Aftermaths (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 4:52:19 PM
I love your beautiful metaphors, very picturesque, you say much in repetition like prayer beads, great poem! Bless you! Jasmin Horst
Aftermaths (Poetry) - 1/7/2008 8:57:27 PM
Interesting repetition of images that each time bring new elements into the poem.
Dreamlike atmosphere, but with real and symbolic pain.
This is my impression,