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Recent Reviews for Jerry L Abrahamson

Waiting for the Axe to Fall (Poetry) - 2/25/2009 2:14:50 AM
Very good poem,take care Edwin

Taking Advantage of You (Poetry) - 2/23/2009 9:58:35 AM
Jerry, Ann Lander's had a saying, "no one can take advantage of you without your permission" But as you say, people that take advantage will lose in the end. Mary

Living with Yourself (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 8:30:54 AM
Hi Jerry, It's looking into the unlookable of your past and loving it. Cuz at the end of the day, it is truly living with yourself. Thank you for writing and sharing this... In Spirit, Bear

Living with Yourself (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 3:05:30 AM
You are right in everything you say in this poem,take care Edwin

Living with Yourself (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 8:41:56 PM
Jerry, You are so right. Perhaps you've made some mistakes in the past, we all do, it's a learning process. There are so many woulda, shoulda coulda. If you can change a wrong, do it. Otherwise, let it be. Mary

Where My Talent Lies (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 1:39:29 PM
I think that whatever we do in life, it is for a unknown cause, and yes, sometimes we won't know where our talent lies unless we do the things that show us our talents and thus leading us to where we want to be. The decision to go into our paths still rests upon us, and we are the ones who makes those decisions. A thought-provoking write. Sandie Angel :o)

Getting Things Done (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 10:23:18 PM
Great work,take care Edwin

Keep Writing (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 6:15:54 AM
Hi Jerry, They say that's the way out of writer's block... works for me, and that's after a few years of writing not much. So.. keep writing... stay strong... In Spirit, Bear

Keep Writing (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 6:12:14 AM
Our muse always pop up at the least unexpected time, and then we would keep on writing... Sandie Angel :o)

Keep Writing (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 5:48:53 AM
Jerry, Very well put. I have days when I can think of nothing at all. There are times when I think I should just quit, but can't. It's like a drug. Mary

Keep Writing (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 4:39:09 AM
I know the feeling. One day I get frustrated because of the lack of reviews (on my stories verses my poetry! UGH!!), and the next: BAM!! Writin' machine! Dang muse just won't QUIT!! LOL Great write, and YOU keep on penning, sir! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Have to Lose Weight (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 3:53:35 PM
Oh yes, it certainly is far easier to put the weight on than take it off, bravo in your efforts.... Be always safe, Karen

Have to Lose Weight (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 2:51:28 PM
Jerry: I have been taking the "Colostrum" pills to help boost up my immune system, it is made from the first flow of the mother's milk from cattle, and is very safe for human's consumption. I noticed that one good thing about this pill is that it has helped me to lose weight. I take it twice daily on empty stomach, once about 2.00 p.m.; and once at bedtime. The following morning my stomach would be so flat. You can research this "Colostrum" in the net, and it will tell you what good it does for your body; and even though it might not say that it will help you lose weigh, but it actually is the best for losing weight. Sandie Angel :o)

Have to Lose Weight (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 2:16:26 PM
Jerry, You've hit on an area most of us can sympathize with. Just a part of life I guess. Mary

Control Freaks (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 11:07:34 AM
Jerry, you seem to let them get to you. You have to be strong. Look to the Lord for strength and integrity. He will come through for you if you are honestly seeking Him, and He will make you the man He wants you to be. There's no greater friend! Connie

Staying by Yourself (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 11:04:33 AM
This really says a lot and expresses your frustration in simple words. Is this a parenting issue? If it is, take heart and over time you will prove your ability to make it on your own. (It's hard to stop trying to parent when your children leave home.) In the meantime, again, patience is needed. God bless you, Jerry. Connie

Master Minipulater (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 11:00:19 AM
It's no fun to be around a master manipulator, is it? But God is ultimately in control. Connie

I Can't Win (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 10:56:11 AM
Criticism does sting, but it's God's opinion that matters in the final tally. In Jesus, we can do anything...just put your trust in Him and He will make you a winner in the things that count. Connie

So Strange (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 10:53:42 AM
Not strange to me--I'm tired in the morning, especially if I woke during the night and got up for a couple hours. Connie

Creating Something (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 10:50:36 AM
Well, if it can be used by someone somewhere, then that someone else would care about it, too. Keep dreaming, and you will bless others by your caring. Connie

New Man Around (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 10:47:56 AM
A good question, Jerry. I'd say he should be quiet for awhile, get to know how things are being done, and bide his time. It may be a frustrating place to be, but patience is a virtue and a job well-done speaks volumes until the time is right. Of course, I'd pray for guidance from the Lord, too. Connie

I Can't Win (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 4:20:50 AM
You can win, and you WILL win. Just keep the faith; know you are in my prayers! Well done, Jerry! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

I Can't Win (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 8:19:00 PM
Jerry, I've known people like that! Truth is you are just as good as they are...probably better. Blessings, ~Linda

I Can't Win (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 7:52:24 PM
Sounds to me like you are hanging around with very disingenuous people..... Be always safe, Karen

Control Freaks (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 5:45:20 PM
If you do not give away the control, no one can take it. They just think they are in control.

Power Struggle (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 5:43:58 PM
Amen! You do your thing and I'll do mine!

Do What You Can Do (Poetry) - 2/16/2009 5:42:54 PM
If you figure this one out, please let me know. Some people spend their time hindering other's. Just let me be.

And We Keep Going (Poetry) - 2/11/2009 11:30:32 AM
Hi Jerry, Glad I read this! A write full of conviction and honor. I needed to this one, Jerry. Thank you for sharing... In Spirit, Bear

Copyrights (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 2:10:43 PM
Well, there are loads of those kind of people around, that's for sure, and the important thing, is to never listen to them, and it sounds like you know that already!

Coffee Time (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:35:43 AM
Jerry, Oh I love my coffee. I'll join you in a cup. Many blessings, ~Linda

Come After Me (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:34:40 AM
Jerry, I understand how you feel, totally. I can't work either, and I have bills I can't pay. All we can do is look up and pray things will change for the better. Many blessings, ~Linda

Competing (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:33:11 AM
Jerry, AMEN to this, people should work as a TEAM, not against each other. Many blessings, ~Linda

Computer Problems (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:32:21 AM
Jerry, I'm not at all skilled in computers. Authorsden and email is about all I do. Many blessings, ~Linda

Control Freaks (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:31:10 AM
Jerry, Don't let them control you, do your own thing. Many blessings, ~Linda

Copyrights (Poetry) - 9/11/2008 10:29:48 AM
Jerry, I understand what you say. Don't worry too much about what people say or think. Just do the best you can, thats all anyone can do. Many blessings, ~Linda

Coffee Time (Poetry) - 9/6/2008 11:37:28 AM
Great poem. I'll have coffee cake with the cup of coffee. It sounds as if yu are enjoying your day so far.

Clowning Around (Poetry) - 9/5/2008 3:40:06 PM
A lovely view, Jerry, of the world from a creative mind's eye. John

Clowning Around (Poetry) - 9/5/2008 12:56:36 PM
I like this poem's inherent sweetness that also reveals something real about the life of those who live through creativity. Axilea

Checking Things (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 7:09:35 PM
Sweet sentiments, but in reality try as you may, you just cannot please everyone.... Be always safe, Karen

Checking Things (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 12:03:59 AM
hELLO jERRY, Checking sure makes things right - poor eyesight and stuck up keys make bad spelling...ouch! Nicely written and very honest- I like the style too. Cynthia

Calmed Down a Bit (Poetry) - 9/3/2008 4:14:03 PM
The reason why it is better to cool off before revisiting a situation that need attention, well said... Be always safe, Karen

Calmed Down a Bit (Poetry) - 9/3/2008 9:43:41 AM
Yes, even though we've all acted on impulse at times, we know we shouldn't really. After a cooling off period, the colors are different.

Building the World Up (Poetry) - 9/3/2008 4:28:02 AM
Should have done that long time ago. Sandie May :o)

Building the World Up (Poetry) - 9/3/2008 3:15:32 AM
There are a lot of people who feel the exact same way like you do.Unfortunately people in government have too much big egos to settle for anything less.I enjoy reading your poem,take care Edwin

Breakfest Outside (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 5:50:32 PM
I'm glad you had a quiet time and a nice breakfast... Sandie May :o)

Breakfest Outside (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 4:28:58 PM
They way I enjoy my first cup of coffee each morning, listing to the birds coming in for their breakfast at the bird feeders.... Be always safe, Karen

Bouncing off the Wall (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 3:51:48 PM
Yes, sometimes it does helps to write things out. It's a form of self-therapy. Sandie Angel :o)

Being Single (Poetry) - 9/1/2008 7:04:03 AM
You do have a choice. Find your soul mate, and get married, or live alone single. Someone will always care for you though, that person is God. Don't worry, you will be o.k. This is a good write. Simply simple but says lots. Makes you think which is best, single or a companion. I like to be able to do my own thing, go wherever and not have anyone asking about where I am going and when I'll be home.

Being Left Behind (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 12:34:07 PM
Jerry, It hurts when others leave you behind, but as Lois said, you have to make your own way and not depend on others. Beautiful, thoughtful poem. Mary

Being Left Behind (Poetry) - 8/31/2008 9:19:40 AM
I really don't care if left behind by others. I make my own happiness and don't rely on others to make me happy. This is a good poem to think about though. It seems some people only care about theirselves and don't want to help others. Most of us on the den are not like this though, but thanks for bringing it to our attention. Don't worry, be happy.

Beginning to Realize (Poetry) - 8/29/2008 12:44:23 PM
Ah, the humility of facing the truth that no one person is any better or worse than the next. Each have their own unique qualities.... Be always safe, Karen

Following Your Dreams (Poetry) - 8/29/2008 5:40:15 AM
I try to analyze my dreams each day. I need money to follow some of them ,which I don't have much of. Then, again, some dreams can be fulfilled with little money and some are even free. Whatever dreams mean something somehow and should be taken literally to be what you need to experience in the life you lead. Take your dreams to the limit if you can.

Beginning to Realize (Poetry) - 8/29/2008 5:36:57 AM
Truer words nover spoken. I do like your thinking for today and this poem is great and reminds us we are all the same and no one any better than anyone else. Some think they are but it is otherwise as you say here.

A March Snowstorm (Poetry) - 8/1/2008 2:48:35 PM
I love snow, so i always look forward to snowstorms-i am weird, I know, but come March, like your poems says, many of us are wishing for Spring. Very nice poem.

We Have to Find our Niche (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 6:43:32 PM
Nice, either jump in or get out of the way only you say it a little nicer.... Be always safe, Karen

We Have to Find our Niche (Poetry) - 7/12/2008 8:13:23 AM
Very profound. Beautiful poem. Mary

Accepting Others (Poetry) - 6/26/2008 10:32:44 AM
Good message in this; I happen to be one of those who live with physcial disabilities (I refuse to bow to the PC trap and say physcial challenges!). (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

The Way that Some People Are (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 5:50:11 PM
Importance reigns between the ears, but it does make them feel better about themselves. Usually shallow, insecure people show these traits, nice writing... Be always safe, Karen

A new Project (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 3:39:30 PM
And they all have you to thank for all the effort you put into the "project" so selflessly..... Be always safe, Karen

Anger (Poetry) - 5/27/2008 5:38:19 PM
All in the image we present to the outside world. Very indepth creatiity..... Be always safe, Karen

When is She Going to Learn (Poetry) - 5/25/2008 3:09:33 AM
Interesting indeed.....keep writing know matter what..do what your heart loves to do..stay safe and well OK...Hugsssss

Find Out Who I Really Am (Poetry) - 5/23/2008 5:45:36 PM
Never judge a book by its cover, right? Very loving and descriptive touch, yet I find that no one ever really knows "The person" only the image that is portrayed.... Be always safe, Karen

Find Out Who I Really Am (Poetry) - 5/23/2008 5:01:49 AM
Most people are quick to judge another. Be sure of your own self, that's the only thing that counts. Other opinions are just that - their own opinions. Sandie Angel :o)

Getting Me in Trouble (Poetry) - 5/23/2008 4:59:59 AM
People who don't know you can't speak for you, as you say they're outsiders. I feel a lot of tension and stress from your work. Take care and stay well. Sandie May :o)