Recent Reviews for Shoma Mittra
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A Bald Tale (Short Story) - 6/7/2007 4:25:57 PM
I read this to my children they had a good laugh! Great writing for western audience thanks
The Flower Girl (Short Story) - 4/21/2007 12:30:21 AM
Hi Shoma- lovely, vivid short story, bringing to life the hardships of street children. I've just joined authors den, shall be reading more of your stories!
The Flower Girl (Short Story) - 11/5/2006 7:22:04 PM
Oh my. This is such a beautiful piece. Sad, yet beautiful. A lovely write Shoma. Blessings, Michelle
Beyond The Forest - Part I (Short Story) - 7/4/2006 6:17:08 AM
Deceptively simple, brilliant story.
The Flower Girl (Short Story) - 7/1/2006 5:18:24 AM
Another wonderful tale, Shoma.
God bless,
Sandie.
A Bald Tale (Short Story) - 7/1/2006 5:11:17 AM
Lol! Very wise indeed!
You are a gem, Shoma!!
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part X (Short Story) - 7/1/2006 4:54:48 AM
Poor Madhavan - hope he'll find atleast a tree with fruits outside. Great write, Shoma. Are you going to have this published, by the way? You should! It's an amazing story!
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - IX (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 9:27:57 AM
Who is this old man? Why did he call Madhavan -Mahajara - does it mean anything?
God bless, Shoma!
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part VII (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 8:41:27 AM
It's interesting how similar our ways are. Another captivating and great write, Shoma.
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part VI (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 8:35:35 AM
Another excellent chapter, Shoma.
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part V (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 8:23:40 AM
Phew - atleast the old man is capable of lending a hand. Now what's in the dark hole? What will Mathavan find? I can hardly wait to get to the next chapter. This would make an amazing movie, Shoma. A really captivating and enchanting tale.
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part IV (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 8:15:19 AM
I'm trying to picture the old man ... clearly one of his kind has never been stuck in the bog before, otherwise he would have known what do to. As sad as it is, it's quite funny, Shoma - picturing the old man just gets me cracking up.
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part III (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 6:55:04 AM
I hope this will go through this time - my server is so slow that it disconnects. Anyway, as I wanted to say earlier - a sad and write, Shoma. So beautifully written! I felt I was running side by side in the rain with Thankamma - and stood by her side as she helped in delivering her grandson. I agree with Tracey, I felt I was observer. Brilliant work, Shoma!
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part II (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 3:03:51 AM
Is it safe to say boys will always be boys. You tell them 'don't go there' they here 'do go there'. Great capticating story, Shoma!
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part I (Short Story) - 6/30/2006 12:55:58 AM
Shoma, just how did I miss this? Excellent story! I can hardly wait to read the chapters to follow.
God bless,
Sandie.
Beyond The Forest - Part III (Short Story) - 4/14/2006 10:57:39 PM
You are a born story teller Shoma! You know how to hold the readers interest! will be back for next part later;-)
Love,
Eileen
Beyond The Forest - Part II (Short Story) - 4/14/2006 10:52:11 PM
You have me hooked Shoma! i'll have to find time to read it all in the next couple of days;-)Excellent story!
Love,
Eileen
Beyond The Forest - Part I (Short Story) - 4/14/2006 10:47:15 PM
Oh my what a great start! All the ingredients for a wondrous tale!
Eileen
Beyond The Forest - Part X (Short Story) - 4/14/2006 10:44:26 PM
Wow this is intriguing Shoma! If I have time I'll backtrack to the other parts. Excellent writing! Thanks for your comment On Abraham/Ibrahim I appreciated what you had to say about hinduism. I have taken some notes on it. I'd be very interested to read more about the Jagganath;-)Thanks again!
Love,
Eileen
Beyond The Forest - Part X (Short Story) - 4/6/2006 3:57:59 PM
Good continuation of a meaningful story...
Beyond The Forest - IX (Short Story) - 2/8/2006 2:09:54 PM
Great story...draws the reader right in.
Beyond The Forest - IX (Short Story) - 2/7/2006 6:22:08 PM
Bravo! I know it takes a lot of time to post a short story on your den, and it is appreciated.
Beyond The Forest - IX (Short Story) - 2/7/2006 8:20:09 AM
~*~ Shoma... very engaging and interesting story, detailed descriptions and filled with spine~tingling adventure! I have only one suggestion. Please slowly and carefully proof~read the story for spelling typos. In several places throughout this latest installment words are garbled or mispelled. I am very happy that your Heart is again dedicated to telling
this story till it's completion! I am enjoying it very much! ~*~
~*~ Shivani ~*~
Beyond The Forest - Part VIII (Short Story) - 2/5/2006 10:06:52 AM
Wonderful continuation of this story.
Beyond The Forest - Part I (Short Story) - 2/2/2006 3:06:51 AM
enjoyed the read
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