the hunted (Short Story) - 3/15/2012 1:20:22 PM
Fine, very effective story telling. There is a special quality to this, a meaning that goes far beyond the subject.
the hunted (Short Story) - 8/1/2008 9:18:19 PM
Dear J.S YU
As I read this little story, it had me visualizing, not a mouse but a human. Some poor being hunted by a prehistoric bird of prey. The thump, thump of it's wings made it sound much larger than a falcon.
As you posted this in February of this year and I see that I am the first to comment, please do not feel discouraged by the lack of response. It happens to most of us until we become recognized for our talent. Please keep writing for the more you write the better you will become. May I suggest some short poems?
My respects to you.