Recent Reviews for Ebony N Mason
Fragments of Regret (Short Story) - 3/12/2004 11:36:19 AM|
good start, armonii, but you need to work on your spelling and punctuation. still, not a bad story! would like to read more of your work! (i am not really critical of people's works, but you especially have to work some more on your punctuation.)
(((HUGS))) and love, a new texas friend, karen lynn. :D
Girl 2 Women (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 8:33:13 AM
And only the truth sets you free. Free to be free indeed. Now hold your head high, and press on. You are still beautiful, and God will send you true love when the time is right. But this time Depend more on God and not on man and what you long for will be reality.
Thanks for sharing!
Stuck in Yesterday (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 8:27:48 AM
You had me hooked all the way through...I use to have a saying that helped me during those bleak times and it went like this 'this is going to be the only Tuesday I get this week, I'm gonna make the best of it.'
Thanks for writing,
Stuck in Yesterday (Poetry) - 4/24/2007 8:22:38 AM
Captured is all I can say about this wonderful work! You said exactly what I feel on many occasions. "Sometimes I can't tell whether or not I'm dreaming, I'm captured in a moment, a space, a place, captured in time. No forward, no backwards, just stillness. Will it end? Do I want it to end?
Thanks for sharing and reminding me to say good-bye to yesterday. Maybe now I can embrace today.
Ignorance is not bliss (Poetry) - 12/23/2006 10:22:59 AM
No doubt about it: cultivating knowledge of Self, and wisdom in regard to life in general, is one of the greatest gifts one can give to oneself. Beautiful poem.
Depth Of A Spiritual Connect (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 2:49:45 PM
Wonderfully expressive! I enjoyed!
I BE (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 2:47:35 PM
Hello you! Good poem!
Healing Storm (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 2:44:57 PM
Wonderful poetry, Ebony!
Healing Storm (Poetry) - 9/24/2006 2:47:17 PM
A beautiful prayer from the soul presented as very fine poetry. Thank you for sharing it.
Healing Storm (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 11:18:10 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read today.
Why I love you so..... (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 7:56:59 AM
Beautiful affirmations of love spent.
Healing Storm (Poetry) - 9/22/2006 7:56:24 AM
This one offes so many spiritual needs within your lines I enjoyed reading your work.
Depth Of A Spiritual Connect (Poetry) - 9/13/2006 5:35:20 AM
Fantastic poem of love and passion
Camouflage (Poetry) - 9/13/2006 4:43:23 AM
Interesting description of love. Nicely done!
Depth Of A Spiritual Connect (Poetry) - 9/13/2006 3:34:48 AM
This is truly beautiful. A spiritual connection is the ultimate. People pay for a physical connection all of the time, but no amount of money will ever buy what you already have with this person. God be with you.
Battle (Poetry) - 10/5/2005 4:35:55 PM
Not so much a battle as a race, really. Finding 'the one' before the finish line. Good luck.
Battle (Poetry) - 10/5/2005 4:20:12 PM
Funny we all desire this. Just when we think we have her. Suddenly!!!!!
Death=Life (Poetry) - 8/26/2005 6:31:54 AM
That is why out spirit must leave our shells when we die...
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Harmony (Poetry) - 2/26/2005 4:59:28 PM
a wonderful utopian perspective ...
Harmony (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 7:45:47 PM
Well now this is one powerful poem and it would be hard to top it.
Camouflage (Poetry) - 12/6/2004 2:45:35 PM
Camouflage (Poetry) - 12/6/2004 12:56:40 PM
Fantastic write! You have discovered a wise truth! the last two lines excellent! Great attitude, in a sage poem!
Senses (Poetry) - 10/18/2004 9:05:34 AM
The Storm (Poetry) - 7/16/2004 12:44:05 PM
Ok I have always said to others the following: No matter how bad the storm or rain is just focus hard enough and you shall see a bright sunshine beyond the storm. Must people at one time have probably been right in the middle of a similar storm in their life.
The Storm (Poetry) - 7/13/2004 12:18:38 AM
luv the tone and flow to this poem ...
Invisible Pain (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 10:51:39 AM
So heartbreaking, a powerful, profound piece! Well done, Armoni!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Invisible Pain (Poetry) - 7/12/2004 10:19:27 AM
words can scar the soul so deep--i know
an amazing, profoundly written piece--thank you
i'm still living with the aftermath, but i will win, because i write
YOU continue to write--it will help
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Entwined (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 11:49:00 AM
great writing, armonii! enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
The Search (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 11:37:52 AM
very good write, armonii! captures the very essence of how it is to be depressed! (((HUGS)))
Entwined (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 11:38:32 PM
This is easy to relate to. Nice job.
Destiny (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 6:45:31 PM
Very inspirational Armoni and welcome to the den...
check your message board..I am leaving you a message..
Shoulda Coulda Woulda (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 6:42:43 PM
A lot of regrets...and it is always too
late to reverse the action...good write..
Escape (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 6:36:58 PM
The last line says it all. Nice job!
Shoulda Coulda Woulda (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 6:35:53 PM
Very creative. Great message. Nice job!
I BE (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 5:19:52 PM
a strong write
Escape (Poetry) - 3/9/2004 6:38:09 AM
I felt the pain in this one too.
Escape (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 10:52:41 PM
Escape is the best thing to do because carrying the past only brings you down- writing has always helped em escape. This was great, I could really feel the depth of your pain.
Miss Thang (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 7:20:18 PM
Very well done.
Miss Thang (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 5:12:14 PM
That....is the looooooooonget sentence I have ever read. Well done. [smiles]
SHINE (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 9:22:30 PM
sounds done to me ;)
SHINE (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 7:48:39 PM
Yes!!!!! This was EXCELLENT indeed!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
SHINE (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 3:31:47 PM
Nicely done, big beautiful woman. Bravo.
SHINE (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 2:01:20 PM
from what i read in this write, you sound like a normal woman! we ain't all barbie dolls...THANK GOD...all them naaasty bones stickin' out...lookin' like they're dyin' of malnutrition...some of us get to hide behind some extra padding! some of us get to be large and in charge! God don't make no junk, girl...believe it. powerful cry from the heart...you must got a big un to fill your BBW self! :) ((((HUGS)))) and love from another BBW...karla. :)
love of eby (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 12:13:04 PM
I agree with Lady A - Yes, this is beautiful!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
love of eby (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 12:03:23 PM
such a beautiful oath
Girl 2 Women (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 10:14:12 PM
This is very good!
Girl 2 Women (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 4:03:45 PM
Youth is wasted on the young.
Go girl. This was good.
Life is.... (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 3:49:22 PM
Life is.... (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 11:25:18 AM
Life is.... (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 11:09:08 AM
This is more than 'sometimes' good.
Life is.... (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 11:04:21 AM
Rebirth (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 12:44:02 PM
Rebirth (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 11:47:59 AM
The Assembly (Poetry) - 1/11/2003 1:08:08 PM
Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
Terry A O'Neal
The Assembly (Poetry) - 9/5/2002 5:56:24 AM
A great piece.Very descriptive and free flowing.Look forward to seeing more of your work.
The Search (Poetry) - 8/25/2002 10:08:19 AM
A remarkable poem.Keep writing.Look forward to reading more of your work.
The Assembly (Poetry) - 5/16/2002 7:37:21 PM
I like this, the flow and the message. Thanks.
The Assembly (Poetry) - 5/16/2002 5:14:09 PM
"Fearfully and wonderfully made..."
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write!
The Search (Poetry) - 3/30/2002 12:33:22 PM
Great evocative piece, Ebony.
The Search (Poetry) - 3/29/2002 4:36:46 AM
Beautiful piece...straight from the heart..