Recent Reviews for Jacqueline VanZandbeek
The Darkest Day (Short Story) - 6/16/2003 12:50:47 AM|
Jackie write more I need to see where you go.
The Darkest Day (Short Story) - 5/23/2003 11:42:41 AM
I'm in total agreement...this could go anywhere. It'll be exciting to see where you take it.
The Darkest Day (Short Story) - 5/6/2003 5:30:54 PM
There are a couple of different directions that you can take... I would be interested to see where this goes. Don't abandon this! Good start! Now TAKE it somewhere!
The Darkest Day (Short Story) - 4/9/2003 10:44:36 AM
Keep it going, sounds real interesting.
The Darkest Day (Short Story) - 3/31/2003 2:44:17 PM
good beginning, jacqueline! looking forward to more! :) (((HUGS)))
Going Home (Short Story) - 3/29/2003 3:01:20 PM
Very good Jackie. Reminds me of what I went thru too. Maybe there is a reason for it.
Going Home (Short Story) - 3/26/2003 3:22:39 PM
Going Home (Short Story) - 3/25/2003 12:49:20 PM
Alas how the past so often bitter sweet continues to roam and amble about our heart and soul indeed. good piece, reveal, paints and pricks!
Rodney Evan Bohen
Going Home (Short Story) - 7/4/2002 12:27:17 PM
That is very touching. It moved me. You are a wonderful writer. Keep it up. We all love you, Jackie. Glendene, Jim, Jennee & Katie xoxoxoxox
Going Home (Short Story) - 6/24/2002 8:42:09 AM
really good story Jackie, keep it up you are good..
Going Home (Short Story) - 5/1/2002 2:37:54 PM
I am really looking forward to reading more of your stories. Keep it up.
Priceless (Article) - 5/18/2003 5:05:18 PM
I must admit I have done this at least once (lol). But the last time I did it I learned the lesson and had several sets of keys made. (lol)
Priceless (Article) - 5/7/2003 3:43:39 PM
This article reminds me of Hints from Heloise. I locked my keys in my car outside a church in college and my parents refused to help me because I had a bad attitude. Nowadays, my husband has the spare keys for the house, car, etc. and I have spare keys for his car, the house. There are also locksmiths who will help you with lockouts.
I think many folks can relate to this. Great hint.
Priceless (Article) - 5/7/2003 2:03:02 PM
I saw your kind remarks at my site and hopped over to yours--I'm glad I did. This is a priceless moment you describe--and oh, how I can relate.
I think writers are always two places at once, anyway. My daughters say I have poetry seizures, and I'd have to agree with them. I have been known to get in the shower with my shoes on, and I have locked myself out of my house on many occasions.
You are not alone! And there was a bit of poetic justice with the neighbor!--kayday
Priceless (Article) - 5/7/2003 8:20:02 AM
YES!!!! We are not alone, after all... smile. Thank you, Jacqueline, thank you.
Long Road Not Taken - Part One (Article) - 5/4/2003 10:35:38 AM
Hi Jacqueline - I completely agree with your thoughts. Parents are not held accountable enough. At least the best of us can learn from their mistakes. Here's a quote from one of my favourite writers...Anais Nin. Oh, of all gifts,let not the power of dreaming be stolen from you, and you may conquer all things. The power to lift oneself above one's surroundings and to imagine, to create, to visualise, to invent , is a charm against despair and discontent and it can disarm the greatest sorrow. (1922)
Long Road Not Taken - Part One (Article) - 3/25/2003 12:55:59 PM
Alas, you have spoken my heart once more! Indeed how can you claim to know me, when I am still learning myself? Yes, I know well the healing standing tall upon parchment, due to ink and tears smeared togeather,I remain grateful for the ink, and consider the parchment my friend as well, and yet, the tears that they invoke when they meet and kiss in honesty upon parchment, my, my.
Rodney Evan Bohen
Long Road Not Taken - Part One (Article) - 7/16/2002 12:40:47 PM
Jackie, I love reading your stuff and it makes me know that I can talk to you no matter what. with love L.K.
Long Road Not Taken - Part One (Article) - 7/11/2002 9:57:39 PM
wow, this is so me...I can't get over how you and I are two different people yet we are so much the same....
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 9:14:58 AM
Quite nice poem. Beautiful and excellent.
I love Goethe, too. Understand little German.
Greetings from Atlanta.
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 11:05:07 AM
Beautifully written, an inspiring uplifting write. A true receiving of words so true, written in faith. Your eyes are heavenly bound...
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 4:13:25 PM
It's been my impression that rage always "means" something, usually something
negative. This is, therefore, rather confusing in some regards. However, there's]
a modicum of truth in it, for sure. Hopefully, it is not autobiographical.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 8/22/2003 6:30:56 PM
Good words, good write!
Rodney Evan Bohen
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 5:51:34 PM
An wonderful, powerful write. eXcellent.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 7/23/2003 11:48:49 AM
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 12:37:14 PM
Excellent! Well crafted with a beautiful flow.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 5/26/2003 11:29:10 AM
I loved this."Fire seeping from ducts like tears, a searing madness, branding the soul" Powerful potent write
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 5:02:55 PM
Love & Blessings,
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 5/17/2003 12:38:33 PM
Beautiful! Chilling and goose-bump inspiring. Well done, Jacquie!
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 11:41:32 AM
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 5/4/2003 6:49:27 PM
You do write some really good verse.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 3:27:30 PM
I agree I agree!!!
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/29/2003 7:17:59 PM
Terrific write !
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/29/2003 11:18:37 AM
"Rage that means nothing
will soon go away"...good write, Jacqueline!
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 9:58:58 PM
This was great..I could feel this so well,
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 5:28:05 PM
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 5:18:10 PM
Interesting...I sense the underlying torment in this poem. This is solid from beginning to end, great job.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 12:36:17 PM
Ooooh. This is damn good! I liked anf related. Teresa
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 10:48:46 AM
Hi Jacqueline, well written, powerful verse.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 9:01:38 AM
wonderfully done verses.
A Caged Soul (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 12:24:44 AM
Very true, mature write...
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/18/2003 10:20:58 AM
I feel the longing in this. Fantastic job. Teresa
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 7:30:02 PM
so true, lovely write.
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 5:58:15 PM
So right you are Jacqueline and wonderfully written
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 2:05:35 PM
very inspiring and meaningful. great job!
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 11:13:19 AM
Inspirational, and so true!
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 5:10:07 PM
Beautiful testament to your faith, just a wonderful poem!
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 2:57:08 PM
Amen to that friend!
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 2:32:21 PM
A beautiful composition bearing a message of hope to fill the asking soul.
"A Longing Soul" brings light to the mind, nourishment for the soul and energy to the heart.
Praised and blest be the Author of "A Longing Soul".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 2:20:47 PM
A uplifting write!!!
Ya!! Nothing is impossible with God!!
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 11:03:40 PM
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 3:34:46 PM
So true. Nothing is impossible with God. This is truly inspirational. Marie
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 3:12:47 PM
This is so beautiful a soulful write.
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 1:54:52 PM
Dear Jacqueline, This was lovely, so uplifting. Yes our creator is always there for the asking.
A Longing Soul (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 1:51:22 PM
Lovely, and amen. I work with all faiths, so I like your use of a Higher Power. Blessings.