Recent Reviews for Marie E Logan
Car Chases & Fake Bologna (Book) - 8/23/2002 12:26:52 PM|
Most interesting as reflections in a youngling life.
Car Chases & Fake Bologna (Book) - 6/13/2002 9:42:31 AM
I have read and reread this book and find it utterly fascinating. It is an insight into the mind of an American youth, but it is not a childish book, nor does it suffer the revisionist flaws of an adult reminiscing about their youth. It is a collection of thoughts written by a young girl with the ability to communicate her feelings. The poetry ranges from silly to passionate and back again (I love "Demon Girl). It is a very good read, but be careful, she will charm you - after all, she is a witch.
Car Chases & Fake Bologna (Book) - 3/28/2002 8:36:25 AM
this book is a beautiful read. the incorporation of "Diedra" and daily happenings into the poetry itself, makes for a smooth easy ride through the writers head. the poems are excellent, as a matter of fact. this little book (nice read time) will forever be among my collection.- steve patterson
Car Chases & Fake Bologna (Book) - 3/28/2002 4:27:07 AM
your poems contain great flow,instant communication,vibrant thought.you have skillfuly portrayed the things you are suppose to.
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Eight (Short Story) - 6/23/2004 6:02:19 AM
I hope you are planning to continue this story. It is very well written.
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Five (Short Story) - 11/25/2002 9:08:50 AM
yes, a quest
coming along nicely
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Five (Short Story) - 11/22/2002 10:32:42 AM
oooo... a competition.... lovely ;-)
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Four (Short Story) - 11/22/2002 9:07:32 AM
i really like how the story is developing and this chapter has some lines in it that i really like, good work! =)
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Four (Short Story) - 11/21/2002 9:54:25 AM
tell me more
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Three (Short Story) - 11/17/2002 3:01:32 AM
not bad at all... the story is developing nicely
Sacred Traditions Ch 1 (Short Story) - 11/17/2002 3:00:26 AM
a very decent beginning.... i want more....
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Three (Short Story) - 11/16/2002 6:37:47 PM
tell me more
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Two (Short Story) - 11/13/2002 1:08:34 PM
glad to see your book has a shower scene
Sacred Traditions Ch 1 (Short Story) - 11/13/2002 12:39:42 PM
makes me want to read chapter 2
Sacred Traditions: Chapter Two (Short Story) - 11/13/2002 5:01:18 AM
i like this chapter more than the first one... very nice work indeed
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Traveling on a Tight Budget (Article) - 6/15/2002 4:46:48 PM
I found this article contained a lot of sound advice for people thinking of travelling any time soon. The links given in the article are very informative and useful (more so if you are American, but hey, I had a browse anyway). A very well written piece which I am sure first time travellers will find very useful.
The Green World - Haiku (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 8:01:07 AM
Which way shall I take the course to my readerís hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeurís wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generationís benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.
The Green World - Haiku (Poetry) - 6/23/2004 5:53:38 AM
I loved this - it is like what I picture in my mind to calm myself down when I am nervous or unhappy.
The Green World - Haiku (Poetry) - 5/22/2004 9:31:08 AM
The Green World - Haiku (Poetry) - 1/10/2003 2:55:30 PM
Lovely images and rhythm, Marie!
The Muse (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 3:30:35 PM
Enjoyed it, Marie- I agree completely- My best writing flows- Like I'm just taking dictation. I wish it came more often, but I think it depends on the mood of the vessel- the writer. Thanks for your good review. Come back and I will, too. Jerry
A Thought (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 12:12:38 PM
Mothis crawl over my heart and flies will crawl over my corpse when I die. Bill
A Thought (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 10:10:41 AM
cool....but be carefull what you say about bunnies
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 1:33:12 PM
It is a day that will never be forgotten.
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 8:56:30 AM
I feel your pain
wisdom teeth - just one of the pleasures of being an adult
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 8:55:02 AM
you speak for all of us
Breathe (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 6:28:40 AM
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/26/2002 7:54:15 PM
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/4/2002 7:19:40 AM
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 8:44:42 PM
Our belief systems are not the same, but I sincerely enjoy your style of writing. I may not agree with everything you "say", but I admire the way you say it! I hope you'll pop in on me now & then, and that you'll post a lot more of your work! Thanks for your comment on "America!"
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 2:50:28 PM
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 2:36:00 PM
sad...but a good write. we all cried, and we don't look forward to the 11th...may we all pause and remember those no longer with us. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 2:30:45 PM
September 4th, 2002 (Poetry) - 9/3/2002 2:29:19 PM
this was a tragedy that didn't need to happen. it will open up our wounds again, but if we trust in jesus, he will most certainly get us through. he did me, and he did it by giving me a gift of writing. "may we NEVER forget!!" love, and (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn.
Life Goes On (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 4:08:02 PM
I totally agree. Life has always been screwed up. Just read a few novels from early 20th century.
Low and Behold (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:37:21 AM
I may be wrong but I think you have learned something from me. Take your time.
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:31:55 AM
I remember this one. I remember I couldn't guess what the poem was about.
I guess you don't get you talant from your Mother
Addiction (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:29:38 AM
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:26:45 AM
Love this one! Very Funny
My Eternal (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:24:25 AM
I like this one a lot
love ya Mom
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:13:08 AM
Hey maybe he will read when he looks at you site. : ) Love Ya, Mom
Red Roses for My Mother (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 8:53:00 AM
You still suprise me. I am so very proud of you. The poem expresses a mother's devotion and unconditional love and the rewards of all of the sacrafices a mother makes without a second thought and that reward is you. I love you! Mom
Life Goes On (Poetry) - 7/26/2002 4:50:06 PM
you are a treat
I love ~tiny, ruthless, little thugs~
Life Goes On (Poetry) - 7/26/2002 3:58:04 PM
well written. well said. good to read you again. steve
Life Goes On (Poetry) - 7/26/2002 2:14:48 PM
Such a vibrant tone from a bleak topic.
Life Goes On (Poetry) - 7/26/2002 7:30:37 AM
Hey Liz I am very impressed with this latest poem. Hits many issues right on the nose. I love you am I am very proud of you MOM
Breathe (Poetry) - 7/16/2002 6:36:25 AM
Add romance to meditation.
Breathe (Poetry) - 7/13/2002 7:57:43 PM
i'm holding my breath ;)
Breathe (Poetry) - 7/13/2002 12:50:43 PM
this actually helped me relax...thanks
Breathe (Poetry) - 7/12/2002 8:31:06 PM
Yes to breathe and center is a beautiful thing we do for oursleves...nice write...
Breathe (Poetry) - 7/12/2002 11:44:21 AM
good truth...thank you
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/8/2002 2:40:43 AM
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 7:50:07 PM
you grew up fast;-) a wise adult no less...fine writing...
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 7:34:39 PM
Great write,... with a lovely message.
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 6:41:56 PM
A wonderful write.
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 6:01:20 PM
Excellent write. Welcome to the fold...as destiny envelops you well. Just remember the child within must survive. :)
Growing Up (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 4:35:17 PM
Hey you! Long time no see. Hope all is well w ith you. <smile> You know, growing up.. owning up to being an adult is a huge step.. But I also believe that we have to keep that inner child alive as well or else adult hood could get down right boring ;)
Its so good to read you again hun.. DO take care.
Love and Light
Fear of the Future (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:41:43 PM
I always find it difficult to rhyme like you have in this poem, admiraly done my dear ;)
By the Seaside (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:40:19 PM
Yeah this also bring back memories for me, I love the imagery and the jaunty rhyme structure :)
Taxes (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:39:11 PM
I have to agree, you are so cute...writing a poem about taxes...lol.... :)
Eating Salad (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:38:06 PM
I love these little inane yet wonderful poems u write :)
Low and Behold (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:28:05 PM
I agree that it is a difficult subject to deal with in a poetic sense but I think it is covered well in this poem :)
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:26:08 PM
Well I am a big fan of the imagery and metaphors in this piece, nicely written :)
Addiction (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:23:47 PM
You really portray the power of addiction well in this piece, as usual, the structure fits well, this has to be one of my favorites :)
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:21:40 PM
lol you are a cute one arent you, I am yet to have to deal with my wisdom teath but a couple of my friends sympathise with u hehe :)
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:18:36 PM
I bet your parents are really proud of you, you certainly do have a way with words, keep up the good poetry :)
My Eternal (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:14:41 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem and I loved the last verse, its so pretty :)
Mousie! (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:08:30 PM
I cant help but laugh at this poem, the form is simple but works effectively with regards to the content of the poem, well done :)
The Muse (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:05:57 PM
I promise not to mention the structure this time.....ok ok I liked the structure (hey I tried!) and I can identify with this poem, excellent :)
Castle of Spirits (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 5:01:25 PM
I really liked this one, I know I keep saying it but I always love the structure of your poems. I especially like the last verse in this piece, very chilling....
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 4:58:48 PM
I once wrote a poem like this and that is my only criticism of the piece, there are too many love poems out there. I agree with the previous reviews, the feelings there, made me sad for you and thats always the sign of a good poem :)
Red Roses for My Mother (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 4:57:05 PM
Wow, another of your poems where I just love the structure. The content is very sweet too, another winner in my books :)
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 4:48:51 PM
I love the rythem and rhyme of this poem, it made me smile, an interesting concept and also a well written one. I especially love the second verse :)
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 1:53:09 PM
Amazing. Excellent rhyme and touchingly realistic!
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 1:48:08 PM
Keen thoughts and so true and honest!
The Muse (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 1:45:37 PM
The Muse (Poetry) - 6/4/2002 10:21:01 AM
the relationship is more parasitic than symbiotic
really gives the sense of the author as the tool rather than the creator
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/31/2002 1:40:54 PM
has a good beat
easy to dance to
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/31/2002 10:12:42 AM
You are a lovely poetess.you can place your words so properly, that one is caught to take with the sign & symtoms of your poems......
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/30/2002 3:26:04 PM
love it. but you know i love silly. glad you're back. steve
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/30/2002 12:59:38 PM
mmmmchocolate tofu. now there's a thought :o) nice poem.
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/30/2002 10:07:47 AM
But it is its silliness that makes it a loveable poem.
Veggie Boy in Love (Poetry) - 5/30/2002 8:03:04 AM
Very cute Makes me wish I was tofu.
I love being gooey or is that goofy
Addiction (Poetry) - 5/20/2002 2:04:34 PM
that was an awesome poem i love your writing
Red Roses for My Mother (Poetry) - 5/15/2002 7:54:05 AM
Wonderful tribute to your Mom and all 'Mothers'. Thank you for a great read.
Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
Red Roses for My Mother (Poetry) - 5/14/2002 12:13:35 PM
Beautiful tribute to your mother--great expression of love!
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 5/10/2002 11:08:37 AM
Once again an amazing poem. The rhythm is great and sounds perfect
Addiction (Poetry) - 5/10/2002 11:05:26 AM
Wow, this poem is amazing! You've got talant that's for sure.
Red Roses for My Mother (Poetry) - 5/10/2002 11:03:00 AM
Awesome poem, I like your style of writing.
My Eternal (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 3:18:36 PM
Ahhhhh. The "Epiphany"...great time in life.
Good write. ~E
Mousie! (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 3:17:14 PM
LIke the form and content. Very good. ~E
Mousie! (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 1:18:55 PM
Enjoyed this--but can't abide the creatures, either!
Mousie! (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 1:10:45 PM
I'm with your mom...although, I still be running down the street, and I'd never touch kitty again! Cute write. <shivering>
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/22/2002 9:21:15 PM
Tracey comment had me laughing because my muse wakes me up, so I understand how she feels. This was a good write about writers block.
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 4/22/2002 9:16:22 AM
The event has put us together in an unending pain with out any demarcation. we shear your sorrows,grief & loss of innocent human being.we should have to strive & join together for the betterment of this world.
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/22/2002 8:43:26 AM
vocal & optimistic voice advancing truely through the core of my heart.it hold you in very high esteem.
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 9:16:14 PM
enjoyed reading poem...
Addiction (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 8:10:34 PM
Though I know that I must sleep
Your poetry I keep
you remind me of another great poet...ME!
Eating Salad (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 8:08:04 PM
I just had to read a poem about eating salad! But you kept me in suspense about the dressing! I hope it was Ranch or Bleu Cheese, they're my favorite. Sometimes I feel that life itself is essentially a salad. And I often feel like a misunderstood crouton!
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 8:05:53 PM
Love's like that, sure it is. The poem sadddened me though, for your fear of acting on love so that it shall always be unrequited. Quelle dommage
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 8:01:43 PM
I'd rather walk without shoes
than lose my muse
I hear your words
they sing the blues
Now I'm off to snooze
One must choose
I choose to confuse
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 5:17:05 PM
Stay, dont quit: what an invaluable truth!
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 10:06:43 AM
Great write Marie!
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 8:32:11 AM
Oooo, I know this ;) Very good Marie.
My Eternal (Poetry) - 4/19/2002 7:58:15 AM
I enjoyed this one.. maybe someone could write one how to shut up a muse... mine can be relentless, nag nag nag...
Low and Behold (Poetry) - 4/12/2002 6:03:45 AM
You are master of skill.You portray your thoughts very strongly.you are the only genuine & gifted poet of our generation.
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 4/12/2002 5:41:52 AM
Brilliant images.poem goes deep into the thought.Leaving one to think and dip again & again.
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 4/9/2002 10:59:15 PM
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 4/9/2002 3:56:56 PM
Hahaha this was charming, I have a friend who loves to write like this, I must send her here. Floria
Fear of the Future (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 6:32:14 PM
Very good insight. Just live, follow the path, it'll lead you. Wow, look who's talking. hee hee
Brightest Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 4/8/2002 6:29:54 PM
A great description of those damned wisdom teeth that do go owie. Blessings my friend.
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 4/7/2002 6:06:49 AM
poem expresses deeply the search our soul is making since its inception.But the Love,human being seek extensively, has manned cleverly to hide himself beyond human reach.
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 4/7/2002 5:47:01 AM
Beautyful depiction has been portrayed to further the idea of inner world.
Teeth Go Owie (Poetry) - 4/1/2002 3:08:44 PM
Too many "wie"s in this one. It gets in the way of the poem.
I can see that you still have the funny code in your poem. I really don't quite know what it is, perhaps it's only my system that reads out the codes?????
Sandie Angel :o)
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 9:01:51 PM
Bravo! Here's to your parents and to a lovely young lady who has such a gift with words. (and more)
Alan & Janet
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 10:04:39 AM
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 8:11:59 AM
Well Said. Well written. Rythmn & Ryhme - good poem,-steve
Addiction (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 5:00:20 AM
Eloquently expressed.it picks going into the deep variation.nice to read this poem.
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/28/2002 4:36:13 AM
poem expresses well through the mind.it captures our thought.wel done Marie.
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/27/2002 8:04:41 PM
i have chills; the words, rhythm, tone, style and message sing so clear in this poem. i want to read it again...the verses asking questions remind me of how life reveals itself to us as we live it. looked at the poem as a shape or geometric figure. it struck me as looking like a person. i really enjoyed the poem. vicki
What My Parents Never Taught (Poetry) - 3/27/2002 7:03:11 PM
Your parents must be proud. The good news is that more parents are now teaching the things your parents taught you. loved this poem.
Addiction (Poetry) - 3/27/2002 2:53:51 AM
there are so many different forms of addiction ... you showed it well
Addiction (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 6:36:15 PM
I am addicted to poetry and there ain't no cure. Hun this is poetry from the gut!! I LOVE it!!! Sandi
Addiction (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 11:52:49 AM
marie, i'm an ex addict, i made a career of addiction when i was younger and i found the hardest thing to give up was the excuse being addicted gave me for everyhting i wanted to do. does that make sense. maybe not, addiction is different for each person. its a hole you can crawl out of though. i did.
Addiction (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 11:27:05 AM
addiction is powerful....good luck
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/26/2002 8:57:27 AM
Superb symbolism in this one!
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 6:17:06 PM
This is fantastic! We will never know when, where, what and who can inspire us. Sometimes, our inspirations come from the strangest place.
Sandie Angel :o)
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 6:16:46 PM
look through the portal and see the sea of life...
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 11:01:30 AM
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 10:48:57 AM
great write and great imagery
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 9:45:28 AM
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 9:03:24 AM
have to agree with janet about the metaphor. great job. if ya' hadn't explained i coulda' gone a lot of directions. but, now I See. Great Write-steve
The Muse (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 7:57:06 AM
My muse usually arrives during a bit of mania, reading a lot of Anne Sexton or coming from the cemetery where I take a lot of photos. People think I'm nuts, I don't care though.
Brightest Blessings, Janet
Sorceress of Images (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 7:48:42 AM
Great use of a metaphor. It makes me think of Jim Croche's 'Time in a Bottle' Really very good.
Taxes (Poetry) - 3/25/2002 7:14:17 AM
You're so cute. =P
By the Seaside (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 6:36:21 PM
Brings me some of my own sweet memories of summers by the shore. Thanks for stopping by to review my work... and for the link to poetry.com!
Low and Behold (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 10:57:00 AM
a difficult subject to deal in a poem.
Low and Behold (Poetry) - 3/23/2002 9:09:43 AM
Marriage can be a huge wake up call! Or it could be the greatest gift of all times...
Blue eyed fish...
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 1:52:57 PM
excellent and powerful
By the Seaside (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 1:23:49 PM
I love your ability to combine the esoteric with the mundane -- the metaphysical with the physical -- the simple with the complex. That's a combination of talent and skill. I'm grateful I took the time to read. Good write!
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 12:29:41 PM
The poem is beautifully written. With your last stanza, may our gods watch over us so this madness does end soon. Well done!
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/22/2002 10:32:39 AM
Loved this hun...
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/21/2002 5:23:04 PM
Excellent!! So powerful and so full of truth..I still cry today, especially when I look at "life" the way it has gone on, forgotten already..so short the memory of some. I do also however see some change for the better, some have not forgotten..What's really important in life.. I pray the war is over soon also..It is not the answer..
I would be honored if you would allow me to publish you with this work, on one of my web sites
Here is the address you can take a look
"Hero's & Angels"
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/21/2002 2:16:32 PM
This is a powerful poem, it is very well expressed!
September 18th, 2001 (Poetry) - 3/21/2002 12:25:53 PM
excellent write. rythmn & ryhme. and meaning of your message comes through loud & clear for those who have "ears". good job!
Taxes (Poetry) - 3/20/2002 12:40:55 PM
Marie- nice little write. i like it. now you're beginnin' to think like me. whatever comes to mind, make it a ryhme.
By the Seaside (Poetry) - 3/19/2002 12:07:18 PM
your desire to experience this firsthand, rather than out the car window, was palpable ... i could taste the sandy grit that would have inevitably crept into the salami sandwiches
By the Seaside (Poetry) - 3/19/2002 11:54:35 AM
Marie- excellent write. like the rythmn & ryhme. i live on the coast, south texas.
unfortunately we only get heat humidity and wind. you took me someplace i'd like to go.
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 3/17/2002 9:50:40 AM
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I'm In Love (Poetry) - 3/16/2002 11:47:14 PM
Castle of Spirits (Poetry) - 3/16/2002 10:38:34 AM
great write. like the rythm & ryhme. short & sweet, just my kind.-steve
I'm In Love (Poetry) - 3/16/2002 10:36:01 AM
love it. just my style. good rythmn, good rymhe. great expression of feelings. like it too 'cause it ain't too prosey. - steve