The Monster In My Closet (Short Story) - 4/11/2008 8:49:09 PM
Way to go Elijah! This is a good story. I would say use your spell-checker- at least one mispelled word slipped by. Keep on writing!
You will find that there are a lot of people here at Authors Den who will point out the strenths in your writing, but also, gently encourage you to write your best. Good story.