Recent Reviews for Jessi Stelter
Dear Diary (11/10) (Article) - 3/18/2003 10:00:31 PM|
Very good write I enjoyed the read hang in there take your time going down lifes path. I see alot of talent in your writing
Another Pretty Face (Poetry) - 9/26/2006 4:13:19 PM
very good....wish i could have random thoughts like that!
Your Missing/ Get out of My Life (Poetry) - 1/14/2004 9:04:59 PM
this is freakin awesome! your rock hardcore!
Goodbye (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 2:25:22 PM
wow....deary you are so full of talent. i only hope you keep writing!
Forgive and Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 11/15/2003 2:21:37 PM
Jessi, you have so much talent. you will go so far in life, i just know it! i am so honored to be your friend!!!
For Him, For Her (Poetry) - 6/17/2003 10:17:21 AM
Jessi, gurl that was deep. I don't know how to exactly explain how i felt about that one just that u write some deep shit. LOL. We need to just sit down sometime and just talk poetry.
P.S. don't use the email just ask first so i know
Your Missing/ Get out of My Life (Poetry) - 6/17/2003 9:32:55 AM
Jeez Jessi, that was really strong you've got some talent your opening up so much when you write. If all just flows out like water. In your poem your lost and don't know where to go just stay strong and move on.
P.S. i had to put a email address in but it's not mine its my brothers so don't send anything please and if u do tell me first, Thanks.
Your Missing/ Get out of My Life (Poetry) - 6/8/2003 4:53:19 PM
Damn! It shows such passion, pain, longing, such a mix of emotions. You'll be going places.
Your Missing/ Get out of My Life (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 6:50:34 PM
Holy crap Jess, that's some powerful stuff, I wonderr who's behind it?
Your Missing/ Get out of My Life (Poetry) - 5/28/2003 9:51:22 PM
felt this one to the marrow
Forgive and Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/2/2003 8:38:00 AM
beautiful write! :) (((HUGS)))
Forgive and Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 5:23:29 PM
"...I brushed the dust off of the cover
Of my few memories.
Turn the pages over and over,
Ripped and torn,
Colors fade, edges bent..."
This is a lovely poem. Well done.
Forgive and Forget Me Not (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 1:56:03 PM
Elegant, graceful and sad.
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 12:25:26 PM
Looks good to me...bravo.
Goodbye (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 9:50:08 AM
this is well crafted, however if i may suggest: delete "you whispered goodbye" too dramatic. "the last thing..." is much better to end with
Hurt (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:45:05 PM
"Just fucking hate...Not being close to you." Those are two very powerful lines right there. This is one of your best poems yet and I love it. Hopefully you won't be lonely anymore and will write some poetry that's so not sad in the future. Lots of love, Meggy-Muffin.
Friends (Poetry) - 1/26/2003 10:44:33 PM
well thought out... good write...
To Come and Go (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 3:09:15 AM
EMOTIONAL POEM GOOD WORK.
To Come and Go (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 2:02:00 AM
Very good emotions in verse.
The Looking Glass (Poetry) - 12/25/2002 12:28:52 PM
Good write Jessie, much pain and sorrow.
Merry Christmas. Bill Murray
For U (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 9:33:42 PM
For U (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 9:19:09 PM
For U (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 5:59:54 PM
aww... I know the feeling. Keep holding on, things can only look up.
For U (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 4:16:21 PM
Goodbye to Thee and Thine (For the Departed) (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 9:42:35 PM
Love antique language....well done Jessi.
Goodbye to Thee and Thine (For the Departed) (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 9:13:29 PM
Jessi try to write with the readers vision in mind. We are not complex and look for ideas expressed smoothly and passionately. Poetry that evolves in on itself will self destruct when put to the test. Flowing outwardly not inwardly toward the writer. You are making a good effort. Now try to just put you pen on paper and let it flow and flow and flow. You will be amazed. Bill Murray ((Hugs))
Melancholly (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 10:38:37 AM
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 10/27/2002 1:25:56 PM
Jessi! Oh, this makes me so happy. I miss you so much! Beautiful poem...
~your partner in crime
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 8/24/2002 10:42:42 AM
Excellent write. So much hope in these words.
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 8/23/2002 4:08:45 PM
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 8/23/2002 3:22:44 PM
WOW! that's awesome Jessi, I'm so glad to be a part of your wonderful life!
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 8/23/2002 1:16:44 PM
This is truly an inspiring piece. Just to show that "kindness" is always the best policy to one another.
We loveya Jessi!!!!!
((((( Hugs )))))
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Once Upon A Time (Poetry) - 8/23/2002 12:14:11 PM
very cool,very well written too!
Spinning In My Mind (Poetry) - 8/17/2002 9:17:07 AM
thanks for the spinning trip through your mind
Spinning In My Mind (Poetry) - 8/17/2002 12:06:30 AM
I like this poem. It has that certain random conformity, to use an oxymoron, that I think is soemtimes nice. Thoughts very rarely ever continue in one direction. The one thing that gets me is the rhyme scheme here seems a bit like a bicycle wobbling out of control. You get it back at times, but after the first 2 stanzas it starts. Bravo.
Untitled (Poetry) - 8/16/2002 10:11:58 PM
Once again, the end of the poem made me shudder in my soul, so it moved me.
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/16/2002 10:08:55 PM
This is an amazing piece of art, I have felt exactly what you're talking about before. Stunned, I am...good, you are.
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/16/2002 12:43:53 PM
great job another masterpeice! you will one day be a great poet
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 4:20:02 PM
lovely imagery your words are felt deeply
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 10:28:02 AM
Great write again. Very pretty with nice emotion.
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 9:01:28 AM
I loved reading this, so much emotion, so many feelings.
Portrait (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 12:49:34 AM
Nice write. Good images and rhyme.
Another Pretty Face (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 10:24:11 AM
Random thought but a deep one for sure. Really liked this one coz it's very true and touching too. Just another face in the crowd - good write gurl...
Another Pretty Face (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 10:02:31 AM
i've had those rambling, random thoughts, too, especially as of late, when it comes to writing. enjoyed your poem. very good job!! love, karen lynn in texas.
Another Pretty Face (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 9:54:49 AM
Excellent write... especially for a random thought.
Finding Me (Poetry) - 8/5/2002 6:15:01 AM
Finding Me (Poetry) - 8/5/2002 3:32:38 AM
Past walks with us throughtout. Sometimes we just have to push it behind things because it gets overwhelming on our present.
For Him, For Her (Poetry) - 7/30/2002 10:27:50 PM
For Him, For Her (Poetry) - 7/30/2002 5:26:27 PM
very beautiful tribute
hope it helps to share
For Him, For Her (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 10:26:59 PM
Was It Me? (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 5:38:15 PM
All those People on TV_Only Thing That Makes Them Happy Is $$$ GREED $$$, But, in due Time They all become as one (In Hell), Whom sold there Souls To Satan The Devil In The Name Of for Fame! Believe It: They Do Cry Forever!!
Was It Me? (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 2:05:52 PM
excellent I love poems with questions?
Tonight (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 1:00:33 PM
You have created some very interesting images here. Thanks, I enjoyed this one.
Tonight (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 9:10:59 AM
Tonight (Poetry) - 7/29/2002 9:03:54 AM
The Beauty Of It All (Poetry) - 7/25/2002 8:55:04 PM
I love everything you write. I know who, and i think he knows. I'm also sry for what you might not know, but its just one of those things. also, im sry if i seem crude, being your best friend and all( you know saying everying you write is f=great even if its not) well it is!! love ya.
The Beauty Of It All (Poetry) - 7/20/2002 12:59:48 PM
This is a good poem and I'm sure that he'll know. :) BTW, I read your Bio. Kick-ass, I love it. JC
Untitled (Poetry) - 7/12/2002 3:09:29 AM
Nice poem of reflection within one's soul.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Untitled (Poetry) - 7/11/2002 10:03:31 PM
sometimes our reflection reveals thing we cannot see within ourselves...
Nights (Poetry) - 7/10/2002 8:29:42 PM
Girl, you are truely buetiful and im sry for the things u got threw, but think if u didnt where would this buetiful poetry come from?
love you. ~Rach~
Where The Beginning Ends, And The End Begins (Poetry) - 7/10/2002 2:05:14 PM
very pretty writing. Got a kind of dark feel about it somhow but still very pretty
Where The Beginning Ends, And The End Begins (Poetry) - 7/9/2002 4:22:48 PM
This is a beautiful and haunting poem.
Tragedy (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 11:55:24 PM
A very nice write. Look around you... there are many others.
Tragedy (Poetry) - 7/5/2002 10:49:37 PM
get those wings a movin....
An Ode To Sorrow (Poetry) - 7/3/2002 5:46:58 PM
Jessi, this poem/song is simply amazing, I am not lying when I say that there were tears in my eyes by the end of it. Marvelous write! And remember, you are always loved.
Much love, Many dreams. - Tim
An Ode To Sorrow (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 9:22:23 AM
Love the 2nd stanza especially.
An Ode To Sorrow (Poetry) - 6/30/2002 7:13:51 AM
very nice voice and meter...
I Am (Poetry) - 6/27/2002 2:40:15 PM
Wow, fantastic emotional levels building there. It does seem Ironic that such simple feelings can have opposites and real meanings. Love the rhyming, you have a real talent ~xXx~
Seeing Is Not Beleiving (Poetry) - 6/15/2002 10:25:04 PM
Amazing. I'm stunned by this, I have nothing to say except wow, just wow. Jessi, you are such an amazing person, keep writing, and don't stop, ever.
And You (Poetry) - 6/14/2002 3:28:31 PM
Such togetherness must be wonderful. Nice poem.
And You (Poetry) - 6/14/2002 12:17:14 PM
I hear ya! I know exactly how this feels... Isn't love beautiful???? A beautiful write...
Forgotten Roads (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 5:34:51 PM
Okay! That's it! Get over this stupid depressed shit and get on with your life!!! So frickin' hypocritical... find yourself something better to do with your time, because wallowing in your own self pity doesn't seem to be working for you.
Forgotten Roads (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 2:26:35 AM
interesting though process and spiraling
one thing i always try to keep in mind is
'this too shall pass'
because everything always does... eventually
Forgotten Roads (Poetry) - 6/5/2002 4:28:16 PM
Very well written. Each point in life seems a bit strange to me.
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/5/2002 9:13:28 AM
Fantastic write. Your writing is profound and heartfelt. I can feel those emotions with you as I read those lines.
Where You Are Tonight (Poetry) - 6/5/2002 9:09:44 AM
This is a very beautiful and meaningful poem.
Drifting (Poetry) - 6/4/2002 8:29:12 PM
Very profound! nice write, Jessi
The Beauty Of It All (Poetry) - 3/20/2002 11:11:34 PM