Recent Reviews for Nathan R Carter
Ignorance is bliss (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 7:35:52 AM|
Wonderful rhyme and flow, well done and quite a story as well.
Ignorance is bliss (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 7:37:07 PM
Wonderfully recited, yes there are times when ignorance is bliss....
Be always safe,
Darkness (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 8:37:07 PM
I could hear this as spoken word when I read it, it has a good message, and the ending leaves the reader thinking.
Darkness (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 4:23:42 PM
As long as there is light there will always be hope, well said...
Be always safe,
Mr Lewis (Poetry) - 4/1/2008 11:33:47 PM
...of Alice and Wonderland and Through the Looking-Glass...you have penned thoughts of one of my favorite books.
Darkness (Poetry) - 4/1/2008 11:29:58 PM
...the smallest fraction of light will always be seen...in the largest part of darkness...perhaps the goodness yet to be found.
well penned thoughts Nathan...
Anything (Poetry) - 3/26/2008 2:09:39 AM
An optical illusion
An egotistical logistic...
Have you ever heard of Metathesis? It's when you mistakenly rearrange syllables in your head... like kids who say "hecalopter" for helecopter, or "pasketti" for spaghetti... anyways, you can make tongue twisters using its basic idea.
Ruan Wright wrote one I liked--can't remember the name. But this is how it works: you take a few words, and then you replace the first letter from one, with the first of another like tree, foreign, sharp: fee, tarp, shorn, etc... and if the words have more than one syllable, swap them around, and use the "twins" in random lines... anyway, I get confused in writing it, but I bet you could do it...
It's funny the way your mind gets twisted up like your tongue does when you read things like this. --Charlie
Mr Lewis (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 6:51:43 AM
I love Lewis Carroll. Cool poem.
Scott Tracke is someone who writes a bit like Lewis Carroll. Check out his poems too.
Have fun clicking around. You'll fit in just fine here. --Charlie
Stumped! (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 6:46:20 AM
You need to check out Leo Durrant's "How to Throw a Poem"... similar theme. --Charlie
She Is. (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 6:45:00 AM
Whoever "she is" is, "She is" is very lucky to have a rune-spouter for an admirer.
Welcome to AD!! --Charlie
She Is. (Poetry) - 3/24/2008 1:34:17 AM
she is just because she is
i want to be someones 'she is just because she is'...
to be able to be yourself and be adored because you are yourself must be the worlds most beautiful gift anyone could give a girl...
this is a most gorgeous piece.
i sure hope you showed this to her =)