The moving ship (Poetry) - 1/6/2008 6:49:10 PM
greath depth, smooth rhythm, and riveting phrases!
The moving ship (Poetry) - 12/1/2007 9:34:17 PM
Interesting style and imagery.
I really like "Sometimes I stand alone and mourn
The future that was never born. " sums up the narrator's state of mind very well.
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