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Twas the Night Before Christmas (Poetry) - 12/25/2007 1:28:21 PM|
BEAUTUFIL Sharon, JSUT BEAUTIFUL!
Twas the Night Before Christmas (Poetry) - 12/23/2007 10:48:37 AM
hmm, very well said in all your words. i am sure your children loved you reading this to them. and no you did not step on the original at all. i read that as if it was something i wrote for my own children when they were young. however, wish you and your family a wonderful holiday season and never let your thoughts miss the paper for they are our precious gift we give each other.
Twas the Night Before Christmas (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 9:35:07 PM
Dr. Penelope E Amundsen,
Thankyou for your comment Dr. Penelope E Amundsen but I must correct your belief that this was a valiant effort to re-interpret the original version with my take on it. That was not my intentions and can't be further from the truth. This was a challenge I entered through the Starlitecafe which we were to take this phrase "Twas the Night Before Christmas" and inocrporate it into our own poem. This poem was written with my Children in mind and was drawn from personal expeiences not from the actual version of "Twas the Night Before Christmas" Contrary to what you thought by this write, this has nothing what so ever to do with the actual version and is not any different than a movie or song for example in which two very different movies or songs have the identical titles yet are two very different stories to be told. I am sorry you saw this as "little to be desired" without the facts behind the write first and foremost. Merry Christmas and have a Safe and Happy Holiday Season!
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/17/2007 6:01:12 AM
You express feelings from you soul. Good for you. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/16/2007 6:02:52 PM
Beautiful romantic write. Welcome to the AD family
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 8:14:38 PM
What a nice work of thought...it shows the love between two as they begin their understanding of each other...
nice...and hope you have a great experience here at AD...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 10:36:04 AM
Welcome to AD, you're among friends, here. :)
I love the rhyming, the meter, perfect poetry. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 9:20:32 AM
ah, a kindred write i must say. well versed and with real meaning. many branches emit from your lines to allow the reader to go deeper between. well done and welcome to AD.
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/15/2007 5:12:48 AM
Lovingly tended is this patch of love needing a little nourishment in order to grow . . . Caution: Men who say their hearts have been broken by all the women they have been intimate with usually have a minor-to-major defect themselves . . . I speak from personally knowledge here . . . Welcome to AD, I hope you won't take my caution the wrong way, it is just some qualified advice . . .
Give Us a Chance (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 10:44:51 PM
Beautiful, My Dear. BEAUTIFUL!