Recent Reviews for John Rockie Coppolella
Politic-king (Short Story) - 3/30/2015 9:10:17 AM|
Thank you for sharing your meaningful, apt, and timely humor, Rockie. Love and peace,
Politic-king (Short Story) - 3/30/2015 6:10:45 AM
You packed a lot into this poem. Much more than Jersey Ed was said. Great satire. Loved every word of it.
Politic-king (Short Story) - 3/30/2015 12:36:44 AM
well done. great use of words. flows nice. sharp. good rhythm...
Howling Wolf Prosperity (Short Story) - 1/16/2014 3:10:24 PM
very readable and enjoyed
Howling Wolf Prosperity (Short Story) - 1/16/2014 11:53:35 AM
witty, hilarious and full of serious fun. Great Starman.
Howling Wolf Prosperity (Short Story) - 1/16/2014 11:29:54 AM
I'm not sure what to make of this. Reads a bit like a drunk evangelist ranting and raving.
A Reason for Living (Short Story) - 11/23/2012 2:40:07 PM
Religion and science go hand-in-hand in our lives because religion gives us the confidence to believe in ourselves, and science leaves us pondering and ignites our thirst for the unknown and its meaning. Both are enriching our lives.
Sandie Angel :o)
Dreaming of Tesla (Short Story) - 7/21/2012 9:58:26 AM
Hawking and others are included here because they are the antithesis of the spirit in which Tesla lived. He was so much more, and I have a personal reason as far as Hawking is concerned. I will be happy to share if you write me roadrunner dot jones at gmail dot com
Happy futures to you! Pigeons never claim to be friends but make very good pigeons. Telsa was a pigeon to many including Edison who could have easily been a great benefactor to mankind with good business sense and Nikola Tesla under his wing, but his sense of business and greed left poor Tesla with empty pockets and Edison's empty humor and promise to boot.
Writing My Life Story (Short Story) - 3/22/2012 7:03:03 AM
The concept of living life without a clock is wonderful ----- As a retiree, that's exactly what I try to do every morning when my eyes open to greet a new day.
Love is Myth - Alienation is Real (Short Story) - 1/27/2012 9:28:43 AM
Scary and sadly not uncommon in this world/life. Thanks for sharing, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Dreaming of Tesla (Short Story) - 1/24/2012 5:00:51 PM
Why are you including Steven Hawking in this article? Also the Wardenclyffe Tower was demolished with dynamite not a wrecking ball. Nikola Tesla was a great man, unfortunately he was not a great businessman, but Edison was. In addition, Tesla was not the first to come up with alternating current. However, his generators and system to distribute power over long distances was superior.
He refered to the pigeons as his sincere friends.
Dreaming of Tesla (Short Story) - 1/14/2012 1:34:09 PM
Tesla is a hero of mine as well. Great scientist.
Story of M (Short Story) - 1/14/2012 1:31:26 PM
This is stellar writing. You have together a story that rings of authenticity and so immediate. Humm, just saw Loki and I didn't intend to.
Love is Myth - Alienation is Real (Short Story) - 1/1/2012 11:19:39 AM
Hi Starman! This is real for a many, and more and more as time goes by. Your writing reminds me of the book "American Gods" by Neil Gaiman. Thank you for sharing this.....
Metamorphosis (Short Story) - 5/27/2011 11:34:09 AM
I like how you bravely share your views. Too many folks out there are so worried about offending someone they forget this is supposed to be the land of the free. An interesting way to present this message. I agree society does lean towards apathy most of the time, but when something big happens the majority seems to do the right thing. It's the minority we need to look out for. Hugs,
Exploring, Guarding and Controlling the Human Mind (Short Story) - 5/25/2011 5:37:50 PM
Really enjoyed this write! :)
Dreaming of Tesla (Short Story) - 5/10/2011 4:10:59 PM
"...as tears streamed down his face."
My eyes just about watered when reading that. An awesome dream. Thanks for the read, Starman. :-)
Exploring, Guarding and Controlling the Human Mind (Short Story) - 5/10/2011 8:27:55 AM
Just found this one! Great write Starman. I feel you have the rare ability to write from the inside out. From inside the reader to the page.
Exploring, Guarding and Controlling the Human Mind (Short Story) - 5/8/2011 9:54:18 AM
ROCKIE ... WOW! LET ME REPEAT THAT ... WOW-WOW!
This cosmopolitan customized re-incarnation of Leonardo Da Vinci's mind-thought-control process is not only complex and complicated, but also is enough to scare the living 'Be-Jesus' lights out of any thinking organism!
With That said - let me say This about That ... when Your contentional confusing Thesis is combined with My conflictional confabulational Anti-thesis, only One Possible Conclusion may be not only Possible, but also Probable ... IT, plus $1.37 (includes taxes) one might purchase a 16 ounce cup of Java at any Royal Farms Store, down here in Bawlmer, Merlyn !!!
I can only Hope that Both Regis Auffray AND his Sha Tara DO READ THESE BOTH!
NOW - all 'BULL-SHIT' aside, I LOVE how you both Used, and Abused the English language, to demonstrate One of the Best Examples of Governmental, and Corporate Lawyer-Type statements of PURE, UNEMOTIONAL, DOWN-TO-EARTH ... GOOBLE-DE-GOOK !!!
This Fine EXPOSE' made both my Heart, and my Mind as well, Pound with an Enthused, Infused, and mostly Confused ... DESIRE to Be a Mental Giant, a Veritable 'Wonder of Wonders' ... a New, Improved, Copy-Righted, Original ...
DA VINCI CLONE !!!
ROCKIE - if I have, in Any Way, misconstrued What you were stating here, then I Do, most sincerely, Apologize!
However, should I have, somehow 'Hit the Proverbial Nail on its Proverbial Head' -
then, I shall be Blissful to have been - just Once, in the Shade of Greatness!
If you ever find yourself within the confines of Olde Baltimore Towne, WE might thoroughly enjoy some sort of Ecumenical Repast ... Say maybe: a few cups of Java, interspersed with several Shots, chased by Multitudinous Beers!
P.S. ... I Do Believe that you mayhaps have 'Coined' several Words in this Fine Treatise on Existential Intelligence ... (or, the Lack thereof) !!!
Peace, my Friend, Tom. OH ... 'Happy Mother's Day!'
Exploring, Guarding and Controlling the Human Mind (Short Story) - 5/8/2011 9:21:41 AM
Intriguing concepts, Starman. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Exploring, Guarding and Controlling the Human Mind (Short Story) - 5/8/2011 2:21:01 AM
3 a.m. , could not sleep, so i lucked out to find that
leonardo was about. now i really ca't sleep!
Momma's Christmas Candy (Short Story) - 2/25/2011 12:38:11 PM
Rockie, what a wonderful, warm and loving tribute to your mom you wrote here. I, too, am sorry for your loss... Spiritually, she will be with you forever and you may hear what she might say from time to time...the fragrance of cloves! definitely a Christmas fragrance...we used to spike oranges with cloves and add cloved to hot wine at Christmastime.
Thanks for sharing this...
Dreaming of Tesla (Short Story) - 2/10/2011 3:21:50 AM
Vividly written, Rockie! Quite a gift!
A Reason for Living (Short Story) - 2/6/2011 4:38:22 PM
'When the student is ready, the teacher arrives.'
Wonderfully written engaging one to want to continue.
How's that book coming along? :o)
Momma's Christmas Candy (Short Story) - 1/19/2011 5:51:57 PM
I understand where you're coming from when you said of the distinct smell of cloves that reminds you of your momma. I have lost my mother on December 16, 2006. and am still missing her to this date. Everyone carries a certain odor with them and you know it's the person even without seeing them. My mother always had a pleasant odor with her, and I swear to God, sometimes I can feel her presence when I can smell that familiar odor.
One time I was in my room visiting my brother keeping him company, and during the night I was awake by my mom's odor and I knew she was there to see me to let me know she was there.
Another time was when my sister and her family came from England to see us, and during the time we were all sitting around chatting I could smell the same familiar odor again. It was like a fragrance that only my mother would have carried with her that only belongs to her and we will know her presence whenever we smell that.
Your mother is in heaven watching over you, and she's very proud and appreciative of you for this wonderful tribute.
A wonderfully-written tribute indeed!! Thanks so much for sharing with us!!
Sandie Angel ((((( Hugs )))))
Predicate of Reality: Wheeler's Paradox Confirmed (Article) - 5/31/2015 7:11:46 AM
I'm certainly glad that Wheeler's paradox has been solved. Although I had a Wheeler Fellowship at Stanford and did well in basic physics in college, and I read the article and listened to the interview from both links that you provided, I am more confused than ever about the wondrous works of mathematical quantum physics.
But your last line confirmed reality to me. I'm about to make some difficult to grow vegetables disappear and be measured on the other end after lunch. Why is it they don't come out as beautiful and tasty as they went in?
Dreams Unfulfilled (Article) - 4/5/2014 4:58:20 PM
Rocky Stop Ask UR SELF W T F Do We Need:
Electric Cars For!? Since We Are
Drowning In Oil,i.e. Are they US.Gov
EPA Sells It Oil Space Aliens-No-Like
**Politicos--They Are HOARDING It Oil!!
** It Is All About Mass Control-In My Books:
1st your Guns Then Your Cars
Then Your Bicycles Then Your Skate Boards!!
It Didn't Take Rocket Scientist Figure
That It Out Did It!!
Why Cannot Normal Illiterate Human Beings
Figure It Out(?) They're All Gone Brain Dead
Sucking On Cell Phones,i.e. No Need Computer
Chips In There Your Brain(s)-You'll All Die
Concentrated EPA Modified Static Brain Waves...
Dreams Unfulfilled (Article) - 3/29/2014 12:54:19 PM
Great story Starman. I think Tesla's work was just as important as that of Einstein.
Dreams Unfulfilled (Article) - 3/29/2014 9:17:46 AM
In the end, Tesla did win. His alternating current very quickly eclipsed Edison's direct-current as the primary way we all receive electricity.
Dreams Unfulfilled (Article) - 3/29/2014 7:09:20 AM
ROCKIE... AMEN BRO... AMEN !!!
Vanishing Point: The Disappearance of America (Article) - 5/21/2012 2:10:25 AM
Well said... good time to invest in canned foods, blankets and matches.
Vanishing Point: The Disappearance of America (Article) - 5/20/2012 10:01:28 AM
ROCKIE ... NICE RANT!
TO THAT UNKNOWN CEO ...
DEAR CEO: PHOCK U! N' THE HORSE U CAME IN ON!
'WE THE PEOPLE' WILL BE HEARD!
CONGRESS WILL EVENTUALLY PROSECUTE U ...
THEN, WE WILL PROSECUTE THE CROOKS IN CONGRESS ...
EVENTUALLY, THE DAMNED CROOKED,
APPOINTED JUDGES IN THE SUPREME COURT
WILL DIE ... ONE BY ONE!
AMERICA WILL SURVIVE !
IN SPITE OF U ...
WITHOUT U ...
HOPE UR CROOKED ARSE ROTS IN PRISON!
P.S. HAVE A NICE DAY!
PEACE ... TOM ...
Vanishing Point: The Disappearance of America (Article) - 5/19/2012 1:22:04 PM
Nothing's disappearing, just transforming. We still can alter or abolish it.
Vanishing Point: The Disappearance of America (Article) - 5/19/2012 11:15:48 AM
You've said a mouthful here. The problems are deep and sinking under government sponsored crime disguised as citizen's assistance and blatant fraud. Patrick
Creationism vs. Evolution: Part II (Article) - 4/27/2012 7:03:30 PM
Amazing article. Thanks for sharing.
How to Find the Good Li(f)e (Article) - 1/27/2012 6:45:12 PM
Hey Starman You Always Get Mom N Pop(ped) Reviews-Huh!
10 Points For Using Your Intellect To Their Advantage!
How to Find the Good Li(f)e (Article) - 1/27/2012 9:29:54 AM
Thank you for the invitation and the sharing, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 12/13/2011 7:02:11 AM
Hey Starman: Where have you been all my life: Keep it going, Is what I have to say. I am a 90 year old poet and I say I like that. 'lil flower of Jesus in Carmel
Mind and Brain: The Evolution of Darkness (Article) - 4/6/2011 2:13:01 PM
The still air is quiet, all our sounds swallowed up in the silence of Death's victory cry:
Dark write Starman, made darker because it has the righteousness of outrageous truth.
Mind and Brain: The Evolution of Darkness (Article) - 4/6/2011 11:42:15 AM
ah you brave man!I have averted letting out my feelings as it concern msnkind's vile and obscene ways lest i derive some unmerited feeling of righteousnes from such a loathsome heep. I tend to one line what is so obvious that should not need be mentioned. Yet the same cultivated and clever savage is potentially the shaw's best on nature's parade, and in fine, no man is entirely guilty of himserlf.
oh, and hre comes the opening for the subject i like to discuss with you someday, soon, I have been sitting on it like a good hen. Now pasta e fagioli,
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 9/23/2010 9:10:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this, I read it twice.
A Splash of Life (Article) - 9/3/2010 7:22:19 PM
Perfect words to describe your intention....revealing the heart of you, did you know?
I LOVE this piece, picturing it right in my mind as I read along.
Your diversity is amazing! Such a gift!!!!
Creationism vs. Evolution: Part II (Article) - 8/26/2010 12:36:34 PM
just downloaded a bunch, I intend to find out if you are a visionary or a dreamer and what type of each. From the little I have read so far of bio and titles I think we will dispute some points, but I am not interested in being right but in right being-or something like that, and am confident that so are you. We seek to understand not to impose our understanding. right sir starman?! Right of courtse. All the best. Claudio
A Splash of Life (Article) - 8/22/2010 10:46:19 AM
Love the life in this.
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 8/14/2010 4:45:42 PM
Our paths have met, and that is the greatest succuess! =)
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 8/13/2010 6:39:04 AM
I agree, my friend.
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 8/12/2010 8:19:09 PM
Doors Lyrics Music Albums: Some Men Have Love, Others( Millions) Have None...
Love Is Myth-True Love Is Compassion...I've Known Few Compassionate
People All Can't Get Past Their Own Self Centered Inequities,i.e. GREED!As Greed In $ Is Not Only Thoughts They Hide Behind In Their Ignorance--Tip It Their Arrogance Will Be In Your Face!
So Be It Whatever You Call Love Have You'd Better Hold On To It So Very Soon Lose It May Be None...
Age Is Number--Pain Your Body Will Tell You Different- Nobody Believes My Age and All Kids Think I'm Kool...Simply I Don't Relate To Them As An Adult!I Give Them Credit Where Due!
I Think Your Article Over Did It--Irrespective Credit For Illuminating Write!
Just Maybe Sum Those Pacified A Ds Readers Will Grow Up To Their Age (IQ) Is Just Number...
I Am Realist Not An Idealist!
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 8/12/2010 4:05:50 PM
smart #%$# LOL
If you know me...you will laugh with me!
Age is Just a Number (Article) - 8/12/2010 1:29:16 PM
Why are you so smart. Our paths will always be entertwined as it should be. Although my ability to visit has been limited of late you are always on my mind and in my heart. I know how much you and Bridgett love one another and God is always with you.
Can a Loving God Exist Considering All of the Suffering in the World? (Article) - 8/11/2010 12:30:39 PM
I'm echoing Regis' comment, Starman..the topic is too complex to address here...perhaps I could say that Nature and the traditional concept of 'God' are at odds... doubtless there is a spiritual world...how to accept it and to fit into it? I haven't discovered it yet.
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 7/2/2015 11:25:11 PM
Starman, you make me think, though thats hard when I am high the only thing I can further say is good bye...-e-
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 7/1/2015 5:33:12 PM
The Truth You Never Heard...
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 6/30/2015 3:42:13 AM
It's the moon that pushes forward, and then pull us backward, as she does with the tides; but as long as we keep the same pace, we will always reach the shore. The truth shall then be known to us.
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 6/28/2015 10:48:22 AM
Though provoking poem is a compact package! Well done Rockie!
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 6/26/2015 6:22:21 AM
Yes, a lot in few words. We humans are a strange lot. Our spiritualism uses false probability to claim truth. It takes time, but when probabilistic truth finally emerges, we move up a bit on the scale of intelligence.
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 6/25/2015 7:26:27 AM
Succinct but thought-provoking, John. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
The Will of the Moon (Poetry) - 6/24/2015 8:42:01 AM
Ahhh . . . It is absolutely truth or nothing in my book, and you took it on and defined it perfectly!
The End (Poetry) - 5/29/2015 7:51:05 PM
Damn but I know the feelings herein spoken of...but I also see that you are coming back from the brink, so have on me a tasty intoxicating drink...that should make you feel better...& thanks for your comment on my recent posting and its great to see you writing again...good luck, starperson...-e-
The End (Poetry) - 5/28/2015 10:51:29 AM
That is a most profound piece of defeat that I've read in a very long time. It is interesting that some readers are taking it personally (for you). And your message leads me to believe that you have come very close to the "end." And by doing so, have insight into the process of dying.
While reading it reminded me to never get so desperate. I think it is much simpler to give what organs one has left to those needing them, and cut life off cleanly and less painfully, than letting it run its course until all resources and all strength is completely gone.
The End (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 8:13:12 PM
You Aren't Dead Until
You Are Dead!
Like Make Best Of What You
The End (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 4:31:15 PM
Sadly, I have to agree with you, Rockie. Each day seems to bring ever more disappointments. Love and peace to you,
Suicide Kings (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 4:29:39 PM
Cleverly written and thought-provoking; thank you for sharing, Rockie. Love and blessings,
The End (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 7:36:03 AM
From the author: This was written as expression of deep grief at having the curtain pulled down on some illusions of life, before I was ready to know those truths. I am OK and the writing is a catharsis for me. IT is the only way to fly!
The End (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 7:01:19 AM
What's up Rockie??? Why are you saying The End????
The End (Poetry) - 5/27/2015 5:50:24 AM
Suicide Kings (Poetry) - 5/26/2015 4:28:09 PM
"Today is a mess I do confess,
Just remember to do your best!
And don't forget about the past,
For it is there to remind us,
That in a child's simple faith,
God's love sets us free,
And together binds us."
~ John Coppolella
Silent Hearts Simple Minds (Poetry) - 5/6/2015 1:17:27 PM
I guess ya just have to believe & have faith, though sometimes...? -e-
Lamb Shift (Poetry) - 5/6/2015 9:20:50 AM
Food for thought, Rockie. Thank you. Love and peace,
Silent Hearts Simple Minds (Poetry) - 5/6/2015 8:07:54 AM
Children are by nature loving. By learning about an all-powerful god, they learn what hate is all about.
Silent Hearts Simple Minds (Poetry) - 5/6/2015 7:26:00 AM
How true, Rockie! Well and lovingly said.
Dangerous Curves Ahead (Poetry) - 4/15/2015 7:41:01 AM
Thanks for the smiles, Rockie. Here's a limerick for you:
There once was a fellow named Rockie,
Who wanted to become a jockey;
But he fell off his horse,
So he altered his course,
And decided to go play hockey.
Love and peace,
Dangerous Curves Ahead (Poetry) - 4/14/2015 6:06:48 PM
Dangerous Curves Ahead (Poetry) - 4/14/2015 6:57:15 AM
He must've driven into one of those Buckeye potholes.
Dangerous Curves Ahead (Poetry) - 4/14/2015 4:33:24 AM
I Googled but couldn't find who that driver was… Dammit!
A car nut,
Taking Stock (Poetry) - 3/25/2015 5:42:08 AM
wonderful writing.. enjoyed very much...
Taking Stock (Poetry) - 3/24/2015 6:49:54 AM
I just saw that poem about me in the list above and had to laugh. Will have to read it again…
This poem shows us how minuscule we are in our self-important lives. We are here and gone in the flick of a gnats eyelash in astronomical time. Still, from birth we struggle like you point out, reaching for love and accomplishment before the Grim Reaper comes along again to replenish the stuff of the universe.
Cool and metaphysical.
Taking Stock (Poetry) - 3/24/2015 4:42:28 AM
Rockie ... Well Put ...
reminds me of the song from Ecclëasiastes ...
For every Season ... Turn Turn Turn ...
Taking Stock (Poetry) - 3/23/2015 3:49:50 PM
SADLY the End Will Be Worse
Than The Beginning Simply IT
Is The Your (All)End...
Taking Stock (Poetry) - 3/23/2015 11:54:37 AM
I like this. You twisted and turned and rocked away at life, love and . . . oops! . . . death in a very interesting way. Good seeing you again. It has been a while.
Me and You and Winnie the Pooh (Poetry) - 3/5/2015 2:51:18 PM
I really love the carefree flow of this wonderful poem, Rockie, for kids of all ages.
Rented Dreams (Poetry) - 8/15/2014 8:26:06 AM
The memories ~ yes, they all become grayed and bookmarked over time..
Thank you for your perception, Rockie!
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 2/9/2014 12:22:49 PM
A white sport coat,
and a pink crustacean...Jimmy Buffett
A cute write.
Ronald W. Hull He Ain't Full of Bull. (Poetry) - 2/9/2014 12:17:33 PM
is never dull.
He writes from his chair,
with words to share.
God Impartial (Poetry) - 2/9/2014 12:13:53 PM
It's all binary to me.
Me and You and Winnie the Pooh (Poetry) - 2/3/2014 1:47:00 PM
I hope Barney wasn't the engineer on that train. It's Dino's turn.
Me and You and Winnie the Pooh (Poetry) - 2/3/2014 12:41:40 PM
'Twas a funny old rap…
Me and You and Winnie the Pooh (Poetry) - 2/3/2014 10:42:14 AM
Delightfully done, Rockie! Thanks for sharing your imaginative foray. Love and peace to you,
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 1/31/2014 12:03:34 PM
Thank you for sharing your wit and humor, Rockie. Coincidentally, I posted a poem here at AD on June 26, 2009 entitled, "Southern Comfort." The theme within it is quite different from yours here, however. Love and peace my friend,
God Impartial (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 8:16:14 PM
Uniquely expressed and thought-provoking, Rockie. Love and peace,
Vegamania (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 8:58:47 AM
I veg out at lunch. You know, like "naked lunch." You picked a good band to emulate for this "tour de vegetarian" treat. Love to hear it sung… That is if my ears can still deal with that deafening blast.
Somebody out there has heavy metal on the brain…
Vegamania (Poetry) - 1/28/2014 8:03:38 PM
Interesting concoction there, Rockie. Thanks for sharing your creativity. Love and peace,
God Impartial (Poetry) - 1/27/2014 2:09:28 PM
Its Those Voices I'd Be
Concerned (Worried) About!
God Impartial (Poetry) - 1/21/2014 4:20:33 PM
Love the quote, enjoyed the verse
God Impartial (Poetry) - 1/18/2014 11:06:04 AM
I really like the short little stanzas. They seem to come to a singularity--one mind.
Do you speak IBM?
Ronald W. Hull He Ain't Full of Bull. (Poetry) - 1/17/2014 3:40:03 AM
Did you hear that Ron swallowed the bull that swallowed a bomb?
That's why he's so abominable.
Ronald W. Hull He Ain't Full of Bull. (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 2:58:01 PM
That is NOT a limerick but it is the thought that counts and a fine tribute to Ron. Thank you for sharing it.
A fellow we all know named Ron,
Is honest and not like a con;
His writing is witty,
And at times, gritty,
But we all want Ron to write on!
Thank you for inspiring this limerick, Rockie. I hope Ron gets to see it as well. :)
Love and peace,
Rented Dreams (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 2:52:03 PM
Thank you for expressing this theme in your unique manner, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Ronald W. Hull He Ain't Full of Bull. (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 1:51:57 PM
Thanks. Was it something I said? This is a great honor… I think? I'm very good at nitpicking because I hate those little bastards and try to pick them out whenever I start itching.
Why isn't anyone else commenting?
Rented Dreams (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 11:56:26 AM
"JFK they took away,
Kennedy dead, gray.
Like your memories,
Bookending each day."
Rented Dreams (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 9:39:08 AM
a fine memory,well penned
Rented Dreams (Poetry) - 1/16/2014 8:10:39 AM
perfect title. you did a great job starting off with a personal memory, and ending it with a far reaching memory. vivid imagery. you didn't drag it out and go on and on, but rather kept it short and to the point with fine details. Still the words make you think! like your style.
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 1/2/2014 1:01:08 PM
You've been watching too much "Call of the Wild Man" on TV. I wonder what you would do with the two marathons I just watched, "Breaking Bad" and "The Walking Dead?"
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 12/31/2013 7:23:38 AM
You've got a whole lot of word action going on
as you take us down memory lane.
Jazzy, snazzy, and razzle dazzy!
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 12/29/2013 10:35:20 PM
“A white sport coat and a pink carnation, I’m all dressed up for the dance.” Marty Robbins
Your poetry is like a fine painting that deserves more than a passing glance!
Keep on Dancing Rockie!
Happy New Year my friend!
John Michael Domino
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 12/29/2013 4:50:36 PM
Only Thing That Teaches You (Anybody) Lesson Is:
In Face Of DEATH You Survive,i.e. Don't
Tempt Hands Of (Your Own) Fate!
Dressed to Kill (Poetry) - 12/29/2013 11:17:03 AM
One of your best. I get you!
"Lost in time like a summer’s last kiss?"
Love that line.
Le Rêve (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 11:17:17 AM
Makes me want to understand and reach for the mystical. Enjoyed.
Le Rêve (Poetry) - 12/15/2013 7:51:02 AM
And some of those souls, are pubbing still… ;-)
Le Rêve (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 7:18:14 PM
YO ROCKIE... HOW Y DOIN PAL ?
SHORT N SWEET... N CAUSE TO PONDER...
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
Le Rêve (Poetry) - 12/14/2013 5:19:30 PM
"Le Rêve" caught my attention, Rockie; seeing as it is French for "The Dream." Your verses also cause me to stop and to ponder. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Astronomy (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 4:32:37 PM
Its Nada Nothing But
Human Launched Space **Debri Junk...
**Over 50,000 Tons Orbit Evil
Astronomy (Poetry) - 10/5/2013 9:48:23 PM
Well expressed poetry Starman! Awesome wonders from on High! Amen
Peace, Love and Christ Blessings,
Astronomy (Poetry) - 10/5/2013 11:42:03 AM
Reminds me of an excited e-mail I got last week with a picture that my high school classmate sent me of the nearest nebula taken on his new digital camera using his 16 inch personal telescope. His biggest concern is that one of those brightly shining meteors will be large enough to reach the ground.
Astronomy (Poetry) - 10/5/2013 8:30:38 AM
Succinct but very effective in expressing your theme. Thank you for sharing, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
The Fools on the Hill (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 7:00:49 PM
sad, but true...
The Fools on the Hill (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 3:03:15 PM
You have the knack sir of getting to the point. We see that again, here in this writing.
The Fools on the Hill (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 12:50:09 PM
My thanks and apology to the Beatles, from whose song, "The Fool on the Hill", album: "Magical Mystery Tour", I took off from, as Regis correctly wrote in his kind review. I meant to include that at the end of the poem, now my oversight is corrected. Let's hope the US congress remember who pays their salary. Do you think the "Taxman", (another Beatles' hit tune) will be furloughed too? I echo Balwmer Tom's comments on this one. Thanks for the reviews. Love you guys!
The Fools on the Hill (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 8:35:27 AM
Most apt and timely; and a nice take-off from the song of the Beathles. Thank you for sharing, Rockie. Love and peace,
The Fools on the Hill (Poetry) - 10/1/2013 7:35:27 AM
I CONCUR 1,000 % ...
ASSHOLES... SONS-A-BITCHES... CROOKED RAT-BASTARDS ALL !!!
YER BAWLMER BUDDY...
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 9:45:14 AM
Sam Cooke: You Send Me. Fabulous. http://www.eyeneer.com/video/r-bsoul/sam-cooke/you-send-me
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 5/19/2013 6:32:18 AM
Enjoyed this poetry!
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 7:09:27 AM
Wise and very entertaining write.
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/20/2013 7:08:39 AM
Great job you two, thank you for the laugh.
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/18/2013 7:44:07 AM
A snigglet..love this word..truth of this matter
many blessings to share. Interesting pinnacle of
the theory. Looked it at it in simplex and to
me..ah ha.. still don't know how it happened!
Lady Mary Ann
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/17/2013 4:16:37 PM
Serendipity I suppose; we do have these moments given to us as gifts. Love and peace,
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/17/2013 7:38:47 AM
It's a good time to be alive, regardless of the numbers.
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/17/2013 12:25:41 AM
Excellent movement and recovered verve in this piece, Starman.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/16/2013 1:58:00 PM
Made me smile, made me think, made me curious. That is a good outcome.
A Snigglet of Truth (Poetry) - 3/16/2013 9:34:42 AM
T'ain't too smart on this end, bro',
Can't count without my fingers & toe,
Wish I did of mathematics know,
English my subject, of math I will forgo...e
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 10:23:15 AM
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 9:35:49 AM
Southern comfort and blow for Santa, lucky guy, send some to NJ...e
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 8:15:06 AM
Having been from Atlanta at one time, I can see why blow would be preferred to Coke.
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 6:21:03 AM
hmmmmm, very cute
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 6:02:22 AM
My my interesting compilation here lol
Two views with the same message :) More or less...
Love and Light
Southern Comfort (Poetry) - 3/13/2013 5:51:50 AM
I ain't gonna say which one I like best. I imagine though that dear old Santa would be needing a little blow by the time he gets to Hotlanta.
In For Life (Poetry) - 3/8/2013 10:30:30 PM
Creative poetic thoughts abound here. I have friends who used to be Mafia. I had a chance to join and I moved on....
May peace be with you, love be in you and blessings flow over you,
John Michael Domino
In For Life (Poetry) - 1/21/2013 12:12:29 PM
What a delightful writer you are :)
This brought some fun visions!
Love and Light
In For Life (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 2:23:46 PM
Hey dude, this was pretty cool, seems u know of this stuff from a "personal" perspective...? e
In For Life (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 12:37:40 PM
An interesting story...guess it's true, 'in for a penny, in for a pound' Nice writing.
In For Life (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 11:26:42 AM
Very creative. My partner is in love with Mafia tales. It seems that there are many tales still untold like the one you just conveyed to us. Today it's more lucrative to be a snitch than to be made.
In For Life (Poetry) - 1/20/2013 8:37:52 AM
Ah, organized crime, i.e., the Mafia . . . They're still around, yes, and their code of honor(?) is still duty-bound. From Sicily them came to the Land of Opportunity, and seized it within pasta and garlic hands and hasn't let go to this day. They were idolized in print and movies, their bad guys (weren't they ALL bad?) someone to be admired. Tough, bad-asses all . . . Hey! Gumba, pass da Romano.
Kindling Poetic Fire (Poetry) - 1/19/2013 2:17:19 PM
Points well made, Rockie. Thank you. One ought not to be afraid of "offending" by sharing one's convictions. Sha'Tara (my friend) is an example of this. I'm afraid that I tend to be far more diplomatic most of the time. Thanks. Love and peace,
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 1/13/2013 3:39:59 PM
Happy New Year Rockie, thanks for the smile
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 9:07:43 AM
You did not need to write it in ALL CAPS; message got through loudly and clearly; thank you, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Peace Man (Poetry) - 1/11/2013 9:04:54 AM
Love and peace, Rockie... ...well done, friend.
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 11:28:49 PM
Con Mucho Gusto!
I thought it was gonna be about yer Monstrous PECKER !!!
VAYA CON DIOS... MI AMIGO !
Y PROSPEROS ANO NUEVO... SENOR "EL ROCKO"...
SU AMIGO TOMAS...
A Catholic Limerick (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 9:26:41 PM
A BIG 'AMEN' ... MY FRIEND ...
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 1:29:02 PM
I liked your edited version of my poem. It was very nice of you my friend!
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 1:25:23 PM
I love it but, being a purist, I must make some minor "adjustments" so the rhymes work:
Tampering with DNA from chinchillas,
I created little Godzillas;
The monsters got loose,
They chewed my caboose,
Now we're all drunk on agave tequilas.
I couldn't resist. Thanks for the smiles, Rockie. Love and peace to you,
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 1:17:31 PM
Actually I would like to have one of those. Sounds neat.
Mi Pequeno Monstruos (Poetry) - 12/30/2012 1:15:52 PM
Oh boy, a drunk miniature Godzilla / That's not a very pretty thought to be dreaming up . . . Or reading as a matter of fact. Gotta watch how we play around with Chinchilla DNA, they have repressed demons within their brain waves. Uh, too bad about your caboose. Tsk.Tsk
A Catholic Limerick (Poetry) - 11/24/2012 9:04:04 AM
I once set pins in a Catholic bowling alley. I'm surprised they didn't sell booze. After two years working in the place, I never saw a single priest. I guess there were no young boys bending over… Just some beautiful ladies.
A Catholic Limerick (Poetry) - 11/23/2012 3:31:02 PM
A Catholic Limerick (Poetry) - 11/23/2012 2:34:53 PM
U ought to lay in bed more often, but with some female company might make things work better too...LOL
A Catholic Limerick (Poetry) - 11/23/2012 2:04:20 PM
Hah! Using the three words "priest" and "holy-rolling" in the same poem set me to laughing for five minutes at least. Gotta love it.
Poetry and Pizza (Poetry) - 7/23/2012 3:14:55 PM
I don't know how I missed this one Starman cause I used to be called Da Pizzaman! BRAVO! You got good taste!
Peace Man (Poetry) - 7/6/2012 4:57:51 PM
goo goo g'joob g'goo goo g'joob ...
cool poem, Starm
Soul Circles (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 7:46:17 PM
Around the circle of life continues i reall do loke this cats and dogs eye view and true the soul never ends, good ending. good write, interesting to read as usually are. So entertaining.
You've pugt so many angles in this one....worth it though.
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 7:40:45 PM
A good campfire tale for this summer, i must print it out, my little 6 year old friend loves to tell camp fire stories.......we were camping 2 weeks ago and took turns.
Terrific write.....love it.
Ed is Dead (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 6:25:27 PM
Oh Ed, Starman surely messed you up some, but you'll recover..... good tribute to read on a night like this... so hot.....so his writes are hot as yours are also.
Whits End (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 6:24:06 PM
I'll Remember her always, my grandaughter is named Whitney, she wasn't so bad in fact..... i could abide her.
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 6:21:23 PM
Well done, love it... Tastes of love....from you.
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/28/2012 6:20:23 PM
And Starman is the absolute.....
A Paradox of Love (Poetry) - 6/24/2012 11:11:02 AM
Oh my gosh. I absolutely LOVE this! What pair is exactly alike? None. But their dance is beautifully balanced...
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/23/2012 9:35:02 PM
ROCKIE ... PEACE INDEED !!!
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/23/2012 7:24:37 AM
Great. Loved the video too. We here have gone all multimedia. Onward. And the writing just continues to grow.
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 1:08:33 PM
I wonder if that is what he thought.
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 12:29:47 PM
A very interesting and excellent concept.
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 6:25:30 AM
In a flash of brilliance, Jon Lennon entered paradise. A cool reflection.
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 4:48:01 AM
The 60's were good to you weren't they, dude? sounds like just another flashback of the LSD variety...;-) e
Peace Man (Poetry) - 6/22/2012 2:18:20 AM
What a way to wake to the strains of Sgt.Pepper playing inside your thoughts and THE band right outside your door.
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/18/2012 1:25:58 PM
Managed to slip in a little bit of Alice in Wonderland there. Wonderful ravings.
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/18/2012 3:02:00 AM
Truly stunning work, Starman
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/17/2012 2:51:28 PM
Well, regards stealling, I will put it as Bob Dylan did in song..."Everything is legal in Jersey if you don't get caught..." e
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/17/2012 1:55:03 PM
So maybe I am a criminal after all, but I could live by the George Carlyn rule of life "If a cop didn't see it it isn't illegal". Enjoyed it very much.
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/17/2012 10:25:26 AM
Poetry is our claim to fame,
Be us wise guys or fantastic dames.
And we don't have to make it rhyme,
If we write free-style its no crime.
Cheer to My Eyes (Poetry) - 6/17/2012 10:24:38 AM
Such a guy, such a poem, such writing, Oh my. Wonderful.
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/14/2012 3:55:02 PM
ROCKIE ... WELL STATED!
I AM AGAINST - BOTH PARTIES! BOTH CANDIDATES! AS PER USUAL, THE CONTROLLING 'RICH' OFFER US THE CHOICE OF 'THE LESSER OF TWO EVILS' ...
I WILL VOTE FOR SOME 'OTHER' THIRD PERSON ... IT MATTERS NOT WHETHER MALE OR FEMALE ... PROGRESSIVE - GREEN - LIBERTARIAN -
ANYONE 'BUT' THESE TWO 'CREEPS' !!! TK...
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/13/2012 6:16:50 PM
Geometry or geophysicality aside, people need guns and grenades like they need incurable disease... putting munitions barons permanently out of business, both locally and globally, would go a long way to solving our problems... you've digressed with panache on the entire mish-mash... but instead of trying to unite heaven and earth, keeping them in perspective might better serve our purposes. You are right about living your dreams, except for the fact that so many of them turn into nightmares... selectivity and discernment also serve you well, when putting things into perspective. Provocative piece, professionally penned.
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 7:51:15 PM
Thank you for sharing this romantic offering, Rockie... ...I know the feeling/s. Love and peace,
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/11/2012 7:22:34 AM
makes sense to me ...
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 2:09:02 PM
Ron's pea brains is overloaded methinks. If Hussein gets four more years we are dead ducks. He HATES this country and its values.
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/10/2012 12:41:19 PM
My pea brain did not understand nine tenths of what you just wrote, but I sense a level of negativity that just isn't so. We are in a recession that is taking entirely too long to get out of because there are so many opposing viewpoints and very few real solutions. However, if we just do nothing and don't fly off the handle things will continue to get better. They always have in spite of our propensity to fight over everything. People will go on inventing and people go on buying what they're inventing. That will make us happier, but the economy will recover.
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/9/2012 7:57:45 PM
Only Thing Fix Greed Mongering $ USA Is:
An Act Of (God)...
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/9/2012 4:10:08 PM
A most apt and timely write particularly considering the times. Thank you, Starman. Be well. Love and peace to you,
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/9/2012 3:55:42 PM
You and Tom Hyland ought to get together and rant together cause you are both on the same track...well put in every way...e
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/9/2012 3:46:03 PM
Rant of the den 2012! Winner of the purple rosetta akin to the apocryphal stigmata! Leave your mark. It's a rocky road that NAZI regime! Bravo!
Here and Now, There and Then (Poetry) - 6/9/2012 2:54:51 PM
Just brilliant. Just brilliant star man. A classic oiece
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/7/2012 10:32:25 AM
Must be something in the water. I'd bottle it. Patrick
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/6/2012 5:51:30 AM
ROCKIE ... U OLE 'ROMANTIC' ... SWELL-LY DONE!
I'M GUESSIN' THE TUNE WAS 'YOU SEND ME' ! FROM 1957 - AM I RIGHT?
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 11:20:02 AM
It looks like that old feeling has been renewed.
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 8:06:57 AM
Wow, just wow. Great, just great. One of your best.
Accompany Me Tonight (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 1:17:20 AM
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 6/3/2012 2:57:55 PM
intriguing motif ... stimulating exercise in metaphysics, philosophy and history ...
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/31/2012 2:32:35 PM
Rockie, You are guided by the ancestors, Rockie, they are calling out to your apache soul. Love this deep insightful you. =))
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/30/2012 8:21:04 AM
Deeply touching and thank you for bringing to mind the devastation of a proud people.
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/26/2012 12:57:49 PM
The poem has a very haunting and telltale tone. As if Geronimo is waiting to save him.
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/25/2012 6:26:19 PM
A sad but very vivid telling in a most heartfelt way!
Thanks for sharing this well written poem!
Peace, love and light,
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/25/2012 2:31:53 PM
Tom is right, it is quite a sad story...e
What Hope Endures (Poetry) - 5/25/2012 3:05:44 AM
ROCKIE ... SAD TALE ....
Loving Mother Earth's Kiss (Poetry) - 5/8/2012 9:16:32 AM
There is much wisdom in mother Earth' kiss, and we are just beginning to realize it.
Loving Mother Earth's Kiss (Poetry) - 5/6/2012 6:07:32 PM
ROCKIE ... MAGNETIC INDEED!
Loving Mother Earth's Kiss (Poetry) - 5/6/2012 1:13:28 PM
...'SOMEONE' HAS THE ANSWERS AND FOR THE STARTERS...IT BEGINS WITH MOVING FORWARD TOGETHER AND LOOKING...UP! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Loving Mother Earth's Kiss (Poetry) - 5/6/2012 9:56:47 AM
A touching journey through time and space rushing toward a reckoning.
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/23/2012 6:04:02 PM
Scary, ain' it.
Puppets is a great metaphor!!
Gotta go now. The puppet pulling my strings is blinking and
growling. Could be the fan needs cleaning. Could be something
a lot more ominous. What-all is inside the beast, clawing to
Thanks for this thought-provoking jewel (I think;)).
Puppet # 28i24824--2880-=-1910--58185--1-85910-5........
Sound-Check (Poetry) - 4/20/2012 6:22:12 AM
ROCKIE ... SUPER RANT, MY FRIEND! AND, OH - SO TRUE!
ONE ADVANTAGE OF BEING BOTH 'RETIRED' AND 'POOR' ...
I ONLY FILE A 'RETURN' WHEN I HAVE TO COLLECT A 'STIMULUS' CHECK ...
Sound-Check (Poetry) - 4/19/2012 11:37:31 AM
Every lottery winner's nightmare: Taxes.
Sound-Check (Poetry) - 4/19/2012 10:27:43 AM
Very funny except for the tears running down my cheek. I usually find April 15 to be the opportunity to pay my final installment from the previous year. Patrick
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/18/2012 10:35:15 AM
They're getting smarter. Who knows maybe the "Forbin Project" isn't too far off after all. Patrick
Sound-Check (Poetry) - 4/18/2012 5:31:58 AM
You had to remind me...e
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/17/2012 5:21:37 AM
Are WE the puppet or are we the puppet to the computer...e
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/15/2012 7:30:09 AM
An interesting idea–take over by machines. Also the idea that some scientific designers are playing with us as some kind of puppets.
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/14/2012 7:54:36 PM
ROCKIE ... JUST REALIZED SOMETHING ...
DNA ... SPELLED BACKWARDS IS ... AND ... DUH?
CAN A 'PUTER' DO ANAGRAMS? NOT UNLESS A HUMAN 'PROGRAMS' IT !!!
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/14/2012 12:16:58 PM
from man to machine
Remember the Human Race (Poetry) - 4/14/2012 12:11:24 PM
Made me laugh and cry at the same time. Great write.
Whits End (Poetry) - 4/12/2012 9:25:55 AM
Whits End (Poetry) - 4/11/2012 4:27:05 PM
I suppose some will, some won't...e
Kindling Poetic Fire (Poetry) - 4/10/2012 7:22:16 AM
I have learned that critical thinking is sometimes not allowed. I always add a little salt in my pepper. if they leave me, I don't care. Some have left me more than once, just like lovers.
Nice little rant.
Kindling Poetic Fire (Poetry) - 4/10/2012 6:05:19 AM
"Do your best to be correct,
If corrected take it with salt." Firm words, Starman! Real strong words! Blessings!
Kindling Poetic Fire (Poetry) - 4/9/2012 6:12:22 PM
yep that PMS is a bitch :)
Soul Circles (Poetry) - 4/8/2012 10:00:27 AM
It seems fine to me, dude...I know I have tried to write things one way on my Word program then when I try to upload it to AD it changes to the way that the AD program seems to want it to be...as long as you get your point across, and you did, then what does it matter, at least to me...e
Soul Circles (Poetry) - 4/8/2012 4:50:33 AM
Posted last night A-Ok, but this morning, all of suddenly the line spaces are gone from my poem. Matt wrote and said they knew about this problem, and now they fixed it after Ed Matlack posted his review. Thanks, Matt! Starman
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 4/7/2012 3:56:21 AM
ah, a template for untold millions...
very well done.
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 4/1/2012 7:39:28 AM
You, kind sir, are a witty and pithy wordsmithy...
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/27/2012 6:04:36 PM
Very interesting. Your choice of words are that of a wordsmiths'.
Great talking to you this evening.
Love (Poetry) - 3/27/2012 9:30:41 AM
I like this.
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/27/2012 9:28:42 AM
And may all your endings be happy.
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/26/2012 8:14:42 PM
no illiteracy going on here ... very well written ...
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/26/2012 6:36:19 AM
A life in the moment, wrapped up in a poem. delightfully concise and informative.
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/26/2012 5:24:41 AM
Cleverly written, glad for a happy ending!
Ain't No Rhyme or Reason (Poetry) - 3/25/2012 4:17:03 PM
So creative, a very different style. Happy ending. smashing writing.
A Beast has Risen (Poetry) - 3/19/2012 7:30:47 PM
'DING DONG, MERRILY ON HIGH ...
THE CHAPEL BELLS ARE RINGING ...'
A Beast has Risen (Poetry) - 3/19/2012 10:04:43 AM
Aw, it's just another phase we're going through, like learning to write, and before that, to learn a common language. Makes for interesting poetry, though.
St. Pattie's Day Massacre (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 8:25:12 PM
Quite an adventure, Rockie. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
A Beast has Risen (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 8:24:06 PM
An apt, timely, and thought-awakening sharing, "Starman." Thank you. Love and peace to you,
A Beast has Risen (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 10:25:10 AM
Wow-Starman you always surprise and amaze. This is a great comment on the times artfully rendered. You keep pushing ahead in your writing.great to be along for the ride!
A Beast has Risen (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 9:45:04 AM
Forget being drunk in the last write, this one seems like an acid trip...finger trippin' good...e
St. Pattie's Day Massacre (Poetry) - 3/18/2012 5:39:49 AM
Written when drunk I assume...;-)e
Dear PT Barnum (Poetry) - 3/17/2012 11:10:47 AM
All the world is a circus. Will catch a child's eye as much as it caught mine.
Dear PT Barnum (Poetry) - 3/15/2012 2:43:37 PM
Awe....the circus! Perfect memories engraved in a child's mind. Political B.S. about the treatment of the animals clouds the airways.....Dear PT - you will survive.
God Bless You,
Dear PT Barnum (Poetry) - 3/15/2012 8:30:48 AM
could do worse
than this nice verse
Dear PT Barnum (Poetry) - 3/14/2012 2:49:25 PM
Join the circus, Bailey...do what you can while u can, enjoy life, write about it, for I fervently believe you will one day be a famous writer along the lines of Hemingway...e
No Rest for the Wicked (Poetry) - 3/12/2012 6:19:54 PM
This one's got an edge up on ol' Jimmy... but there's a bit of a Buffet feel to the lyric...especially with the "Changes in Latitudes, Changes in Attitudes" motif...
Anyways, Nicely done, Starman
No Rest for the Wicked (Poetry) - 3/11/2012 6:19:19 PM
DON'T TELL 'WIFIE DEAR' BOUT THIS DREAM!
THAT SOFA GETS MIGHTY HARD! HO-HO-HO ... TK...
No Rest for the Wicked (Poetry) - 3/11/2012 8:10:48 AM
nicely written ... reminds me of Hendrix's "Hey Joe" ...
No Rest for the Wicked (Poetry) - 3/11/2012 5:08:00 AM
And if it actually happens down there you can just dump her over the side...seems others have gotten away with that already & of late...e
The Enchanted Pen (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 1:06:21 PM
Dreaming here, dude...? If u were u have very vivid ones...e
The Enchanted Pen (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 12:09:49 PM
Cleverly conceived ...
The Enchanted Pen (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 11:31:03 AM
Wow. You sir are a man of surprizes. This is masterful in so many ways:
Great use of language, (Shakespeare is turning green) great story line.
Can't say enough.
The Enchanted Pen (Poetry) - 3/9/2012 9:14:02 AM
Quite a dream…