The Great Pentameter (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 1:02:31 PM
This one grabbed me by the meter and imb pantametered me with its edict. Like you said, very clever!
Ron
Barabbas (Poetry) - 5/21/2012 8:05:23 PM
I enjoyed this immensely, Mark! A profound sense of a historic character's 'emotions', and great rhyme and rhythym. If I didn't know who Barabbas was, I would have been drawn in. Wonderful flow and movement.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Barabbas (Poetry) - 5/14/2012 6:08:35 AM
I normally don't comment on religious poems, but this one is so well-written and descriptive that I will say that I hope that is the way it happened.
Ron