Homeless in a House (Poetry) - 2/20/2008 8:04:46 PM
Interesting and compassionate look at a homeless person, simply a human being. (I think it would be better to write "belonged"). Well done.
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 10:42:59 AM
"I was waiting ,
digging wholes (maybe "holes"?) inside pale words kept into bleeding heart"
Enjoyed the read!!
Notes for Tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:54:53 AM
Jselyn M DD
Thank you for your kind comments and let us the world become more lovely tomorrow with beautiful people
Homeless in a House (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:50:35 AM
Thank you Josie, its inspiring
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 8:46:09 AM
Thank you for kind comments- its inspiring
I Was Waiting (Poetry) - 11/22/2007 10:56:11 PM
Intense feeling and imagery. I liket he colors and the presence of painting, an idea so close to that of poetry. (I think you might want to check the word "whole").
Thank you for sharing,