A day to remember /A year and a half later (Poetry) - 2/11/2010 3:06:20 PM
It is a good poem and rhymes quite well, enjoyed reading it too.
You have done an exceptional job with this one. Keep writing more.
You need to add you great grandchildren to your profile too soon.
A DAY TO REMEMBER (Poetry) - 6/15/2008 6:15:39 PM
This poem touched my heart. Its really hard to see someone we love dying. Its one of the hardest things we'll ever have to do. I think you did the right thing in telling him to go toward the light. Sometimes they need to hear that so they can move on to Gods kingdom. Thankyou for sharing this with us. Writing helps to ease the pain and opens our hearts ..God Bless!....M ,, WELCOME TO THE DEN!