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Recent Reviews for Charles U. Onyewuchi
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A god without a paradise (Article) - 12/14/2008 5:56:30 PM
Profound thoughts well expressed. I too am a God without paradise and glad to find a kindred spirit. All the best to you. Malcolm Watts
Pride in Eden(the man sci-fi) (Poetry) - 12/30/2008 6:17:58 PM
To justify the Garden of Eden is such a passionate way.....
Be always safe,
Karen
HEARTBREAK REPORT (Poetry) - 12/14/2008 2:01:27 AM
There is a lot of Soul's paintings, wise ponderings in poetic excellence, and philosophic essence through the lines of "HEARTBREAK REPORT".
A Poet I meet here, and hope that this Poet will always listen to Mother Poet's sublime creative voice.
A revision of line eight of "Ghost on a wall" will give it more glow; and a little change of its closing lines:
"Though regardless of legend in fall
at end, all will be nothing but a ghost on a wall."
I read as:
>>>>> "Though regardless of legend in fall at end,
>>>>> all will be nothing, but a ghost on a wall."
May You enjoy a long healthy creative life through a blissful living.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
3rd Rock Valley (Earth Poem) (Poetry) - 6/26/2008 6:23:08 PM
Wonderful twists and bends, strewn with flowers verbage intense, nice to know you, thank you, and Bless you! Jasmin Horst
3rd Rock Valley (Earth Poem) (Poetry) - 1/18/2008 6:22:42 PM
An intriguing composition... "3rd Rock Valley (Earth Poem)" strikes imagination.
I salute You, Poet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Idles of March (Poetry) - 1/18/2008 6:17:34 PM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Idles of March".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Idles of March (Poetry) - 1/18/2008 4:33:30 PM
great poem!
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