Bloody Moon (Poetry) - 11/1/2008 5:02:01 PM
Yours is a strong original voice...all I have to do is read, "To dance the simple jig of physics" to see the quality of the writing. But the poem is much more than one good line or two - "Your brothers mimic you in their security" is simple excellent - it is as a whole compelling and forceful and very worthwhile. Fine writing. Dafydd, welcome to AuthorsDen.
My best to you
Bloody Moon (Poetry) - 11/1/2008 7:15:21 AM
Interesting indeed.....have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss