and Seek part 2 (Poetry) - 1/13/2005 9:50:32 AM
the little devils multiply, be very careful or your house will be full of them

Dust Bunny Hide and Seek part 2 (Poetry) - 1/13/2005 6:27:53 AM
This is really sweet and a fun read. My dog always eats a few bunnies and coughs it up.

The Goblin In My Room  (Poetry) - 1/7/2005 10:21:41 AM
hahaha very cute would make a wonderful childrens book nice lightly colored (illustration?) really nice

The Goblin In My Room  (Poetry) - 1/4/2005 6:33:43 AM
What a novel poem and perhaps you did hear a bark.

A Small Kitty (Poetry) - 11/29/2004 10:04:08 PM
How Special and sweet Love makes everything all better and all the bad go away. What a wonderful feeling to give a lost little stray. What a wonderful person to do this. Unconditional Love for ever both ways. Thank You for this warm feeling and smile you brought me all from your very caring heart for the Innocent. God Bless You and Your Family Warmest and Happiest days. Tracey

A Small Kitty (Poetry) - 11/27/2004 11:16:28 PM
This was a very sweet piece that I enjoyed reading. It brought a big smile to my face to be reminded that there are some very generous and caring people out there. It shows a big heart in someone to take a stray off the streets and invite it into your home :) I hope it works out well..for both of you!!

A Small Kitty (Poetry) - 11/27/2004 7:52:42 PM
:) You have a generous heart, Sean. It is a sweet piece. We have seven cats, the last four either adopted us, or we saved them. Each is different in colors, personalities and temperments. We had just found homes for the five kittens from our youngest mother cat (now spayed) when I recieved a call from my 9yr. old daughter at school, begging me to come get this tiny babe who was standing up at the glass doors, meowing for love and attention. I didn't want to, but, kittens rock!! My favorite animals, cats. I feel a very warm sense of a perfect fit for the two of you. :) Erin

A Small Kitty (Poetry) - 11/27/2004 4:35:15 PM
Thanks for the smile. Enjoyed.

Monster Hunt (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 4:27:03 PM
A top notch poem! 10 out of 10.

The Teller of Tales (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 4:23:42 PM
Delightful poetry! Best wishes from kay.

Mad Kitties (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 11:12:31 AM
don't they hate baths!!! but they will be grateful for the lack of fleas, as will you

Mad Kitties (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 9:15:18 AM
Hilarious! LOL

Mad Kitties (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 6:11:17 AM
Ho Ho! Had to do the same to some of mine, and they really do look like drowned rats after a bath. My two mutts didn't mind the bath at all.

Mad Kitties (Poetry) - 10/1/2004 4:31:07 AM
"So I caught the kitty cats, and bathed them one by one. They said bad words in kitty cat, and howled until I was done." This is toooo funny!

Dragon and Unicorn  (Poetry) - 8/25/2004 4:46:27 PM
Absolutely breathtaking, Sean!! Superb cadence, theme, flow and emotion twisting! I want to dive into this world, without thought, only wings of imagination! Imagine, you could make a wonderful short story out of this! Create a character or two, elaborate their dance, and imprint your name into the hoofprints of unicorns!! Love that image: "Watching as the flowers bloomed, out of unicorn hoofprints in the ground." It is one of those mind-exquisite images/lines readers swoon over! Erin :)

Laundry Hampster Yardwork (Poetry) - 8/1/2004 7:52:42 AM
Hi Sean: This one has good imageries and is fun to read. Well-done! Sandie May Angel

Origin of the Dust Bunnies  (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 9:39:46 AM
The Dust Bunnies have returned, bigger, better (and badder and funnier!) than ever! You go, Sean; keep those Dust Bunnies busy! Entertaining and aDORable write; enjoyed much~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn (#1 fan of the Dust Bunnies series). :D Congratz on reaching poem #100; what an accomplishment! May you write 100's more (and then some!!)!! Go on and toot your own horn; you deserve it!! BRAVO!! :D

Lost In Enchanted Wood (Poetry) - 7/26/2004 6:52:14 PM
ths is great children's poetry...my little one's loved it when I read it to them.

Origin of the Dust Bunnies  (Poetry) - 7/26/2004 6:49:48 PM
This was absolutely adorable!!

Dust Bunnies in Spring  (Poetry) - 5/4/2004 10:02:59 AM
oh, yahhhooo!! the dustbunnies have returned; and they are better (and funnier) than ever! wonderfully whimsical write! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Skeleton in the closet (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 10:15:37 PM
I like it!

Complete Exercise in Pain (parts 1, 2 and 3) (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 5:56:14 PM
Very good work!

I Cannot Say Her Name (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 5:50:29 PM
I think we all have met [her] at some time or another. Well expressed.

Skeleton in the closet (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 5:44:17 PM
There is much depth to this and has just the right touch of humor. Well done, thank you.

Skeleton in the closet (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 2:57:00 PM
HA!! We must alll be having a crazy day!!! I love it :)

Skeleton in the closet (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 2:33:31 PM
(((sean))) BBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS LOL this is so bad, it's good! hysterical! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Ogre under the bridge (Poetry) - 1/19/2004 8:38:46 PM
Ah, yes -- this returns me, too, to childhood imaginings of the Troll and the three Billie Goats Gruff -- might have to see if I can respond to this--excellent! Vicky

Ogre under the bridge (Poetry) - 1/19/2004 7:20:56 PM
Fantastic imagery! I once was afraid of a 'troll bridge' we named near my grandfathers house. This brought back those memories from long ago. It is a great write! LOVED IT! Antoinette

Complete Exercise in Pain (parts 1, 2 and 3) (Poetry) - 12/10/2003 10:11:09 AM
Wow this is incredible, I'm truly impressed with the depth of emotion and thought.

Complete Exercise in Pain (parts 1, 2 and 3) (Poetry) - 12/10/2003 8:22:49 AM
Wonderfully done! PLENTY of [PAIN] in this one. -- Jeff

Complete Exercise in Pain (parts 1, 2 and 3) (Poetry) - 12/10/2003 7:02:27 AM
a great write.

Dust Bunny Day (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 1:53:34 PM
(((sean))) o, my favorite dustbunnies!!!!!!!!!!! written by my favorite dustbunny poet--sean! thank you--this is adorable! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Dust Bunny Day (Poetry) - 11/21/2003 10:27:28 AM
da dust bunniez RULE!!! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. super write; this is going into my library so i can enjoy it again and again! :D

Monster Hunt (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:26:34 AM
A wonderful saga for children, reminds me of "Where The Wild Things Are"

Monster Hunt (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 8:22:19 AM
haha i liked this poem very much sean

The Anti Claus (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 9:07:50 PM
ha ha! I'm rolling! this is cute.

The Anti Claus (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 9:57:07 AM
this is cleverly done, and a hilarious write! thanks for the laugh; could use a good one about now....LOL (((HUGS))) enjoyed!~

The Anti Claus (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 4:29:05 PM
Really enjoyed this tale!

The Anti Claus (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 10:55:19 AM
Now this is creative!!

Bailing Hay (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 5:36:12 PM
True, so true! I've heard many military men who put on a lot a weight after leaving the farm.... and being a farm girl myself, I can attest to that... excellent write, and flow to this write... thank you for sharing... stay strong... In Spirit, Bear

Bailing Hay (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 5:27:36 PM
this brings back fond memories of hay bales when i had horses to feed it is a lot of work! you should write one about oats and feed throwing 100 lbs. on your shoulders for a trip to the barn really provides the biceps i like the flow of this and the simple pleasures it presents thanks, donna.

Lost In Enchanted Wood (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 4:36:24 PM
Very nice and quite imaginative.

Lost In Enchanted Wood (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 9:27:46 AM
great rhyme and flow... enjoyable read and I am sure children will love this

Lost In Enchanted Wood (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 9:25:57 AM
(((sean))) i promise to be nice to the witch...and trolls...and goblin folk...and gremlins...and faerie folk...the giant...AND especially the dragon. :) enjoyed this fantasy romp through the woods! well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. although i don't think i'd taste that good to the dragon. :)

An Almost Perfect Day (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 5:21:51 PM
Oh, darn for you! Great last line, brings the rest of the piece into shrper focus! ;)

An Almost Perfect Day (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 5:16:19 PM
Awww! Shucks. Well it's nice for your neighbors. And at least it has to pick up your spirits. Great write. Best regards and get well soon, Leland

The Ghost (Lady In White) (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 9:01:08 AM
Well done, compelling write.

The Ghost (Lady In White) (Poetry) - 9/8/2003 7:33:54 AM
I enjoyed this poem because I know first hand that such things are real, and the questions that feels one head

The Ghost (Lady In White) (Poetry) - 9/7/2003 7:39:41 PM
captures the experience of witnessing a ghost and the ramifications of probing its rationale...

The Ghost (Lady In White) (Poetry) - 9/7/2003 4:59:30 AM
The pic is so well-done. I can really see that lady in the corner; you'll never know what pops into our film when you hold our cameras. Good write indeed! May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

The Ghost (Lady In White) (Poetry) - 9/7/2003 3:31:55 AM
At the risk of sounding quite mad lol....I'll tell you my Sister has a ghost in her house...I've never seen it but my Brother in law, Sister and Nephews all have...I will say this....when I go there I always feel like I'm being watched. :) Great picture and wonderful poem....ty, Dani

Dust Bunny Life (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 9:07:24 PM
Sean, This is absolutely an adorable lil write about a dust bunny's life! <Smiling here> .TEOL.

Dust Bunny Life (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 3:19:50 PM
aDORable addition to the dustbunny series; love those dustbunnies! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.

Dust Bunny Life (Poetry) - 8/24/2003 1:29:34 PM
(((sean))) o, i love the dustbunnies *'course, you already know that LOL* such bright hope for the future, always staying positive well done, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Return of the Dust Bunny Knight (Poetry) - 8/21/2003 5:49:05 AM
Great write, Sean. Made me feel like a kid again! Take care, Jill :)

Return of the Dust Bunny Knight (Poetry) - 8/21/2003 1:42:14 AM
"Return of the Dust Bunny Knight" Beauty, wonders, and message... Soft voice of true poetry to enchant and please hearts of all ages. "Return of the Dust Bunny Knight" is what makes Poetry richer and colorful. I have enjoyed a wonderful poem. I Salute the Author of "Return of the Dust Bunny Knight". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

I Cannot Say Her Name (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:51:35 PM
sean, lovely haunting potrait of a familiar frame of mind a good write john+

I Cannot Say Her Name (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:28:59 PM
beautiful and just call her angel..Floreann

I Cannot Say Her Name (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:25:10 PM
Sean this is a compelling and beautiful write.

I Cannot Say Her Name (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 5:20:51 PM
A haunting poem about someone we've all seen from time to time.

Dust Bunny Dreaming (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 11:32:37 AM
(((sean))) o, send some of those dustbunnies to my bed...they can chase bad dreams away absolutely adorable--you know i love the dustbunnies (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *big grins*

Dust Bunny Dreaming (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 10:28:04 AM
YEEEEEEEEEEHAWWW!!!! love those aDORable little dustbunnies; what a sweet and precious write! i truly enjoyed this 'un, sean; thanks for posting! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. *da dustbunnies RULE!!*

Dust Bunny Dreaming (Poetry) - 8/20/2003 6:10:39 AM
Only one word, "Cute".

Attack Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:12:06 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Oh my this is a dandy lil precious, cute gem of a write and just so much fun to read...bet you had a whoopong good time creating this one!!!! :O) ~Nikki~

Attack Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 8:34:12 PM
This is adorable.......

Attack Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 5:13:48 PM
*reeling from an attack from the dustbunnies* LOLOLOLOL i'm smiling, i'm smiling, because my beloved dustbunnies are back YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY excellent! the dustbunnies rule do you have a book of the dustbunnies? if so, i want to be first in line to buy a copy (((HUGS))) and love, karla. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY :)

Attack Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 5:13:20 PM
YEEEEEAAAAA!!!!! the little dust bunnies are back, and they are better (and cuter) than ever! what an aDORable write; thanks for posting! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

The Turtle (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 3:34:41 PM
Lovely lil gem of a piece...flowed so very well! ~Nikki~

The Turtle (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 3:29:42 PM
excellent write, sean; well done! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.

The Turtle (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 1:22:18 PM
Very cute!I love the diction and melody! Nevine Al Seidi

The Turtle (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 12:10:16 AM
Delightful! i love the anology of life moving slowly, like the turtle. Good job! Bonnie

The Blood Dipped Rose (Exercise in Pain part 2) (Poetry) - 8/17/2003 3:00:15 AM
This one is excellent in emotions and imagery "When love fades and tears do flow, from the pain tearing you apart. It is from the blood dipped rose, and its razor thorns in your heart." PJ

Two Princesses (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 9:08:20 AM
*purrrrrrrr* delightful write! :) ((((HUGS)))) and love, your cat-lovin' friend in texas, karen lynn.

Two Princesses (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 1:37:46 PM
Sean this is one neat tight write, I really enjoyed it! ~Nikki~

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 8:08:06 AM
Wonderful once again cuz...Love you...Lea Ann

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 4:22:25 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL sean...i love your writes!!!! and i love kitties...especially fat kitties* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *almost as much as dustbunnies

The Storm (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 4:20:41 PM
POWERFUL, image loaded write! well done...i could feel the fury of the storm (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

The Key (the Chastity Belt Poem) (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 4:19:27 PM
ohhhh, noooooooooooo he loses the key...sounds like something i'd do (if i were a male that is) LOLOLOLOLOL too funny...excellent verse and rhyming and plot twist (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Ten Little Dust Bunnies (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 4:18:08 PM
LOLOLOLOLOLOL gotta watch them dustbunnies...they multiply excellent verse and rhyming! (((HUGS))) and *i love the dustbunnies* love, karla. :)

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 4:15:47 PM
(((sean))) methinks the goblin queen LIVES in my bedroom...she's always stealin the sheets and covers *oops that's my twin sister, karen* LOL clever, imaginative write...for children of all ages my inner child loves this...and so do i EXCELLENT, well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 1:22:41 PM
Oooo what a delightful imaginative treat!!!! ~Nikki~

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 9:40:07 AM
such a clever little write, sean; enjoyed! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 6:18:26 AM
O, I adore this poem! Creativity beyond measure...sweeping my hat off to you!

Goblin Queen  (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 3:03:23 AM
Sean, this is quite imaginative. That must be who stole the covers last night. I was blaming my wife. I'll have to appologize to her. Enjoyed your poem.

The Stranger (Poetry) - 6/8/2003 11:02:17 AM
Enjoyed very much...excellant and thank you for sharing!

The Stranger (Poetry) - 6/8/2003 9:35:39 AM
This was excellent, riveting,.. Reindeer

The Stranger (Poetry) - 6/8/2003 8:12:18 AM
excellent story/poem... enjoyed it immensely...

Maw Maw (Poetry) - 5/16/2003 9:00:55 PM
There was never a woman or a grandmother greater than this woman...She was kind and sweet always had time for her family and friends...She always had a game to play or a song to sing...She had 13 grandchildren and many more step-grandchildren...I can't even tell you how many great-grandchildren...but each and everyone thought he or she was the only one...How great is that?...I miss her so much every day...My life hasn't been the same without her in it...I miss not being able to share with her my life now that I'm a mother...She is greatly missed by her proginy...Thank you CUZ for this beautiful and sweet tribute to an ANGEL

Maw Maw (Poetry) - 5/9/2003 4:07:49 PM
You speak the truth of our grandmother. And I am blessed to have a deeper understanding and appreciation of this poem. We will love her always.

Maw Maw (Poetry) - 5/8/2003 5:15:48 PM
Reminds me of my grandmother. What wonderful memories you have and how sweetly you keep them. Bravo.

A Small Dust Bunny (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 4:52:03 AM
these are the most adorable set of poems I have ever read nice job on this one also I love the dust bunnies

A Small Dust Bunny (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 12:08:43 AM
Ahhhh, yes. I know what those are. This is cute. I like it muchly. Bravo.

Lizard in the Yard (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 12:48:43 PM
Beautiful discourse on a Lizard. They are fascinating creatures, aern't they. Loved reading this. It took me back to the roots of nature. Bill

Lizard in the Yard (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 10:27:14 AM
You have capture the life of a lizard here in Florida very well, but I see a deeper meaning. For like a pebble tossed into a pond, life's illusions circle outward. The yard, the neighborhood, the city, the state, the country, the continent, the earth, the universe, but always the next circle is unknown to those who are limited to the one.

Lizard in the Yard (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 9:58:15 AM
hahahahaha...really cute. We have chamelians or geckos as they are called here in the desert. Bravo on a fine poem.

Lizard in the Yard (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 9:32:21 AM
You have captured the lizard without confining him--kudos for that. Keep writing.

Lizard in the Yard (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 2:48:46 AM
That is very cute. I really enjoy when you write about nature.

Mans Best Friend (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 9:05:00 AM
adorable! "an angel with a furry face and paws instead of hands". love that first line! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Mans Best Friend (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 6:23:38 AM
this is so sweet and adorable awesoem job on this fantastic poem

Mans Best Friend (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 12:10:21 AM
Thank you for Mans Best Friend. I love it! Bonnie

Mans Best Friend (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 10:09:44 PM
This is so sweet. Thank you.

Mans Best Friend (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 9:52:18 PM
This is beautiful...being an animal lover I commend your poem. They are sometimes our only friends. Z

Goblin Night  (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 9:02:19 AM
Cute....absolutely love horror. Well done.

Goblin Night  (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 5:53:15 AM
"Goblin Night"...Twenty lines of beauty... Five stanzas of creative imagination... A Poem to please Thalia! True Poetry to strike a smile on Phoebus' face and make Erato proud of her mission! I Salute the Author of "Goblin Night". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Goblin Night  (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 12:25:33 AM
excellent poem i knew those footprints wasnt on that sheet when i hung it out...lol steve,

The Gryphon (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 9:43:45 AM
you are surely a very brilliant fantasy writer and are so awesome with children type poetry nice job on this fantastic powem

The Gryphon (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 7:56:19 AM
Excellent! I saw him in my mind and you put him there!

The Gryphon (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 12:30:50 AM
I Salute the Author of "The Gryphon" with the accolades of the eaglets of wisdom. I did enjoy reading this masterpiece titled "The Gryphon". "The Gryphon" says it in full with its message, rhythm and wisdom. It is a collector's treasure. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Knight With No Name  (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 9:58:43 AM
Nicely done. Love these stories.

Knight With No Name  (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 3:42:23 AM
chooser-of-the-slain is one of his names good write john+

Knight With No Name  (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 3:13:37 AM
Funny about one night last week, I dreamt a ghostly knight in black armour, arising from a corner of a room, chased after some people, asking who has killed him. People denied killing him. So he (this spirit) became a woman in black dress, stood at a corner of a street, and a little white terrier dog, loyal kept fetching her something from the house. And inside the house, people were saying how loyal the dog was - even after the woman was dead, he was still loyally fetching her something from the house... I'm sorry, all my dreams are weird. I alwasy dream so weird that sometimes I would make them into stories. Your mentioning about a nameless knight in black armour has made me think of my dream. Perhaps the knight should think about the innocent women who died in the battlefield. Just a thought about linking this with my dream..... Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

The Smallest Dragon (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 8:34:49 AM
This was absolutely delightful. I write about dragons and such and I found this touching. I will be back to read more of your work.

Freedom's Protectors (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 5:19:57 AM
Moving tribute...

The Smallest Dragon (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 5:18:40 AM
Delightful!

The Smallest Dragon (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 10:43:56 PM
This is precious. Absolutely loved the fantasy. Beautiful. ~E

Freedom's Protectors (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:52:19 PM
Nicely done. Blessings. ~E

More Tales Not Quite Right (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 8:13:02 AM
LOL this was absolutely hilariously awesome fantastic job on this

Dreaming of Dragons (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 11:44:24 PM
This is my favorite poem that Sean has written. I have always told him to follow his dreams.

More Tales Not Quite Right (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 11:28:21 PM
enjoyed your write

Chasing a Rainbow (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 11:14:54 AM
Oh can I come too......its there I know it. a magical poem, I loved it.

Enchanted Morning (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 7:09:13 AM
this was so beautiful you ahve described the most enchanting place i want to go there now

Enchanted Morning (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 11:49:09 PM
I enjoyed this poem, very much. Bonnie

Enchanted Morning (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 11:35:12 PM
Beautiful fantasy...or is it? Enjoyed reading.

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 4:14:10 PM
Excellent poem, its about time.

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 4:03:51 PM
Nice pic of my cat,PERVERT! Why don't you exploit your own pussy.

Laundry Hampster Cooking (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 11:21:54 AM
Another humorous one!

Laundry Hampster Cooking (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 9:42:17 AM
this was so cute and adorable i love the hampster he is so neat

Laundry Hampster Cooking (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 7:20:02 AM
This is cute, but gawd, what a diet. [ROFL] ~E

Laundry Hampster Cooking (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 1:43:44 AM
I Salute You, Poet, for posting this magnificent Poem. It is Poetry creating greatness... I found a great creator... I have found a true Poet! "Laundry Hampster Cooking" is a Poem of its own peculiar kind. Just the right recipe to teach how to cook minds. Long Wellfed Healthy Life. Enthusiasm and Blissfulness. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:54:18 AM
The Grease Monkey has a name, and it's none other than your friend and mine -- (drum roll, please)-- Clay!! LOL

An Exercise In Pain (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:46:07 AM
Wow, very well spoken and metered, excellently put, couldn't have said it better myself.

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:24:28 AM
Hahahaha Love it Cats Rule Dogs drool

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 6:50:46 AM
Ode to the Feline!! ty tony

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:36:57 AM
Hilarious... Love that pix--similar to the pix on my poem "Couch Catado"...love those fat cats!

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 1:28:08 AM
A nice, funny piece... love the refrain. Sally Odgers.

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 10:52:41 PM
Cat's rule! Love and peace, Susan

Never Tell the Cat it's Diet Time (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 10:29:52 PM
Hahahahahaha...you are so funny. That is a contented kitty. Enjoyed reading. ~E

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 9:37:17 AM
LOL...too funny! you have some imagination, sean...i applaud your creativity...or are you really really bored? LOL if so, keep on keepin' on...you are great! say hullo to the dustbunnies...i love the dustbunnies...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 9:13:17 AM
funny write, sean! first dust bunnies, then laundry hamsters, and now the grease monkeys! LOL love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 8:24:18 AM
Funny one, and well done too. ~E

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 7:24:34 AM
LOL OH NO that mischeivoius little monkeyLOL this was all too hilarious nice job on this fantastically awesome poem

The Grease Monkey (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 4:50:20 AM
Sean, very good poem and very funny. I always wondered why my car comes back from the garage in worst shape than when I brought it. I'll have to watch for monkey tracks.( lol )

Dust Bunny from Outer Space (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 8:33:08 AM
delightful blend of fantasy & entertainment...

Dust Bunny from Outer Space (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 8:26:33 AM
This was so adorably cute and fantastic it took me through our galaxy and beyond wow you are so much a master poet awesome job on this

Dust Bunny from Outer Space (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 3:09:31 AM
"Dust Bunny From Outer Space" is everything a poem can surpise. This one surpasses the surprises and takes the reader on trip to imaginationland. I Salute You, Master Poet Sean Rasmussen. May you enjoy a long healthy life. My respect and gratitude. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Dust Bunny Knight (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 7:08:27 AM
Sean, You must find a publisher! I want to see this on bookstore shelves... and the bookshelves of my kids :)

Dust Bunny Knight (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 4:57:07 AM
that was so cute and adorable this was wonderfully fantastic awesome job on this

Dust Bunny Knight (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 3:53:41 AM
lol this one is too good and the pic. peg

Dust Bunny Dream (the Balloon) (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 1:50:04 PM
this was so adorable i now really intereasted in your interesting views of child like writings they are so interesting and intriguing this was so sweet and adorable

Laundry Hampster at the Hotel (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 1:47:55 PM
this was hilarious a very cute and humorous write i like that hampster he or she is like Karla Dormans kitty tales

Dust Bunny Dream (the Balloon) (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 1:35:20 PM
I shall look at my dust bunnies completely differently now. Good one. Enjoyed it. ~E

Dust Bunny Dream (the Balloon) (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 1:30:44 PM
dustbunnies!! i love the dustbunnies!! i've missed you, sean, and your writes...thank you for writing this. me, i'll keep my feets on the ground...but this was so whimsical! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Dust Bunny Dream (the Balloon) (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 12:05:25 PM
Adorable indeed. It flew back to its bunny bed, with a fluffy pillow under its head, as the morning light rises for all to see. " Peg "

An Exercise In Pain (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 11:34:13 AM
excellent display of emotions displayed here, sean! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)

Dust Bunny Dream (the Balloon) (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 11:33:24 AM
aDORable write, sean! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Seasons (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 11:27:54 PM
Glad you found it, lovely to read...

Laundry Hampster at the Hotel (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 5:29:44 AM
hahahahahaha......very funny hampster that fellow :D I think I was in that hotel while it (not he or she) was there.

Dreaming of Dragons (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 5:08:12 AM
in some cultures, the dragon symbolizes good fortune...in dreams it can represent the foreboding of evil forces or the consuming power of positive things to come... good write!

Dreaming of Dragons (Poetry) - 1/19/2003 10:27:13 PM
Sean I don't need to dream of dragons, I face enough of them in my awaske state. By the way, WOULD YOU LIKE A SWEET PUSSY? http://www.authorsden.com/visit/mtr.asp?id=44383&loc=Poetry

Dreaming of Dragons (Poetry) - 1/19/2003 7:20:20 PM
Very good!

Dreaming of Dragons (Poetry) - 1/19/2003 5:09:45 PM
Thank goodness dragons are only in our dreams.

Laundry Hampster at the Hotel (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 11:48:06 AM
Very active little hampster! Hope the little sucker get his just due. Bill Murray

Laundry Hampster at the Hotel (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 7:42:43 AM
hehehe, great story.....send him to the tower!

Winter (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 5:19:43 AM
Got a Florida Orange Juice. I love reading about the cold I just hate living in it. Shorts are my winter wardrobe. Nice

Winter (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 5:14:10 AM
This has such incredible images... simply beautiful...

Winter (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 3:05:36 AM
Sounds like a winter wonderland! beautiful!!

Dust Bunny Camping (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 10:14:06 AM
love these dust bunny tales! keep 'em coming! good write with a lot of imagery throughout! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

The Ghost in the Woods (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 12:11:15 PM
i liked the way your poem told a story! good write with much imagery! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((((HUGS)))))) :)

The Ghost in the Woods (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 10:44:33 AM
Very nice. The rhythm reminds me of The Highwayman.

The Ghost in the Woods (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 10:00:31 AM
Sean this sounds like the story of the "Third Strike" Offenders in Calif. state prisons. Those who steal a piece of bread and because of previous crime we lock them up for 50 years and forgot them. All forgotten lost souls. Bill

The Ghost in the Woods (Poetry) - 10/29/2002 2:58:46 AM
One of a haunting essence... I like this... imagery is excellent in it

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 10:24:19 AM
captivating read and a delight to behold! excellent write!!

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 6:32:46 AM
Makes me wonder what the dust bunnies here are up to. Enjoyable write...

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 6:28:16 AM
Love it.....I do the whole thing...the costume the wig the food the scarey music.... Your poem has definately got me in the mood.

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/28/2002 3:02:10 AM
Great imagery! Wonderful read!!!!! Sandie May / Sandie Angel :o)

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/27/2002 10:56:20 PM
Yes captive words spread thoughout with a freedom that lasts all the way through.

Dust Bunny Halloween (Poetry) - 10/27/2002 10:37:42 PM
So wonderful was this one a pure delight..

The Candy Ghost (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 7:48:58 PM
Great kids poem. A couple of spelling errors and a flat last line. Otherwise, I waseating it up.

The Storm (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 1:16:27 PM
"Like a white-blue sword slashing an enemy that never dies." Ominous amidst lightheartedness - I like the balance

Laundry Hampster Strikes Again (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 12:34:05 PM
The more I read these, the more I like. Thanks so much, Vicky

Laundry Hampster Chores (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 12:30:52 PM
Surely this incredible Hampster series must be a tribute to someone, or someones you've loved. What is the Laundrey Hampsters name? I had Bonnie then Clyde, Pretty Boy Floyd and Charlie. Then as an adult Chase.

Laundry Hampster on the Internet (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 12:25:21 PM
This is Really cute! I raised hampsters when I was a kid--thouches my heart. Vicky

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