Supremacy Of The Moment (Poetry) - 11/12/2007 10:03:14 AM
Louie--incredible fluidity of words. I had to pick them apart from eachother to understand the piece. Walt Whitmanish in the beginning, but then took on different colors--no, different tangents pulled together to create an intricate web of jealous thought. I love your last two lines--the future nagging at you--it's awesome! --Charlie
I May See God (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 8:06:09 PM
Very interesting write --Charlie
When Beauty Be Measured (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 3:21:27 PM
A very moving and lovely love poem indeed.....