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DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 11/10/2010 4:41:22 PM
What you say is true, however sad as it may be, we do not nor can we know what goes on inside of their hearts and how many more years it has been since they grew cold. Life goes on and many of us start all over again even knowing we may not live enough years to count as a long lived relationship. Love is enough for now.

DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 8/30/2010 4:57:57 PM
Powerful poetry! GOD Bless you! Yours in Christ, John Michael Domino

DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 6/5/2010 5:58:07 PM
good one Pat, made me think, Al Gore and his wife come to mind, my wife and I have been together 26 years, until death do us part. But think about this, there have been two woman in our area who had their husbands murdered, just here recently on the news a man was arrested for murdering his wife in mexico, so now I guess simply splitting up sounds better, cheers

DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 6/3/2010 8:03:17 PM
Organized and said well... Be always safe, Karen

DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 6/3/2010 7:50:47 AM
Beautiful. But sometimes it's just best for everyone to let go.

DISTRESSED! (Poetry) - 6/3/2010 6:38:33 AM
Very well laid out, Patricia !

Crabapple Tree (Poetry) - 5/7/2010 4:19:46 AM
very creative and entertaining verse Pat. Reminded me of moms home, we had a crab apple tree right in the middle of the front yard. Of course mom has short term memory loss and my sister sold her home, I drive through every now and then when I go home. Thanks for the reminder, hugs

Crabapple Tree (Poetry) - 4/23/2010 2:14:31 AM
Delightful work, Patricia

Crabapple Tree (Poetry) - 4/22/2010 11:29:15 PM
Beautiful and so creative. I love it!

Crabapple Tree (Poetry) - 4/22/2010 8:54:19 PM
Wonderful spring poem. Good to see you agaim, Patricia. Missed so much your wisdom and creativity.

Crabapple Tree (Poetry) - 4/22/2010 6:11:41 PM
Awwww, how simply beautiful and colorful... Be always safe, Karen

LIFE (Poetry) - 4/19/2010 10:23:22 AM
Patricia, your poem reflects all the aspects of time. Past, present and future, and how together they join to make our lives. Mary

LIFE (Poetry) - 4/19/2010 7:29:12 AM
From the moment we were born, life is what we make of it. Sandie Angel :o)

Consider How The Lilies Grow (Revised) (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 9:00:41 AM
Beautifully done Patty! Good to see yuo back! This is a splendid tribute to Our Saviour!

Consider How The Lilies Grow (Revised) (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 8:50:54 AM
nice message in this splendid write, patty! thanks for sharing! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :) be praying for me, am really depressed right now; it's an effort for me just to smile today!

Consider How The Lilies Grow (Revised) (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 8:41:31 AM
Yes indeed, so true..

Consider How The Lilies Grow (Revised) (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 7:50:40 AM
Oh indeed they do, i just wish we could follow their example more nearly. Lovely inspiring write ty Ch'erie PS I love lilies!

Consider How The Lilies Grow (Revised) (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 6:15:27 AM
A thought filled write

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 8:26:13 PM
You ask some real hard questions, Patty. Very thought-provoking.

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/27/2004 8:44:51 PM
I guess there's a time to speak, and a time to remain silent. Silence is not always golden. Some people use their silence to punish and manipulate. Communication is a wonderful thing, especially in a marriage. Silence can be golden at work, because some people talk way too much and can't get their work done, as well as keep others from doing their work. This is going on where I work right now. Thanks for creating and sharing--this is profound and thought-provoking.

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/23/2004 1:51:16 PM
thoughtful piece to ponder. Life is a selfish adventure for quite a few Pat. Everyones faith and vision is different. Most of us get burned or wounded while in cildhood. I do not like people like Ben Laden, he is a selfish mean critter. I would get him and the others myself if I could. People who have no respect for others lives should be put to sleep. This is my selfish feelings speaking. Anyway, on another selfish note, most only understand what they wish and want to understand within their selfish agenda. Right and wrong doesn't matter to selfish mean people, they only care about getting their way. figure it. love and peace. G

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/18/2004 1:02:20 PM
Q:Some abuse and steal innocence, A: most who abuse and steal innocence are NOT gay, not even close. Q:Is this influence? Would it point a child that way? A: this is an asinine question, just showing the lack of analytical thinking runs rampant in america, becuae if one's parents had a direct influence on their sexual preference, then there would be no gay people now would there. also, even if it was so: so what?

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/18/2004 8:25:12 AM
Before 911, yanky discovery channel showed how planes could bring the towers down, how clever was that? Very thought provoking, hopefully thats whats happened by getting Sadam...

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 8:53:21 PM
Quite the thought provoker you are today, Pat...I know it was meant for all & I enjoyed it, only one did kinda cut me a bit...still something to think about, they are all...Peace through Thought, Ed & rufuz

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 6:16:15 PM
You asked so many excellent questions, this was very thought provoking and so well written! Reindeer

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 5:06:26 PM
ALL good questions! You are a deep thinker, Patricia... a person that some of the world leaders should emulate as regards perspective! Nice work here, girl.

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 3:21:44 PM
Know the feeling...a most excellent piece!

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 3:09:02 PM
Excellent write Patty! We only know the narrow path when we know the Lord, and that is what most people do not know!

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 2:19:18 PM
It certainly is not the narrow path that few travel. Well done

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 2:03:50 PM
such a deep and profound write, thanks for the courage in sharing this, patty! god help us in these bad times! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Things That Arenít Understandable (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 2:01:33 PM
(((patricia))) profound, Godly wisdom in this one...broad is the path to destruction...and many, like sheep, are being led astray...just because everyone else is doing it doesn't mean i will...at least, i pray not (((HUGS))) and love, karla. *excellent write!*

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 7:21:27 PM
No more sin, huh, Pat? I hope so,I doubt it , but I sincerely hope so...what have we got it not dreams...As for ancestors, well, I think I may be directly connected to all the tyrants in world history, LOL. Atilla the Hun, Alex the Great, Napoleon, etc...But a poem to make one think this one is...enjoyed...Peace thru what we have learned from the Past, Ed & Rufuz

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 5:24:47 PM
Brava, Patricia! You have captured a universal essence here, and in the last line spelled out the future as even Bible prophecy predicts... except of course, for one sex. I enjoyed this much!

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 2:46:12 PM
Like the way you worked with colour with your thoughts. Wonderful insightful write.

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 1:40:24 PM
Beautiful inquisitive poem, Patricia. I'll bet if we could trace genealogy back far enough we'd find ancestors something like mole rats. We probably wouldn't have to go back very far to find a world of no sin, but to go back to a time when there was only one sex, now that would be back there a ways. LOL Best regards, Leland

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 12:28:03 PM
So Interesting and so true, I loved your thoughts here, excellent poem! Reindeer

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 12:21:53 PM
Interesting, thought-provoking write and beautifully composed. Recent research seems to indicate that all European and American 'Caucasians' derive from some 20 male ancestors, in the time of the ice ages. Franz

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 10:43:37 AM
Pat the last line of each verse is fabulous... loved reading this..and yes I have always wondered and would love to know..I have only gone so far as my great grandmother....floria

Rainbow Of Ancestors (Poetry) - 3/16/2004 9:22:33 AM
Excellent

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 7:52:56 PM
Good analogy to show the trap of laughing at the wrong things. Laughter is very necessary to good attitude, release of tension, and relaxation, but should have nothing to do with derision!

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 5:42:04 PM
Laughter IS the best medicine. That must be why I write so much humor--I've had quite a tragic life but laughter and humor has healed me. But it isn't good to laugh at other people's pain. Thanks for this offering.

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 3:16:22 PM
better to laugh with, than laugh at. good description of the laughter medicine and how it can be misused.

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 3:15:52 PM
If one is laughing for the joy of laughing, it is a good thing; but, if one is laughing at the expensive of another it is no longer good medicine. Great write.

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 1:39:59 PM
Laughter is good for the soul but not derisive laughter.

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 1:17:40 PM
Pat I take every oportunity I can to laugh... a real good belly laugh is so good for the soul.. and the body too.. And then there are the ones who poke fun and laugh sinfully at the less fortunate.. .I liked this..floria

What Does Laughter Do? (Poetry) - 3/15/2004 12:26:16 PM
sometimes laughter is NOT funny! good message brought to attention in this write; very well done, patty! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( but i DID have Karla in stitches twice yesterday; but how I made her laugh was purely borne out of humor, NOT malice! i LOVE to hear Karla laugh!

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 5:29:37 AM
creative very good piece that speaks Pat, enjoyed the read. It had that kind of tell off in a nice way aura. love & ve G

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 5:26:03 AM
Very faithful write Pat, thanks for everythiing. love and ove. G

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 9:06:02 AM
terrific write, patty; and no, you are NOT old! whoever gave you THAT idea?? LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 8:41:36 PM
we must never loose sight of fail to recognize intimacy to the ones we love ...

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 8:07:46 PM
Old? Who's old, certainly not you, Mz Pat...?! Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 7:19:05 PM
This is a fantastic write and I agree life continues and just begins as we get older :-)

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 4:46:37 PM
Beautifully written Patricia, I know this poem so well, I have lived it, therefore I know it. Thanks for sharing. Allen

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 2:31:47 PM
I love the message and the style.. great writing...to me it was like merging two poems together... loved it Pat..floria

Omega/Alpha (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 1:57:16 PM
An outstanding proclamation.

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 7:46:51 AM
Uplifting write...thanks for sharing this!!!!

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/11/2004 6:47:04 AM
Great message Patricia..yes the sun does shine! Enjoyed. Lisa

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 3:54:33 PM
Your poem certainly shines! A great write!

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 3:51:33 PM
Beautiful uplifting write!

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 3:30:38 PM
Good sentiments! Here in KC it's cloudy so I'll have to wait until tomorrow?

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 2:42:40 PM
Let the sunshine in! Cheers Alain

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 2:01:02 PM
An inspiring write to come to the Lord and pay Him homage everyday

Sun Shines Everyday (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 1:27:05 PM
Love it, Patty! Very well done; enjoyed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 6:30:22 AM
More than met the challenge, this is a great poem!!

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 8:05:09 PM
i like your sense of humor ... well done!

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 8:04:08 PM
sounds like heaven to me also Pat. Good write, you took us there in verse. love and peace G

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 7:59:32 PM
good one Pat, kind of made me laugh because it fits my wife and i to almost a T. All we get from our family and friend is jealousy and misery, especially after i wrote my book. my company has a saying, "as long as you're doing worse than others, you have no problem with them, the minute you rise above, wammo." love and peace G

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 5:41:13 PM
Fun and philosophical. andrea

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 4:19:28 PM
The ending has a truth in it that hopefully will wake up a few. GREAT write and one I needed to read with the difficult changes I am going through. Thanks for the smile. Much needed :-) Thanks!

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 3:59:01 PM
Oh my goodness, Pat, my virgin eyes and that word, that "D" word, now you know darned well that you can't be lettin' me see words like that!LOL! But boy do I know what your talking about in this great poem, wish I had thought of the idea...Peace thru the Write, Ed & Rufuz

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 3:54:32 PM
Thank you for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed it -- Great write

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 3:53:22 PM
You said a mouthfull in this wonderful write. Rang so many bells in my mind

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 3:51:37 PM
Wonderful sound advice on the last two lines. There are so many lines in here that I can relate to; but your last two lines are the ones I like the best. ~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Dammed (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 3:48:40 PM
Excellent message Patricia and yes i can so related to this one. love all the colorful font too.

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 11:08:13 PM
I guess you are describing heaven. Supposedly it is within each one of us. We just have to find the key. Let me know when you do, Patricia. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 9:56:29 PM
Where is that place? I wish I was there. Excellent poem

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 8:50:08 PM
Beautiful write!

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 6:01:10 PM
Hi Patricia: What a great place to be! Thank you so much for your kind words to my recent post! ~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 2:35:44 PM
(((patricia))) yep--and it's waiting for those who believe on the Lord Jesus Christ and accept His free gift of salvation can't wait to get there :) (((HUGS))) and thanks for sharing a beautiful piece love, karla. :)

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 12:47:53 PM
Beautiful colorful write Patricia!! I still don't know how to do the color thing.......geee!! love Tinka

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 11:30:23 AM
A beautiful descriptive poem.

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 10:16:28 AM
wonderful thoughts!

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 10:10:06 AM
Sounds like my kind of place! I can't wait to see Jesus face to Face! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Beautiful write!

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 9:33:23 AM
Super nice place, Floria, sounds like I will have to move there if and when they accept motor homes with big ugly peace signs on the front, LOL! Let us not forget that they have to take the big old furball rug I live with too...Peace thru Faith, Ed & Rufuz

Can You Imagine This? (Poetry) - 3/5/2004 9:32:59 AM
Yes, I can imagine it. So have some of the prophets of old, who predict it to be in the very near future. Isaiah, in particular. I sure look forward to it!

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/2/2004 5:20:53 AM
I have thought of this and wondered how one can go silent and not interacting with the circmmstances surrounding him. i think this proverb came into being when people were still in primitive stags of life. I saw it has some loop holes and made some changes to this proverb at least for my own use. It goes like this " Say it only when it is necessary, otherwise silence is golden" In somali we have the same proverb as silence is golden but there is another one that contradicts it., and it is : " If you do not speak or alert your mother of your hunger you may miss your super" and in english, though i do not remeber well, there is a proverb which says " Only those tires that make noise will get the driver's attention". this a poem beautifully crafted and intelligently composed. Thans Pat for sharing.

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 11:04:37 PM
profound observations ...

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 6:52:39 PM
I find that to be quite the heavy poem, Pat...powerful thoughts you are having today; and you say you have nothing to write about...? Excellence is the definition of you...Peace Thru Words, Ed & Rufuz

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 6:50:49 PM
Very true Patty. We have to learn when to be silent and when not to. However we are human and often fail to do so. It can cause much trouble...Perhaps yur poem reminds us to try harder;-)...

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 11:37:23 AM
Silence comes from people who are insecure in this world and if they do no harm, let them be in there created world. The opposite, which I dislike, is the busybody and the rumor monger. They I can get along without. Great write

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 11:01:31 AM
Absolutely splendid, in form, message and pure beauty! -- Jeff

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 10:16:47 AM
EXCELLENT perspectives!

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 9:55:03 AM
Good thoughts expressed in this write, Patty; very well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Be sure to check out my latest installment in the "How Do You Want Her To Die?" series; it seems that little Heather Lindsay McCabe has finally turned the corner and is now starting to improve. Think you may like how this is going to turn out! :D I wrote it with you in mind!

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 9:54:32 AM
Silence can be deadly. Great write.

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 9:53:46 AM
Wow, I love your pointed observations! Well-said

Is Silence Golden? (Poetry) - 3/1/2004 9:50:18 AM
silence is golden! people zip up at very opportune moments.

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/28/2004 8:54:54 AM
Yes, very creative Pat. children do have an effect on us. Congradulations to your niece Auntie. love&joy G

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/27/2004 10:37:51 AM
Patricia, outstanding and creative poem! ~Z~

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/26/2004 8:42:18 AM
Patricia...they are what we teach them..and they feel our love and learn to love also..this was beautiful...you spent a lot of time on the presentation which was very original..well done...floria

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/26/2004 2:30:29 AM
Babies are so precious. They are untouched by society. Nothing ugly has rubbed off from the grit of the world. Just like a fresh bunch of clay ready to be molded, and the parents are the potter. Excellent write Patricia. Lisa

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 7:56:07 PM
Patty this is a special gift to a new born. You should have it printed, plasticized, and saved for your niece.!Beautiful work!

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 7:03:17 PM
Heart warming beautiful write!

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 5:59:59 PM
This was so sweet, beautifully presented! Reindeer

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 5:35:54 PM
Unique write

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 5:21:53 PM
I like how you compared the child to plants, they do seem that way don't they? They both grow strong with all you have mentioned...excellent write, Pat...Peace thru Words, Ed & rufuz

My Sweet Little Baby (Poetry) - 2/25/2004 5:20:33 PM
Beautiful format and poem, Patty; I LOVE it! Congratulations to you, your niece, and her family! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 5:51:02 PM
Excellently written, and delightful to read, I liked this very much, Reindeer

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 4:42:15 PM
This was so sweet and creative Pat...lovely work..floria

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 2:25:30 PM
Beautiful heart touching write!

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 2:11:40 PM
Delightful concrete poem, Patricia. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 11:24:43 AM
This is one beary good write; love the form and the poem! My mother loved teddybears; she had a big collection of bears! I love teddybears, too! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Check out my latest story; there's a surprise for you in it! Enjoy!

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 10:42:14 AM
(((patricia))) awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love teddy bears. :) my mother, God rest her soul, collected bears. when she died, she had amassed a collection of over 800...we donated them to the police and fire station, to the nursing homes, and to the hospital for anyone that just needed a hug...of course, i kept a few...cherished reminders of my beloved mom *i miss her still* bears give the bestest (((HUGS))) especially when given by a loved one adorable write, love the format--you've made me smile (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Teddy Bears (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 10:27:03 AM
On one of my poems, think it was called "Lost Virginity" I have a picture of me at about 4 years old, in my hand was a teddy bear, that I cherished for ever and a day...he was given me by my grandmom too, in fact the picture has her standing to my right, but it doesnt show her well. Anyway, that bear was one day tossed, its head falling off and its stuffing mostly gone, but I do empathize with you here Pat, we never forget that one special bear...excellent poem, thanks for the memories...Peace thru Words, Ed & rufuz

Whatís First-Rate? (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 10:00:00 AM
..enobled thoughts written by a gifted poet..ty Pat Vesna:)

Whatís First-Rate? (Poetry) - 2/21/2004 7:27:22 AM
A noble thought indeed, Mz Pat, that last paragraph says it all. Wonder if any of us will live and love long enough to see true Peace...Ed & Rufuz

Whatís First-Rate? (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 6:03:55 PM
moving in the mind Pat. yes peace is nice to have. along with other nice things. enjoyed the read of poetic wisdom. love and peace G

Whatís First-Rate? (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 4:04:48 PM
Very insightful write!

Whatís First-Rate? (Poetry) - 2/20/2004 2:55:52 PM
very well done...to bad more do not think this way.

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 8:29:26 PM
Profound write!

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 7:38:16 PM
This was great! Excellently written! Reindeer

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 5:12:28 PM
(((patricia))) excellently written, beautifully presented--perfect flow and rhyming (((HUGS))) and love, and congratulations on your upcoming book! what an achievement...i'm still waiting on that one--i'll make it, with God's help :) karla. :)

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 3:46:45 PM
Nice one, Patty! Enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 1:54:19 PM
Excellent and beautiful verses Patty! A joy to read!

Four Little Vases (Poetry) - 2/18/2004 1:41:50 PM
Words to live by. Great write Patty

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/16/2004 7:34:27 AM
Poetic kknowlwdge from one of the best. I've been laughing every since I was old enough to know what it was. For some reason it just feels better than anger. God advice Pat. love and luck G

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 3:49:20 PM
"Itís healthier to dream" I like your advice and the general message expressed in this creation of yours, Patricia. Love and peace. Regis

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/12/2004 4:27:51 AM
Much wisdom and good advice, well penned.

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 9:51:41 PM
Felt relaxed reading it~ what a good view to have~

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/11/2004 8:43:17 AM
Fantastic!!!!

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 11:03:09 PM
Patty, thanks for this great write it surely is true and full of wisdom! I have to laugh every day or I'm useless;-) I do not like getting angry, it really is a downer!When something makes me angry I immediately give it to God and ask for relief from it. Yes! it works!

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 8:52:08 PM
I could agree with you more! :-) thats why I have a smiling frog on my computer.

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 8:51:03 PM
Excellent advice and an excellent write, Patty. I find that laughter gets me through those days when MS decides to act up. Besides, laughter makes much nicer lines. LOL! ~~BonnieQ

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 5:54:41 PM
They say laughter is the best medicine and I'd have to say it's true.

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 4:33:54 PM
very timely - well-needed message. -- Jeff

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 4:29:30 PM
Every time I start to have a prideful thought towards myself, I pass a mirror, and stop. Yeeeesh....it sure is humbling!

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 3:53:07 PM
Wonderful fun color write!

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 3:49:10 PM
(((patricia))) great write--LOL. :) if you can laugh in the midst of trial, the battle's half won :) humor will keep the anger at bay :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla dorman. :)

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 3:14:44 PM
Amen Patty. I've been laughing on and off all day at the wonderful poems in the den, including yours.

Resentment (Poetry) - 2/9/2004 2:36:04 PM
Laugh on, Patricia!! Great pic, too!

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/6/2004 6:57:53 PM
great faithful one Pat. enjoyed the read and the wisdom. love and peace G

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 10:06:04 AM
Nice one, Patty! Enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 6:06:03 AM
a fab write.

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 7:53:36 PM
Exquisitely said, Patty: those negative emotions and behaivours only serve to destroy the bearer and leave a trail of negative feelings. ~~BonnieQ

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 7:00:06 PM
Excellent message in this poetry Patty, well done!...

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 6:25:53 PM
Very wise words!

Friendships (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 6:25:48 PM
Well said Patty. Wonderful God fearing write

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 12:04:34 AM
Excellent...thanks for sharing....love n luck...BHUWAN

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/2/2004 11:13:23 AM
This is excellent, my sister-in-Christ: I feel I know you even better now... wonderful testimony. And, so far, you're the only writer here who has entered my contest! AND, you followed all the rules. WOW! Well done, gearfrin! Lots of love in Christ~~ BonnieQ

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/2/2004 9:20:54 AM
Nice inspiring write, Patty; very well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/1/2004 8:13:39 PM
I agree with Eileen-this is amazing testimony. Thanks for sharing and God Bless You. Love, Susan

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/1/2004 7:16:08 PM
Patty the Holy Spirit is truly speaking through you. Wonderful inspiring write

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/1/2004 7:13:11 PM
Very inspirational for all who read this. Thank you for sharing your strength with us. Great write.

I Live Only Because the Lord Mandated It (Poetry) - 2/1/2004 6:31:12 PM
Praise the Lord! This is an amazing testimony! May it bless all who read it. thanks for sharing Patty, I can imagine what you went through, for I had very similar circumstance.

A Contrary Person (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 4:28:47 PM
Oooo, Pat, I stand thoroughly chastised and rightly so, dear sister. It was not my intent to take credit, for indeed all that I do is done by the Holy Spirit within and through me as merely a vehicle: and a pitiful Eve, at that. I must do a rewrite! This is what happens when one moves too quickly and that I did. As for the contest I've suggested, it merely-- as was the one I entered, which was private between poets-- is a way of getting to know one another on a more personal level. I shall let the contest stand. If no one takes up the challenge, it simply shall go away. Thank you... for pointing out my great faux pas. Lots of love in Christ~~ Bonnie Q

A Contrary Person (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 3:41:59 PM
Well written And more glory to the Holy Spirit that dwells in us.

A Contrary Person (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 2:59:12 PM
Heart touching write!

A Contrary Person (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 2:11:05 PM
wonderful write, patty; so enjoyed this! keep your faith, and let your light for Jesus Christ be a beacon for others to follow! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

A Contrary Person (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 1:58:23 PM
I enjoyed this. Your security in God must be nice.

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/31/2004 12:05:50 PM
kind of carried me for awhile Pat but you ended it in light. very interesting to read. love G

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 9:45:52 PM
terrific write! enjoyed it a lot

Have Mercy on Me (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 3:33:44 PM
You are such an angel to us all... God has truly blessed you with beautiful talents to share with the world. Amazing.

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 3:30:28 PM
Wow, this is an amazing piece and reading it touched my heart. The painting is truly beautiful and captures the magic of your words.

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 8:50:35 AM
wonderful and touching write; and the artwork is fantabulous! well done on both the painting and the poem; you are a true artist! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 10:25:32 PM
Deep and touching write....powerful write!!!!!

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 6:40:19 PM
The painting shows the quality of the old masters... and the verse is excellent, too!

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 2:57:39 PM
Beautifully done Patty! Wonderful empathetic tones, with a splash of reality...You did the painting? that's superb!

Lady, I See  (Poetry) - 1/29/2004 1:27:47 PM
Deep and touching! Great write and painting! I can see how this painting haunted you. All the protraits I have done so far, tend to draw me in with an expression of the unknown.....

Have Mercy on Me (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 6:55:30 PM
Inspirational and well crafted.

Have Mercy on Me (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 10:41:45 AM
I really loved this, Patty; a beautiful write, and may Christ have Mercy on US! Even if we sin and repent, He still loves us! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D (I do an awful lot of that..repenting; no matter what I may do wrong, I always repent..or TRY to anyway! LOL)

Donít Be Afraid There's a Tree of Life (Poetry) - 1/26/2004 11:13:13 PM
Excellent write....love n luck....BHUWAN

Donít Be Afraid There's a Tree of Life (Poetry) - 1/26/2004 9:46:44 AM
Just what I needed to read today, Patty! I have a fearful heart today, and I am feeling stressed! Thank you for sharing this wonderful write; this was just what my heart needs! Thanks for the reminder! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Love to Read  (Poetry) - 1/24/2004 10:47:09 PM
There are quite a few toys, books and other things I use to have as a child that I wish I could find now Pat. It's funny how we don't keep up with somethings then way later on we wish them back. even automobiles. If I ever see that book I let you know. love and respect. G

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/24/2004 10:19:08 PM
very interesting and inspiring Pat. I can diffinitely relate. love and respect.. G

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 4:40:19 PM
A truly splendid and heartfelt...truth bearing write...I enjoyed this very much. Allen

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 11:11:25 AM
A beautiful lesson and tribute to the goodness and mercy of God! Splendid write, divinely inspired!

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 10:27:28 AM
Lovely! Simply lovely!

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 9:55:24 AM
Beautiful inspirational work!

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 9:44:51 AM
Beautiful write, Patty. I admire your faith and inspiration. Take care. Jill :)

Consider How the Lilies Grow. (Poetry) - 1/23/2004 9:32:27 AM
beautiful write, patty; always enjoy your poetry! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 11:42:46 PM
Very touching Pat. I also enjoyed the wooded area around my house. We played and built tree houses. I remember the same as you. I guess this is why I love the out doors so much now. love and peace G

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 6:31:35 PM
Pat, if u can go back to the woods as a child, then I can go back to the beach too...lets all here at AD just let that inner child free and return once again to "those thrilling times of yesteryear", LOL! Great imagery, Pat, thanks for such a beautiful write, Ed & Rufuz

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 3:05:15 PM
I spent a lot of time in the woods too. Still do :-) Wonderful write. Thanks for the sharing.

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 11:34:17 AM
'Those were the days.' I heartily concur. I long for them still - but I guess I should grow up, a tad, anyway!

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 11:11:46 AM
You certainly awoke memories of my times in the woods as a child, when I lived on a farm bordered by a beautiful river. I still live "in the woods," and have never really grown up, for the childhood experiences of communing with nature and the critters of the wild, are still my precious privilege today.

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 11:11:09 AM
Wonderful memories, indeed, Pat! I had a huge woods in the backyard of my home back in Ohio, and so many wonderful (and some not so wonderful, as in the time I got lost in the woods in my stocking feet; it was raining, and I could see my house from the woods, but I didn't know how to get across the creek; therefore, I thought I was "lost"! LOL) memories of being in the woods! Thanks for allowing me to reminiesce about my woods back in Ohio; ahhh, those were the days! How I LOVED the woods! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D (Don't have a woods here; live in government apartments. Oh, they have trees near, but no woods. DARN it! Not many trees here in Texas....But at least we have trees where I live...LOL)

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 11:07:00 AM
This is so beautiful Patty! It really ministers to the best in us which of course is Creator's Spirit...Thanks for sharing...

In the Woods (Poetry) - 1/20/2004 10:51:46 AM
Oh yes Patricia...this brought back memories...we always spent much time in the woods...out in the country....I always hated city living...this was wonderful to read...floria

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 8:48:07 PM
So true, Patty. Excellent message. Keep up the good work! ~~Bonnie Q

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 8:29:11 PM
so nice Patricia, and so very true, its all there to see, and so very nicely told as well, al

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 3:52:07 PM
Good question for the ending and great examples :-)

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 3:20:57 PM
Ah, how true, Patricia. Beautiful words. Truly he is everywhere and in everything for we who believe!

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 10:51:09 AM
I see God in everything, too; He made everything! Wonderful write; and I LOVE the pic! It makes me think of Ohio; my folks back in Ohio are always telling me about the deer they see in their yard on a nearly daily basis! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D (Oh "deer", how I MISS Ohio! :( )

I See Him Everywhere (Poetry) - 1/6/2004 10:32:11 AM
GREAT visions!

For The Love of an Old Oak Tree (Poetry) - 12/18/2003 6:21:38 PM
This write has nostalgia and beauty all wrapped up!I loved it. I am a garden and nature person and it brings back feelings. Sincerely Antoinette

Echoes (Poetry) - 12/10/2003 4:21:58 AM
yes beautifully expressed Pat by one of the best. Not all children have the experiences to remember with a father. mine totally abandoned me. I wish I could write such a poem. cheers G

Echoes (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 10:10:11 PM
Beautifully expressed in loving fashion. Thank you for this lovely offering, Patricia. Love and peace, Regis.

What Is Love, What Is Sex? (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 2:58:48 PM
I think that the difference between love and sex, especially within a partnership, is unconditional love. Wanting the person you love to be happy EVEN if it means, without you. There are so many varying degrees to love, and once given, how can it be taken back? At the time it was given freely. Circumstances change, but that particular moment still remains in time somewhere. Sex is basic and a great bonus, but love remains and can grow into a thing far superior. All the benefits of love can outweigh all the benefits of sex. To grow old with a person you love, 'love' is what makes the closeness prevail! Donni-Jay

Echoes (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 12:30:20 PM
Patty: This is a beautiful tribute to your father. So wonder you've turned out so well. Love, Susan

Echoes (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 8:52:15 AM
Beautiful tribute, stunning write with wonderful imagery. Visit my den sometime, Patty. ~~Bonnie Q Bonita M Quesinberry, R.C. Associate Editor, Washington Waltsan Publishing, Texas

Echoes (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 9:02:04 AM
lovely write, patty! well done; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D

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