Recent Reviews for eMPapaCee
HUMAN SACRIFICE (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 8:34:29 AM|
This is bar none, the most beautiful poem about work I've ever encountered. Your word combos are amazing, yet soft. It shows humanity, and an inner peace--so far from the hussle-bussle that usually typifies writings/movies of this nature. Encore, Encore! --Charlie
THE MAKER (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 8:27:32 AM
Wow. I'm clapping my hands out loud. Best line: "The little bird that runs among the crocodile's teeth." Very pinned-down feelings. --Charlie
THE ROAD (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 8:14:46 AM
Beautiful. I can see it all. You take us up there with you, through the endless lines, and through the contours of your mind with vivid reality. It's all good, but you saved the best for last, "In a wheels-up, out-bound rush..."--so concise, so vivid, so true. --Charlie
THE ROAD (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 6:04:43 AM
Well done, and welcome to the Den!
Reading, I feel weary for you. The drudgery of moving through the corporate world weighs heavily in this writing.
You also convey the life-giving anticipation of your return to home--and she who waits for you. Enjoyed!
MIDNIGHT - Manhattan, January (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 7:56:25 PM
Two loves in his life -- "the ebony dome" and "her"; and boy, is he ever going to get it when he gets home... --Charlie
WATCHER FROM THE WILD (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 7:54:31 PM
Amen to Jerry's comments--complete with the tracking. --Charlie
CLIMBING (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 7:53:51 PM
Absolutely beautiful! I love that line, "to see the sunset slowly bend the hills into the shape the earth will take in the moment when time will go to sleep..." Beautiful and brilliant. --Charlie
WATCHER FROM THE WILD (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 2:39:50 PM
Like your style. Like your colorful phrases. So far, so good, I'll track you and see if you maintain the status quo . . . LOL . . . Yep, I like your poetry . . .