The Sun Singer (Book) - 7/7/2008 12:54:59 PM
you claim to be a literary instructor....
i couldnt get through the two first lines. chaos of strangled moon??? who managed to strangle moon??? if trees are drenched in sap, they cannot look like gaunt fingers. how the trees seek for a light, if there is moonlight??? do bones smell, or it is flesh on the bones??? what is the weight of eyes (whose eyes?) that crashes bones?????????
my son, as European techer of literarure, i advise you to comply you thinking with logic.
hope it helps.
health and happiness
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