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Recent Reviews for Justin J Vargas
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The camping trip (Short Story) - 4/13/2003 3:06:53 PM
hehe just cute jon. I like it *grin*
The camping trip (Short Story) - 1/4/2003 3:07:11 AM
This story fucking sucked, i mean do you honestly think that was a reasonable story, why would justin write in his journal that it wasn't a bear that killed him instead of getting out of the way.
The camping trip (Short Story) - 12/12/2002 10:28:34 AM
very funny ending
The camping trip (Short Story) - 10/6/2002 4:25:28 PM
Absolutely GREAT! I loved it!
The camping trip (Short Story) - 9/10/2002 5:02:25 PM
My name is justin Vargas also and the book was good.
The camping trip (Short Story) - 5/20/2002 3:20:04 PM
This is twisted justin. Awesome writing though. The ending is preatty cool too. I wonder if Todd gets away with it or not. Keep up the good job man.
The camping trip (Short Story) - 5/19/2002 12:22:31 PM
I met a lot of humorists at journal con -- felt like a one-legged man in an ass kicking contest because I was the dark writer in the midst of them. This is pretty damn good.
The camping trip (Short Story) - 5/12/2002 6:32:07 PM
HA HA cute ending!
All I've learned (Article) - 4/13/2003 2:57:24 PM
see.....this is one of the reasons that you are so awesome :P hehe
All I've learned (Article) - 10/10/2002 1:33:49 PM
Oh Justin, I have learned, you teach very well! Mwah! ~~~Linnie
All I've learned (Article) - 10/7/2002 3:29:09 PM
you have learned much. you are so wise!! well done!!
Thoughts of mine (Poetry) - 5/28/2003 1:56:50 AM
Nicely done lil piece!
Thoughts of mine (Poetry) - 5/27/2003 7:44:28 PM
Justin,
Hello this one is so good.
Reflectioins in verses excellent
Missed you {{{Peggy
Thoughts of mine (Poetry) - 5/15/2003 11:28:15 PM
That last line doesn't make sense, but it is a good little poem.
Thoughts of mine (Poetry) - 5/15/2003 7:35:22 PM
Nicely done.
Nancy
Complete in defeat (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 4:54:45 PM
Great Job, Justin! nice write.
Tracy
Complete in defeat (Poetry) - 3/25/2003 5:37:55 PM
good vent!!!
Complete in defeat (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 2:35:19 PM
Justin, this had so much emotion in it and it is finely wrought.
I hope it isn't you. If so, read THE KEY TO YOURSELF, by Dr. Venice Bloodworth and SELF MATTERS by Dr. Phil mcGraw.
~E
God bless... (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 8:19:50 AM
God bless... Thank you for this poem! I listened live to all the speeches by Mr. Bush, and Mr. Powell's presentations at the UN - I also obtained the text from these. My opinion was that it was a lot of repeated rhetoric and old documents (available on the web-proven and reported by CNN to be in large part plagerized) presented as "new evidence" from British Intelligence. With each new presentation, the US justification for war became less credible. If anyone is truly interested in knowing the rationale for my stand, I offer them the following url which addresses all the "issues" raised at the UN and has point by point referenced quotes from US agents and UN inspectors that almost completely contradict what the US White House resident has told us is an imminent threat to our security... (Interests). Inspections and high tech monitoring give Saddam no chance to rebuild a weapons arsenal - aren't inspections and monitoring a better way than war, which will only provoke increased retaliation on the American people?
http://www.fourthfreedom.org/pdf/dossier_report.pdf
Justice served. (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 8:19:29 PM
deep! i can relate very well to this.
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 1/15/2003 1:51:06 PM
Is it possible to love someone so much that you hate them??
xoxo
Britty
Justice served. (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 8:18:22 AM
I like your subject as it should be written about more often...our system works 50% of the time. And everyone deserves "justice" - if we could only refine it to perfection...that's the secret. Good write!
Justice served. (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 4:31:18 PM
Justin this is profound, it makes the reader think about the real state they themselves may be in. Excellent work.
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 12:28:46 PM
You are awesome! As ever. Inspiration, feelings are all wonderful things...and no it's not bad! It's beautiful and heartfelt! ~~~Linnie
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 12:26:03 PM
spectacular...thought provoking...insightful. You got it all baby! ~~~Linnie
Justice served. (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 12:24:35 PM
Oh Justin, you are the male version of me, aren't you? Wonderful write. Miss you! ~~~Linnie
Justice served. (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 9:04:41 AM
Justin very nice write. Thought provoking.
"I imprison myself,
To pay for my sins.
Justice is so hard to find"
This line is particularly good. Drkman
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 12:08:53 PM
Eveytime you come up with an answer Justin, you reveal another problem. bill
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 9:33:11 AM
nice insightful poem, justin! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 8:57:17 AM
I really hate those words, "what if"! I live my life trying to avoid those thoughts, action speaks for its self, forget the what if's or could have, just do it. : )
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 8:47:14 AM
good insight...
And I tell myself. (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 8:05:00 AM
Justin,
What an interesting thought this one is.
"If you cared for the things you did,
Would you still be doing the things you do? "
Never really asked myself that question but probalby really need to. Nice write.
Drkman
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 3:17:22 PM
This is really lovely! I think it's excellent.
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 2:20:40 PM
Justin, I write things quite often that I don't feel are good......but then when I read them again the really heartfelt ones .....like this....turn out to be my best work. This is wonderful! Ty, Dani
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 11:39:13 AM
wow, justin..for being tired, you produced a masterpiece! brilliant write, my friend! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) p.s.: i am tired a lot of the time myself; i just write what my brain tells me or what god tells me to! sometimes my work comes out stupid or sounding all wrong, but people seem to like what i do, and that's fine by me! :P LOL
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 10:30:18 AM
Justin, if this is what you produce when you are tired, you are fabulous when your rested! Just a true thought of a true love,,,,Lisa
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 9:03:05 AM
never let go.....very well said.
Just like no tomorrow (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 7:02:58 AM
This is outstanding Justin..it is
not at all bad. This piece is
loving and heartfelt. Don't wait
too long before giving us more of
your wonderful talent. :)
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 6:51:36 AM
Oh honey...my life has been such a disaster lately I surely can understand. My friends, those misguided creatures, actually want me to do something about it. I think their nuts! Status quo wins until I'm okay to move on. Love ya honey! a 10 for sure! ~~~Linnie
When Tomorrow is today (Redone) (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 8:12:17 PM
said very well....
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 11/1/2002 11:42:05 AM
Sigh...you are truly gifted. ~~~Linnie
When Tomorrow is today (Redone) (Poetry) - 11/1/2002 11:41:09 AM
oh Justin, i loved this! ~~~Linnie
When Tomorrow is today (Redone) (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 11:54:18 PM
Did you ever think about that the only thing that is constant and unchanging is change itself? Bill
When Tomorrow is today (Redone) (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 5:46:53 PM
Inspirational write. : )
When Tomorrow is today (Redone) (Poetry) - 10/23/2002 3:18:41 PM
Very nice. Thought provoking work.
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 2:02:56 PM
You'll have a lot less problems if you do it this way;-) nicely done!
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 11:11:48 AM
Hi Justin;
Another great write..
Thanks
Trixie
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 5:15:32 AM
only way to do it...
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 4:19:48 AM
Living one day and writing one page is sometimes the hardest task of all. Good poem, Justin.
Short, simple, easy (Poetry) - 10/20/2002 2:15:52 AM
Justin we all take the same chance when we live another day don't we? Is anyone different? Bill
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 11:30:23 PM
Excellent, my friend, excellent! ~~~Linnie
The Fake (Poetry) - 10/16/2002 11:29:00 PM
Oh Justin, how very sad, painful. How very elegant! ~~~Linnie
Friends (Poetry) - 10/14/2002 8:12:15 PM
just remember when you "confront a friend with himself, you'll often create an enemy"...
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/14/2002 8:03:09 AM
your work greatly impresses. Mal.
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 6:39:56 PM
your words are full of wisdom here...excellent write!
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 3:05:34 PM
Bravo Justin,
Excellent point...
Many should stop and
think about this one.
Great write
Trixie :)
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 1:20:04 PM
Excellent write Justin!
Circle complete (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 12:33:36 PM
This is wonderful work Justin, wise and generous.
Escaped; these thoughts. (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 8:32:06 AM
sometimes we have to leap over the walls of the maze...
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 7:14:21 AM
Whew, Great GREAT POEM! I loved this! ~~~Linnie
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 7:12:47 AM
A paradox of true emotions! Bravo, my dear Justin, Bravo!!! ~~~Linnie
Escaped; these thoughts. (Poetry) - 10/13/2002 7:11:33 AM
I liked honey, I like! Very complex emotions, of which I truly understand. Very good work hon! ~~~Linnie
Escaped; these thoughts. (Poetry) - 10/12/2002 3:23:49 PM
Justing,
deep again many emotions and thought intemingling in this poem I like the feel of it...Loved the ending stanza...
Peg
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 7:10:42 PM
Sometimes it's like we're caught between the devil and the deep-blue-sea..I can read your feelings in this! Excellent. Ty. Dani.
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 6:35:09 PM
excellent description of these emotions
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 5:18:18 PM
Justin,
A not so calm place to be. It is like heaven and earth, love and hate,
life and death. You need to find that place where you can walk between the two with out
them rulling you..
This is a deep very excellent write..
Peg
So over-rated. (Poetry) - 10/11/2002 5:11:51 PM
Justin,
Excellent expression of being caught up in the human condition. Vicky
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/10/2002 6:20:34 PM
the gauntlet.....very well said.
Marijuana (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 10:28:35 PM
Very very GOOD, Justin!
~~~Linnie
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 10:26:59 PM
wonderful, sad, tragic, angry, truly inspiring! ~~~Linnie
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 8:50:35 PM
Excellent Justin..as TRASK says
you are important. Your writings
speaks volumes!
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 8:38:12 PM
Justin---Bravo!
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 8:18:40 PM
10-09-02
Justin
You are Somebody Important,i.e. Go into Silence, Find Myself & It (You)Will Find You who you Really are...
TRASK
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 6:09:33 PM
Passionate message...well spoken!
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 6:07:58 PM
Powerfully written....very honest writing. :)
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 5:37:37 PM
I've been there. The chase of writing is frustrating and rewarding. It is everything and it is nothing.
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 4:58:44 PM
will be interested in seeing what you build next... always keep the words alive...
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 3:42:56 PM
... the agony of a multidimensional personality writing for a one dimensional world. just write for yourself, and those who understand will find you. do it!
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 3:35:17 PM
wow I inspired this wow
double triple wow
you keep on writing mr vargas like you know how, and EXACTLY like you want to. i'll be looking for my name on your dedication page, there NOW you got something to work for. HA
josie
Left to be said... (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 3:34:26 PM
Justin,
Excellent and yes she is a very inspirational lady I love her writngs..
I am so glad you are not perfect and always have more to say also..
Excellent thoughts...
Peggy
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 12:16:54 PM
Thanks for visiting my site. Nice to know who you are. Next time leave me your name so it won't be so difficult to return your nice compliment. Look you get a (10) and it is out in the open. I judge the content not the person. Yours in friendship.
You have potential.
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 10:25:48 AM
fight on!
josie
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 8:49:13 PM
Interesting write...enjoyed it..
Thanks for your comment.
Jenni
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 8:30:05 PM
enjoyed this creative write...
Until my calling (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 7:41:56 PM
Well that drama sure inspires excellent work let it blow your way for ever Justin...
Marijuana (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 6:23:56 PM
WEll done!
Marijuana (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 5:41:16 PM
a token write...
Marijuana (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 11:41:57 AM
Well expressed...
Great write of honesty...
Marijuana (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 8:33:22 AM
Very deep and full of honesty Justin, I enjoyed...Thanks, Dani.
Roses in fall (Poetry) - 10/7/2002 8:30:52 AM
I love this! The first three lines are just awesome. Ty, Dani
Roses in fall (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 7:06:58 PM
It all depends on the color of your vision. I sense a bit of 'angst' here. That stuff creates great poets.
The traitor (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 4:29:53 PM
I have thought most of the same things, about myself, about my friends, about life. And you are right, it does make you stronger. Very Good!
Roses in fall (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 4:27:22 PM
"who will take this part from me" Very well done Justin!
Roses in fall (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 1:02:08 PM
How lovely! we can all use a new perspective now and again
Roses in fall (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 1:02:05 PM
"There is beauty in everything,
It just takes a new perspective,
To see it all perfectly."
You penn in such an array of beauty ...
and Thought provoking examination....
Peg
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 11:57:31 AM
Excellent Justin...
Trixie :)
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 11:55:16 AM
Ahhhh.....the muse is playing hide and seek huh? Enjoyed this very much! Ty, Dani
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/6/2002 10:02:58 AM
Well said, and hopefully you will dispel the demon quickly;-)...
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 11:52:41 PM
Absolutely fabulous! I loved it.
Linnie
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 11:14:15 PM
Justin ,
yes it can but in it we sometimes penn our greates works and this my Poet is an amazing penned piece. You fooled me...
It was reved with sadness and dispair and a restlessness. but done in an effective way of excellence....
Peggy
Puppet Master (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 3:48:56 PM
very well put....
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 9:25:18 AM
do you realize that we are "trained" to stay in the lines? but this poem "pushes" the line.i like it.
The traitor (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 9:23:38 AM
very good!!!!!
The traitor (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 6:57:03 AM
Excellant write .... j
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 10/5/2002 1:00:24 AM
Did you ever stop to think, maybe it isn't your problem? Maybe you wouldn't have to be a "drama king" if you kept out of it?
The traitor (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 5:26:54 PM
this is an excellent piece....very deep metaphors and I agree with Peggy....the questions and answers in this a deep feeling
excellent piece!!!!
Final tokens cherished (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 2:59:51 PM
Some hard truths we all must face. Masterfully written Thank you
Final tokens cherished (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 10:10:22 AM
Lot of depth here Justin, yes, in the end memories are all that remain.
Final tokens cherished (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 9:59:21 AM
wow.....this is excellent
goodjob!!!
Final tokens cherished (Poetry) - 10/4/2002 8:34:35 AM
Intresting write ..... j
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 9:08:45 PM
fine write with great message...
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 4:02:24 PM
Nicely done!
Greed within me (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 12:34:07 PM
Wow, inspirational wisdom of greed and it's embrace...
Not enough (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 12:32:38 PM
Excellent! Love the way your words flow and the intensity calls.
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 10:50:04 AM
Justin it went before i wrote... i have also always gone beyond the line that desire to go further... This is an excellent piece....
Peg
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 10:48:27 AM
Coloring in the lines (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 10:16:54 AM
Good poem Justin, I've always strayed outside everyone's lines but my own!
My guide (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 7:58:27 AM
Hi Justin....
I absolutely love
this one....
Outstanding in deed...
Trixie :)
My guide (Poetry) - 10/3/2002 12:32:40 AM
inspirational indded
good write.
My guide (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 7:47:48 PM
i like this,,,they will always guide you and even laff at ya when they trick ya...
The only candy not for me (Poetry) - 10/2/2002 4:12:50 AM
An oldie but certainly a goodie!
The only candy not for me (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 10:26:10 PM
this is cute :)
The only candy not for me (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 5:51:04 PM
your work gets better all the time. Wonderful, Justin.
Tracy
The only candy not for me (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 5:31:36 PM
This is beautiful an truth excellent write. Thank You
God bless... (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 11:50:40 AM
intense, powerful stuff here, justin!! great job, my man!!
God bless... (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 7:32:21 AM
ten for the sentiment - in war everyone loses something.
God bless... (Poetry) - 10/1/2002 3:25:49 AM
Justin, Yes I shutter to think of how many times war will be declared before we reach that 'perfect' world. The human race has been battling for something throughout the ages, I don't see them quitting now. Most of the time what they are fighting for manages to get lost in the fight, then they fight because the other side fought back,,what a life! Great powerful write here Justin,,,Lisa
God bless... (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 9:45:46 PM
Very powerful and intense,
Justin. Good write!!
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 5:19:11 PM
I felt like I had been in a drama lately. Don't ask me why.....just felt it that way.
Sandie Angel :o)
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 4:14:33 PM
Intense write, Justin...
Your talent is amazing.
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 3:34:11 PM
for real...be strong!!
Drama King #1 (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 2:09:19 PM
Hi Justin,
This gives strong graspable context to such a dynamic truth that was once the script of my life, too. You can find your way to a kingdom of balance--but it takes "owing" to no one's emotional balance sheet but your own. Letting people be accountable to their own actions and emotions is scary, 'cause we don't have control of the outcome. It usually looks like mucking around in the mud -- but the melodrama changes tunes in short order.
I wish you luck. Vicky
Sticks and Stones.. (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 1:26:40 PM
I too have heard these words all my life. And they are not true at all. I would rather be beaten to a pulp than to be tongue lashed. Words hurt me worse than anything else,,Great job you done here,,Lisa
Sticks and Stones.. (Poetry) - 9/30/2002 1:14:25 PM
words DO hurt. i was teased throughout my school years, and today, years later, the memories still remain. i will never forget!!
Not enough (Poetry) - 9/27/2002 5:25:05 PM
"Good men are not evil. Good men who do not
stop evil is evil enough." Wow!
Evil is a bi-product of natural checks and
balances askewed topsy-turvy long enough to
cause an eruption to which anything born
in a body can be subject. Our Follie--men and women is observing imbalance with ambivalence. Hang in there. Vicky
Stand alone (Poetry) - 9/22/2002 5:42:52 AM
Excellent Justin...
" You'll sow what you
reap" ...that is very
true, my friend.
Loved this!
Stand alone (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 8:34:02 PM
excellent...
Stand alone (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 10:43:51 AM
profound...
Valentine's Day (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 9:52:40 AM
full of emotions.......very golden!!!!
A Sickly Flame (Poetry) - 9/21/2002 5:15:22 AM
Ahh...I know this feeling only too well. You've done an excellent job expressing it.
Valentine's Day (Poetry) - 9/20/2002 7:28:58 PM
An golden oldie! Can feel the emotion in this one. Good work.
A Sickly Flame (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 8:58:17 PM
insightful, written so well
What goes around comes around (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 8:19:53 PM
so true and so good.
A Sickly Flame (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 8:18:36 PM
too good...you hit the nail with this one.
A Sickly Flame (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 7:44:51 PM
at least you are aware.....that is a start
nice write!!!
A Sickly Flame (Poetry) - 9/19/2002 11:03:55 AM
Very poignant, sometimes in the midst of the event we can't tell the difference. Good poem Justin. Full of emotion.
Your meaning to me. (Poetry) - 9/18/2002 7:01:54 PM
i have felt this....i like this.
Your meaning to me. (Poetry) - 9/18/2002 4:18:24 AM
Can feel love's longing in this lovely, romantic poem.
Life in a storm (Poetry) - 9/16/2002 6:23:49 AM
I love a thunderstorm, Justin!
I am in awe of its intensity and
power. I love the rain...gently
falling....awesome write!
Life in a storm (Poetry) - 9/15/2002 9:52:14 PM
thunderstorms are full of energy and awe...
Life in a storm (Poetry) - 9/15/2002 6:36:22 PM
I liked it, and I like storms too--from under a cover to keep out the cold rain.
Life in a storm (Poetry) - 9/15/2002 10:56:04 AM
So beautiful I love thunderstorms also they are Invigorating to me like getting a recharge to carry through......And peaceful when they howl at the end and drift peacefuly away..
Peggy
SELF HELP (Poetry) - 9/8/2002 12:08:24 PM
you say it well.....
SELF HELP (Poetry) - 9/6/2002 3:00:35 PM
Justin, very good write. Intense and honest. Clear cut and defined.
SELF HELP (Poetry) - 9/5/2002 10:52:04 PM
sometimes we need to take in a breath and refelct upon ourselves...
To handle with care (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 5:51:39 PM
Excellent!!!!!!!
To handle with care (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 1:19:21 PM
Enjoyed this.
To handle with care (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:59:17 AM
Great write Justin!
Enjoyed this!
Thank you
Sherri Passion
To handle with care (Poetry) - 8/30/2002 11:46:01 AM
Beautiful write - a very tough feeling to go through but an optimistic note to end it with.
Her tears, My time. (Poetry) - 8/8/2002 3:38:14 PM
This a beautiful, full of hearfelt emotion
Her tears, My time. (Poetry) - 8/8/2002 2:23:14 PM
8-08-02
But, When You Play With Fire You Get Burnt...
TRASK
Her tears, My time. (Poetry) - 8/8/2002 1:04:47 PM
Excellent thoughts.
Why nobody deserves to cry. (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 6:20:40 PM
Great images. I especially like, "blinded by virgin eyes." Excellent write.
Why nobody deserves to cry. (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 2:07:17 PM
8-06-02
When Last Time" Most People "Did a Good Deed Is When Somebody told Them There House Was On Fire,i.e. $$$ It Affects his(Your) wallets.
As for all these People losing there Homes, Land, articles, etc In Fires I don't Cry Or Even Feel Sorry for Them,i.e. Whence I lost my Home,Slept in my Car 5 Months, Nobody But Nobody Cried Or Felt Sorry For Me, Only Did They Have there $$$$ Hands Out___Pay The Price
of There Greed for There Evil Help...
What Goes Round Comes Around, It Just Takes Time. As Nobody Is Perfect Only Ignorant Of there Own Arrogance...
TRASK
Why nobody deserves to cry. (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 1:54:29 PM
absolutely loved this poem, justin!! (((TEN!))) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn.
Why nobody deserves to cry. (Poetry) - 8/6/2002 1:19:24 PM
Beautiful... absolutely beautiful..
Exceeding my time... (Poetry) - 7/28/2002 6:01:19 AM
we must live in the Now...
Exceeding my time... (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 9:07:16 PM
Well expressed!
Gina, thinking 'easier said than done at times'
Exceeding my time... (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 8:11:31 PM
YOu have captired the truth here wonderfully.
Exceeding my time... (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 8:03:46 PM
putting the past behind and grasping the beautiful in any form before it deteriorates!
Isn't that all we can do? Bill
Exceeding my time... (Poetry) - 7/27/2002 11:47:04 AM
True. Life really is about putting the past behind and moving on. A very deep, moving write - loved it.
Time will decide (Poetry) - 7/17/2002 12:09:19 AM
agree with Sandy...
Time will decide (Poetry) - 7/16/2002 8:47:34 PM
Enjoyed it! Not clear about the last line but nonetheless, it was delightful!
Greed within me (Poetry) - 7/13/2002 1:36:31 PM
wow powerful write!!!
skills
Greed within me (Poetry) - 7/12/2002 10:31:43 AM
nice written..........
What goes around comes around (Poetry) - 6/29/2002 2:55:11 AM
Excellent write. Love the next to the last stanza especially.
The last Time i saw you. (Poetry) - 6/28/2002 4:40:05 AM
nice sentiment...
What it's all about (Poetry) - 6/23/2002 2:09:12 PM
very nice. your voice is great in this one.
No mans land (Poetry) - 6/23/2002 2:08:03 PM
good visuals on this one, young man. Keep up the good work
No mans land (Poetry) - 6/11/2002 4:57:45 PM
The mind expanding for exploration... great image.
What it's all about (Poetry) - 6/9/2002 10:55:49 AM
Splendid...
What it's all about (Poetry) - 6/9/2002 10:54:01 AM
Such a beautiful tribute to Love!
SILVIA
What it's all about (Poetry) - 6/8/2002 8:13:12 PM
Beautiful. How wonderfully romantic.
What it's all about (Poetry) - 6/8/2002 5:51:06 PM
Nicely said. Very sentimental!
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
The Wedding Day (Poetry) - 6/4/2002 12:40:13 PM
Explosive write, Justin. I could feel your inner battle. Very Moving!
The Wedding Day (Poetry) - 6/4/2002 11:00:23 AM
Very Powerful!!!& Moving!
~Jen
Cloud Dreaming (Poetry) - 6/2/2002 5:17:18 PM
Absolute beautiful day dream under a beautiful blue sky and cottony white clouds!
Sandie Angel :o)
Now I remember (Poetry) - 5/26/2002 9:33:03 AM
The one "behind enemy lines." What a great image. Beautifully written.
Art (Poetry) - 5/25/2002 3:00:11 PM
Your thoughts are true, nothing is set in stone, and there are a lot of grey areas too.
Room enough to create your life, freely from within your mind. Think it, feel it, smell it, go for it, and it will be yours. Paint your life.
Art (Poetry) - 5/25/2002 1:59:40 PM
Just like stars ,long dead but still shining for us to see,and I can relate to your thoughts on sane people,I too can't find any but what I do find ,is art.
Art (Poetry) - 5/25/2002 1:23:54 PM
Hhhhhmmmmm.....guess you're going through a phase in life, Justin. You'll be alright soon, I bet!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Winning by losing (Poetry) - 5/23/2002 6:19:15 AM
we constantly change from the surroundings within...
My Butterfly (Poetry) - 5/23/2002 5:30:01 AM
"shake the disease"...
I quit (Poetry) - 5/22/2002 7:00:52 PM
"To myself, I make amends." ...wonderful!
Winning by losing (Poetry) - 5/21/2002 3:35:12 PM
Sometimes there is something called the fake losers, in which the losers are actually the winners, depending on how the losers feel.
Nice poem here, Justin!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Long Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/20/2002 11:13:53 PM
Justin,
Your sense of rhythm in words is incredible! You cast a spell for the reader in just the first two lines. I look forward in reading more.
Your author friend,
Marc Phoenix
Long Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/20/2002 5:35:40 PM
Your work never disappoints. Excellent emotional output in this one. I'm very proud to call you one of my students. Keep it up - you are doing well!
Tracy
Long Forgotten (Poetry) - 5/20/2002 3:11:54 PM
Hey justin this is great stuff man. It's really deep. The emoitions are really apparent. Love and dissapointment. I really like it man.
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