|
Featured Book
Project Cycology
by Ray Piper
|
 Project Cycology refers to the complete process for executing projects and includes tools, techniques, templates, procedures and management concepts. This book outlines e.. |
|
Gold Member BookAds |
|
|
Recent Reviews for Francis Eaden
|
WEBSPINNER (Book) - 1/24/2009 4:57:24 PM
Side Effect (Book) - 10/16/2005 1:23:52 PM
I don't often find reviews/books detailed here that intrigue me enough to feel compelled to purchase them. This one does. I'm glad to have 'bumped' into you today.
Tami
Side Effect (Book) - 3/28/2003 8:50:58 PM
enjoyed the read
The Garden on the Edge of Time (Short Story) - 7/14/2006 10:24:46 AM
I thought this was a very intriguing story. I did how the human size of Cormac came across in his love for his daughter. The ending was good and I thought Cadron got what he deserved. My only suggestions would be to consider using a POV narration strictly from Cormac's perspective. I think that will heighten the suspense. Also, the sci-fi terms were a bit hard to grasp. I had to read it a couple of times to understand what you were driving. If anything, I might suggest you try to bring it down a bit. Mind you, these are only suggestions, nothing more.
Selkie in Amber (Short Story) - 10/16/2005 1:55:59 PM
This is a wonderful story!
I did struggle with a few things. Most prominent was the reference to owning pets. It feels sorely out of place (show, don't tell). With your ability to tell a story well, I think the reader is able to make his/her own correlation without that reference.
I very much enjoyed this story.
Tami
Selkie in Amber (Short Story) - 9/19/2002 7:46:25 PM
well done
The Garden on the Edge of Time (Short Story) - 9/19/2002 7:45:35 PM
enjoyed the read
The Garden on the Edge of Time (Short Story) - 3/20/2002 8:16:02 PM
Hard science wrapped in a tender love story of a father for his daughter.
Selkie in Amber (Short Story) - 3/19/2002 8:12:42 PM
Great love story wrapped in a beautiful package of Celtic folklore.
Creation (Poetry) - 12/16/2008 9:43:38 AM
amen
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 11:40:08 AM
That is wonderfully profound. Learn how to refuse sex. That is how to find love. Everyone wants a young woman to smile at everyone else, then they scorn her for not being judicious in her choices.
Farewell to a Lost Love (Poetry) - 11/15/2006 7:13:14 PM
...until i too shall die...where in that heaven above I shall once again see the one I have loved.
Farewell to a Lost Love (Poetry) - 6/20/2006 7:54:45 AM
Heartfelt and magnificent.
Farewell to a Lost Love (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 7:08:48 PM
Soul reaching in scope. Thank you for sharing this offering, Francis. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Creation (Poetry) - 12/31/2005 9:54:43 PM
Blessed be is right Francis! Great job!
Creation (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 4:54:53 PM
universally appealing and inspired write ...
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 11/6/2005 10:35:27 AM
What every soul longs for!! wonderful poetry...Sandi
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 10/16/2005 1:32:51 PM
Very nice piece. Excellent descriptives. Good finish.
Tami
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 4:46:37 PM
Good stuff here, man. A sultry and bluesy lament to be sure. Come on, let's have some more of your stuff.
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 12/23/2004 10:18:57 PM
Nice composition.
SG
Night Beach (Poetry) - 12/23/2004 10:13:31 PM
Hello. I liked the composition. I liked reading your poem aloud.
I also play with words (verbs); but you are so different and it sounds 'poetic'.
Please feel free to comment on my page at the Den.
Happy holidays.
SG
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 9/15/2004 11:21:23 AM
You show a lot of wisdom about female-kind!
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 6/20/2004 12:13:53 PM
You really do paint a picture with your words - winter at the resort is a very peaceful and hauntingly beautiful time.
Nicely done.
Hooves
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 8:19:45 PM
"make me hear music"...."and let me know love"....
wow!
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 1/28/2004 7:58:29 PM
Is there a line missing in the next to last stanza? Unfortunately, all too oten, love doesn't work out the way we want it to do.
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 1/24/2004 8:47:18 PM
This is Excellent!
A Lady's Lament (Ginger's Song) (Poetry) - 1/24/2004 7:35:22 PM
Emotive and beautiful verses expressed well!
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 8:59:10 AM
This is excellent writing, Francis! ~~Bonnie Q
Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C.
Associate Editor, Washington
Waltsan Publishing, Texas
Night Beach (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 2:55:38 PM
Yes. I was transported. I read much to find gems like this one.
Odlamn.
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 12:57:18 PM
An amazing poem. It put me there!
Night Beach (Poetry) - 9/5/2003 10:22:28 PM
I like this one too. The quote is good. I think I
will have to read Dover Beach. The ending of your poem is terrific.
January in Cape May, NJ (Poetry) - 9/5/2003 10:19:34 PM
This reminds me of Stephen King for some reason. Did you ever read The Stand?
Very nice job on this one.
|
| |
|
